Parallel FANFIC Chapter 20 PAGE 28 THE END

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Kash

@KashishJ

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Posted: 8 years ago

#221

Beautiful story with a perfect ending.

Please do post new chapter for white lies too.

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Sharlene1410

@Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

#222

Hi I read the entire ff in one sitting a very beautiful story ⭐️ liked how you used his stalking of Mehak with his telescope 😆 you kept him as the determined businessman who grabs what he wants by any means necessary and lies/pretend to achieve his goal but he could not fight destiny and Mehak is his. The scenes flowed into each other and made sense how I so hate the Sharmas I remembered Nehal from the early episodes when she was a selfish B and KC when she wanted Mehak married to creepy Ajay

thanks for sharing dear

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#223

Sorry I m late.

I read last 2 parts one go.

Shaurya finally accepted he loves her since he laid his eyes on her. He thought he should protect her from this world. He saw finger marks on her cheek when he saw her 1st time so he decided to help her. He was running away from his feelings only because of his father.

Mehek got what she was yearning since so long. She got her Shaurya the love for she is waiting for all her life.

The baby Shikaar is too cute & 2nd one is already on the way.

Loved it each & every bit of it.

Keep coming

Pls update now your another FF white lies

Vinu

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Diva200

@Diva200

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Posted: 8 years ago

#224

Wah wah, You have finished the story and epilogue, you are truly amazing writer 🤗.

Good he ordered Mehak not to be in touch with Mohit and sharmas as they are leaches. Sk finally admitted his love for Mehak and he realised her goodness, his letter was heartfelt. What a beautiful ending and little Shikaar is junior Sk and second on the way, Karuna ma wishes came true, worth her plotting and planning.

Thank you for the lovely story and fast updates, reading the story everyday was so enjoyable. 😛

Pls update white lies and what the heart wants and lots of good wishes for yr studies 👍🏼

Edited by diva2004 - 8 years ago

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thabassum

@Thabassum19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#225

Woe you are one mindblowing writer ...

All this time shaurya was secretly attracted towards her , but did not confess or realized it ...until she left him...the reality hit him Hard that he brought her again in his life , this time its his house and his room ...

Mehak never confronted her family , for lying ! and using her money for thier comfort ...I guess she wanted to be this way ...

Still shaurya cud'nt see her goodness , and he wanted to had her / possess her to stop her from going ahead to help her brother ...glad it did not took long for him to cum out of his train on misunderstandings...and he apologized ...

Thier journey as a couple began ⭐️...

Karuna Maas wish fulfilled and so is MehRya's love ...

For this wonderful story ...Anya 👏

You did great ⭐️

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Sangana

@Sangana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#226

Anya thank you for these 20 chapters and pilogue. I read your FF entirely today. Very Beautiful story i loved it! Your are an awesome writter dear 👏👏👏

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Sanju

@Sanjh30

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Posted: 8 years ago

#227

My dear,I have read 20 chapters in a day and I'm speechless!
I felt like I was watching a movie,it was so beautiful 😳
Enjoyed it from the Begining till the end
Thank you for this beautiful masterpiece of yours!
Keep writing girl! ⭐️