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Posted: 8 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: mehraan
Hey Dazz...Where is ur chapter dear???
Had been doing rounds to read this one!

It's coming, my dear! 😳 There's a lot happening in this chapter, so it'll take me a bit longer to post. 😊

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Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#182

To the fabulous readers of this story:

I apologize for the delay in the next chapter once again. I haven't been able to give this story as much time as I'd like. 😳 As I've said before, there's quite a bit going on in the next chapter. As such, I've only been able to devote my attention to one scene per day. 🤓 I'm doing my best to have chapter eight posted before I begin fasting in two weeks. 😊 Thank you for your patience and your persistent encouragement. I truly appreciate all of your love! ❤️

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zajedno

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Posted: 8 years ago

#183

I hope you'll quickly finish this part.

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Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: zajedno
I hope you'll quickly finish this part.

I hope so too, Zajie! 😳

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Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#185

To my sweetest and most patient readers:

I haven't forgotten about this story or the next chapter. I thought I'd have chapter eight up sooner, but with fasting I've gotten a lot busier than I had imagined. I'm actually not satisfied with the sequences I've written thus far. Something's missing. 😳 I just need a little more time to rectify the chapter to my satisfaction. Please bear with me until then. 😳 I can't tell you all how much I appreciate your love and support. ❤️

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Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#186

To the precious readers of this story:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ishq-ka-rang-safed/4869741/my-vm-for-ab-tere-bin-jee-lenge-hum

Please click on the link above for a VM that I've especially made for this story. Hope you all enjoy my vision. ❤️ Please fret not, the next chapter is coming very soon. I think I've finally found the inspiration I so very much needed. 😳

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beignet

@beignet

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#187

Loved the VM Dazz...it took me to reading the story behind... truly loved the way u have penned down the story from the separation point...wonderful Dazz...such depth in ur writing

Excellent portrayal of Dhani's inner turmoil as well the strong support of her ashram family members👏👏

Men will be men ...so true ...always their mind prefers to conclude in haste rather than let it think in patience.. Viplav's state of anger as well his state of shock on the fact that he had lost his Dhani was well written

I should mention that u not bringing in an unwanted role like Kamini into the frame of the storyline earns accolades👏👏 loved how u drove d story with Dhashrath and Kanak subtly deceiving Dhani into believing that Viplav had deserted her...

Wonder what Indrani had in mind

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Posted: 7 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: beignet
Loved the VM Dazz...it took me to reading the story behind... truly loved the way u have penned down the story from the separation point...wonderful Dazz...such depth in ur writing
Excellent portrayal of Dhani's inner turmoil as well the strong support of her ashram family members👏👏

Men will be men ...so true ...always their mind prefers to conclude in haste rather than let it think in patience.. Viplav's state of anger as well his state of shock on the fact that he had lost his Dhani was well written

I should mention that u not bringing in an unwanted role like Kamini into the frame of the storyline earns accolades👏👏 loved how u drove d story with Dhashrath and Kanak subtly deceiving Dhani into believing that Viplav had deserted her...
Wonder what Indrani had in mind

Thank you so very much for your appreciation, Beignet! 🤗 Where are you in the story? Did you just finish the first chapter? 😳 Viplav has always been an incredibly impulsive character and it was time for him to bear the brunt of his impulsiveness. Kamini was an unwanted character on the show and in this story. There was enough negativity on IKRS to continue the story without the need of an additional villain plunked between the two main leads. 😕 You'll have to read the next chapter to comprehend Indrani's frame of mind and why she chose to make that decision. 😊 I've had this story on the back burner for a while now, Beignet. It made me happy to read your comment and revisit this story. ☺️

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beignet

@beignet

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#189

Yeah Dazz ...going to ride into the 2nd chapter

So true ...too much of negativity plugged into IKRS spoilt the essence of our show and it got pulled away from highlighting the theme😔

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beignet

@beignet

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#190

Chapter 2 was excellent...Dazz loved the way u briefed on the 5 years of Viplav's struggle, loneliness and a life edged merely on memories of his wife as well on the hardships, support towards each other, friendship grown into a family of the ladies in white👏👏👏

I couldn't but sympathize with Viplav's devastated condition despite knowing his hasty behaviour...there is no perfect man of earth yet some patience and sensibility in one's imperfection will atleast save the day...loved the way u had described Viplav's state

The journey through Dhani's pregnancy was described well...got me worried for a while as to what would happen as I was reading through...and then came an angel in the form of Vidhaan

Hmmm m...Vidhaan Tripathi...any connection with d Viplav Tripathi or...😳 just my guess

So sweet of Vidhaan and Mahi to educate the widows as well to help them...awesome thought of a boutique...kudos to u Dazz for instilling courage and independence in the characters...truly loving the track

Ohhh Vidha seems like a bag of sweetness and naughtiness...wondering about Vidha's encounter with Viplav...guess it's on the way in the next chapter😊