Rikara ff: When she coloured my canvas!!! Pg 29 ( 21 Aug) - Page 19

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Hi all,moving on to next.Hope u will like this.

.Sorry for typo errors.Dunno if this is boring; then please do tell me.

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Om was tensed,but he knew he couldn't hide it more from her.He decided to open up.
O: gouri, v both had a meeting with a client in Delhi.During that time Mr.Lal had approached us with a new deal.They had their new consignment in Chennai & we were supposed to merge with them.But the problem was that they were planning to buy the land where a colony was set up with 1000s of ordinary people; that too they were gonna buy & use it in an illegal way by their influence.I asked shivay to cancel the deal & to also inform authorities about this illegal usage of land; if not all those helpless people would have to suffer.

Their deal was cancelled & was questioned by the authorities.In revenge they...they tried to harm shivay.He was admitted on hospital after bhabhi's pregnancy news was informed.V decided not to share this news; but they r not gonna stop.I have got a message from our people that they r planning to harm us.I dunno gouri, everything is happening because of me.I cant bear anything happening to my family.What should I do?Shall I back out from this mission?

He was in verge of breaking down; gouri hugged him from back tightly to relax him by snapping her hands around him.She was stroking on his cheek to make the mood light.

G: I never knew that u were so good omkaraji.U have done the right thing.V shouldn't fear the evil & lose to them; v should fight for the truth.Sankarji is always there with u; ur mind is pure so he will always protect u & our family.Dont b tensed & give up.Just think about those people; they don't have any other home.V shouldn't make them homeless; it's just because of ur one word they r able to live peacefully.V shouldn't let the bad people to win.I won't tell this to anyone; I'm always there with u; in ur happiness & in ur worries.This is my word because u r my bhagvan Omkaraji!!!!

Saying this, she kissed his cheeks slightly; he turned back to see her wet eyes.It had courage & assurance; he could see it glowing thru her tears...

O: I don't know what good deed I have done to have u in my life.Before ur entry in my life I had treated all my worries on a wrong way.I still remember slapping u when u stopped me from using drugs.But now I feel ur presence, ur warmth& ur words will make me strong to face any obstacle in my life; any obstacle.

I had never thought a girl would come to my life again; that she would come , mend broken pieces of my life & give her half soul to make me come alive.I only had my family in my mind & dream but now I don't have any dreams without you in those.Not only my canvas, my whole studio is filled with your pictures.Whenever I take my brush to draw or take clay to sculpt, I see ur face only, I see only you.

He was going on just like that; she was sad that he is becoming too emotional even though she enjoyed each & every words about her.She hugged him again.
G: hey shayar...bus bus.Thoda bahut dose if u give, then I will go to cloud nine.U don't need to say anything; I will understand it just from your heart beat.See I can hear it now.

Om smiled, he knew she was trying to distract him; he smiled @ her antics.
O: waise... someone told that I'm bhagvan.Who will hug bhagvan? hmm??
G: ( fake anger) don't tease me, yes u r my bhagvan but not always ok?
O: when is it, that I'm not bhagvan?

He raised her face & nuzzled in her hair.
O: is it now?

She was shivering; she didn't reply.
Om slowly moved away from her but she was still standing in his effect with closed eyes.Slowly she opened her eyes & saw that he was gone.She was smiling thinking about him...lost in him...

It was 7 months & time for Anika's baby shower.Gouri was more excited for the baby than anika; she always remained sticking near anika.

The last month both sisters went to palace along with Anshika according to their custom; Om didn't want to leave gouri but she insisted.She didn't want to miss any moment with her didi.Om was busy with trips that month; he made himself busy & didnt want to stay longer in OM coz then he would miss her a lot.Even when gouri enjoyed in her palace, she was still missing Om.He was slightly furious @ her for leaving him for such a long time; she was upset with him for this.She couldn't convince him. This worried her.

4 days b4 baby shower, all oberois reached the palace; both families were happy as they were going to b together after a long time, probably after rikara marriage.The whole palace was filled with laughs, songs, talks etc.Shivay was spending his whole time with anika & his unborn baby.All were busy with the arrangements; but anika was sad that she couldn't take part.Instead it was gouri who was the head of all preparations.She was busy with whole program.It was true that she couldn't find much time for Om; but whenever she went to him he was plainly ignoring her.This was really hurting her; she didn't know what was cooking in his mind.But Om wasn't giving her a chance to explain...

It was afternoon.She went to their room; he was working on the canvas.But as soon as he sensed her, he covered the canvas.He was in his full attitude.
G: omkaraji, r u busy?
O: not as much as you..he snapped back at her.
G: oho, jatadhari is becoming like Sankarji, will u open ur 3rd eye @ me??

Om simply moved around.Gouri was furious @ this unresponsiveness.

G: u r becoming silly.Y r u angry @ me for this simple thing?
O: what, when did I tell u that I'm angry? I haven't stopped u from anything.U told u wanted to go with bhabhi, I allowed. U wanted to stay for 1 month, I allowed.
G: y r u ignoring me now?
O: just think...u were ignoring me.U could simply avoid me for one month; what I'm showing is smaller compared to it.
G: oh so u r taking revenge, u r saying that I dont value u..
O: gouri, dont imagine things...
G:( crying) do u know one thing, months b4 when we were here, I was ignoring u since u had hurt me.Now after all those good times v had u r ignoring me without any reason.I don't have to say anything.

She moved to the door,but then she stopped.With wet eyes she told him softly:
G: I didn't think I would hurt u this much; I didnt do it intentionally.I wished to stay with my didi in her very special moment.I...I'm sorry if I have hurt...hurt you in any way...I would never like to see u hurt..I won't b able to bear it... Sankarji ke kasam.

As Om saw her moving away, he slightly smiled & whispered to himself." How can someone b so pure & innocent gouri!!!"

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Edited by Shraddhadikshit - 8 years ago
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Hey rikarians & Shrenalians
Hope u would like this part.Sorry for typo errors,try to give a colour for this.

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Go: oh, didi do I have to go with him.

Gouri asked anika,irritated.
A: ha chutki, see the time is 7 pm & v don't have any drivers here now.U r saying it's an urgent purchase & u don't know driving too.

Gouri thought, I should have studied driving , Sankarji now I will have to go with this Nandi.

A: kya hua chutki?Kuch gadbad hai?See my devar is ready here to drop u.Go with him, do ur shopping, have some nice time with him.After all, u haven't seen each other for a long time na? Go, chutki.

Gouri saw Om stand with the keys; she was so upset with their conversation in the noon.She just didn't want to go with him but she wanted to try out a sculpture & have to purchase the materials for that.Of course, taking him along is a good choice for this purpose; but she didn't want to...

Rikara were totally silent thru out the journey.They reached the shop.Gouri didn't want Om to join her so he was randomly checking on some new sort of water colours.

Gouri had almost finished her shopping when she heard Om's laughter; she wondered with whom he would b happy like this.She went & stood just behind the rack where he stood; she nearly popped her eyes out.

O: oh aashi, u r just the same person whom I knew back in our college.Same smartness, same bubbliness my god u r one of a kind yaar.I feel that I'm back in my old times.
Aashi: oh yes Om, & u r just the same baby.U r still looking hot even after all these years, ur marriage was a big event na.
O: ya I had tried to contact you , but..
A: oh yes baby, I was in London then.
O: yes ritik told me.
A: but seriously Om, I think u married early baby, could have waited for 2 more months.I would have reached India by then.

Gouri was boiling, oh so that is y madam is sad.Even if u would have come, nothing would have happened.

Gouri was shocked @ the next moment.Aashi was hugging Om so tightly for a selfie pic; of course he was bit uncomforty, but then he didn't mind it.
A:OMG!!u look super dashing in this pic baby, by the way u came here alone right?Y don't v go for a dinner.

Suddenly Om & aashi heard another voice; a dabbang gouri voice!!!
" Oh sorry, he had come with his wife here for shopping.& sorry, v r having a night party to attend too."

Om was stunned hearing her reply; he never thought that she would pop up @ this moment.She came & stood next to Om, holding his hands.Aashi was a bit disappointed.
G: hi , nice to meet you aashi.
A: hey u know me?
G: y not ,he have told me about all his friends , isn't it Om?

She was in her full attitude; he was flabbergasted to hear Gouri talking in this way & calling him Om.
A: oh so I guess we shall postpone our dinner plan for some other day na?
G: oh yes aashi, after reaching Mumbai v vill invite u 4 a special dinner for sure.
O: yes aashi, v vill.
G: Om, I think I'm done.Shall v go back, v r getting late for our party .

Om was shocked; oh no which party is she talking about??

Rikara reached home, as usual gouri was still ignoring Om.Whereas Om was really enjoying all this.Actually he had been acting in front of gouri in noon; he simply wanted to trick her.It was true that he really missed her all these days but he could never b angry with her.He thought of faking anger on her just as a small punishment for leaving him but he never thought she would take it seriously; he didn't think she was so sensitive when it comes to him.He wasn't able to convince her in any way; but he loved all her antics back in that shop.He knew that she considers him as only hers; he was searching for ways to bring her back.

He failed to talk with her during dinner.He thought of discussing this with shivika but as he was about to enter the room, he saw that they were spending some quality time with each other ; so he retorted back.

Gouri was in her work room; she had 2 rooms in the palace.Both were bedrooms, but one was her art room.Her dadi had given it specially for all her art stuffs.She was busy doing her new sculpture; she had also planned to sleep there as Om was there in her room.She couldn't focus her mind;she felt sad that she ignored him & also that he was upset with her.She had thought of going back to him, but her ego didn't allow her.She felt disappointed on his accusations; she had did all her duties well & had accepted him whole heartedly.But his behaviour was affecting her.

She heard a knock at the door; she had asked for milk & so she asked the staff to open the door.She heard the click of the closing door.As she was working on the piece , she saw a hand touching on it.She turned her head sideways to see a blank Om.She was raging.

G:Y r u here Mr.oberoi? Please let me do the work.

It was serious, he thought, if not she wouldn't call him Mr.oberoi.
O: first talk to me.

She was silent.
O: fine, as u wish gouriji...

She was amazed; so didn't he really want her to talk with him?

Om was smiling, he vowed to make her talk today.He decided to take another route; she would never b ziddy in that.

O: r u trying a new sculpture?
She was silent.
O: r u sure u can do it alone.

She sharply looked at him; she had actually wanted him to help her but she wouldn't ask him to.

O: but gouri, this mixture...it is wrong...the idol might collapse if mixture ratio is wrong.

She panicked, this work was important.She couldn't afford to mess with this.She was in a dilemma.
O: come, I will help u.

Gouri moved back, giving him space.
O: but I have a condition.

She looked him; what was the condition, she thought.

O: u will have to hear what I'm gonna say.

She reluctantly nodded her head.He pulled her close to him & started making a new mixture.
O: waise...I know that u r upset with me after our talk.Shall I say something? I was simply kidding with you.I was acting.Do u really think I can b angry on u even for a moment gouri? I simply wanted to trick u for leaving me for such a long time.It was just a joke.I didn't think it would hurt u deeply.

She was amazed & looked at him.

G: I can't believe u lied,Mr.oberoi.I won't believe.U r still lying to simply console me.Leave me & finish this work I don't want to hear lame reasons.

She tried to slip from him.But he tightened the grip on her.

O: do u know, I was missing u so much.Do u think I'm lying now also?
G: even I was missing u. I wanted u for some time & what did u do? U shouted at me( angrily)
O: See I was waiting a lot to see u & spend some good time with u.I just wanted to create a light mood by teasing u, but u took it in another way.I...I'm sorry dear...I didn't want to make u sad...Please.. please forgive me now...I can't bear if u r ignoring me...I accept my defeat.

She slightly smiled; she felt very light now.But she didn't want to leave him easily; then in future he might repeat this mistake.
G: let me think once again about that, she smirked.

Om knew she wouldn't give up fast,he had another plan under his sleeve.

O: waise gouri...where did u plan for our night party?

Gouri was tensed; she remembered all those incidents in the shop.

O: omg, what was it yaar?I thought u will eat my friend aashi.Come on, she did only one mistake to talk to me.What all did u do?

Gouri was embarrassed...

O: u called me Om in front of her & when did I tell u about her.
G: mm...I heard u both talking, so I understand her name( smiling)
O: oh...u were really jealous na?
G: see omkaraji, something is wrong with her.Her way of calling baby is not right, did u see how she took pic with u...yew..I wasn't jealous for her...she can't manhandle my Omkaraji like that...
O: oho, u were calling me Mr.oberoi b4 some time .How did it become "my omkaraji" now? ha???

She was shying away.She turned towards the table & started working back on the sculpture.

The breeze which entered thru the window seemed to b naughty.It blew up her hair to Om's face.He removed her hair from his face.He was moving closer to gouri; she was standing with her back towards Om.

He came close & took hold of her hands working on the idol.He was helping her to mould it.She was losing her senses; she thought he could hear her thumping heartbeats.

He was moving more closer to her, leaning his body on her petite form.Even he was in another world.The cold breeze, the fragrance of her hair , her soft hands, her trembling body...he was slowly losing away.

This moment was first of its kind for them.Gouri was simply closing her eyes.Their faces were so close , their palms were totally covered with clay.Slowly they were intertwining their fingers; now they even stopped moulding.He was rubbing her cheek with his; she nearly gasped when his stubbled cheek touched hers.

They were losing themselves to each other.Om was slowly moving his fingers backwards thru gouri's arms.He was covering her hands with clay.His fingers slowly moved upwards & reached her shoulders.He gently kissed there softly.He then nuzzled into her hair & softly kissed her nape.Gouri nearly gasped; he could hear her breathing fastly & heavily.

She turned back to see him.His eyes were longing for her, the heat of the intensity was nearly burning her.She moved back & saw the messed up idol.She took 2 clothes; she cleaned out the clay from his hands.He snatched the other one & started wiping clay off from her too.He was seeing her like nothing else existed in the world.Gouri stood there shyly looking down...

Precap:- surprise gift for Anika's baby shower??


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Edited by Shraddhadikshit - 8 years ago
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Another two updates...
Thanku for the pm behna
Loved it soo much
You are such an amazing writer
This ff getting more intersting day by day
Omkara told her everything and love the way she understands the things
She is such a caring wife even he is also caring
Jealouse ri dekhne ko mili aaj and omkara enjoy this jealousy
Love the ruthna and manana
Update soon
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awesome update dear
loved itt soo much. .
thanks alot for pm sweety
this story is getting more interesting with every chapter
pls update next part soon...
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I'm loving this. Love the JealousRi, she's so adorable.
Thanks for the pm. Waiting for the next chapters :)
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Simply amazing update
Loved it ...
So omkie dint want innocent people to loose their home...
The other party attacked Shivaay...
He fears another attack...
Gauri promises not to tell abt it to anyone else
Gauri along with Anika go to their mayka ...
Omkie misses her...
Wow both praying ignore game one by one
Superb
Continue soon
Thanks 4 pm
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Nice story!! Do continue soon😊
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Hi all,moving on to next.Hope u will like this.
Couldn't reply guys, as I was busy .
Sorry for typo errors.Dunno if this is boring; then please do tell me.

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Their intense eye lock was broken by a sound; the window was closed by the wind.Both of them changed the directions of gaze.Gouri went near to the window, she was about to close the window; but was enjoying the strong breeze.She looked back at Om & signed him to come .

He went near her & stood there.Both were enjoying the Beautiful night sky; they remembered their sangeeth night.Om turned to see gouri , he could see her face glowing; she was looking fresh.He slowly cupped her face & kissed her forehead, she was looking down.He slowly touched her cheeks & placed his lips on both cheeks. She was lost in that moment.They hadn't been this close ever, they were enjoying this new found joy.He was seeing her lips, he hesitated.He raised gouri's face to see her , he looked for disapproval in her eyes.She lifted her gaze to him.She knew he was waiting for her permission; she smilingly nodded.

He smiled, his heart was racing.Their faces slowly came close; their hot breaths were filled with anxiety.Finally he placed his lips gently on hers; she could feel him smiling against her lips.It was the most innocent kiss ever; of 2 souls who were waiting to b complete.

They didn't know when they stopped because nothing, not even time seems to b moving for them.Her closed eyes were slowly opened; she could see the glow in his eyes.She knew he was waiting for her for quite a long time.She didn't know how to say to him that she is now ready to be his.

As if he had read her mind, he slowly side hugged her from her shoulders & led her to the bed.With each step forward, she felt that they were moving to another world; a different unseen world.

As they sat on the bed, she took his face closer to her.It was like she was seeing him for first time , she slowly pecked him on his lips.But a small peck turned out to be a soulful one; this was like a kiss to seal their souls.She moved her hands to his cold hair & untied his pony.His hands were in her waist , he moved back from her lips & found refuge in the crook of her neck.

Gouri was slowly taking his name, "Omkara" in her lips.He was feeling bliss to hear this.But at the next moment she again took his name, "Om" with her lips.He himself was losing to her now.

The night wasn't long enough for them to complete the emptiness of one whole month.All the unsaid emotions in their mind was flowing like a river; they were moving thru it together with interwined fingers.She was taking him to another level without her knowledge.She was swiping off all his loneliness, insecurities,his tears.She was giving & taking intense joy from him.

Even his heartbeats were saying her name in each & every moment.He was gently merging with her soul; he wanted to give her the completeness for which she wished.He wanted to seal the truth that he is ultimately hers, which she always told. With each & every passing moment,the wounds of past were being kissed away by him.That night even the breeze & the moon where shying away from them, going away without disturbing them...

Om thought that the Sun came too early today.He slowly rubbed his eyes & turned to see gouri sleeping with a cute smile on his chest.He had been missing such a morning for many days.He remembered the last night; it's true he had been really missing her a lot but he never thought that they will share such a sweet night like this.Her smiling face was too much tempting him to stay with her like this, but he had to prepare for next day's function.

As usual, gouri woke up & said a Hi to herself.Suddenly she looked the other side& found Om was missing.It was 7: 30, his chai time had already passed.The very thought of him made her blush...

After freshening up , she went to their room;he wasn't there.She was happy because it was feeling difficult to face him now.She thought of wearing sari after the special night.

He was stuck up with some office work with shivay, but his heart was beating to see gouri.As he wished, shivay got a call & asked him to go back.As he rushed to the room, he was amazed.There stood his lady , beautifully draped in sari , with sunlight reflecting on her made her look divine.

He came & stood behind her in front of mirror.As she met his eyes on the mirror she was intensely shying & blushing.Only their night was coming in front of her eyes.They didn't speak anything; only their eyes did.As she stood still, Om took sindoor & applied it on her.This gave her feels.He grabbed her by her waist.
O: shall v start yesterday's work now? ( smirking)
G: omkaraji...what r...r u saying...this is day time...
O:( rolling eyes) y...I told about restarting sculpting...
G: oh...
O: what did u think pagli? ha? whatever it is I know it's not a right thing?

He was tickling her.
G: omkaraji...don't do this..
O: y r u calling me omkaraji?
G: kyu...kuch problem hai?
O: don't u remember, yesterday u were calling me Omkara...Om...with feels?
( he was imitating her)
G: chi... u r so bad Omkara..
O: but I think u like this bad side of me , right? Tell me...

As gouri was about to say something, jhanvi called them knocking the door.

G: ji maaji..
J: gouri...u look so nice in sari.Anything special?
G: kuch nahi maaji...
J: fine come down soon for Breakfast.
She nodded.

Anika was standing in front of her parents photo & was praying.Shivay saw her crying, so went near her.

S: kya hua anika?
A: kuch nahi shivay..I was taking their blessings.
S: I know u miss them.
A:ha shivay, lekin from the day I came to this palace, I was literally feeling their presence with me.Tumhe pata?This was their room, whenever I sit here I feel that they r with me, sitting , patting my hair...

Gouri was just about to enter into the room with milk.But she stopped as shivika were talking.
S: Yes anika, they r always with us & our cherry & chotu will definitely have their blessings.
A: haan shivay, at many stages I have felt that God doesn't exist in the world, because I had experienced that much pain as an orphan.

But now I understand, how much lucky I'm to get back my while family.Dadi, bua, chacha - chachi, all my cousins & ... meri chutki.Do u know how many nights had been sleepless for me thinking of her?Can u believe I have her with me now...my chutki...

She was crying on shivay's chest.Gouri's eyes were blurred , she felt overjoyed.She entered the room after knocking.

G: ka hua didi, itni emotional moment?
Anika wiped her tears.
G: time for ur badam milk.
A: oh no gouri, I feel michmichi to drink milk? y do u want me to drink?
G: didi, if u don't drink how will our chotu be healthy.

Shivay was smiling seeing this cat fight of sisters.
A: tumhe pata shivay, from the time v came here, she is treating me like a mom; even scolding me(pouting)
S: u did right gouri, her tadi is increasing day by day.U need to give punishment gouri.

She sat between shivika.
G: u r right bhaiyya, she is showing tadi more than u.See didi, v both r in same team.Now har haraike drink this.

Anika drank it showing faces.Gouri& shivay was making fun of her antics.
Anika was faking anger.

Sh: waise gouri, I have been missing u for a long time.
G: ha bhaiyya, I was really missing all ur cooking classes.
Sh: don't worry dear, after going to OM, I will teach u few more when I'm free.

Anika was adoring this jiju- saali duo.She was feeling happy.She knew that he loved gouri just like prinku or may b more than her coz gouri was always in his team supporting him against anika @ times.

A: I'm happy gouri,seeing u & Om happily now.
S: U r right anika, even I do feel many appreciable changes in him.He is seen more relaxed now.Credit goes to this dabbang chiraiyya.
A: shivay, u always complain about my language & u urself is speaking like gouri.
G: see bhaiyya, she is very much jealous with us hai na??
Sh: haan gouri ...
A: oh, both of u r now teaming up against me.
Anika started throwing pillows to them.

All 3 were having a good time playing with each other...

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Hope u would like this part.Sorry for typo errors.

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It was the day of excitement in Jodhpur palace; the godh Bharai of their elder princess.The whole region was present in the palace.

Many pujas were conducted & the whole function was mainly for women only.Anika was very much treated by both the family members.

After all customary functions, it was the time for the blessing function of the mother. She was blessed by all the elders present there to give birth to a healthy baby.

Now it was the gifting ceremony.Both the families covered anika with umpty no.of gifts.There were ornaments for anika, cradles & toys for baby, many different clothes, artifacts etc.Shivay had specially made a beautiful anklet for anika & a small one for their baby too.Anshika gifted her mother a beautiful picture frame with shivika & her photos in it; there was a small space left for her upcoming chotu.

The last chance of gifting was for rikara.All of them wondered as they were standing there with free hands.
Both of them took shivika to the palace garden & then uncovered their gift.

It was a live 3D painting of shivika with Anshika, done by Om.Gauri had made a beautiful sculpture of a mother carrying a small baby in her arms.Anika was emotional; she hugged both om & gouri.She told that this was the best ever gift she had received; even shivay was overjoyed with their love.It was a very beautiful family moment...

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It was a cold night.Om & gouri woke up hearing the crying of baby in the cradle next to the bed.It was gouri who woke up first; she went near the cradle, took the baby & started pacifying him.By that time Om had already woke up.Both of them sat on the bed, gouri with baby in her hands.Om started to recite some shayaris.
G: ka he yeh, omkaraji.Do u think he will sleep hearing this shayaris
O: bilkul gouri...u want to see?

As he finished reciting, the baby had calmed down & was about to sleep.
G: don't know y he is always crying at this time.
O: gouri y don't we make him sleep between us?
G: no omkaraji, what if he get some infection?
O: no rather he might have a good sleep in our warmth.

So they made him lay between them.He was having a sound sleep.
Om could hear gouri sobbing.
O: kya hua baba?
G: I remembered sleeping in between aayi & papa.I used to cuddle between them , they will hug me from both sides...

Om thought, ever since Aniket(chotu) was born she was being so much emotional thinking of her childhood.
He wanted to cheer her up.
O: come closer gouri...

He took hold of gouri & hugged her too; she was smiling.
O: u know in fact I'm having 3 kids, cherry, chotu & u .
She smiled, it was true he would treat her like a kid sometimes.
G: waise omkaraji, I think he is crying because he is away from his mom.
O: ya bhabhi is having high fever from past 2 days; so she cannot care chotu.
G: but u know one thing, I feel chotu will b more close to us.Just see, he is very much comfortable in our hands in this first month itself.
O: he will either b tadi like bhabhi or dabbang like u.
G: hmm... anyways not planning to b zulfi like u.
O: gouri...he shouted.
G: shhh... chotu ( smiling)

The duo were having a good sleep with chotu with them...

Morning...
Ani: did my chotu motu disturb you both?
O: nahi bhabhi, in fact he is very happy with us for past 3 days.
Pi: anika , in my view our Aniket beta is going to be like Om & gouri's son.See how happily he is playing in Om's hands.I can't believe it Om, how r u really managing to keep him so happy.
Ani: mummyji, I will b very happy to give my chotu to these 2.
G: didi, u know I love to spend time with kiddos, really...just see how cutely he is looking his choti ma...cho.chweet...
Bu: puttar gouri, but the real difficulties will start when u will have to care for ur own kids( she winked)

More than gouri, it was Om who was blushing.After the birth of Aniket, now all of their eyes were on rikara.

Jh: bilkul sahi he gouri.Om hadn't given me much trouble; but rudra was really a very naughty one.

All were laughing...but still Om & gouri were watching each other.

Da: par jhanvi, compared to Tej , rudra's naughtiness was nothing.V both had a tough time managing him..
It's good he is not here, else...

The family was having a good time sharing all baby stories...

Gouri was sitting in her room, studying.Her classes were now made regular by Om.He wanted her to complete her higher secondary education level & move to graduation very soon.Of course it was bit difficult for her but she had to work hard to reach her goal; she knew this.

She heard a knock at the door & saw rudra coming in with a sad face.She made him sit on the Ottoman.
G: ka hua devarji , hmm...
R: bhabhi...bhabhi...I'm missing saumya.

She was shocked; she knew all.the stories.She also knew this that rumya loved each other.She had tried to sort out this but had failed.
G: r u serious rudra?
R: haan bhabhi...u know papa is looking for a marriage proposal for me.I know it's time for my marriage.But I'm still confused, I don't know whether I can bring any other girl to my life.I don't know if my decision is right.
G: dekho rudra, she raised his face to see her.
G: first itself I knew that u both have something more than friendship.But don't know y u both were running away from this.
Just few more months, she is going to finish her studies, this is a right chance rudra.I wouldn't force u for anything but as a bhabhi I will b always there with u in every decision.I will also help u take the right decision.Do u understand what I'm saying.
R: bilkul bhabhi...
G: ok did soumya call u today?
R: how did u know that?
G: I thought u were so much indulged in thinking today; u don't have any other big problem to think deeply.So I just guessed it.
R: but I had been thinking about this for a long time; I was really stuck somewhere.I know shadi is important, I can't make a mistake again. I can't see her sad.
But when she called me today, I didn't know how to answer her..so I didn't take the call.
G: no rudra, in fact u should call her.Dont confuse her with things, after some casual talk, just try to understand her mind.Lets first see what is her take on this.Im sure she would be also think about a marriage plan after her studies.

So first, u have to convince your mind about ur decision; then we will see the rest.

His eyes were moist, he felt big relief after talking to her.She could feel it through his smile.
R: chulbul bhabhi, now u have become my love guru; love guru of this great Rudy.How could u achieve this height ? Nation wants to know?

She laughed hardly.
G: hey Rudy, I'm living with the most romantic person, ur bhaiyya.So it is natural for me to like this.
R: aha ...changa hai bhabhi...

They shared a hi-fi!!!!!!



A/N - I had actually wanted to finish this ff in 30 chappies; never thought that this would receive a good reception like this. I'm sorry if I haven't replied to anyone due to lack of time.My heartfelt thanks to all readers.

Precap: Rikara missing each other...



Edited by Shraddhadikshit - 8 years ago
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superb update dear
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