Maaneet ss-Tera Mera Rishta Puraana New Part 6 -pg 53 -2 /aug/2020 - Page 18

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i glad u like it😃
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thank u nalini akka😳😳😳
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Originally posted by: Desigirls12

wow lovely superb update..te way my maaneet ki intro was lovely, one like a goddess and another only as greek god,both looking very beautiful and hot..te way roli meeting geet and mishkat meeting my maan was lovely..so destinty started its game..wat my maan loved his geet and something happen..i love te update yar


thank u so much nalini akka..😃😃😃
yeah maaneet always in their look 😳
yes , destiny started game..who will know what end for their life😉
i dont know maan love with geet..or someone

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Originally posted by: Desigirls12

really its amazing ff yar..te start itself making me more curious..i cant wait for more..lovely


really i glad u like it..thank u so much 🤗🤗🤗
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Originally posted by: Rainu

Beautiful update...


thank u so much dear😃
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Originally posted by: VSai2008

Very Nice character sketch :)

Loving it


thank u so much sai dear😃😃
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Originally posted by: pixelflower620

Nice start buddy
Roli is mesmerized by Geet's beauty and voice she thought to learn music from her
Maan is happy with the young boy whom he met
cont soon
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thank u so much budddy😃😃
yeah roli and maan happy see geet and mish..
let see what happen😉

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thank u so much dear😃
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Thanks for liking and comment dearies, if any grammatical andspelling mistakes in this part ..iam sorry dearies..

PART 2

Khurana Construction

Maan: Adi, when foreign client arrive to ouroffice. while checking files

Adi: few minutes maan, oh god , i forgot project files in homeitself.

Maan: Adi, nowdays u very careless with rolled his eyes

Adi pout face: sorry, i called pinky and say bring file tooffice.

Maan got sad : butshe not enter office..u know very well..her stubborn nature..

Adi : i know , but atleast try..its important file , i trustonly pinky rather than anyone..even if iam going to home and bring file na..its become so late for meeting..

Maan nods his head : ok..call her..i met her long back..witheager voice

Adi called pinky and put loudspeaker ..

Adi: pinky..

Pinky: yes, i am pinky Sharma, what do want mr AdityaSharma..with little teasing tone.

Adi rolled his eyes : pinky i need ur help..plz bring fileto my office..with little bossy tone

pinky: Mr Sharma, are u bossing me with angry voice.

Adi: not at all, sweetheart, u hubby need ur help , plzbring file to office, its urgent baby with scaring voice.

Maan chuckled hearing adi scaring voice and pinky angryvoice.

Pinky: u asked anything i will do without ask any reason buti am not enter in ur KC and KM..i hate that place..and person ( person wordsstress that word)..u know very well na..with angry voice.

Maan face fell down..maan know very well , she mentionedonly him.

Adi: its almost 15 yrs over, u stopped come to KC and talkwith Maan and maaji..plz forgive him..he hurt because of ur rejection.hecarving for his little sister love. U knew very well..its not his fault..withdefending tone for maan

Pinky ignore adi word: Adiji, i have more work in home..plzu put down phone.

Maan gestured adidont ask anything her and Adi accept maan request.

Adi: ok..u not care about maan but dont say u forgot urlovable niece with smirked face

Pinky lips crept in smile : roli beta come back to mansionwith excited voice.

Adi smiled: yes, u want meet her..bring file to office..inreturn i will bring roli in our home

Pinky: u blackmailing me, Mr Sharma..dont forgot evening ,ucome back to home with warning tone.

Adi:i know sweetheart, u not beat me because u love me morethan i love u with smiling voice.

Pinky : ok, fine i am coming but i am not talk with anyoneeven see ..its ok for u..

Adi : yes mam, iaccept ur condition..files in my study locker..plz bring soon.

Maan said Adi in slow voice: say her drive slow..dont do anyharsh drive with worried voice

Adi : sweetheart, drive slowly..dont do harsh drive..ok..

Pinky: i heared it with rude voice..and cut the call.

Adi : so rude ..with pout face.

Maan: u deserveit with teasing tone.

Pinky(mind) : i heared ur worried voice bhai, i love u bhai..in my childhood itself,u r my hero but u did it wrong..i never forgive u..with angry but in angerhave showing in pain

Pinky enter in KC with attitude walk and everyone know hervery well..noone guards restricted to stop her enter in floor.every staff wishher with respect like they gave maan and adi.Pinky nods her head with littlesmile.

Pinky touched maan cabin lock: no i dont want see his face..pinkyturn back..she bumped to someone..herleg twisted before she fallen to ground, both arms protective her ..

Pinky open his eyes and realised she in young boy arms and shestand in her foot with help of young boy.

Young boy : Are u alright mam with concern voice.

Pinky little smile: i am fine..

Adi saw pinky legstwist before he run held her and young boy held her ..

Adi: pinky, are u fine with worried tone.

Pinky nods her head ..

Young boy : she is ur daughter..sir.

Adi mouth open widely : she is not my daughter, Mr Mishkatsingh with angry voice

Mish: opps sorry sir, she look like teenage girl..i thought sheis ur daughter..so she is ur sister right..

Adi : mishkat ..with grinned teeth..

Pinky touched adi shoulder : Adiji, cool down..(look atmish) he is my husband with smiling face.

Mishkat placed right hand in his chest with dramatic way :mam, u married , u broke my heart..with fake sad face.

Pinky smiled: why young boy..adi fuming seeing mish flirtwith his wife.

Mish:after i saw urbeautiful face..my heart fallen for u..but u broke my heart insake of urmarried status with fake sad face.

Pinky blushing : dont lie , young boy.

Mish: u call me mishkat or mish in sweet voice with flirtingtone..Adi cannot tolerate anymore as mish flirting nature with his wife pinky.

Adi :pinky , u bring file ..with tried to distract their conversation.

Pinky : yes, adiji..handover file to adi..and said slowvoice dont forgot about roli matter. Ok i am going

Mish: mam, u going..with sad face.

Adi come between mish and pinky : u have any problem and uhave any work in office. with fuming face

Mish : no sir, today is my first day in kc..i have no lot of work..so i thought i chat with sweet mamwith innocent face.

Pinky: oh, today ur first day..all the best mish..

Mish : thank u, i glad meet u, beautiful lady today withflirty tone.

Adi: pinky, i have meeting..plz go back to home..i come soonwith irriatate face

Mish: no problem sir, i have no work..i give company to mam..

Pinky smiled seeing adi fuming face : yes, adiji..u go to urmeeting with smirked face.

Adi: i said , go back to ur home...with angry face.

Pinky: ok ok..i am leaving..bye mish..

Mish: mam, whenever, u have a free time..plz come tooffice..

Pinky: sure mish...bye adiji..left out the mansion.

Adi : Mr.singh, plz go to our cabin.with grinned teeth .Mishnod his head and left to his cabin.

Adi enter maan cabin with angry face..

Maan look at adi while hard to control his laugh : whathappened adi, why ur face become red..u banged to any girl then only u rblushing with teasing tone.

Adi : maan..with grinned voice..

Maan laughed loudly : oh my god, u jealous with little boy..godsake u r 40's yrsold not 20 s yrs..with chuckling face

Adi: he flirting with my wife not any random girl...withangry voice.

Maan smiled: yeah i see that..pinky joined team up withmishkat..as teasing u..

Adi: that mishkat dido like u..he flirting every girl evenaunties like u did in college days..

Maan stop laughing : yes, he remembering my early age..fractionof sec maan remembered whole college life

Adi: i know, he is harmless flirt but its too much..he saidthat pinky is my daughter..i got little heart attack. With pout face.

Maan giggled: ok..lets go meeting..after finish meeting, ineed go to mansion soon...otherwise mybaby not leave me..i cannot bear her angry..

Adi nod his head and both left for meeting..

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Evening time.

Geet called someone ..

Geet : where r u, u did not come back to home..with angryface.

Maan: i coming baby..with smiling face..

Geet heared door bell sound..while talking phone as open thedoor..

Geet: u came and cutthe call with angry face.

Person side hug to geet and geet snapped his shoulder..

Geet: why u late , mishka with angry face..

Mish: mom, plz dont angry with me. Sorry fogive ur favouriteson..plz..with innocent face.

Yes, geet talk with mishkat singh..and he is son of geet..

Geet : ok come inside ..and freshup come back , i arrangedinner for u..

Mish : yes mam with his bow head down..

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Mish sit in dinning table and geet arrange food in table..mish continuously blabbering talk about office incident..

Geet : chup bikul chup , Mumbai express.eat ur food fast..

Mish : mom, now we r in delhi not Mumbai so dont call me Mumbaiexpress..call me delhi daredevil with naughty face

Geet: yes my mishka not less than devil..with smile face

Mish: plz mom dont call me mishka..my friends everyoneteasing me with pout face

Geet pinched his cheeks : mishka baby..

Mish: mom how manytimes, i told u that dont call me mishka..first say why u call me mishka withfake angry face.

Geet (mind): i thought my mishty come back in ur form so idecided girl name to mishka unfortunately i delivered boy child ..so i put urname to mishkat..my mishty with moist eyes)

Mish shake geet arms and geet come back to real world aswiped her tears before mish notice

Mish: mom, what r u thinking ..why u calling me , mishka..

Geet carring his hairs: mishka means god gift dear..i call umishka..even in my delivery time , i prayed every god..i want girl childunfortunately i delivered boy with last line chuckling face.

Mish with pout face: mom..

Geet kissed mish forehead : i love u mishka..

Mish hugged her waist while sitting in chair.

Geet: ok ..have ur food..

Mish: mom, u need any help for institute work .tell me..iwill do..

Geet: no beta, i did it everything..hmm..i thinking redesigning building to modern trends with classic way..what do u say.

Mish: good idea..ok i search good redesigning company forour institute..

Geet: hmm..u also join in GC right..they do our work..

Mish: mom its not GC..its KC..with

Geet: GC or KC..whatever ask ur boss..they do our institute work or not otherwise we will search other company for our work

Mish : my boss so nice person, kind person.u knew mom..whathe did achieved in this years..he starting blabbering about his boss ..geetrolled her eyes.

Geet feed food morsel in mish mouth : stop ur bossneela..first eat ur food..

Mish munching his food with pout face : mom..u cooked likenani (granny)..with surprised face.food very tasty.

Geet smiled : oyie..my cooking not good and granny cookedvery well..its too bad mishkat..with fake angry face.

Mish : when i said , ur food not good ..but my nani is bestin cooking..noone beat her cooking style.even she is my best grandmom withteasing tone.

Mishkat beta...

Mishkat turn look at behind and old lady stand ing infront ofhim with smiling face..

Mishkat get up from chairs and hug her tightly: i miss u granny.

Granny: i miss u too beta..

Mish: u did not told me..u coming delhi today..whole onemonth ..i miss u ..i love u granny.

Geet: After saw ur granny, u forgot ur mom..its notfair..with pout face.

Granny: everything fair in love geet beta..

Mish side hug to geet: u r the best mom ever..

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KM

Maan : today why so much traffic in delhi..how to i face herangry..with fear face.

Amar : maan beta, Atleast today, u come soon..she angry withu..all the best beta..

Maan : thanks for wishes papa.

Maan enter room..its room so pink colour, more bears toysplaced in one side of room, centre of room king size bed placed and attachedbalcony.

Maan silent enter in bed side and sit corner of bed andcarring girl hair and kissed crown head ..

Maan: sorry roli baby...today important forgein coming ouroffice..otherwise i never miss receive u in airport..sorry forgive ur dad..

Dad nahi sweetheart..

Maan: baby u r not sleeping.

Roli open her eyes: i am angry with u..with cute angry face

Maan smiled: my Barbie doll, u r so cute in ur angry face.

Roli twisted her lips : dont talk with me.

Maan: what punishment darling..for my big mistake...withinnocent face.

Roli placed her head in his lap and held his waist:dont putinnocent face..its not suitable for great MSk with chuckling face...yes u have punishment also there..tomorrow u comewith me for ..

Maan: where..no ..i cannot..plz baby..

Roli smiked face: u come with me for shopping whole fullday...u accept or..with evil smile

Maan: done..

Roli: that is my sweetheart..i love u dad..u r the best dadever..

Maan: i love u too...

Roli start saying about journey while slept in his lap .maanplaced head in pillow and covering blanket properly and kissed her forehead andturn off light..went out .

Savi: maan beta, come i serve ur dinner..

Maan smiled weekly: i already had my dinner..without botherabout her reply..go to his room straight..

Maan go to washroom and changed his night dress..

Maan: u know avi, today what happened..new young boy joinedKC..his activity everything remembers our college day mainly i thought my earlyage infront of me..why u starring me..i cannot slept without sharing my wholeday incident with u...

Part end..


NExt part part 3

Roli next meeting with Geet..

Geet meet roli or someone..

Mishkat fight with one person.

Maan angry with someone...

If u likes this part, plz do likes and comment..i am waitingfor comment.

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