AshNi poem: A wish for myself

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I am trying my hand at writing a poem for AshNi...for the first time...I just wanna keep the forum active ...so I thought of penning this down...๐Ÿ˜Š
I know I might not be able to understand the essence of the show but the feelings of love between the protagonists are similar in all the shows...So through this poem, I have tried to present the thoughts going on in Nidhi's heart for her love...so the wish she has is shown through this poem...I hope you like it...and as always...please ignore my mistakes๐Ÿ˜Š

Love you all my friends...God bless you all๐Ÿค—

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I make a wish from the depth of my heart

Never comes a moment that takes us apart

For me the morning starts with you

Your presence for me makes the sky blue

The sun shines brighter the flowers merrily bloom

Chirping of birds takes away night's all doom

Every thought of mine belongs just to you

You mean my soul my heart beats for you

My wish is a day when you for once realise

The feelings the love expressed through my eyes

I might not say but still I want you to hear

What I feel for you my love my dear

I know through your eyes that you love me too

You search for me and I look out for you

I wish we get to witness that special day

What you feel for me you are able to say




Thanks for reading and ignoring my mistakes๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nicely written Manisha dear...loved it very much...โค๏ธ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful, lovely poem Manisha...Love it so much dear...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Keep it up.. Thank you for your efforts to keep the forum active. 
God Bless you !!! ๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: vyoman

Nicely written Manisha dear...loved it very much...โค๏ธ๐Ÿค—


Thanks a lot Vyoman๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿค—
So good to see you back here๐Ÿค—


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishi05

Beautiful, lovely poem Manisha...Love it so much dear...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Keep it up.. Thank you for your efforts to keep the forum active. 
God Bless you !!! ๐Ÿค—


Thank you so much Di๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿค—
I just try my bit from my side๐Ÿ˜Š
God bless you too Di๐Ÿค—


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome, cute and a lovely poem Manisha di ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
It's like Nidhi is offering her love to Ashu and asking for his confession. So lovely is the wish and too cute are her expressions. 

Thanks for the beautiful version Di, loved it to the core. 

Loves โค๏ธ
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I make a wish from the depth of my heart

Never comes a moment that takes us apart

For me the morning starts with you

Your presence for me makes the sky blue




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Posted: 6 years ago
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The sun shines brighter the flowers merrily bloom

Chirping of birds takes away night's all doom

Every thought of mine belongs just to you

You mean my soul my heart beats for you




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Posted: 6 years ago
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My wish is a day when you for once realise

The feelings the love expressed through my eyes

I might not say but still I want you to hear

What I feel for you my love my dear




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Posted: 6 years ago
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I know through your eyes that you love me too

You search for me and I look out for you

I wish we get to witness that special day

What you feel for me you are able to say