LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 63

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Posted: 8 years ago
Maan n jai..lol..

PlZ continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi Karamjeet

I am glad you liked my fanfiction and i am so overwhelmed you took time to comment on each part of my story i would have been happy if you have given summary too anyway You made my day and I so love your queries... Yes, Geet is soft at heart and as your point of view a weak one to be lawyer when she cant handle shikha but she is is different country where people make issue of little thing and make a mountain out of small talk she is not used to that environment and the cases are handled differently where she lived most of her life and here in India she is new and got to know the situation of this country here slowly...

I am obliged to your wonderful comments and love to see your review in coming future...

Thank you

With Regards
ILA
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely story. Geet has come to India to help her fathers friend prove his innocence. Geet has great chemistry with maan pipeline each others leg. Goutham is protective towards Geet. Poor guy has to take all the anger of his mother for doing his duty. Hope she realises her mistake and forgives his.
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb
very nice update dear..
sorry for the late commenting
update soon and thnaku for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update dear
Very well written
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Roopaamrutha

Lol ... Maan beating jai ... I already thought that something like this would happen but I have expected Goutam not Maan but Maan came and even scolded and fighted with jai ... Maan Ko tho pehle baat Sunna Hoga na ... Jai ne teekh kaha kuch log India mein hote Hein Jo Bina baat samajhe fighting mein lag jaathe hain Maan ki tarah... ab tho Geet ko gussa hona hi tha ... Maan uska bhai ki Jo maara ... But later Maan and jai apologized each other .. for me it's a treat to read Geet and jai convo... It's awesome ... I hope u would also include more jai and Geet scenes and also Goutam bhi kyunki vo Geet ka asli bhai hain na ... Ab Maan Geet ko manane ke liye Goutam se poochega ... Ab use kaise pata Hoga ... Asli mein thomaan apni future wife ki patane ke liye uska bhai se hi help leraha hai... Matlab Abhi vaisa cheez nahi hai Lekin future mein thi hain na isliye .. comment thoda long hogaya Lekin prblm nahin hai na tumhe ... Update ki baari tho aapne Kamal kar diya ... Back to back updates ... Wonderful update ...



Hi roopa
No Gautam wouldn't do that ever I know Gautam has temperamental issue easily he got angry but he never react without any reason. He first like to analyse the situation... He started supporting Geet in case after analyzing and thinking... if geet hadn't talked to Jairaj Gautam wouldn't have helped... He needs reason and perfect things to analyse where Maan reacts with his instincts and it can be wrong like this but yeah in case his noone can beat his instincts they actually helps him...

Arre Log pucho mat yeh toh simple situation thi koi bhi kar leta... anyway touchy topic...

hehehehee... Gautam will help because he too knows abhi aisa kuch hai nhi and Geet aur Gautam ki bonding shuru huyi hai toh brotherlyinstinct nhi jaagi hai... jitni jai ki protective instinct hai maza toh tab aayega jab jai aur Gautam ik saath milke band bjaayenge...

Roop Thanks for commenting dear... and long comment is always welcome...😃
With Regards
ILA
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nakh5683

Hilarious update so my guess was right it was maan who punched Jai he thought he was teasing geet he did saw the interaction between then but fail to hear the conversation Jai ki possessive Bhai ki atma jaag uthi the way maan was fighting for geet both held collars till geet interrupt them telling maan that Jai was her brother and maan was Jai senior though both apologies to each other but geet is any at maan and now maan running after his billi to pacify her




Thank you for the comment Nakh5683

Yeah Bhai ki atma is always awake when it comes to sister
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jashu08

Nice update.. Maan and jai trying to protect geet from each other..waiting to see hw Maan manofy geet
. Thanks for the pm



yeah but before that something has to be present it's need to introduce few more things...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Arina_10

Part - 20
Wonderful update !
Thanks for the pm dear !
Geet was annoyed with the stranger !
He teases her !
That stranger is jai geet brother !
He is very funny & loves his sister to the core !
They are so close to each other !
She is very happy by seeing her brother !
They share a lovely bond !
He doesn't know abt jairaj & his case !
He is on a training here !
Someone punch jai in face...




Thanks for the comment dear but you have read the part 21 too...😃😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

Superb part..

Jai is Geets loving Bro. Maan thinks he is irritating Geet so he started fight with him..both are same.. Hard to handle.. Geet finally succeeded to explain each of them.both then came ti know what blunder they made..
Now maan has to manofy his jungli billi Geet 😆
Thnx for pm waiting for next update




thank you for the comment Nehakapoor7 yeah now maan had to pacify Geet as jai already know the trick... jai ka charm har jgh chlta hai...😃

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