Maaneet ss-Mera Maasoom Patidev- Part 7/pg 111 (25-May-2018) - Page 43

Originally posted by: kamnagupta7

maan uncle neared him so badly.

maan is missing his parents.

geet came to km to see maan health.

Maaneet started liking each other.

looking forward to see how geet is going to save maan.

Originally posted by: vrinda22

poor maan

he is ill treated in his own house

dadi thinks geet as school kid

geet in maans house

their convo is cute nice part

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

wonderful update! superbly written! Maan is treated badly! he suffers so much! Geet at KM! nice convo btwn Maaneet! update soon

Originally posted by: hira2010

I just wanna kill maan

Realative

Grrr greedy shameless creature

Poor maan

Geet went to mansion after knew about his fever

Ops maaneet moment wow

And hilarious

Originally posted by: ambeern

Poor maan

Loved the update

Thanks for liking and comment dearies..if any grammatical and spelling mistakes in this part ..iam sorry dearies..sorry for late.

PART 4

Maan step down to bed and his legs slipped through because of spilt water in floor and geet tried to held him but maan legs twisted ..both fallen to bed .geet lay over him and maan under her..maaneet starring each other.

Maan remove her hair as tucked hair in behind ear. its disturbing seeing her glowing face and his hand caring her cheeks softly. Geet closed and sensing his cold hand touch her cheeks.suddenly his m shaped lip placed in her cherry lip .geet eyes open widely as even shocking for his sudden romantic act.

Geetji..geetji..geet open her eyes and look at maan with wide eyes as he tried pushing her above from him. Geet jerked above from him then she realised everything her dream only..its not real.she cursing herself thinking about maan like that.

Maan screaming ahhahaaa..

Geet got worried : what happen maan with worried voice.

Maan: everything u did it..now asking me what happen with cute angry face.

Geet confused face: what i did it, i did not understand.

Maan: i came outing with u right so chotu bhai ( karan ) said i romancing everywhere without his permission and i am not doing his work properly .because of his complaint , badipapaji beat me..he showing harmed bare body to geet..

Geet eyes moist seeing bare body..he become redness , blood cotted also there and geet touched his body with worried face.

Maan: ouch..its is paining..by the way geetji..u eat less its good for u health.

Geet: what with confused face

Maan: u r more weight but u not look like fatty with confused face

Geet mouth open in o shape: what u said , iam look like fatty for u..

Maan: nahi geetji..i never said that u look like fatty and i just said u r more weight as correcting her sentence

Geet angry glaze to maan : ufff...leave it , tell me where is that felonious man room..

Maan: who felonious with confuse face

Geet: ur chotu bhai with angry face

Maan giggled : his name is karan not felon

Geet: in my point view he is felonious man only.u say his room way or not. Or I find his room in my way with little bossy tone

Maan pout face : come geetji, i show u..

Geet: nahi, u rest karo, i come back after meet him with smirked face.

Maan nods his head and say way of karan room ..geet left and enter to karan room.

Geet look at karan room..it so luxuries, every facilities in his room..its so big room not like maan room.

Geet : maan said, he is his bhai but why maan lived in small room. There is no facilities in maan room but he enjoying luxuries life..i need know more about maan..tomorrow i will talk with him.but now ur payback time karan opps felon

After few minutes , geet come back to maan room

Maan sat in bed and eagerly look at door and geet smiled seeing his cute face.

Geet: maan

Maan : geetji, u came, why u went to karam bhai room with pout face.

Geet: i thought i give him some advice for his good behaviour with u.with angry face.morning he understand , my advice with smirked face

Maan: i am not understand anything..i forgot that..i am angry with u..dont talk with me..u hided everything from me.

Geeet: hey babaji, now suddenly what happen with him.

Maan showing his back to geet and geet tried to turn look at face.but he so adamant ..he did not turn back

Geet: maan , really u angry with u

Maan turned : yes ..i am not talk with u.

Geet: tika, why u angry with me..

Maan: u going to school but u did not tell me..

Geet ( mind): he thought , i am teacher thenonly i advice that felour..uff why i strucked with him but i feel very happy with him.

Maan: geetji, what u thinking ..iam asking about ur school.

Geet: maan, iam not going any school..

Maan: u r not studying..like i am also not studying in school in painful face.

Geet sensed pain in his voice but this not time to ask him: ofcourse i am studying

Maan:then why u saying , u r not going school.

Geet: uff..plz tell me clearly don't confuse me more.

Maan: u r buddhu, u don't understand anything ..u r school girl..right

Geet : who said iam going to school..i am look like school girl for u with chuckling face.

Maan: but dadi said, u r studying in school..ha , how u know about my dadi..u know dadi before me.why u not tell me..u already know about my dadi.with saying in single breathe

Geet ( mind) : why he not close his mouth in single minute..if he start blabbering as he never stopped .my delhi express nahi my jet speedy

Maan (mind): why she always day dreaming opps nahi , now night time so night dreaming in standing even with open eyes with weird face

Maan: geetji, what r u doing in my home

Geet: finally u asked what iam doing here.

Maan give sheepish smile : i forgot everything seeing ur face with little blush face. We need go out from my room , in my room one more person also there with slow voice and eyes popped face

Geet: yes, i know that

Maan: u know, how u found her with shocked face.

Geet: its me only ..

Maan chuckling face: i am not mention u, i am saying about ghost..few minutes before she talked with me with murmuring voice.

Geet laughed: ur so cute maan..

Maan: iam not cute , geetji with angry face.

Geet u r my mister cutie only.

Maan scratching his hair and realised geet is ghost.

Maan shout : dadi..save me from ghost , u r not geetji..u r ghost..stay away from me..

Geet glared and closed his mouth: shh..iam not ghost., don't shout

Maan nods his head and geet remove her hand from his mouth: then show ur legs ..ghost not have legs right.

Geet shaked her head and showing her legs to maan but maan not trust her fully.

Maan:then how come to my home without knowing my address..i am not give home address to geetji..tell me ghost ji with slow fear voice

Geet : maan plz stop ur childish behaviour.i called u but nakul kaka said , u have fever so i asked him ur address..he gave me .now i am here.now understand i am ur geetji not ur ghostji with teasing tone.

Maan pout face: so u play with me..its too bad..u know how much i scared.

Geet :ok sorry mister cutie.promise i am not prank with u

Maan: pinky promise..

Geet: kon pinky with possessive voice.

Maan: no one geetji..we asusual asked this way to promise. Chutki only teached me ,this type of promise.with smiling face

Geet hit her head (mind ) : now chutiki ..hey bhagwan , how many girl in his life ..and look at maan : u take ur medicines or not.

Maan: oh..i ...with stammering tone.

Geet : so u r not take any medicines right.

Maan nods his head : yuck, tablet have bitter taste ..i hate tablet..i am perfectly alright.

Geet : first where is ur tablet , maan pointed out table ..geet give to him ..and maan closed his mouth through his palm.

Geet removed his palm but maan denied ..in their fight , he layed to bed as geet lips touched his corner of lip..both have some electric pass their feel in their body.

Geet stand up and turn her face as controlled her feeling and give back to tablet to maan: maan just have ur medicine and then sleep.

Maan puppy signed with geet :take his medicine and geet helped him to lay in bed and sit next with him ...and caring his hairs.

Maan slept in bed and geet saw haldi paste bowl in table and geet applied haldi paste in maan harmed body ..

Geet kissed maan forehead with blushing face and left out to mansion.

Morning..

Karan shout like roof broken to ground ,Karan screaming so much...

Few seconds before..

Alarm ringed in karan room and karan sleep disturbing hearing alarm sound..in sleepy state karan hand touch to alarm clock opps unfortunately his hand touched to rat catcher trap ..karan jerked up in bed while screaming loudly..

Karan looked at hand and slowly remove from hand to rat catcher trap ..he blowing air in hand..

Karan: who the hell placed rat catcher trap in table..oh its is paining.

Karan enter in restroom and wash his hand through water and squezzed hand santizer.liquid in harmed hand .after sec karan shout ..its burning..

Karan opened santizier bottle : oh god ,someone replaced lemon juice in santizer liquid..

Karan come out to bathroom and look at one thing in horror face..

Karan : no ..

Precap

Karan payback continues😈

Geet and dadi face off.😃

Karan got slapped by geet

Maan jealous😳

Geet and juile ( maan dog) possessive with😳

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Originally posted by: nehaa9

waiting for it