Manchala ,madness of heart part 12 and last on page 19 - 10 feb - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story Mahi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2
Awesome n superb update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
Maan is from well-known family. & His family wants him to marry but he is showing tantrum..while meeting Geet ..he introduced himself to Geet as Vicky & his twin brother as Maan.. but Geet is well cultured & well mannered modern yet elegant girl
.. she knows very well Maan .she got angry. She told her family that she'll marry Vicky. Not Maan..
Now it's good to see what Maan would do ..it surely hit his ego😆
Waiting for next part.. thnx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful update...will Vicky play smart & convenience Geets family for Geet & Maan's marriage
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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part 3


Maan took deep breath ..and went out from it other side Vicky saw what passed from mg.

He know he have to face Khurana outburst .

Before anyone say anything Vsk say politely please lesion me once than ..we are ready for your any decision ...next 10 min all herd him what is saying .

Vsk once look to dadaji and dadaji nodded a big smile appear on Vsk face .next hour all get relaxed vsk talk make them relaxed.Khurana family is around geet Geet win their heart ...dadadji say sorry on maan behalf for his behavior but geet stop them with word please app mere se bade ho ...

Other side maan went outside and in frustration punch on his car ...blood come out from his hand... but he don't feel pain he really frustrated with himself in hurdle he took most wrong decision which is going to be big mistake of his life. He closed his eyes and geet tearful eyes appear in front of him. He open his eyes with shock .

He took his car and went to outside of city his fev place he went there when he feel happy or sad ...that place always give him solace he throw his coat on car seat ...and he seat on land itself ...he look to sunset which is looking today sad like his mood ...she change something big today in him.

Other side Vicky is worried for maan both can feel each other mood also so he know maan is now feeling low but he(Vicky) very well know if he try to disturbed him now he will kill him.

After some time all khurana bid bye to geet and Handa family they come home ...dadu is so serious and disturbed for maan His anger is now become enemy for him.

All look dadu lost in deep thought ...maan father went near him and say softly ...maaf kardo usko babuji .

Dadji once look to him and say softly I am not angry on him beta bas dar raha hu ...uska ye anger usko barbad kar dega ...beta today what u feel about geet ...kiasi lagi wo ladki

Geet name brought smile on maan father face bahot payyari bachi hai babuji ...

Dadaji - mann ki saaf hai bachi ...aise maan ka behave karna think tha kya in anger he throw a diamond from his hand I feel bad for him ...maan mann se bahot acha hai but his anger ...dadaji took deep breath ..he feel so tired he turn little bit emotional maan ko settle dek lu fhir uska bulava aaye to bhi gam nahi beta ...maan father side hug and Vicky come to dadu and side hug him and say dadu u need rest now and don't be emotional roabat MSK ke dadadji ho app acha lagata hai kya aise emotional hona ...

Dadaji hold Vicky ear in play full manner ...badmash ...mazak kar raha hai mera ha...

No dadu bas mere senti dadu ka mood thik kar raha hu ...Vicky say softly ,hum sab ko uski chinta hai dadu and usko humari dekho abhi gahr aayega na sidha apke room main aayega fhir apke karib bte jaayega ...fhir slowly apke forhead pe pick karega and than sorry bolke nikal lega apke room se ...all giggle on Vicky narration yes its msk habit jab bhi kuch galat karta hai aise hi react karta hai ... A soft smile appear on dadu face .

Vicky stand little bit away from dadu and say waise dadu don't mind but he is like you na Angry young man type ...that place turn silence for while and next moment all burst in laugh Vicky almost run from there giving a fly kiss to his dadu.

Dadu to maan father ye kaise Judwa paida kiya hai tumane ek Fire and dusra Ice ...poor maan father turn red in shy ...n cried babaji but maan is like u and u cannot denied it ...

Dadu roll eyes on his talk ...and say chalo bhago sab apne apne room ...its sleeping time now ...all retired to their room ...dadi come near to dadaji and seat their while apko nahi sona kya she ask softly ...don't worry sab thik ho jaayega ...

Savitri I am looking this girl from last 6 month har ek tarike se wo ek dimond hai and I want best for my Maan but he ...really disappoint me. Wo uski bahot achi life partner banti like You.. geet main muje tumari zhalk dikhati hai savitri ...dadu took deep breath situation main change itna hi hai ki I hurt u after marriage Maan make that work in first meeting itself . Main to Mr. handa ka reaction ke liye dar raha tha he is very strict person don't know how he say yes to Vicky . I am still surprised savitri dadu say ...

Savitri - bas ab app jada na soucho bhgwan ne bhi souch ke rakha hoga apne maan ke liye but muje ek tension ho raha hai how maan will behave with Vicky and geet.

Dadu - trust on your sanskar trust on your maan savitri he will handle it .

Savtri - hope so chalo now u also get up its medicine time now ...both went to their room ...other side maan stop on entrance when he lesion voice of dadu ...he hurt his whole family in his foolishness .. a tear fall from his eyes ..he feel so guilty but now time went from his hand ...with heavy heart he entered in house ...he put his coat aside wait for 10 min so dada dadi could sleep he don't have guts to face them now ...after 10 min he entered in room once look to them both in sleep ...

Maan went near dadaji and seat their he softly mummer sorry and give pick on dadaji forehead than on dadi and slowly went out from room.he don't feel to eat anything ...he went to his room change in casuals and went to gym side he know he will not get sleep so early in this disturbed mind .

He start to do exercise in full range her eyes hunting him like anything his heart is restless . her word that she is ready to marriage with Vicky its burning him alive .He give more speed to his exercise .

Just than someone entered in gym but he don't bother that ...

Vicky come to him and passed glass of juice ...

Bas karo maan ...stop it ...

Maan stop with Vicky voice ..he mummer I don't need juice

Vicky - u need it maan khali pet nid nahi aane wali ..le lo

Maan - stop he know Vicky sometime more stubone than him...

Maan finish juice in one sip itself ...

Vicky don't u going to cong me for my wedding bhai ...maan feel like someone stab his heart .

Edited by Mahimaan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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terrific update, well written! Maan feels guilty and hurts himself! Vicky knows Maan so well and can feel his pain! dadu worried abt Maan! indeed Maan n Vicky are poles apart! Maan's dad impressed with Geet! SD and dadu speak! Vicky is so caring towards Maan! Maan shattered hearing that Geet and Vicky will get married!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OH my what has man done. Has he really lost the diamond!! Why do I feel Vsk and geet are putting on an act n he knows his brother v well and saw what transpired between them Or is it my hope
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update di
Liked it!!
Maan was feeling guilty for his demeanor and was restless with geet's words and attitude towards him. Maan's family were happy with geet's gesture and were impressed with her. Maan really lost a diamond owing to his behavior. His family were concerned about his anger and temperament. Maan hurt himself and Vicky could understand his brother's thoughts and was concerned for him. Maan and Vicky are poles apart with their respective nature and mannerism. Maan was hurt and shattered hearing Vicky's marriage with Geet.
Thanks for updating !!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Maan is all angry dye to his helplessness
Vicky n Maan are just opposite
Vicky try to pacify Dadu
As predicted Maan says sorry to his sleeping dadu n pecked both
Vicky is successful in making him drink juice

But his question might turn Maan into a tornado...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update dear, oh dear maan is anger problem, want to see maaneet wedding not vicky and geet

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