LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#641

Hi Guys... I am so overwhelmed the love oyu have showered on my this Fanfiction those who are new to this Fan Fiction heartiest welcome from my side Keep Reading I am highly obliged to you guys...

Those who have commented and Liked Thanks for appreciating but Likeers do write something for the writer it moptivates them... I am so glad finally I am able to write 2,112 words for this Fan fiction it's you response that made me do, I am so glad to you... and obliged...

P.S. Keep Commenting

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Kalpana

@maaneetfavo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#642

hi dear, thanks for pm..

i read ur prolouge and cs ..interesting concept..police and crime..different genre..

this weekend i read ur previous part and then i will comment ..

sorry for late

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Roopa_1

@Roopa_1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#643

this one is very interesting yaar... yu revealed a lot in this... aur maja aagaya ... mujhe lagtha hain vo informer bahut greedy hain agar acp sir uska help kiya tho vo paiso leke bina bhi help karsaktha hain na nahin usko tho paise se hi mathlab hain... uff and the person jisne maan ko dhakka maara mujhe uspe shak aaraha hain... mujhe lagtha hain vo geet aur maan ko follow kar raha hain. ... so many unsolved mysteries... and tatoo... infact i loved the tatoo yaar. ... ab isse hi kuch patha chala saktha hain shaayad... geet bahut gusse mein hain yaar... aur maan usko manane ke liye goutam se help le raha hain... aur jai ko bhi lucha lafanga bola maan ne lolzzz agar geet vo baat sunli tho uska murder kar dethi... hahaha.. ab tho agle update ke liye wait kar rahin hoo main... and geet loves kheer infact jai sir aur goutham ko bhi kheer bahut pasand hain ... pasand tho milna hi hain na kyunki ek family jo hain and taste bhi ek jaisa hi hoga... next update bhi dhedho bonus 😉😉 loved it... waiting for next

Edited by Roopaamrutha - 8 years ago

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#644

Superbbb update...
loved it...
now Maan got one more lead...
Geet is Angry on him...
loved d way Maan asked Gautam to help him to shan't Geet gussa...
looking forward how he gonna manaofying Geet...
and Excited for Jajraj and Maan meeting too...
Thanks for pm dear...

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 8 years ago

#645

Awesome cute update geet was cribbing and cursing both maan and Jai here maan thinking how to mano geet when he met an informant who gave him pic of s tatto when maan remember he thought he saw on it on jairaj arms he immediately called Gautam who told that it isn't possible as his dad is allergic to tattoos it was very interesting lead so probably there was a duplicate involve who has the tattoo maan asked Gautam to help him manao geet he told she like kheer maan could see so much resemblance between geet Gautam and jairaj let's see how maan manos geet

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#646

hi thanks 4 updating again! fab update! well written! Geet angry! Maan's informant gives him a pic of a tattoo! he explains hw it well help Maan! Maan thinks where he saw this tattoo! who bumped into Maan?? Maan realise where he saw the tattoo n calls Gautam! Gautam says his dad wld nt have a tattoo. Maan asks 4 help as Geet angry! he tells him wt happened! nice of Gautam 2 tell Maan that Geet likes kheer! update soon

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

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Posted: 8 years ago

#647

interesting update...

geet angry on maan and maan asking tips from gautam...

wonder who has that tattoo and how was the guy who bumped into maan???

getitng highly interesting...

waiting for nxt part...

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Risingsun626

@Risingsun626

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Posted: 8 years ago

#648

Thanks for pm. Awesome update. After beating geet's little brother maan seeking help from her elder brother so that he can manofy her. He got lead which is very complicated n need hard work to solve the puzzle. Gautam is also astonished after listening about the clue. Each person who knew jairaj, know that jairaj is a down to earth person out of any pom n show. So it will be near to impossible to have any tatoo on his arm.

Me waiting for kheer.

Waiting for next.