Misunderstandings #OmRi

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MISUNDERSTANDINGS #OmRi

Part 1

Om's POV
Today I'm so happy. It's the best day of my life. I'm getting married to my lady love, Ishana
Everything feels so nice but I'm not going to forgive Gauri. When I need her the most she isn't with me, busy helping Ishana to get ready. Waah kya dosti hai🤔🤔🤔

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Om was sitting in the mandap waiting for Ishana to come.
Anika went to check in the bride's green room on what was taking so long for Jhanvi and Gauri to dress up Ishana

In the Bride's Green Room
A: Badi ma pundit ji Ishana ko neeche bula rahi hai

Anika sees that Ishana was nowhere to be seen and Gauri was in the bridal outfit

A: Arey Gauri tumne yeh kyun pehna hai aur Ishana kahaan hai?
J: Woh shaadi chodkar bhaag gayi. Isliye...
A: Isliye...?
G: Mujhe dulhan bankar mandap mein baithna hoga
A: Par badi maa... Ma papa unko toh kuch nahi pata
G: Un dono ko waise bhi Ishana ka kanyadaan karna tha. Mera kar denge toh kisi ko kuch nahi pata chalega
A: Chutki ma papa have to know that you, their daughter is getting married to Om and not Ishana and Daksh...
J: Anika sahi bol rahi hai Gauri you must take permission from Nisha and Vinay

Gauri called her parents to the green room
Nisha and Vinay come

Nisha: Ishana kahaan hai? Pundit ji use bula rahe hain
Vinay: Gauri tum in kapdo mein kya kar rahi ho?
G: Mom, papa mujhe Omkara se shaadi karni hogi
V: Yeh chal kya raha hai?
J: Ishana shaadi chodkar bhaag gayi hai. Main tum dono ke aage haath jodti hun. Please yeh shaadi hone do (Folding her hands)
N(holding Jhanvi's hands): Jhanvi please aisa mat bolo. (in a sceptical tone)Vinay aapko yeh shaadi manzoor hai?
V: Gauri are you sure tum yeh shaadi karna chahti ho?
G: Haan papa
V: Tumhe Daksh ke baare mein yaad hai na?
G: Don't worry papa I'll handle it
V(though he was angry with an emotionless expression he said): Toh mujhe yeh shaadi manzoor hai

Vinay goes down with Nisha
Gauri hides her face under the veil and Anika and Jhanvi take her downstairs

Anika tells everything to Shivaay, Dadi and Rudra while Jhanvi told the whole incident to Tej, Pinky and Shakti
The whole Oberoi family was tensed on Om's reaction when he would find out the truth

Om's POV
Sach bol raha hun... Wait main jhoot kahaan bolta hun? Mann toh kar raha hai ki abhi ke abhi mandap se uthkar Gauri ke kaan kheenchkar yahaan lekar aaun... Par main bhi kya kar sakta hun abhi Ishana nahi aayi hoti to sach mein Gauri ko dhundne chala jata. Par... Ishana ne ghunghat kyun dala hai?
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Om: Ansh baby idhar aao

Ansh(Shivaay and Anika's 5 year old son) comes close to Om

Ansh: Chachu!!! Maine kitni baar kaha hai I'm not a baby! I'm a big boy
Om: Acha sorry baba. Kya aap mera ek kaam karoge?
Ansh: Kya?
Om: Aap mumma se puchoge ki Ishana ne ghunghat kyun dala hai
Ansh: Main mumma se uss chudail ke baare mein kyun puchoon?
Om: Ansh aap apni hone waali chaachi ke baare mein aisa kyun bol rahe ho?
Ansh: Uss din jab woh ghar aayi thi, maine unhe bola ki woh mere saath khelein tab unhone mana kar diya
Om: Iss wajah se aap unhe chudail bula rahe ho?
Ansh: Nahi chachu maine bahut requests bhi ki thi par unhone mujhe slaps karne ki bhi koshish ki
Om(a little upset with Ishana): Main bahut daantunga. Pinky promise

They intertwined their 'pinky' fingers

Ansh ran to Anika and asked her something and came back to Omkara

Ansh: Chachu, mumma ne kaha ki dulha-dulhan ko haldi ke baad, muh dikhai ke dauran hi ek dusre ko dekhna chahiye
Om: Acha Ansh, aapki Gauri masi kahaan hai?
Ansh: Pata nahi. Badi dadi ke saath gayi
Om: Acha fine go play

Ansh leaves

During all the rituals Om could feel Gauri's touch for some reason but he brushed away all his thoughts and they were soon legally husband and wife

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MISUNDERSTANDINGS #OmRi Part 2
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Nice start of story. Please update soon.
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MISUNDERSTANDINGS #OmRi

Part 2

After the wedding it was time for the groom to remove his sehra and the bride to lift her veil but Dadi somehow managed to stop it and everyone left for Oberoi Mansion whereas Nisha and Vinay went back to their home

Oberoi Mansion
After all the rituals, it was time for muh dikhai. Everyone was tensed. They all wanted to avoid it.
Finally, Dadi came and started the ritual. She lifted Gauri's veil.
Omkara was shocked.

Shivaay: Dekh Om mujhe pata hai Gauri ko dekhkar tere mann mein kaafi saare sawaal hai. We'll answer them all but please abhi yeh rasmein(rituals) ho jaane de

Om had as though lost his voice so he just gave a nod. His blood was boiling with anger.

Om's POV
I'm sure Gauri ne hi Ishana ko gaayab kiya hoga. Ishana ne kaha tha ki she has seen Gauri trying and coming close to me. But I was so dumb that I didn't believe her and now I'm married to this Gauri. Meri dosti ka najayaz faayda uthaya hai Gauri ne. Ab use pata chalega Omkara Singh Oberoi se dhoke se shaadi karne ka kya matlab hota hai
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Om trusted people really easily so little did he realise that Ishana was brain washing(cut it) she had already brain washed him against Gauri

Om's chain of thoughts were broken when Shivaay declared that they would do the rituals.
Ansh was very happy with the idea and the fact that Gauri was his chachi and not 'Ishana the Chudail' as he called her

Om walked towards his studio. Anika was about to stop him but Shivaay came in between and stopped her from moving forward

Shivaay: Use jaane do Anika. He needs to channelise his thoughts.
Anika: Shivaay parr...
Gauri: Bhaiya sahi bol rahein hai di
Shivaay: Gauri mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai
Gauri: Kya hua bhaiya?
Shivaay: Tumne hum sabko Om ko sachai bolne se mana kyun kiya hai? He has full rights to know the truth
Gauri: He does bhaiya but when time comes otherwise Ishana ka sach jaankar woh toot jaayenge. Woh bharosa karna bhool jaayenge. Please bhaiya samay aane par main khud Om ko poora sach bata dungi par abhi nahi. He needs time to absorb the fact that he's married to me and not Ishana.
Shivaay: Gauri he'll misunderstand you if you don't tell him the truth
Gauri: Bhaiya if he does misunderstand me it'll only be temporary. Mujhe bharosa hai, woh zaroor samjhenge
Shivaay: Itna bharosa hai Om par

Gauri was feeling uncomfortable about Om's silence; she was expecting an outburst not silence but still she plastered a small fake smile on her face and said

Itna bharosa hai apni dosti par

They have a side hug when Ansh comes running to her

Ansh: Chachi!!! I'm so happy

Gauri lifts him up

Gauri: Acha aur iss khushi ki wajah aap apni masi ko nahi bataoge?
Ansh: Arey ab aap masi nahi chachi ho
Gauri: Arey main toh bhool hi gayi. Sorry... par aaj aap itne khush kyun ho?
Ansh: Kyunki woh chudail ke badle aap meri chachi ban gayi
Gauri: Theek hai chalo jao so jao kal subah uthna bhi hai na
Ansh: Aap mujhe story sunaogi? Please... (Making puppy faces)
Gauri: Acha ok par tum change toh kar lo

Ansh changed from his Sherwani into his pjs with Gauri's help
While Gauri was narrating the story Ansh dosed off and after a while Gauri too slept

Meanwhile, in Om's Studio

Om finished wrecking two to three of the statues he had made which exhausted him a lot
He was broken, the only way to reduce his anger temporarily was this
He went to his room and found Ansh and Gauri sleeping. He took the storybook out of Gauri's hands and placed it on the side table

Om's POV
Kitne aaram se so rahi hai. Aisi ladki maine apni zindagi mein nahi dekhi. Koi itna besharam kaise ho sakta hai. But Ishana kahaan hai? I have to find out ki isne Ishana ko kahaan bhaga diya. Be ready Gauri Sharma to face Omkara Singh Oberoi's wrath
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Om took a blanket and slept off on the couch

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MISUNDERSTANDINGS #OmRi Part 3

Edited by ObsessedWithMe - 7 years ago
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Hi dear...
Happy to see you here...
Welcome to the forum...
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Interesting story
Lets see why Ishana left him at the Mandap
Hopefully he will not insult Gaudi
keep updating
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Part 3

The next day Om got up when he rolled over the couch and landed on the ground.
He saw Ansh was still fast asleep but Gauri was missing.
He was relieved that she wasn't there to spoil his mood in the morning
He quickly got ready and went down to have breakfast

At the Breakfast Table
Rudra(sipping his protein shake): Good morning O. Aaj thode zyada late nahi ho gaye?
Om(ignoring the second sentence): Morning. Good morning Dadi
Dadi: Good morning beta. Chalo fatafat khana khalo

Rudra went to the kitchen to get some more protein shake
Gauri comes and serves him food

Dadi: Bahut achcha khana banaya hai tune Gauri puttar. Yeh leh meri taraf se teri pehli rasoi ka shagun

Gauri takes the shagun from her

Dadi: Badi changi biwi mili hai tujhe Om

As soon as Dadi left Om got up to leave

Gauri(holding his arm): Om khana toh kha lijiye

Om caught her wrist and twisted it

Gauri(with tears welling in her eyes): Om aap kya kar rahe ho? You're hurting me
Om: That's what you've been doing
Gauri: Maine kya kiya Om? Itna hi toh bola ki khana kha lijiye
Om: Tumhare haath ka khana khane se behtar main zeher na kha lun?
Gauri: Aisa kyun bol rahe ho Om
Om: Tumne mujhse shaadi karke bahut badi galati kardi Ms. Gauri Sharma. Tumne abhi tak sirf Omkara Singh Oberoi ki dosti dekhi hai. Ab tum meri nafrat dekhogi

He left her hand and walked off. Gauri sat down on the chair trying to absorb all that had happened in these
Rudra who was watching all this from the kitchen came to her and kneeled down beside her

Rudra: Bhabhi kya kaha O ne? Woh itne gusse mein kyun the? (shaking Gauri) Bhabhi bolo na?
Gauri(coming back to her senses): Kuch nahi hua Rudra... Tumhe college nahi jana kya?
Rudra: Bhabhi jhoot mat bolo... Maine sab dekha. Agar kuch nahi hua toh aapki aankhon mein ansoon kyun hai?
Gauri(trying to cover up): Nahi aisa nahi hai mujhe bas neend aa rahi thi

Rudra was still not convinced but he left because he was getting late for college

Gauri went to her room and called up Nisha
Nisha: Hello?
Gauri: Ma kaisi ho?
Nisha: Chutki! Main theek hun. Tu bata
But Vinay snatched the phone and said,"Aglee baar se phone mat karna warna tumhara aur tumhare pati ke liye bahut bura anjaam hoga!"
He broke the phone
Gauri broke down. Om misunderstood her, she couldn't share her problems with her mother because her dad was angry with her and she didn't want to share it with any of her in laws not even her own sister Anika because that would further complicate Om and her relationship

Even in the evening Gauri did not feel like having dinner and retired to bed early before Om got back home. Though Om was angry with her he was thankful to her to for leaving the bed for him to sleep on as his back was hurting by sleeping on the couch the night before.

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want to read the next.. do pm me.. plz
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Part 4

So guys I will soon be adding two new characters to the story in the near future i.e.
Karan Sharma: Anika and Gauri's elder brother

Evicted from Vinay's property for marrying Meera
Meera Kunal Sharma: Kunal's wife; Anika and Gauri's sister in law

Her parents passed away when she was 17
Enough of my pak pak...

3 Months Later
Om and Gauri are acting like a normal couple in front of everyone. Vinay has forgiven Gauri but Om still hates Gauri as he did before and hurt her everyday but didn't tolerate anyone hurting her. Though Gauri didn't complain Rudra knew everything because of which he distanced himself from Om.

In Omri's Room
Gauri was spreading a blanket to sleep when Om came out from the washroom after changing
Om: Suno... (Gauri didn't turn) Gauri!!!
Gauri turned(a little scared): Kya...kya hua? Maine kuch galat kar diya?
Om: Kal karwa chauth hai
Gauri: Pata hai mujhe
Om: Tumhe vrat rakhne ki zaroorat nahi hai
Gauri(a little angry): Mai rakhungi
In his anger Om pushed her towards the wall

Gauri: Om! You're hurting me
Om: Maine kaha na... Tum kal vrat nahi rakhogi. Zyada biwi banne ki zaroorat nahi hai!
He pushed her aside and went to sleep
Gauri's POV
Kyun Om? Kyun? Vrat rakhne se kyun rok rahe ho mujhe? Pata hai...nahi maante ho mujhe apni patni par main toh aapko pati maanti hun na. Kya aapko pati maanna galat hai kya? Main jaanti hun ki aap nahi maante hamari shaadi ko par phir bhi main iss shaadi ko maanti hun aur ise main har haal mein nibhaungi
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She slowly drifted off to sleep. On the other hand
Om's POV
Agar kabhi bhi mujhe dost mana tha toh chodkar kyun nahi chali jaati? Kyun Ishana ko gaayab kiya tumne? Tumhe hamare dosti ka bhi khayal nahi aya yeh sab karne se pehle? Kya kami reh gayi thi meri dosti mein? Ishana se jhagda kiya...tumhare liye...par tumne usi bharose ka mazak banakar rakh diya.
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He too slept off after a while

The next day
4:30 am
All the Oberoi women had their Sargi and went to the temple
Around 8:30, at the breakfast table
Om: Good morning people
Shivaay: Morning Om
Tej and Shakti: Good morning beta
Om sat down
Om: Good morning Rudra
Rudra: Ya
Om: Kya hua Rudra aajkal aise kyun behave kar raha hai? (seeing the maid serving food)Gauri kahaan hai?
Shivaay(teasing Om): Kyun badi yaad aa rahi hai? Woh mandir gayi hai.
Om: Matlab woh poore din bina khaaye piye mandir mein pooja karegi
Shivaay: Haan kyun? Bahut miss kar raha hai?
Rudra(in a low tone): Kya joke mara bhaiya. Jaise ki inko farak padta hai ki Gauri bhabhi mare yaa jiye
Om was furious. Though he heard what Rudra said he got up and left for the temple
Shivaay: Om khaana toh kha le

At the temple,
All the ladies were busy doing pooja when someone pulled Gauri aside and pinned her to the wall. Without seeing who the person was she began screaming for help. The person closed her mouth before she could scream any further and said,"Shut up! Main hoon"

Gauri opened her eyes. it was Om so she relaxed a bit.

Om: Kyun kar rahi ho yeh sab drama? Kaha tha na vrat mat rakhna. Hindi samajh me nahi aati kya tumhe? Ab kuch bologi ya nahi?

Gauri made some weird sound and looked at her mouth making Om realize that his hand was still plastering her mouth. Om removed his hand

Gauri: Aapko kya farak padta hai? Mai vrat rakhun na rakhun?

Om caught her by her shoulders and said,"Mujhe farak..."

He was disturbed by Anika who faked clearing her throat. Gauri got scared;what if Anika found out that everything wasn't normal between the two of them

Anika: Achcha toh romance chal raha hai miyaan biwi mein? Continue...continue...

Om: Bhabhi aisa kuch nahi hai

Anika: Om mere saamne yeh drama na hi karo toh behtar hoga

Anika took Gauri away with her, Om left for his gallery.

In the Temple(In the evening)
The moon had come out and all had finished breaking their fast except Gauri because Om hadn't turned up yet. Shivaay had called up Om who said he's reaching.
Om came
Jhanvi: What is this Om? Aaj Gauri ka pehla karwa chauth hai and you're late
Buama: Chalo chaddo! Chal Omki Shomki Gauri da vrat tod de
Om went shoved water down her throat and stuffed the sweet into her mouth which was unnoticed by all except Rudra. Om said he had some work and left
All went back homeand retired to their rooms as they had to get up early next day to drop Gauri home for her pag phera
Gauri was waiting for Om to return. Om did return but he returned way past midnight and totally drunk

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Part 5

Om came back to the Oberoi Mansion totally drunk way past midnight. Gauri was waiting for him in 'their' room when he came
Gauri: Om you finally came back. I was waiting for you
Om's lips curved up into a smile
Om: You were waiting for me? (He hugged her) I love you
Gauri(surprised): I love you too

Om pulled out of the hug and planted kisses on her face
Om: Kahaan chali gayi thi tum Ishana? Kahaan bhagaya tumhe uss Gauri ne?

This shattered Gauri's heart
Gauri: Om...
But before she could complete he slammed his lips on hers
She pulled out of the kiss
Gauri: Om listen to me...
Again Om interrupted her by keeping his finger on her lips
Om: Kuch mat bolo. Tumhe kuch bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai.
He closed the door (So even I don't know what happened after that)

The next morning Om woke up with a horrible headache. The last thing he remembered was he was drinking. After that, his memory had gone for a holiday
He saw Gauri lying next to him and their clothes were lying on the floor. Anyone could guess what had happened last night. He was disgusted with her. How could she have stooped so low?
Gauri also woke up.
Om(sarcastically): Kya sahi kaam kiya na tumne kal raat. Fantastic Gauri Sharma (clapping his hands)
Gauri pulled the blanket over herself and said,"Om meri baat suniye..." but she was cut off
Om:Agar thodi sharam baaki ho toh mere nazaron ke saamne mat rehna... Chodo main bhi kisse baat kar raha hun
He wore his clothes and walked out of his room

Gauri was heartbroken. She didn't know what to do. She freshened up and went down to find that Om had already left so Rudra had to drop her.
Throughout the journey silence prevailed in the car. Once they reached Rudra helped her out
Rudra: Bhabhi ek request karun? Meri baat manogi?
Gauri: Kya hua Rudra? Bolo
Rudra: Bhabhi aap Oberoi Mansion waapis mat aana. O mera bhai hai par woh jo sab aapke saath karte hai woh galat nahi gunah hai bhabhi. (he began crying)Wahaan par aap mujhe kuch bolne nahi dete lekin bhabhi yeh galat hai bhabhi.
Gauri gave Rudra a hug
Gauri: Rudra... Please jao
Rudra went back

Two Days Later
It had been two days that Gauri had come back from Oberoi Mansion. Rudra called her up 3-4 times, Anika with Prinku and Shivaay twice and Jhanvi and Dadi once but Om hadn't checked on her even once. The words he said that night
"I just hope Ishana ki woh Gauri kabhi bhi meri zindagi mein aur iss ghar mein kabhi waapis na aaye"
Tears trickled down her cheeks
That's when her phone began ringing. She saw the Caller ID. It was Om. She wiped her tears off and picked up the call
Gauri: Hello.
Om(in an angry tone): Listen. Buama aur Dadi tumhare waapis aane ke baad Kul Gotra Puja rakhwana chahte hain.
Gauri: Hmmm...
Om: Main nahi chahta ki tumhara naam Kul Patri mein likhaya jaaye
Gauri: Main kya karun?
Om: Tumhe jo karna hai karo...Zeher khaakar mar jao...I don't care...par tumhara naam Oberoi family ke Kul Patri mein nahi aana chahiye
Om cut the phone saying that

After a while Rudra called up to check on her. Gauri wasn't in a state to answer him so she put her phone on silent
The only thoughts going on in Gauri's mind was that Om didn't even care if she was alive or dead. She just didn't want to live anymore. She cried herself to sleep.

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Edited by ObsessedWithMe - 7 years ago

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