Loved the part dear... Kya sabak sikhya geet ne... Is karan ko bhi slow poison do koi... Hope geet gets to know soon about it... Anyways loved their little night chit chat... And yes continue soon dear
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Loved the part dear... Kya sabak sikhya geet ne... Is karan ko bhi slow poison do koi... Hope geet gets to know soon about it... Anyways loved their little night chit chat... And yes continue soon dear
Wow awesome update yaar
This is just amazing geet did the perfect thing with Karan he deserves it for the way they have been treating maan
Geet can only teach them a very good lesson and Dadi will be sooo happy
Originally posted by: maaneetfavo
</font><font color="#0000ff">Thank u so much kutty dear..😃😃😃</font>
PART 5
Early Morning..
Karan shout like roof broken to ground ,Karan screaming so much...
Few seconds before..
Alarm ringed in karan room and karan sleep disturbing hearing alarm sound..in sleepy state karan hand touch to alarm clock opps unfortunately his hand touched to rat catcher trap ..karan jerked up in bed while screaming loudly..
Karan looked at hand and slowly remove from hand to rat catcher trap ..he blowing air in hand.through his mouth
Karan: who the hell placed rat catcher trap in my table..oh its paining.
Karan enter in restroom and wash his hand through water and squezzed hand santizer.liquid in harmed hand .after sec karan shout ..its burning..
Karan opened santizier bottle : oh god ,someone replaced lemon juice in santizer liquid..
Karan come out to bathroom and look at one thing in horror face..
Karan : no no...he run to table side , tried to control fire in document..
Karan poured jug of water in fire but already whole document fully burned as ash only remain in table..
Karan: oh my project assignment burned in fire..now devil princi not leave me alive..day after tomorrow I need submit my assignment otherwise they not allow me to write exam if I am not pass exam..dad cut my packet money and snatched my credit cards with horror face..this day worst day of my life with shouting like mad..now how to I reprepare document in single day while whole 3 months project .with pulling his hair .hmm..why I worried about so much..i have my own slave , he do my work as everytime he did it with evily smirked face.
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Handa mansion, Geet room
Geet pray to her favourite babaji: sorry babaji, I know I did it wrong, what I would do .after heared maan complaint and seeing his wound, I got hell angry with that devil karan so I gave him punishment..if u think I did it wrong .i am sorry. I know u not angry with me..rat catcher trap , liquid sanitizer its ok but placed burning cigratee in project assignment .i see cigartee box in his table.chi chi..he have bad habits also .i just burning cigartee in project assignment .yeah its too much..but he deserve it babaji..how cruel he is and maan family..poor maan got more beated without his mistakes..plz babaji plz save my maan from vampire family..plz do something..plz..and forgive me..
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KM ,Morning ..
Dadi come to visit maan room and look at maan sleeping like kid as cuddling his leg to his stomach and placed his both palm to chin..in his sleeping state also his smile with him..dadi carring his hairs and kissed his forehead ..she noticed haldi paste applied in his wound ..
Dadi: who apply haldi paste for maan wound.. after maan slept ,may be nakul did it...with confused face.
Maan wake up in sleep : good morning dadi..
Dadi: good morning beta..who apply haldi paste in ur wound..
Maan sit in bed : oh dadi, night time...karan enter in maan room..
Karan: how r u bhai with sugar coated voice.
Maan nod his head: fine.dadi angry glared to karan and went out ..
Karan: bhai, I need ur help..plz help me..otherwise princi not allow me for exam..
Maan: my help, chota bhai..with confused face.
Karan: yes bhai.plz once again prepare my project assignment..
Maan: but I already prepared give to ur assignment na..
Karan (mind):how to say, my assignment burned by fire .if I said about my assignment burned through fire..i want explain everything..how fire catch my document.night I forgot ash my cigarette ..insake of document burned . Then idiot know about my cigratee habit..then he blabbering to sowmaya and sowmaya say to mom..she give me big lecture..
Maan: chota bhai..where is ur assignment.with confused face
Karan: oh my friend , asked my assignment..i gave to him..but he missed my assignment in some where..i don't know..what I will do..u already did it for me..plz do once again for ur little bhai..if u do it for me..tomorrow , u go anywhere..i am not saying anything to dad ..promise..
Maan: really with excited voice.
Maan(mind): tomorrow I am going to meet , geetji...with happy face.
Karan : bhai..plz finish tonight itself..tomorrow I need submit my assignment..
Maan face fell down: today .
Karan: yes..bhai.u can do it..u already did my every assignment..its not tough task for u..
Maan: but
Karan: no but..karan give laptop and project detail to maan...
Karan (mind):in my childhood itself, u only do my homework, assignment and everything maan..i don't know why god give u intelligent brain ..god did wrong thing with u..u r so nave and scary cat..in ur fear and intelligent insake I using ur brain to my favour ,anyway ur intelligent brain going to waste only atleast I using for my enjoyable life...with smirked face and went out.
(Guys I never said maan is stupid ok ...he don't know anything outer world , people cruel mind, husband and wife relationship..he so innocent ..Harak and preeto not allow maan to school but maan have knowledge about studies thanks to karan..maan only doing his home work in childhood itself..so maan have knowledge and aware about construction fields..but he have therotical knowledge not any practical knowledge..)
Juile licking maan foot and maan smiled: don't disturb juilee..today if iam not complete this work na..chotu bhai not allow to meet geetji.after I finish this work..i play with u with smiling face.
Juile face fell down (mind): who geetji for my maan..with angry face..
Handa mansion
Geet : bye mom, I am going to meet my friend..
Rano: take care beta and come soon..
Geet : yes mom.
Geet come to meet old friend in their college..
(don't forgot few days ago only geet come back to delhi from abroad ..so she come to meet her school days friends in their college)
Geet hugged her friend one by one: I miss u guys..
Friend: me too geet..hmm, u got any boy friend in abroad with teasing tone.
Geet mind stricked maan face and little blush: no one ..i have boys in friend not boyfriend catergory.
Friend: what ur next plan , geet..
Geet: not decide yet..now enjoying with family and roaming with our friends..let decide later.
Friend: then think about marriage
Geet: marriage , no ways..first I settle down my career then only I marry.may be after 4 yrs ..i think about my marriage
( every wishes not fulfil geet, we propose but god disposes. May be ur marriage suddenly happen geetji )
Geet hearing man laughing sound and girl sobbing voice ..geet look at surrounding ..here and there.
Friend: geet, what r u looking everywhere..
Geet : I heared girl sobbing sound..
Friend: its common for us..devil senior ragging to any junior...no one against his wish and stopped him..because his dad has big shot in delhi..if anyone against him..he make their life to hell with disgusting face.
Geet : where he is..with angry face.
Friend: plz geet, don't interfere in this matter..its not good for u..with worried tone..
Geet:After whatever happen in my future ..i will be face with bold face..she have no fear in her eyes..friend showing senior place to geet..geet stopped them ..dont come with her.
Friend: but geet, u going alone..its not good .
Geet: I will manage..dont worry about me..worried about him ..with smirked face.
Geet reached senior place and one girl standing in front of senior with sobbing face.
Girl: plz leave me..with scared face.
Senior: why saying continuously leave me..ok I leave u but u hug me tightly and kiss my lips.then go..i never stopped u..with smirking face.
Girl: no ,I cannot do it..with horror face..
Senior get up from wall : hmm..i will do..senior legs move forward to girl side..girl leg move to backwards.girl back touched to wall..and senior placed his both hand between her ..girl pleading him..dont do it..
Geet touched senior arm and senior got irriate some one touched his arms..senior turned back and look at geet..he stunned seeing her beauty..
Geet wore red sleeves gown above her knees and open curly hair and left wrist tied to red colour watch..her sparkling brown eyes and milky bare legs
Senior eyes scanning geet head to toe with lusty ways and geet smirked seeing his freeze mode.
Geet : hi senior with seducing voice
Senior : hello, beauty with lusty voice..
Geet eyes guestered to girl..and go away as girl nodded her head and legs move out..senior held her wrist.
Geet remove his hand from her wrirst : iam here..why u need her with slow seducing voice.
Senior smirked face: yes, angel infront of me..why my eyes turned to other girl side..girl left the place.
Geet hugged senior and senior thought he in heaven.uff his heaven shattered..aah..ouch...he shouting ..
Yeah geet handa hit his private part through her left leg joint..and geet remove from hug.
Senior placed his hand in hit place :ouch...u with pain and angry face..
Geet : yeah, its me..once again u misbehave with girls..u must remember my gift..with angry face
Senior : u know whom u play , great business man, harak singh ka only son karan singh...with angry face.
(Senior no one other our maan ka badipapa son..devil karan & in night geet not see karan face in bedroom ..its dark place right)
Geet : whom ever, I don't mind..once again I see u mishehave with any girl na..that day ur last day.with warning tone..
Senior tried to catch geet insake of pain..he cannot ..geet left the place.
Geet come to friend place and said bye to everyone..went out ..
Karan angry face: I don't know who r u..but u voluntary come to my bed..i will enjoy ur whole body..otherwise my name not karan singh..
Karan : oh..its paining more..
Dargah..
Geet come to dargah and pray for maan ..geet tied thread in holy window..someone faint behind her..geet turn look at old lady faint in floor..geet bring water and sprayed water in face while tapping her cheeks lightly..
Geet : Aunty..open ur eyes..
Old lady open her eyes slowly and look at geet face..geet lip crept in light smile.geet helped her to sit in near pillar.
Geet : aunty, u r alright...
Old lady placed hand in her curly hairs: yes, beta..i am fine..thank u..
Geet : why u strain ur health in ur old age with worried even little bossy tone.
Old lady: I come pray for my grandson good future..i hope god fulfil my wish ..with little sad face.
Geet :Aunty ji..i saying na..u r every wish will be fulfil soon..u r grandson get bright future very soon
Oldlady smiled: thanks beta..what is ur name beta..
Geet: geet
Oldlady: lovely name dear..i am savitri ..u call me to dadi.
Geet: ok dadi..u prayed finish.come I drop u..
Savitri: no beta.i come with driver only..i go myself..
Geet: ok dadi, take care ur health...left the place.
savitri: lovely girl..i hope maan get girl like geet ..god plz fulfil my wish soon , plz send angel for my maan life.
A day passed ..
Geet waiting for maan their daily meet place..
Geet (mind): yesterday I went to met my friends but today till now he did not come to meet me..i am worried about him..that devil do any dirty prank with my maan..or he angry with me..yesterday I did not come met him..oh god..i become mad soon.
Someone placed hand in geet shoulder and geet smiled and thinking maan arrive and turned back opps her smiled vanished ..
Man: geet ki bachi..u r not happy see me..after long two months back..i meet u..but why u showing ur frown face with chuckling face.
Geet pout face: Harmanji stop teasing me..with teasing tone.
Man : yuck..dont call me Harman ji..yes I elder to u its not mean , u addressed with ji.
Geet : I am just teasing Harman. How r u my dear friend...when return back to abroad..u r not inform me and how u leave ur darling elisa alone with teasing tone.
Harman: uff don't remember elisa aunty..i escaped from her drooling session..every time she roaming behind me..with horror face
Geet chuckling face: she love u so much , Harman.. what next plan...
Harman: now
Geet: I tell u..u going marry elisa aunty right..with laughing voice.
Harman pout face: chup karo..tomorrow I am join to city hospital for junior doctor post ,madam..
Geet: congrats , doctor sahab..
Harman: thank u ji...come I drop to mansion ..
Geet: no.u carry on..i waiting for my friend..
Harman raised his eye brow : friend or boyfriend.
Geet: just friend Harman.with stammering tone .i come to meet u tomorrow..rapidly said
Harman hugged her and kissed her forehead : bye geet..harman left the place.
In abroad ,Harman and geet neighbour in their apartment..both r close friend.harman treat geet to his good friend as geet also.
Geet don't know one innocent soul fuming seeing Harman closeness with geet ..yeah none other our Mister cutiepie..
Maan stopped seeing harman talked with geet and geet also laughing , teasing with him..
Maan (mind): arrhh..geetji na..i happily come to meet her..last night fully tried finished karan bhai assignment because he allow see to geetji..but she talk and laughing with someone with cute angry face even he kissed her forehead with yuck face.
Geet noticed maan standing in tree and geet almost run to his side..maan turn his face and showing his back to her
Geet (mind): I think, he angry with me.yesterday I am not come to meet him..
Geet turned maan and maan not look at here.he seeing there and here..geet rolled her eyes..and turn his cheeks while look at his face
Geet: maan, listen yesterday..
Maan mind stricked : sorry, yesterday I am not come to meet u..with innocent and sad face.
Geet ( mind): he also not come ..with naughty mind
Geet: why u not come to meet me with fake angry face.yesterday I waited for ur long time.
Maan: sorry..with sad tone
Geet: u not come yesterday but today u showing angry with me
Maan: oh..who that man...few minutes before u talk with him, geetji with eager voice but sad face
Geet smiled: whom u talk about..with smirked face
Maan: that man kissed ur forehead na with cute angry face.
Geet: oh he is my best friend..with proud tone even teasing to maan
Maan: I am not ur best friend with angry face.
Geet: u r more important person than him with flowly said without twice thinking anything.
Maan showing whole tooth :then ok..with nod his head.
I thought he angry with that girl but she angry with my maan..uff I hate her..with angry face..yeah guys this is Julie mindvoice..
Juilee braking distract their conversation.geet eyes look at down and seeing little puppy angry signed to her..geet confused see juile glare
Maan pickup juilee in his arms and juile winning face to geet..as geet mouth open widely.
Maan: see geetji , she is my juilee..my darling..with smiling face..and look at juilee side hug to geet ..she is my geetji..my my best friend
Juile and geet fuming hearing my word from maan mouth..
Geet (mind): my juilee , maan..even that creatures ur darling with angry glaze to juile (dog)
Juile (mind): my geetji..even she is ur best friend but I am ur best friend..same angry glaze to geet..
Geet Vs juile cold war started through their eyes..🤣
Part end..😆
Precap
Harak and preeto shocked hearing news..may be its chance they get heart attack also.
Geet asking maan about his family detail..🤓
Harman scold someone..😡
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