Maaneet ss-Mera Maasoom Patidev- Part 7/pg 111 (25-May-2018) - Page 71

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maan is do cute...😃

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Originally posted by: anu5

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Part 6

Maan pickup juilee in his arms and juile showing her tongue to geet while geet mouth open widely.

Maan: see geetji , she is my juilee..my darling..with smiling face..and look at juilee, as well side hug to geet ..she is my geetji.. my best friend

Juile and geet fuming hearing my word from maan mouth..

Geet (mind): my juilee , maan..even that creatures ur darling with angry glaze to juile (dog)

Juile (mind): my geetji..even she is ur best friend but I am ur best friend..same angry glaze to geet..

Geet Vs juile cold war started through their eyes..

Maan (mind) with confused look at geet and juilee: what happened to them, why they showing their big big eyes while scratching his hairs through his fingers

Maan: geetji ..

Geet come out from glaring session: yes maan..with little grinning voice

Maaneet sit near bench of course juilee sit near of maan foot as her eyes watching closely with geet .

Maan: how is simran di and baby and di has taken her medicine regularly with excited voice.

Geet smiled: both r fine and my bhai take care her medicine and health properly

Maan cute angry face: in ur home no one there except ur bhai

Geet confused look at maan: no , mom , dad in home , maan ..

Maan: then why ur bhai take care simran di ..and doctor said ur bhai stay away from simran di. Why he stay with di with fuming voice but in his angry also clearly visible his concern about simran and baby health .

Geet remember hospital visit and maan ka innocent question as she want bang her head into wall even she admiring his innocence , how much he was pure soul and worried about others even though he do not know anything about simran bhabhi , three days before only he saw her ,now he worried about her and baby ..he so cute without remove her eyes from maan while she admiring him.

Maan shook her arms , geet come out from her maan fantasy land

Maan : geetji , why everytime you r in sleeping mode even with out close ur big eyes with chuckling face

Geet: I am not sleeping ..wait u said , my eyes were big one with o shaped mouth

Juile barked while guesture , maan was right (mind): ur eyes was bigger than my eyes .

Geet eyes lash down to juile side : u shut ur mouth .., her eyes shift to maan face , maan, really my eyes were big one with pout face.

Maan cupped her both cheeks through his palm : nahi.. ur eyes so shinny and attractive ..geet eyes searching something in his eyes and juile mind thought what happening yaar while maan continues , and big also with teasing tone.

Juile grinning look to geet , maan was laughing and geet hit his shoulder playfully.

Maan held his ears : sorry ...with smiling face.. geet stopped .

Geet: maan, tell me about ur family details with little serious tone

Maan : my family ..with excited face.. me , dadi, sowmaya , nakul kaka, badimaa, badipapa , karan bhai and said some of servants names with respect manners .

Juile barked as I am also ur family maan.

Maan hit his forhead : and my juilee darling.. they r my family with innocent face.

Geet: hmm, say anything about them

Maan: dadi , she was wonderful lady, if u met her, u also love her and she also loving u as she was loving me with happy face.. and sowamya was baby sister, she so sweet, she only protective me from everyone scold and nakul kaka was elder to me, he such a caring person..

Geet: karan with grinning teeth.

Maan: he was my chota bhai..he was studying college and showing his palm to geet .. see my hand paining ..

Geet caring his palm with worried tone: what happened , why ur hand paining , if anyone did anything with u.

Maan: nahi geetji ,yesterday I did it karan bhai ka assignment ..whole day I typed his assignment document that only yesterday I am not came to meet u with pout face.

Geet (mind ) that idiot made his assignment by my maan , how dare he, its my fault , if am not burned his assignment , he did not gave his work assignment to maan because of my revenge , maan got suffered

Geet :sorry maan with guilty face

Maan: why u asking sorry for me ..

Geet : why u did that moron assisgment

Maan:oh karan bhai assignment

Geet: yes , that stupid karan with irritating face.

Maan: geetji, I am only doing his every assignment , works everything , u kow geetji, when in my childhood , I asked badipapa, I wish going to school, but badipapa beated me so much after I never shared any wish with badipapa . everyday I am seeing school children, iam also craving going to school with them but I fear thinking badipapa s beat and one day karan bhai said that I use his books in home but returns , he want as I am doing his homework , everyday my eyes eagerly waiting for karan bhai return to home , after I finsh his home work , I read his book with help of dadi without knowing badipapa and badimaa..

Geet stunned hearing his childhood craving and her heart felt his pain , his each word killing her heart and without her sense , tears flowing in her eyes .

Maan wiped her tears : what happened , geetji, why u crying like my dadimaa ..

Maan ka touch only geet realize , she has tears in her eyes ..

Geet : nothing maan , what about ur parents .

Maan sad face: when my childhood , my parents died in car accident with moist eyes .

Geet: sorry maan with guility face.. she thought she making remember his parents

Maan: nahi , geetji why u asking sorry for me, u know they r with me inform of stars.. every night , I am sitting terrace, I am looking my parents in sky ..u know two stars twinkling when ever I shared my happiness and sad to them..so they were with me right with smiling face.

Geet : u r so cute maan.

Maan: I am not cute geetji with grinned teeth.

Geet giggled : yes , ur my Mister cutie ...

Maan jerk up from bench : I am going ,bye ..

Juile eyes sparkling hearing bye word and barking (mind): lets go maan , I don't like her ..

Geet sad face : maan, u angry with me ..

Maan: nahi, why I angry with u.. if badipapa know about my outside visit ..he will beat me, before he coming to home , I go back to mansion then I will escape from badipapa whipping .so tomorrow I will meet u in same place while kiss her forhead and left the place as usual leaving to geet in shocking state.

Geet confused : why he kissed my forehead rather than my cheeks ..her mind got it , he kissed her like Harman kissed her before he left the place even he did it same place when Harman kissed her.. geet cheeks changed to little pink in sake of his possessive nature with her.

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Next day

Harman.. while seeing his wrist watch mind: omg today my first day joining to hospital , but my car tyre punctured ..this time, no one cab ,auto not coming in this street..god plz help me .

One scooty coming in same direction of Harman standing , he handle signal to scooty for lift ..

Scooty stopped in side of Harman..

Harman: Ms, plz drop me to city hospital, my car tyre punctured .

Girl cover her face through his dupatta and wore googles in her eyes and girl nod her head ..

Harman smiled : thank u .. he take his things from car and sit back to scooty..

Girl drive to scooty with silent and Harman initate his talk ..

Harman: thank u so much for ur help..i never forgot u in my life time..

Girl not say anything and harman closed his mouth..

Girl enter in city hospital parking area and harman step down from scooty.

Harman seeing his wrist watch : opps ..i need go now..he almost running to inside hospital.

Girls gang in front of girl : sowmaya, who is he..

Girl remove her dupatta from face , yes she is our sowmanya , our maan ka baby sister.

Sowmaya: I don't know who is he...he asked lift ..i dropped him that it .

Girl : don't lie madam..he is ur boyfriend right .

Sowmaya: stop ur rubbish girls.. even I don't know his name also.

Girl: u don't know , let go find his biography ..

Sowmaya: stop girls , now we need go attend patient..we r final year student of MBBS .. don't forgot , we r doctor , we have responsibility ..

Girl : sowmaya mata , stop ur lecture ..let go inside first otherwise our senior doctor scold us, confirm ..

Sowmaya mind : yes ..he really handsome..

Girls gang doing their work..some time chatting , checkinh patients ..

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Harman is walking in hospital corridor while checking one patients file and girl bumped to his hard chest or he bumped to her soft chest...whatever both bumped with each other..both not see who come infront of them

Harman : oh god, my shirt spoiled ..while rubbing coffee marks from shirt.

Girl : sorry sir..with sweet voice.

Harman: just shut up, u spoiled my shirt , ur eyes were front or back side .

Girl mouth open widely : hello , mister, even its ur fault , u only bumped me ..but u showing ur attitude with me ,

Harman : hello , its ur fault not mine ..stupid girl

Girl : stupid girl ..with fuming face.

Harman: by the way I have no time with ur silly fight and I never want see ur face anymore .. left the place.

Girl shout behind: u stupid , idiots , moron... I hate u..

Sowmaya, stop ur cursing him.

Sowmaya : today morning he said I never forgot u in my life and now he said , I never want see ur face. With angry face.

Girls gang: sowmaya u trust it or not ..most of hero and heroine , start with fight and end with love..i think ur love sorry also like that wtith teasing tone

Sowmaya irritating face: u shut ur mouth, I never fallen love with that idiots ..my wish also same , I never saw his face anymore .

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Mansion..

Harak breaking everything in his room while he behave like psycho and pretto hearing breaking sound come to their room..

Preeto tried to stop him but he pushed her awasy from him and continuously breaking everythings ..

Preeto : harak ji..what happened, why u behave like mad with shouting voice.

Harak look at preeto face: yes , I am mad .. my dream shattered today ..

Preeto making sit in their bed and sit next with him and handover water to him..

Preeto : now tell me, what happened ..why u behave like hyper .

Harak narrated what happen in office ..

Preeto got shocked : now what will we do..if within 1 month, maan not married to anyone , this whole property goes to khurana trust ..we cannot take single penny amount from this property..

Part end

Precap : harman and sowmaya shocked😲

Harak and preeto next plan ..😈

(They don't know their plan will be backfired for them only😆 )

Maaneet and juile combo ..😆

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Tomorrow pm ..😳

I will update one more story guys ...😉

Bye😳😳😳

Awesome update loved it geet and Julie eyeing each other fuming with jealousy maan is so cute he told how he had to complete Karan assignment as geet ruined in her revenge geet was shocked to know how maan could never go to school thanks yo his uncle but he secretly learn studying without his uncle knowledge geet was crying how much pain maan had to ho through Harman and soumya cute meet turned deadly when Harman became rude to her maan guardian angel turn devil they wanted to get maan married or else they will lose their property

Nice update

Nice update

fantastic...haha julie and geet jealous of each other...very funny that section was...poor maan telling so sweetly about his family and showing geet how concerned he is for her sister...