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Thanks for liking and comment dearies, if any grammatical and spelling mistakes in this part ..i am sorry.

Maaneet destiny bring them to bali..let start our bali trip

Part 4


Maan hugged adi : hey man, u booked awesome resort.i love u buddy..

Adi: my pleasure my dear friend..who's that girl..with teasing tone.

Maan: she just co passengers ..

Adi: wow, even just co passengers , u ignored ur best childhood after my bhabhi arrive na, u said iam dead for u..with dramatic way

Maan:why u complaining like girl, Aditi with chuckling face

Adi: hey buddy don't call me Aditi.with grinned teeth .i am adithya Sharma with proudly said.

Maan: ok ..give ur credit card and car keys ..

Adi: why Mr MSK..with doubting face

Maan: u already accepted what I am saying ,u will be do..with calm face

Adi: yes, but why u want my credits cards and u already more golden, platitum packages credit cards in ur wallet..why u need mine.with doubting face.

Maan: u asking more question ..Mr .Adithya Sharma..with dramatic way

Waiter come to maan and adi side: ur room ready sir..and already ur luggage arrived in ur room...

Maan give tips to Waiter and waiter smiled taken money from maan.

Waiter : by the way , u r name sir.

Maan: Adi..

Adi : yes ma..maan hit adi foot..Adi angry glare to maan.

Maan: I am adi with stress name ..Adi mouth open widely..

Waiter : have a nice day sir..he handover keys to maan and went out.

Adi questioning look at Maan and maan gestured and raising his shoulder : what.

Adi and maan entered in maan room..

Maan: beautiful room, Mr.adithya..

Adi: thank u , Mr .adi with grinned teeth.

Maan sit in king size bed opps: ok don't angry with me..in this one week, no one knew my real name and my identity. So .i addressed my name to adi..

Adi eyes popped : don't say, u come bali without knowing samera di..with horror face.

Maan nod his head with innocent way..

Adi: u stupid, why u did it..she not leave me single minute to peace.

Maan: why u fear, maan is here.

Adi: u only my fear..first I call to sam di and say u come to bali.

Maan: no adi don't do it with angry face.

Adi: but why u come for my engagement right. Then what is ur problem.

Maan: I am coming for not only ur engagement and also some personal matters with dragging tone

Adi : uff..i understand , u visit bali for ur purpose not for my engagement with angry face.

Maan: not like that adi..this one week, don't say anything to anyone..next week I will be inform sam ..i am coming for ur engagement otherwise sam arrange bodyquards for me..iam not going anywhere freely..they do more restriction for my freedom.

Adi: maan, why u did not understand, one whole week, u hide ur bali visit From samera di..is it possible? With shaking head negatively.

Maan:I will manage Adi, why u tense..she is my sweetest di ever.with coolest way

Adi murmuring : she is only sweet for u not others with pout face.

Adi remember in their childhood day with maan.

Maan and adi age 14 and sam age 20

Adi visit to khurana mansion and he always scared and stammering infront of sam

Sam: how r u adi with strict and little smile.

Adi: I am.fine..samera di with stammering voice.

Sam: why u always stammering infront of me

Adi: nothing..di, where is maan.

Sam: In his room..

Adi almost run out the place and enter maan room while wiped his sweating.

Adi: why my whole body shivering while I answering her.

Maan come out from washroom: when u came buddy..come sit and we play video games .

Adi nods his head and both enjoyed their video games.

Maan: its boring buddy, lets do any new adventures ..with smirked face

Adi nod his head negatively: I am not come with u..

Maan: its become fun adi. Last time I am asking u and u come with me or not..

Adi: oh..i..

Maan: ok I tell u plan and then u decide...silent talk..

Adi freezed in his place after hearing maan plan and maan shake his arms..

Maan: Adi..adi shout near to ear..

Adi: why u shouting I am not deaf..

Maan: then why u standing like statue ..with grinned teeth.

Adi: Maan, its so risk adventures..i am not come with u and u also not go that place.with fear face.

Maan smirked face: I decided , am going even u also come with me..

Adi: no I am not..with horror face.

Maan: if u not come with me na..if I caught by sam , I say her, u only give idea for adventures...with evily face.

Adi:but its not true..

Maan: sam trust my word or urs

Adi: urs only with pout face but I fear that place even I am not watch any horror movie ..but u saying that place...plz one time accept my word..we both enjoy video games rather than doing any adventures..

********


Adi held maan hand tightly walking behind maan: don't leave my hand and both hearing werid sound while adi heart beating rapidly..maan , u hearing weird sound right with fear face.

Maan grinned teeth: adi, we just come to Cementry not any hell.


Adi: in midnight 12 , this place not lesser than hell with horror face.

Maan: shhh..dont wake up ghosts in their sweet dreams

Adi: really ghost also sleeping with innocent face..maan plz , let go return back to mansion.


Adi : see..ghost here with stammering face..adi dragg maan hand

Maan turn look at adi face: it just white cloth..

Maan turn back and walking while talking adi and adi come behind maan: Adithya Sharma , shut ur mouth..we do more things in this place.

What r u doing here with rude and strict voice.

Maan without turn back: Adi, don't talk I said right..

Adi: I am not said anything..then who said..with fear face.and body shivering ..

Maan : adi , don't do any prank..

Adi: really maan, I am not saying anything with stammering voice..someone touched Adi shoulder ..

Adi just turn and next sec he in ground ..

Maan turn back and Adi faints in ground..

Maan shaked arms adi come back real world..(back to present)

Maan: Adi, what r u thinking..

Adi: I remembered our Childhood adventures..mainly cementry adventures..i never forgot my life time..with horror face

Maan laughed : even me too, After u saw cementary worker, u just faint in ground..time god same time ,sam di came bodyguards to cementry ..otherwise I left u that place..i came back to mansion with teasing tone.

Adi: how can I forgot, Next morning I got more scolded by samera di..because of ur stupid adventures ..next two weeks I admitted in hospital..after whenever u doing any adventures, sam di first enquiring me..After u return back to mansion only she leave me ,peace to alive.

Maan: because she love me more than her life with proud voice.

Adi rolled his eyes: love , but she torturing to everyone rather than you .. u and ur hitler samera di

Maan: don't say anything about my sam..she is not only my sis..she is my mother..

Adi smiled : I know..then what adventures u r doing in bali now with raised his eye brow.

Maan:suspense..personal visist for my sam

Adi: ok..adi give credits cards and bike keys for maan..

Maan: I love bike riding. Thank u Adi

Adi: welcome , Mr adi..

*********

Geet flight landed in Bali airport..

Geet : pinky, first time I am free from bodyguard protection..

Pinky: u r so lucky got ur brothers love...see I am single child..i have no brothers..so I never get pampering by brothers.

Geet: but u have parents , I am not..in my childhood , there went to heaven.i never hear my mother lullaby yeah my brothers pampering , I got father love from them, but I am also craving for mother love.with sad tone.

Pinky: don't worry , geet. In ur future law , u get mother love also..with teasing tone.

Geet: u going marry in ur early age but i am not...I want enjoy my life than only I think about my marriage.

Pinky: Groom side want engagement soon but my parents said after I finish my studies only marriage..so I also accept for marriage .

Geet: u accept arrange marriage but I am interested in love marriage..i am waiting for my prince..with dreamy face.

Pinky: why not, no one say no for princess...u prince will be come in horse and kidnap u to his castle ...so dreamy right..

Geet: nowdays u seeing more film..with chuckled face..lets go..everyone waiting for us..

Resort for princess

Geet : beautiful resort pinky, everything in my taste..

(yes, geet ur lovely brothers did it everything for ur happiness)

Pinky: yes, dad said special booked for us..i never think. He have very modern and good taste ..

Geet : ok..lets check our room first...

Geet and pinky entered room


Pinky mouth open widely: its room look like princess room..wow dad u did it awesome..geet u like it

Geet: I just love it..

Geet phone ringed and pickup the call : hello bhai..u safely reched to resort..dont worry, I ate my lunch in flight..yeah health food ..

Dadisa snatched from brij hand and come far from brij: partner, u r happy..

Geet: I am happy but I miss u all with pout face..

Dadisa: acha partner, tika I say to ur bhai..book ur return ticket..they already waiting for that chance only..when u return back to mansion

Geet: no dadisa, don't do it..i never say miss u in this two weeks.

Dadisa: I have no problem, but don't say this word to ur bhai..otherwise they leave their every work as come to bali or they arrange ur return ticket...my craxy grandsons..with shaking head.

Geet: dadisa, don't say my brother s ko crazy..they r my lovable ,sweetest brothers with harsh voice..

Dadisa: ok, one important news ..(silent talk)

Geet : no problem , I will handle them with smirked face..give phone to brij bhai..

Dadisa give phone to brij and brij take phone from dadisa hand with angry face.

Dadisa: what I did it..with calm said.

Brij: I talk with her..why u snatched phone suddenly dadisa..

Dadisa ignore brij angry : just like that..

Brij rolled his eyes and placed phone his ear: hello princess..u r comfortable in new place.

Geet smirked : no bhai..bed not soft and not bouncing like my bed ..with fake sad voice.

Brij (mind): Arjun , I said properly do everything but what he did it with grinned teeth..

Geet smiled: bhai, are u line.

Brij: yes, princesss...i will arrange...geet interpet..

Geet: bhai, I just teasing, I love this place and my room.i am very comfortable .No worries about me..

Brij relieved :ok..take care and call me daily..

Geet: even I forgot to call but u people not forgot call me..with teasing tone

Brij smiled : ok princess..bye..i talk u later..

*********

Girl waiting for long time in lonely place.man almost run to her side..

Man scared face : sorry for late..

Girl angry glaze to man : Mr handa, u don't know meaning of punctuality with angry face

Man held his ear through index and thump fingers: sorry dear..

Girl: not dear, Ms Khurana..just address me, Ms khurana with attitude voice.

Man murmuring: Khurana ladies always head weighted person ..

Girl showing index finger infront of his face: what u saying, khurana ladies has head weighted person..what about handa ..handa brothers are arrogant, ruthless

Man gulped his saliva: leave it sweety, iam just teasing ..lets talk about important matter

Girl raised her eye brow: what..

Man: love sweety..

Girl rolled her eyes : ok..

Girl phone rings and seeing phone id and her face changed to tense ..

Man: what happen sweety.

Girl : shhh..dont talk ..

Girl attened the phone with tense face: hello sam di

Man eyes popped out (mind): samera khurana, if she found out I am with her sister with tense face. Then my love story end before start , it finish..with horror face

Samera: sasha, where is chotu..with angry face.

Sasha: oh..i don't know di..with slow voice.

Samera: sasha, i already guessed u both hide something from me..

Sasha ( mind): champ, because of u , i got scolded by didu with pout face.

Samera: fine, u did not tell me right, i know how to find him.

Sasha (mind): great escape sasha..thanks babaji..

Sasha: really I don't know di..with tried to manage..but sam is elder to everyone ..

Sam cut the call..

Man: sasha , what she asked u.she found out , u r with me with worried tone.

Sasha: yes, mr handa , sam di found it ,I am with u with fake sad face.

Man: what with horror face.

Sasha laughed loudly said: don't say ur great brij handa ka brother, mr dev handa with chuckling face..u face worth to watch after hearing sam di name with teasing tone

Dev: why not she is woman hitler..

Sasha: oyie, don't say my didu ko hilter..she is very kind person..u don't know her real face..she behave like rude person but very kind , lovable person..

Dev: ok sweety, plz stop ur sister leela..come to love matters..with puppy face.

Sasha: sorry Mr dev handa, I need go back to mansion..otherwise sam di, what she will do..

Dev: ok..next meet, I will tell u where..ok..

Sasha left the place.

*******

Sam roaming one side to another side in angry face..

Sam : what happening in my family..two days, he did not call me..even bodyguards also don't know where he went..his phone not reachable ..why chotu..

Dadi: because of ur over pampering , he changed to spoil brat with taunting tone.

Sam: dadi , plz ..with angry face.

Dadi: in sake ur only,he never take his responsibility..because of u..just u..

Sam: plz , I already worried about him..dont talk anything now.

Nt: di, he is not kid..he take care himself ..with slow voice

Sam: I know he is not kid..but he is not ordinary man..he is my chotu..my little prince..its not good roaming everywhere without protection

Dadi rolled her eyes: don't behave like u r his mother..u r just sister for him..

Sam hurts hearing dadi rude word without saying anything , she just left the place.

Nt: dadi, why u said this word for di..u know very well her nature..she love maan more than anyone.noone love maan like sam di love maan even me and sasha also .if our mother alive also , we did not get this much love from our mother like sam di love us.her love is pure , plz don't hurt her once again. Left the place check sam alright or not.

Dadi closed her eyes : in my angry what I did it..

Sasha entered mansion while hearing dadi, sam and Nt conversation..

Sasha: dadi, u talked too much..u pay back time get only by my champ..he only give correct answer for ur every question with poor look to dadi..and champ because of u ,sam di hurt..first I check di and then I must talk with him.

Part end..

If any one want maaneet first meeting..

Why maan come for bali..🤔


maan answer for dadi question 😈

Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago
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This week i will update all my stories dearies
1) Maaneet SS- HOPE -Epilouge A -pg 98
2) Tera Mera Rishta Puraana hai- Updated part 2
3) Mera Maasoom Patidev - updated- part 5
4) Hey Kaise Pyaar hai - updated part 4

5)My mystery girl - saturday morning ( last part so long one i need time to write)
6) Main Tumhaare Bina Nahin Reh sakata -pending..




DONT WORRY about MFS dearies..i will write more 😉😉😉



Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago
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Yipeee 😛 Me first 😊 balle balle 😆
I m on cloud nine 😉
Finally the Wait is Over 😃
Baliii trip 😛 Mzaaa aayegaaa 😉


Haaye 😳 dil khush kr ditaa ji 😊
Superb Big n fun loving chaapy 😊 vdaa waala smileyyy 😃 🤗
Awww 😳 I like this Aditi 🤣 sharmaaa hahahahahaha 🤣
Maan is tooo much 😆 😆
Bf se jyaada to co passenger m interested h 😳 hehe Best friend 😆 wht u all think 😉 😳
Are bhabhi aane k baad to maan ll become fully majnuuu naa 😆 thn how he ll gave tym ... kha kuch yaad rhega 😛 availability offer is valid right now 😃 nd very few days r remaininggg ... count down beginsss 🤣
New Adi 😃 oopsss... u wanna create this name confusion ... Awww poor Geet wht she ll think n get cnfsd with this adi 😆 thank god Geet doesn't need to hide her identity as her bros knew already .. wrnaa I wonder 😆 double dhmaakaa of Adi Pinkyyy 😆
Aailaaa 😲 Maan personal visit to Bali that tooo for Sam ... Kuch to lochaa h 😲
My poor Aditi 😆 maan n sam di k beech mein alwaysss chkii peecing peecing n peecing since childhood 🤢 😕 🤢 bechaari aditi saamera di se kitna dartiii h 😕 nd ye maan smjhtaa ni h yaar 🤣 he took her to cementary that too at 12 midnght 🤢 ufff ... see only bcoz of u she fainted 😲 seeing a worker their 😆 akele akele sam di ki daant khaani pdi .. n hospital bhi jaana pdaa 😃 nanhii si jaan kitna sehen kre 🤣
Aww.. geet craves for her mother's love ... in future u ll get that tooo 😳 from khuraana sis's
Maaneet can't even hear a single bit against their siblingsss 😛 Aakhir yhi to pyaar h bhai bhn kaa 😊
Handa bro's arrangements r perfect n lovelyyy 😛 poor arjun saved from brij anger wrna Geet was all set to trouble him ..
this dadisaa is too sweet 😳 hihi Geet ll never say that she missing them Otherwise return tickets r waitinggg 😃 Another secret imp. News 😲
Oyee hoyee ye chote handa n choti khuraana to chupe rustom niklee 😆 chori chori chupke chupke dev n sasha 😉 poor dev sam ka name sunte hi siti piti gul 🤢 🤣
Ufff sam is too angry 😡 n irritated as she is unable to contact her chotu 😲 oopss dadI hurts her a lot today by saying bitter words 😭 wht is sasha thinking wht ll chotu do with dadi 😃
Hehehe .. why r u askinggg diduu 😛 give all the answers + u forgot dadisa ki secret talking sessions with geet 😊
Maaneet First Meet 😳 Waiting For that 😛 😉
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omg ..congrats kutty😛
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Originally posted by: maaneetfavo



<font size="4" color="#ff0000">omg ..congrats kutty😛</font>


Kutty means? 😕
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Originally posted by: maaneetfavo



<font size="4" color="#ff0000">omg ..congrats kutty😛</font>


Intezaaar ka fal mil gyaaa 😆
Wo b sut smet diduuu 😃
Luv u 😳 bhut saara 😉 ❤️
Inne dinooo se maine aapkooo preshaan kr rkhaa tha 😆
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omg today everyone surprise me..yaar..😛
kutty means little one 😳


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Might be lil. One 😛
I m not sure Mahi
Kalpii di ? Right or not
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Originally posted by: Angel.Pooja

Yipeee 😛 Me first 😊 balle balle 😆
I m on cloud nine 😉
Finally the Wait is Over 😃
Baliii trip 😛 Mzaaa aayegaaa 😉

Bakki ki baatein pdhne k baad 😆


enjoy madam..i hope i am not disappoint u..😛
i am waiting for ur comment 😳
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Lovely update
Waiting for next update. ...

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