Manchala ,madness of heart part 12 and last on page 19 - 10 feb - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1

Maan is the eldest of the Khurana children and his family wants him to marry but he always says no while his siblings too say they have to wait first their Maan bhai marry then they will marry
Maan is angry at his family thought to see the girl as its modern times now so he decides and makes a plan
Maan and his twin brother Vicky goes to Handa house to speak to Geet and there her Darji allows them to speak to her but also warns Maan not to hurt Geet
Maan introduces himself as Vicky and Geet gets angry at once that he is able to pull a prank on her and her family and she tells him that the girl and her family are not toys they should have respect and what Maan is doing is wrong

precap Geet agrees for marriage but with VSK
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2

Geet blast further you all treat her like lifeless doll , usko bolo chale ke dikho gake dikho ,khana aata hai kya ...service hai kya ...not thinks while that she is not any showpiece or enlivening things jisko dard nahi hota hurt nahi hota geet eyes feel with tear and anger ...

stop treat girl and girl family as no one jinko self respect nahi hai ..jisko ladka ya uske relative ladkiwale cahe jaise treat kare . and door is that side so u both can move now no need to talk with my family I will handle my family very well main apni family se bahagti nahi unke sath chalti hu ..with that she turn her face...

msk almost froze on his place he never expected such encounter like this he is like toungh get cut with geet each and every word till now he have bad experience in this ladki show and all jaha sirf ladki ki achai highlight karne ki kosish ki jati hai .. This is looking like cheap. Bas ladke ko impress karna hai in anyway .he always get encounter with those girl who already on their toe to throw on him with their cheap act.

But this girl in his life he first time face girl like geet ...and she is beautiful yet confident girl...maan mummer softly MSK u are big wrong this time u make hurry in decision .

He once look to Vicky but Vicky hard face give ans and without any word maan went out from that area . he is restless in his anger and foolishness first he hurt that girl than its going to hurt to both family ..he acted like dum person He caressed his own hair in frustration.

Vicky took deep breath and come to geet side he cannot be spoiled Khurana reputation he have to work on damages which maan is created in his foolishness. He took lot of courage and called out ..

Vicky - miss geet I want to talk with you please give me only 5 min

Thou hurt geet don't want to heard anything . but she cannot behave rude with Vsk because he don't have any wrong in this whole matter .

She composed herself and turn to vsk and say u have only 5 min ...vsk .

Vicky nodded other side maan who walking outside of terrace and waiting for vsk...after 15 min vsk come out with geet but geet totally ignore maan don't know why but he feel hurt a tag of pain in his heart with her ignorance and all three of them come down in living area ...where till now both family gather waiting for them with so much excitement and hops Maan first time get what big shapa he done . maan dadaji once give look to maan and maan cannot stand for their q gaze he look down and dadaji face turn hard like anything he get that maan done something wrong

trio come down msk and vsk went to their cousin side and settle there ..dadaji first ask to geet itself about her decision . Geet once look to all than look to vsk and say calmly i am ready for marriage but .she stop for while and say I am ready to marriage but Not with Msk but Vsk ...

A loud gasp come in living room ..all get shocked with geet decision, rano try to say something but before she say something darji show his palm and stop rano .

Darji once look to maan dadadji and say in hard tone we are with Geet decision because we trust her If she took such decision there should be some reason now it's up to you khuranaji what you want . If you want this alliance we all ready but make sure that no one have problem with this relation darji passed a Hard gaze to maan.

Maan whose face turn white as ...dead maan he not even bad dream imagine about such reaction from geet ...it's like a bomb throw on his brain and his brain stop its all work . He first time feel unknown pain in heart which is more than his anger He himself surprised with own self that why he feel more hurt than angry .

Maan took deep breath and once look to geet than darji and say in composed tone - from my side miss geet don't get any trouble in my family that's promise of MSK. Now I want to leave I have one urgent meting .

Thou all khurana angry on maan but they don't want any drama in Handa house so dadaji nodded and maan stand from bid bye to them and come out from that area , he walk to door and don't know why but for while he stop to door and turn to back he want to once look to geet same time geet also looking to his side both eyes meet for while and maan feel something change in his heart .

Other side geet also feel something change in his gaze some softness took place on arrogant and ruthless Ms...but she ignore that and turn to look to other side .

Maan took deep breath ..and went out from it other side Vicky saw what passed from mg.

He know he have to face Khurana outburst .

Before anyone say anthing Vsk say politliy please lesion me once than ..we are ready for your any decision ...next 10 min all herd him what is saying .

Vsk once look to dadaji and dadji nodded a big smile appear on Vsk face .

Edited by Mahimaan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Nice update di
Loved it!!
Geet burst out her anger and frustration on Maan and made him realise the difficulty bride's side endure in order to get their daughter's life gets settled with respect and love. Maan was astonished with geet's words . First time he met a person who made him stunned with her words and didn't throw herself on him and showcase thyself. He felt hurt with geet's demeanor. Geet and VSK spoke privately and Geet said her decision to her family that she is ready to marry VSK. Geet's family gave their nod according to geet's consent. Something inside Maan broke him and was feeling restless . Geet could see change in maan's demeanor but shuggred it off. Yet again VSK spoke something with his family.
Thanks for the pm !
Looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
fab update! well written! Geet burst on Maan! her anger was justified! she makes him realise wt the girls go through! Maan feels guilty! he is surprised Geet didn't throw herself at him! Vicky and Geet speak! Geet agrees 2 marry VSK! Maan stunned! Darji supports Geet! Geet notices Maan's demeanor has changed! Vicky speaks 2 his family! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fantastic update dear, geet shows maan a mirror of reality, glad geet is darji on her side , eagerly waiting for next update dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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uiii what and teaser yar jhatka de dala poor maan waiting dear
update was superb the way you narrate now what will maan going to do,
hope its geet some prank waiting for update dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Geet actually told Maan truth as he never thought on those lines
the girls that he always saw were just ready to throw themselves on him
while Geet is totally different she was talking about her family's respect
Maan was hurt and disappointed with himself when he , Vicky and Geet came down
Geet told everybody she is ready for marriage but with VSK and her Darji knew she must have a good reason for rejecting Maan
waiting now to see what Vicky tells both grand fathers
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wonderful update
msk 's wicket down by geet's asnwer
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
thanks 4 da pm! read and commented already! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mahi after a long long time i came on forum n mila kya ye best story padhne ko ab bahut dino baad koi story ke next part ke liye i m eagerly waiting. Nw waiting ki kaise tum maaneet ko milati hoon vaise ye procedure main bahut ache se samjah sakti hoon so waiting ki tum kya karne wali hoo aage

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