Jan 29 written update

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys, i wasnt sure if someone else was going to post an update so i did it. Its like my first time doing this so i hope you like it! Also,i missed 2 parts but other than that its good 😃


Suhana's house

suhana remembers all the things in the court and what geethanjali said. dev comes in. he asks, are you happy now ?? you've got your kamal now !. he asks what happened. sorry i missed this part guys dev says dont worry.

Gitanjali's house

GA is brushing kamal's hair. kamal aska if they are going anywhere. she says yes. kamal asks, then why are you crying ? GA says tat she is not going only you are.kamal asks where ? she says to suhana aunty's house. kamal asks you are going with me right ? he asks again. she says no. only you are going. kamal says no im not going without you !just then a lady with a blue saree ( i dont know her name but she was in the court with GA. she tells them that they have arrived to take kamal. GA tells kamal, when you go there, dont trouble anyone ok ? be a good boy.

Living Room

everyone including dev is in the living room. GA very slowly, goes in with kamal.she tells dev, from now on, kamal is your responsibility. GA ells the lay with devkamal likes stories before he goe to bed. and that his best friend is his teddy bear. he takes it everywhere with him.

Break

Gitanjali's house

kamal refuses to go. kamal makes a big deal out of it and GA gets angy and yells im not your mom ! dev uncle is your papa and suhan aunty ir you mama ! you have to understand this fact !she tells dev to hurry up and take him.she keeps on yelling this cause she cant take i anymore.they are half way to the car wen GA runs and yells Kamal ! but by the time she gets there, they are already in the car. she keeps yelling Kamal! kamal !

Break

Suhana's house

its very late when they get home.the whole place is decorated with balloons. they bring the aarti. everyone is happy.suhana holds kamal an kisses him on the cheek. everything is trying to feed him. then suhana is about to feed him when kamal says he wants to go to his mom.suhana is heartbroken😭

and there you have it. have a nice day 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks 😃 its my frist time and i was a bit nervous

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