A Sweet Realization- An AvNeil OS

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi there guys. I just came across a very sweet scene of Neil Avni and Juhi. It was during Neil's haldi, that he dreamt of Juhi and Avni. The scene was so sweet, pure and heart touching that I couldnt help but write(type) this. Hope you all like it - J :)



Neil couldn't sleep. Nor did he want to stay awake and think about his messed up life. He is falling for Avni Khanna. Avni Khanna, who is his wife, who he married unknowingly, who herself is emotionally scarred and broken but was successful in breaking down his walls and after Juhi's death, is the only person who can make his heart thud faster than a speeding train.

Guilt, Guilt is all he felt right now. He had thought his ability to love any other woman died along with his Juhi. Then why does he feel miserable when Avni is angry with him, why would he do anything she wanted him to just to see her smile. If this is not love, then what is?

No No No! He cannot love Avni. He loved Juhi, and she was taken away from him. How can he love Avni when his heart still remembers Juhi right? He cannot move on when he still remembers what he felt for Juhi.

He looks at his sleeping wife and a warm feeling grows inside him when he realizes that she is moving towards his side of bed searching for his body to cuddle with. Neil caresses her cheeks and gets flashes of all the time he has spent with her. From trying to find evidence to arrest her to finding silly reasons to come close to her and touch her, he started falling in love with her. Love, thought Neil will disgust. Love only knows how to destroy a person, just like how Juhi's death nearly destroyed him. He couldn't let it happen again. No! He won't let it happen again.

He removes his hand from Avni's cheek, gets up from bed and leaves the room. He goes to garden to find some peace, when a pair of naked feet of someone come into his field of vision. Neil turns so quickly he nearly gets a whiplash.

There she is, standing in front of him. His first love, his life, his everything standing right in front of him. He is so shocked he couldn't even move. Juhi slowly steps forward and takes Neil's left hand in hers and move aside. Avni, smiling that rare smile of hers is standing in front of him, in a place where his Juhi was standing few seconds ago. From the corner of his eyes he could see Juhi watching him and Avni with that knowing smile of her's. She places Neil's hand in Avni's and looks at their adjoined hand lovingly. Neil's gaze moves from Juhi to Avni who is looking so gorgeous and is smiling so brightly at him he couldn't move his gaze from hers. Suddenly he feels Juhi's presence fading, still he couldn't move his gaze from Avni's face who is smiling a smile that could melt an iceberg and her face is alight with her love for him.

Neil suddenly wakes up from his bed and realizes all of that was a dream. He looks at Avni who is sleeping peacefully, her hand is in his, and she has placed their adjoined hands closer to where her heart lies. He looks at her lovingly and realizes that Avni was not only successful in breaking down his walls that he has spent years to build, but she has made him fall in love with her. He realizes that his love for Juhi as pure and true as it was, will always be there but that doesn't change the fact that he loves Avni. She has entered No! She has crashed her way into his dull life and has made it very exciting. He now feels he has a reason to live. And that reason is currently clutching his hand so tightly that blood flow to his hand is interrupted. He gently removes her hand from his, and looks at his Avni who is lady don by the day and a sweet angel by night.

"Miss Ajooba I am unconditionally and irrevocably in love with you and I know you love me too.
But you are suffering from a serious case of tube lightness. This tube lightness of yours while adorable is mildly frustrating sometimes
."

says Neil to his sleeping wife. Avni so deep in her sleep, utters something inaudible and moves closer towards her husband. Neil takes her in his arms and closes his eyes while having a sweet smile on his face, only to dream of his Avni. His Ajooba.

Edited by Mohabbatein. - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow Neil's emotional conflict brilliantly analysed. loved it 👏⭐️
Hope that will be the case even if Juhi 😡is alive
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb yaar..Loved it
plz write more
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Sweet story just like its name
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Hayeee...
It was so cute and adorable and amazing and awesome...
This realization needed from Avni's side too..
Keep writing like this..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for all the likes and comments guys..It means a lot 😊
Edited by Mohabbatein. - 8 years ago

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