Rikara ff: When she coloured my canvas!!! Pg 29 ( 21 Aug) - Page 18

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Hi rikarians & Shrenalians
Sorry was busy yaar... couldn't reply to all.
Thanks to coolhi,rikara94,sindu,senapati,naina,priyanka,sara,myLove for commenting.


Recap:-Anika and gouri r part of Jodhpur royal family.Om came to know the truth & apologised to gouri.Kali attacked Gouri but was saved by Om & rikara married.
Tensions develop in their married life.She goes missing & came back to OM after one day.Finally, both have united.

Hope u will like this part.Sorry for typo errors.

Colour 25

"Gouri...Gouri..."
She heard him calling her on top of his voice; she was busy in kitchen with the other ladies.She looked @ buama for permission.
B: go beta, he might b searching for something.Go fast; it's time for flight now.I will keep the food ready; jaao.
An: waise chutki..Even jhanvi anty wouldn't have ran behind him like this in his childhood ( laughing)
G: didi...( irritated)... she ran upstairs.

As she reached her room, she saw a calm Om standing in front of mirror & combing his hair.His eyes shined as he saw her coming in.

G: ka hua omkaraji, y did u call me? any problem?
O: no... nothing..
G: y did u call me like that then??
O: hmm...just wanted to ask u whether u have kept my bags ready..
G: bilkul, I did it yesterday itself.I have kept ur phapers, that laptop, files, dresses ... Everything...I showed it yesterday itself...

Om moved to her& took hold of her by her shoulders.
O: ha...but I really wanted to see u,not check all these; that's y I called like that.Otherwise u wouldn't come to the room, sure.
Gouri took back the hair brush from him & started combing his hair.

G: is this a one week trip?
O: ha, shivay is not well there in delhi,so I will have to do everything for him.Probably , it will take one week.
G: will u miss me( sad)

Om knew she was sad.But he wanted to make the moment lighter.
O: nahi yaar...in fact I will b getting some freedom after all( smirking)

Gouri stopped combing his hair and she moved forward; but she couldn't escape easily from his hands.

O: what happened my pagli, do u really think u have to ask me this silly question?
G: I want to say something.Please do look after ur health, eat food properly, don't catch diseases ok?I won't b able to call u & remind everything.
O: fine baba, lekin I have to give u few instructions,look after ur health, go for your art classes correctly, take ur tuitions well &..
G: aur...
O: aur kya...do video call to me daily.
G: hmm...ok...ok...come have ur food .It's time for flight.
O: ok baba...

Gouri was really missing him; more than anytime during their marriage.Even when she was working in the canvas, his memories were simply filling upon her mind.During his journey in flight, Om was constantly thinking of gouri; specially when someone asked for tea he thought of her glucose wali chai.

It was a really jolly day for gouri.She had gone 4 shopping with prinku & Rudy.She selected few dresses for Rudy; this amazing duo was a fun to watch.

R: waise bhabhi, kamal hai tumhari selection.Usually I wouldn't allow anyone to select dress for me; but chulbul bhabhi u r awesome.
P: haan bhabhi..u have selected all my favourite colours, really...I love u bhabhi.
R: waise how do u adjust with O ,bhabhi?matlab...he is not normal na... always talking diplomatic things about life in complicated methods...how do u manage with him?
G: tumhe pata rudra, even I thought about him like this.But trust me, he really enjoy all these just like us; I think u haven't seen that version of him.One day v should take him also for a trip like this; what to do he is always busy...( laughing)
P: yes,v will have fun with Om bhaiyya.
R: y don't we go for an ice cream then?
G: arre rudra, instead of ice cream y don't we have gol gappas?
Let b desi devarji,come I will show u my style of eating gol gappas ok?
P: Done bhabhi,Im ready...

Three of them were enjoying eating gol gappas,specially gouri.

As they reached home they saw anika seated on the hall.

A: oh bte ki, did u shop the whole city guys?
G: haan didi...bohot badi shopping & movie too.
A: not fair guys, u didn't take me along na( pouting)
R: but u were not well bhabhi..
P: ya, otherwise we would have taken u also; but don't worry bhabhi, we have brought many things for u.
A: haan...I don't think I will b able to come with u 4 outing like this for few more months.
G: ka hua, didi; kuch problem hai?

Cherry came running to them happily.
C: chulbul chachi, tumhe pata , Finally someone smaller than me is going to come.
R: oho...from where??
C: oho chachu, I'm going to b an elder sister to my chotu.

Gouri, prinku & Rudy screamed together at the same time,looking anika.All 3 of them went & hugged anika.
R: it's party time guys... really...woho
A: no Rudy, let shivom come back then we will do.
G: didi , did u inform bhaiyya?
A: no last time I informed him first, this time I thought I will share this news with u guys.
P: com on bhabhi. u should inform bade bhaiyya now.
G:& I will tell this to omkaraji.
R: oh god, to whom will I say this??

Jhanvi came there.
J: I think u should inform pinky rudra( laughing)
R: fine...I will call choti maa.

Rikara in video call...
O: kaise ho tum gouri??
G: I'm fine omkaraji, had some time with prinku & Rudy.
O: did u go for your classes?
G: woh...no...ji... actually there is a special news here!!!
O: kya hua??
G: we r going to b chacha chachi once again!!!
O: matlab bhabhi...
G: haan... Omkaraji ( laughing)
O: such a happy news, oh, I'm so happy.

Cherry came to the room.
C: is omkie chacha there?
G: haan cherry, come sit here we will talk.

She sat on Gouri's lap.
C: hi omkie.
O: hi, MERA sweety...r u happy dear?
C: bilkul chacha, finally I am becoming a sister yipee...like ma& chachi...
O: v will celebrate this after v come ok? we will enjoy
C: now I have only one more wish!!!
O: kya hai wo mere sweety...
C: hmm...now I want someone like u & Papa.
G: matlab??
C: means, I want a cousin , like u & Papa.Papa is ur choti papa's son, ur cousin na, like that I want a cousin & we all will have obro moments like u have!!!! yay!!!


Both rikara were shocked with Cherry's wish; they were in fact blushing.Suddenly anika called for cherry; she gave a bye to om & went down.

O: gouri...( teasingly)
G: kya...kya... Omkaraji?
O: didn't u hear Cherry's wish?
G: omkaraji...I...I. will call u later.
O: oho...if u start blushing like this, then how will Cherry's wish b fulfilled? It's her first wish na? Shouldn't v grant it?
G: chi, like didi says, this is...2 rs wali talk...I'm going...
O: fine u can escape just now...ok pagli... bye...

Gouri went to Om's studio & was enjoying that picture of them with a kid...she was dreaming of such a life with Om.

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Edited by Shraddhadikshit - 8 years ago
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Next one.
Hope u will like this part.Sorry for typo errors.

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Gouri was worried; it has been 1 week since Om had gone.Shivay had come back yesterday; Om was still there.But this wasn't the reason which made her tensed; he had been sounding tensed from last 2 or 3 days.She could feel it,but he didn't open up.She asked the same to bhaiyya; she could feel something wrong but even he refused it thinking anika might b tensed in this occasion.She had kept this worry in her mind as all were in a happy mood due to the happy news.

Om hadn't called her the whole day; he didn't attend her call too.A worried gouri skipped her dinner & went to the room.She had recently started studying sculpting & was trying to focus in it too; she wanted to surprise Om with a work but her mind wasn't in good mood.He didn't even tell her when he would b back.She took one of her favourite kurta's of Om.The whole week she used to sleep hugging this kurta; she could feel his presence in it..

A fresh morning...Gouri was in a deep sleep.She was dreaming; she could literally feel Om kissing on her forehead.His warmth made her smile.She was still hugging tight on the kurta.She could feel his hands stroking her hair; she was still smiling.After few moments she slept again.She was disturbed by some sound a long time later; as she opened her eyes & got up she told " good morning Gouri "to herself as usual.As she turned to the left, she saw Om; she simply smiled & told to herself, "oho y do I always dream this jatadhari pati of mine to b with me!!"
As she watched him with her dreamy eyes, he slowly moved closer to her.She was still smiling seeing this dream.He suddenly shook his towel in front of her face & the water droplets were showered on her face.She suddenly jerked realising it was reality.
G: Tum...when did u come?
O: just sometime b4 pagli!!!
G: so u were really near me when sleeping.
O: ya, he turned back
O: waise u hug my kurta & sleep ?

Gouri was shy, she was doing this secretly without his knowledge.

Gouri felt his behavior was strange; she thought not to ask him now.She got out of the bed & hugged him from back; his just showered body was so cold.

G: ka hua, kuch problem hai( huskily)
O: mmm...nahi...kyun?
G: no...nothing...just wait for some time, I will bring the tea.
O:no..u can relax...I will take chai.

Gouri's tension was increasing; she found out a solution for that.

The whole family was in the hall discussing about Anika's party; she wanted the party to be very private.But shivru didn't agree; they wanted to celebrate it to the maximum.Anika was excited coz her family was coming; she was sad that they couldn't see her during first pregnancy.

Da: if party is there or not, we have to do some pujas this time.Whenever v have a happiness , v should thank maataji.
Pi: haan mummyji, Me and shakthiji r going for a yathra to get a kanji aankhon ladka.
Sh:no mom, pray for a girl.Waise OM have less no. of girls.
Ch: yes we will have o sis moments.. clapping.
Bu: Hey guys, we will see who will come only after 9 months.
Jh: but I want a ladki really, it is blessed to have girl child.
Pi: no no jethanaji, I want a ladka like my heera beta.Probably om& gouri will have a ladki I think.

It was a heavily blushing moment for rikara but the family was laughing at that comment.Om was looking gouri but she avoided him by playing with cherry.

Bu: bus bus let anika go to her room.
A: kyun bua maaji, I will come to prepare lunch, I'm ok ...
Sh: no no anika don't b ziddy now come with me.
An: arrey Billiuji...
She stood up saying this but slightly slipped; Shivay scolded her for being careless like a kid & carefully took her hand , climbing the stairs.

Gouri was adoring how her jiju was caring her didi.
O: kya hua gouri?
G: tumhe dekha, how bhaiyya is caring didi?
O: kyun gouri? do u want me to care u like this?
G: oh...don't start this again ok.

Om was teasing her when he got a message; his face fell down instantly.He went to his studio, tensed.He didn't stop even when gouri did.She was worried...

As gouri went to dadi's room to give her medicine, she saw dadi praying in front of dadaji's photo.Gouri smiled.
G: dadi, don't u want to have ur medicines?
D: oh, ok beta, as u wish!!!

Gouri was lying on dadi's lap, she was stroking gouri's hair.
D: puttar, r u tensed with any problem?
G: haan dadi... Omkaraji na, after coming back is very much worried.Something is worrying him.I know that?
D: didn't u ask him?
G: he is not saying it dadi, may b not to make me sad.
D:( laughing) do u know gouri.He is the most sensitive among the brothers but he never share any worries with shivru, thinking not to hurt them.He suppresses everything which inteses the tension.

U r his better half; even if he didn't share his worry with brothers he should share it with u.I know u have just entered ur married life now; it is bit difficult to share everything as this is the beginning.But I know with little little steps u can very well understand each other's mind.After all this is the very essence of marriage.Im sure he will also understand this soon.U should make him feel that u r always there with him in every moment of life; & I'm sure he will also keep u close to him throughout ur life.Just like humari Billu & anika.

Gouri smiled hearing this & cuddled into dadi's lap...

G: omkaraji kahan he tu?
O: kya hua baba?I'm going to studio ,have to finish my work.

Gouri stopped him by catching his wrist; she turned him by his arms & leaned on him, keeping her head on his chest.
G: ruko na, I didn't see u for 1 week & after coming back u r not spending time with me, u r always making itself busy in work.

Om raises her face with his finger; their faces were so close
He leaned down.
O: kya chahiye tum?
G: I want to sit with u.
O: very funny...so u understood my value when u missed me for one week.So I think I should often go for long trips like that.
G: why r u sayin like that?from now on wherever u go, I'm also going to come with you.

Gouri was giving Om an oil massage for his hair.She was sitting on bed& he on a bean bag.It was very much relaxing for him. He was sitting with closed eyes.
Gouri was laughing.
O: kya hua pagli, kyun has rahe?
G: wo...in bareilly, I always used to oil my bubblu's hair like this, she is in 2nd std; ha...I never thought that I will have to massage the long hairs of my husband like this.
O: r u teasing me?
G: bilkul nahi ji, ha...( laughing)
O: I'm so happy to hear u smile like this gouri.When ur fingers r moving thru my hair, I feel so relaxed; all my tensions r going away from me.

Gouri thought to take a step further.
G: I know u r worried for something omkaraji from the time u came back.What is it? I want to know that.Tell me , tell me whatever it is...

Om was puzzled; what shall I say now??

Precap:- shivom trapped in a trouble?

Hope u r liking this


Edited by Shraddhadikshit - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome Loved it...
awww the family moments were really cute to see
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awesome superb update dear
loved itt...
rikara scene was very nice
and beautifully written
precap looking interesting
thanks alot for pm dear
waiting for next part
pls update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ohhh... another back to back two updates..
Awesome yar
Loved it..
Bechari gauti missing her husband alot
She is worried for him
And cherry's wish ne toh dono ko blush krwa diya
My omkie wants kids
What happend to om
why he is so tensd yar kuch toh huya hai.. even message dekh ke bhi woh chla gya
Precap ne toh mujhe dra hi diya
Oh my god kya kya hone wala
Update jldi dena behna thanku for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow amazing updates...
omkie to go on d trip for 1 week..
gauri upset...
omkie calls gauri urgently as he wanted to see her
she misses omkie...
gauri,prinku rudy on shopping trip..
wow ani preggie..
cherry every happy
she wishes to have a cousin as well..
omkie returns after few days...
he surprises gauri in simple way...
but he is aloof..
he is worried..
some new trouble on d way...
gauri wants to know abt it,..
omkie not telling..
now wat wil happe...
plz continue soon
thnks 4 pm

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