Manchala ,madness of heart part 12 and last on page 19 - 10 feb - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: priya_21

Madam Mahi ji


Sub : soulmate GHSP celebration pending

Dear Mahi
itna dust na bno, 😆 kripya krke hume udpate de
let me think
issi base pe aapki ek aur kahani chal rhi hai na 😡😉

waise mujhe ye wali bhi pasand hai
msk vsk
gmsk
wah wah blast

Thanks
priya_21




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Posted: 7 years ago
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part 1


Km in early morning there is come earthquake in Km all running on their toe itself, all is tense with bade papa (maan dadaji ) anger who is hell angry with maan excuse for marriage alliance and today he give last summons to maan ya to ladki dekhane ke liye ready ho javo ya phir family se out .

All family fed up with maan continues no for marriage from last 3 year .. now he is 27 age which is perfect age for marriage but he is in another world .some time they doubt is he normal or what?

Khurana is respective business family of town and all respect them for their work for country society in that maan is always on front. But don't know why marriage ke naam se bhagata hai ...

In khurana its big family of Dada dadi ...maan mother and father ,maan two uncle ..maan twin brother along with his two cousin brother and one sister a big family in this all

Msk is 27

Vsk is 27

Dsk is 26

Psk is 25

And

There sis anu ..is 24

So dada want all settle in right age ...and all sibling saying that they not even think of marriage until there Maan bhai get married so all stuck in one name MSK.

In same city another house have great morning with all happiness and energy , all are so happy and excited for their daughter Geet who is apple of their eyes ...when a alliance come from Khurana family for their big son. They all feel they touch the sky ... its last marriage of their house she is only one girl of three generation .. very successful in carrier .same time very down to earth, like to talk only truth never ever hurt anyone in life have heart of small kid

Geet also have big family

Darji

Mummy

Papa

Uncle

Aunt

And

One brother brij

Brije wife

Than

Three cousin brother

She is pure Indian girl love and respect tradition she have believe that every tradition have meaning ...thou she don't believe it blindly she always give support to good things.thou this dekhana wekhana she found its some time funny because what u judge a man or girl in one or two hour ...but she know in old age marriage is pure concept where not two person but two family get bounded with this relation so don't happen something bad which effect their relation ,society they have this tradition where girl could be saw in front of whole family ...jo abhi sab ko outdated lagati hai she smile with thought of her friends callings ect .

She took deep breath and went to changed in another dress beautiful white anarkali with minimum work .

Manwalking inside the cabin like angry lion what the hell How they Blackmail him for look girl for marriage come on In 21 century why we have to follow this custom ..do me or that girl is any showpiece jo ek duje ko dekhana hai . I m not going to attend this dekhna wakhna .

he stop with some one voice - to mat javo na why so much attitude na javo ...bol do family ko you don't want to go u r not intrsed in such things so simple ...khamkha office ka atmosphere ku kharab karke rakh diya hai Mr. Msk ...

That man turn to him with attitude ...and ask in hard tone why u come inside without knocking the door .upon that shut your big mouth because Msk don't need advice from you Mr. Vsk (Vicky singh Khurana )

Vicky reply coolly ye attitude ka 1 % gharwalo ko dikhate to Ye show se bach jate BHAI ...

Maan march to Vicky and pull him with shoulder don't call me bhai ...u are just 1 min small from me so stop this BHAI and all ...

Msk get irritated with word Bhai ...and Vicky very well know this so he love to irritated maan.msk and vsk is directily going to Handa villa to so called ladki dikhani program and in whole journey maan is quite ...which disturbing Vicky because he is msk twine and know him from inside and outside.upon that why they going half hour before their family to handa villa.

Both brother reach in handa villa don't know why but both feel homely...

Vsk who guess till now maan upto something he bend little bit to maan and mummer softly ..kuch bhi karne se pehale both family ke bare main souch lena ye koi game nahi hai maan ...

But maan is maan he is hell angry a nd fustrted with all ...thou he nodded to Vicky but he have another plan.

Maan and Vicky took ashirwad from all

Maan - wo uncle main family se pehale miss handa se milna chahata tha ku ke sab ke samne unse thik se baat nahi ho pati hope all of don't mind this ...

Darji - put his hand on maan shoulder and say in heavy voice ...maan beta u representing to new generation to apki souch bhi alag hogi and I respect your thoughts but make one thing sure that don't hurt anyone ..Including my poti Miss handa.

Darji informed geet with her bahbhi ..geet feel its strange thou she don't have very good thought about msk ...she saw him two three time and everytime she found his anger and attitude only but his social work make her ready to give chance she once look to mirror and went to terrec area where msk waiting for her .

Geet babhi send her to terrecs and went to down side ..

Maan - huu without looking to her say ...hello miss handa we come here to meet you myself Vsk and that msk ...maan pointed to Vicky ...

Vicky clutch his palm tightly in anger and frustration...what maan done is truly not acceptable but he cannot say anything now but geet next word make maan to look herself

Geet feel so much anger she feel like give tight slap on Msk face what he think its any game jo wo yaha prank khelane aaya hai

she ask in harsh tone if you not interested in marriage than why the hell you come here to ...look me Mr .msk ... agar khood ke family ko na bolne ke guts nahi hai to why the hell u come here she pointed to maan ...stop your prank don't make stand your brother as MSK because I m not girl from any village ...I am city moden girl and I know each and everything about YOU Mr MSK...

what u think ladki hai ladki ki family hai jaisa chaho treat karo kya farak padata hai

usko bolo chale ke dikho gake dikho ,khana aata hai kya ...service hai kya ...not thinks while that she is not any showpiece or enlivening things jisko dard nahi hota hurt nahi hota geet eyes feel with tear and anger ...

stop treat girl and girl family as no one jinko self respect nahi hai ..jisko ladka ladkiwale cahe jaise treat kare . and door is that side so u both can move now no need to talk with my family I will handle my family very well main apni family se bahagti nahi unke sath chalti hu ..with that she turn her face.

precap


all gather in hall room both family

look to geet for her ans for marriage

geet once look to all and say clamly

i am ready for marriage but .

Not with Msk but Vsk ...



kya bomb hai jehalo 😆


note

sidha fanda comment do update lo

Edited by Mahimaan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Congrats on new SS di !

Interesting teaser
Geet directly insulted MSK for his showoff demeanor
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
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@part1
Nice starting di
Loved it!!
Maaneet live and brought up in joint family.
Maan is not interested in getting marriage and was displeased with meeting girls and was against this concept. Finally his dadaji summoned Maan to see the girl after beating maan's tantrums. Vicky being twin of maan could understand Maan's thoughts. On other hand geet respects her elders words and values her family .
Maan played prank with Geet to avoid getting married and geet being the person who respects others showed Maan his places and fired her words on him. In intial meeting itself Geet turned out to be lioness .
Nice precap!!
Geet agreed to marry but with VSK
Looking forward to the next update
Thanks for the pm di !
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for New story..
Interesting teaser..
Nice update..
Maan want to fool geet..
Geet has insulted Maan..
Precap is interesting...
Continue soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Congrats on new story amazing update so maan is totally angry at the concept of arrange marriage he doesn't have a choice but to meet geet and reject her here geet also getting ready to meet maan though she doesn't believe in these old tradition but she gives respect to them both maan and Vicky went to meet geet where maan introduce himself as Vicky but geet knows who he is she blasted maan for insulting her and her family what a dhamaka precap geet agreed to marry Vicky hilarious let's see what our maan does
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
story name toh bta de
kya rakhe
tere dimag ke khel
kaisa rahenga naam
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb update dear, miss handa ne tu , MSK ke bolti band kardi, she wants to marry vsk not msk, what will happen now
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
nice concept itts on pre marrige period maan don't want to see girl but he have to geet meet boy but it's not maan it's Vicky maan n apne jgh Vicky to bhej diya geet known it waiting for next part

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