AshNi poem: A wish for myself

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Deep feelings of Nidhi... that her love is so longing to hear Ashu's love to her... which she knows its there... !!!

Beautifully expressing her love n desires... well depicted her close knit of the emotions so well said.. ⭐️👏

Very nice poem Manisha.. very finely penned down... !

Nidhi has seen many upsets in the show... n before this desire.. she fell for him n suffered rejections from the doc Ashu... who already was in love with her..

Awesomely lyrics,, loved it ... !!!!

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

You have written it for the first time... but i tell you ... you have picked up the best lines of the emotions,,,

The love that Ashe n Nidhi possess ,, it was never easy for them...

The age gap made them apart.. from Ashu's side first.,, them from Nidhi's family..

Its pure,, serene love... but is presented so beautifully in the show... where Nidhi pulled him out from the shell he was living all his life with...

I love writing abt KTLK n ASHNI... given anything abt it... plzz do keep the flow going... .⭐️👏

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Phenomenal!

Remarkable poetry with Nidhi's love told and craving to know what Ashu has in his mind to say. Very delightful way to see Nidhi so simply following her heart and yearning for his love confessed!

Adorable verse and lovely wordings 👏 Loved the entire mood which is felt with love conveyed!

The context is well interpreted with the wish so pure and powerful. Loved the beauty of the poetry, so pretty and sweet!!!

Thanks Manisha, for this adorable one, very charming and so close to every AshNian!!

👏

Luv ya dearie ❤️ 🤗

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

I know through your eyes that you love me too

Can i add one more here Pari?

I know through your silence you love me, i know through your words you love me.

Though you never say anything, i know you say my name in your heart!

Edited by Swatishubh - 8 years ago

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Thanks a lot Babita, Bro, Bhabhi, Di, Vyoman and Anjani Mam for your appreciation...I'll soon reply individually to you all🤗

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Swatishubh
I know through your eyes that you love me too

Can i add one more here Pari?

I know through your silence you love me, i know through your words you love me.
Though you never say anything, i know you say my name in your heart!

Its really awesome Bhabhi👏⭐️

Thanks a lot for completing my poem with your lovely poetic lines straight from your heart👏⭐️🤗

Love you Bhabhi❤️🤗

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: babita..
Awesome, cute and a lovely poem Manisha di 👏👏
It's like Nidhi is offering her love to Ashu and asking for his confession. So lovely is the wish and too cute are her expressions.

Thanks for the beautiful version Di, loved it to the core.

Loves ❤️

Thanks a lot Babita Sweetie...I'm very happy to know that my poem could aptly express what I wished to...although i dont know much about the show but yes...the feelings of love and longing for your counterparts confession is similar everywhere...Thanks a tonne dear...your support really means so much to me❤️🤗

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

I make a wish from the depth of my heart

Never comes a moment that takes us apart

For me the morning starts with you

Your presence for me makes the sky blue

The sun shines brighter the flowers merrily bloom

Chirping of birds takes away night's all doom

Every thought of mine belongs just to you

You mean my soul my heart beats for you

My wish is a day when you for once realise

The feelings the love expressed through my eyes

I might not say but still I want you to hear

What I feel for you my love my dear

I know through your eyes that you love me too

You search for me and I look out for you

I wish we get to witness that special day

What you feel for me you are able to say

Awesome caps of Nidhi presented by you Sweetie👏⭐️

They really enhance the beauty and the lovely feel of my write up...God bless you dear...😃🤗

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Anjani9
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Thank you Mam😃

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: bawaswift
Deep feelings of Nidhi... that her love is so longing to hear Ashu's love to her... which she knows its there... !!!
Beautifully expressing her love n desires... well depicted her close knit of the emotions so well said.. ⭐️👏

Very nice poem Manisha.. very finely penned down... !
Nidhi has seen many upsets in the show... n before this desire.. she fell for him n suffered rejections from the doc Ashu... who already was in love with her..
Awesomely lyrics,, loved it ... !!!!

Thank you Bro for letting me know more about your beloved AshNi as always😃...me getting deeply attached to this beautiful couple along with your beautious words and feelings for them👏⭐️

Thanks a lot Bro for loving my poem...which I always keep on posting here and there and you always motivate me and support me🤗