Rikara ff: When she coloured my canvas!!! Pg 29 ( 21 Aug) - Page 16

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rikara94

Omg again back to back two update...mogembo khush huaa🤣

Awesome loved it yar

I loved anika's advice

I did not like when he leave her in restaurant like this

Waiting for the love story,love moments

And what about precap,its so scary han😲

Update soonn



Next update coming today itself
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .Priyanka-

awesome update dear

thanks for the pm...


Thank u priya
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey rikarians & Shrenalians,I'm back with back 2 back double chappies

This ff have reached 20 chappies & I'm so excited about this.I never thought that this ff would be a great success like this.Thanks to each & every buddies for commenting, supporting & suggesting ideas for this.Thanks to all quite readers

So now moving on.If u r not liking this part, then please do comment on it.

Check 1st page for index...

Recap:-Anika and gouri r part of Jodhpur royal family.Om came to know the truth & apologised to gouri.Kali attached Gouri but was saved by Om.Finally, rikara married.
Tensions develop in their married life.Gouri was going to bareilly, but Om brought aayi to OM.


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A: damadji was with me all the way.He had also taken food for me.We had a very nice trip beta.Then he went back to office & and I came back.

Gouri couldn't believe this.Y did he do this? Does that mean he didn't want her to go?
A: where r u going beta?
G: woh ..I was coming to u aayi.
A: ha..ha.so he really surprised u.

Jhanika, dadi, bua came to the hall.They were surprised to see mom & daughter.

B: putter, what is this? U were going to bareilly na?
A: woh...Omkara brought me here.
B:( teasing) oh...so omkie didn't want to miss his patni for few days,na..

Jhanika hadn't expected such a move from Om; now they were sure that he is affected by gouri.They gave a silent hi-fi to each other.

Gouri had spend some quality time with her mom.She was so happy to have slept on aayi's lap for a long time; even anika was enjoying with both of them.

It was night. Gouri had arranged her bed & couch.She saw Om coming to the room.But she continued to do her job.As she looked up he was not to be seen.She went downstairs.As she looked Om was talking to her aayi; she adored the saas- damadji duo for some time.He made her eat all the medicines & sat with her for some time.He had also asked her to stay for Diwali celebrations too.Gouri went back to her room.

Om entered the room.He straight away went to the couch and layed down on it.Gouri wanted to thank him for bringing her aayi; but she didn't know how he would take this.Ever since that night fight she was hesitant to talk to him.Om expected some good words from her; in fact he had done this because he couldn't bear her absence in his life. But then he thought that she is still upset with his sharp words.Both slept very late that night, as they were surrounded by many thoughts.

Rikara cold war was still going on; it wasn't a war really.Both were giving enough time to each other to accept each other's feelings.They weren't totally aware of the other person's view because they never discussed about those past incidents; they didn't want to break the already damaged relation.

It was Diwali .Oberois had a big puja conducted on that day.Moreover it was gouri's first Diwali as oberoi bahu.She was very excited and joined anika in all arrangements;she was busy all the time.Om's birthday was after 2 days of Diwali so it was double celebration for OM.

Om too had many works in gallery as it was Diwali.He had to reach the mansion at correct time for puja; he wanted to buy a gift for gouri.He was about to take his car when he received a call.This was one of the officials from jail.

"Omkara sir, we have got an information.Svetlana is planning to harm the oberois on Diwali day, today.We don't know what the plan is, but it is something serious.We had questioned her hardly, but she is not admitting it."

He was shocked, how to find what she has planned.He worried for gouri because svet had challenged her b4 going to jail. Om became nervous.

As soon as he reached OM, he saw his happy family having a nice time.He didn't have more time to think.He immediately informed shivay about this.The security was made strict and the checking was strict too.

Om was restless, he was making the security check every nook and corner of the mansion, but failed to find anything harmful.He was so worried.

Om was called for puja downstairs; he came down reluctantly.He was so disturbed & thinking of all possibilities.He was very much lost in thoughts.The whole family was seated in the hall.

Gouri came to him with box full of sweets , to feed him.

G: omkaraji eat this na.Diwali wishes.
Om was silent.
G: ka hua, u like sweets now right, then y, please have some.
He didn't respond.He was sitting blankly.
Gouri took a piece and brought it close to his mouth.He was irritated and he shook the sweet off from her hand.He bursted out his frustration.

O: I don't want it gouri.If I need it I will have .Just don't force me.Just take this away, please!!!!

All were shocked; they hadn't seen this avatar of him for many days.Gouri was shocked; she has been getting all these bad vibes from him again.She wanted to cry hard but she controlled it & went back to kitchen.Om went back to room too.Jhanika were shocked.

Priyanka went to see gouri.Gouri was standing there with a heavy heart.She smiled as she saw prinku.She took a sweet and fed prinku.Prinku consoled gouri.But after few minutes, she started to cough; the cough became harder that prinku began spitting blood.Gouri was tensed, she called anika to kitchen.All were shocked seeing unconscious prinku...


Shivom found out from CCTV that someone had exchanged the sweet boxes who had come as delivery boy.They were sure that it was svetu's plan.

Om was really tired that day with all the stress.He arranged the couch and just layed down; he didn't switch off the lights as he was waiting for gouri.He felt disgusted as he had again misbehaved with gouri.He didn't know y this was happening again & again.He thought this is y people find it hard to manage a married life because here the partner should not only think about his situation & his problems but also b concerned about the other person.

He couldn't sleep without seeing gouri .So he went in search of her.He saw gouri was in aayi's room crying; he understood that he was the reason for all these problems.He thought, for the last few days he have become short tempered; he is venting out his frustration on Gouri.He decided to find a solution to all this.

He decided to sort all issues with her because it was unable for him to see her crying; that too because of him.He didn't know how to sort all these but he resolved to do it ASAP.He went back to his room...

Om woke up late the next day.As usual, gouri was not there.Nowadays he had been missing gouri's puja in the room; she had shifted her puja to Mandir.Today was strange that she didn't even give him his morning tea.

As he came down ready for breakfast, he saw jhanvi coming to him.

J: what happened Om, gouri is late today.Is he fine.
O: mom, she is not in room( shocked)
she was with aayi yesterday.
Aa: nahi Omkara, she went from the room morning itself.
O: but mom, I didn't see her today morning.
J: she didn't come downstairs too.I didn't see her anywhere today.Oh God, where did this ladki go???

Precap:-. where did gouri go, leaving Om??

Scroll down for the next chap...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi all,moving on to next.Hope u will like this.

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Day after tomorrow is Om's birthday.There has been no information about gouri till now; her phone is switched off.But Om didn't want to make his mom sad; he told her that Gouri had gone to visit her friend & will come on his birthday.He told the truth only to bhabhi.

He was sure that she is not in bareilly.She had only one friend archisha in Mumbai; but she wasn't there too.He searched maximum locations; but suddenly it striked him that someone might have harmed her.She hadn't taken her dresses , so she planned for a casual trip.Also the securities had seen her going on foot; she didn't want anyone to accompany her.

He was sure that svet might have done something as she was planning an attack in OM.He didn't have any way to find her.He could feel the same fear as he felt when kali had trapped her.He was mentally cursing him on talking nonsense to her.Suddely he felt a touch on his shoulder; he thought it was gouri but it was bhabhi...

One day has passed.Om was very much disturbed.He didn't want all these celebrations without gouri.He tried all means to reach her but was of no use. The whole day he spent in his gallery, reminiscing his old moments with gouri; he was very much broken.He had apologized a 100 times to gouri in his mind.

It was 7 pm, he came back to home.He saw jhanvi, she asked for gouri.He had to lie that she would come the next day.He wanted to take off all decorations; he felt all these useless.

He freshened & went to the balcony.It was beautifully lit up with dim lights. As he watched around he saw something covered ; it was a canvas.As he opened it, he was amazed.It was his portrait; with open hair, glowing eyes & a wide yet soft smile.He wondered who could do this; there was no one other than him who could do portraits like this.Some spark suddenly passed through his head.

He ran from the balcony & just below the stairs he saw something which his eyes had been longing for; Gouri.Yes, he thought it was a dream; yes it was a dream.A dream which could give real happiness for him; a dream which could make his heart run fast & lose his senses.

He ran to her.She had a blank face.
O: gouri, where were u? ha..tell me? tell me gouri.

She was staring angrily @ Om's eyes & turned to go.

He caught her by wrist; he couldn't afford to lose her again.He feared that situation.He turned her towards him.
He took hold of her waist; she gasped.

O: Answer me gouri...come on!!!!
But she wasn't least feared by his order; because she was dabbang gouri!!!

Waiting for ur comments, don't know how the story is going!!!!

Sorry couldn't update yesterday, I shall update the next 2 parts today night itself...
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Posted: 8 years ago
update was superb dear
loved itt soo much
rikara part was soo nice
thanks a lot for pm sweety
waiting for next update
pls countinue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow this was amazing update...
Diwali celebration
Swety planning to harm Om people
Omkie worried
He blasts gauri
Gauri upset...
Prinku got affected by sweets which were having something mixed...
Gauri went away...
Nope I guess she was hiding in om all along by help of Jhanika
Now om asking her where she was
Want Gauri to blast him now
Waiting for their confession
Continue soon.thnks 4 pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Again two updates
Superb updates dear
Loved it
Kara's bday and diwali celebrations
But diwali celebrations spoiled by svetlana and prinku got affected by sweets
Om yelled on gauri
And disturbed gauri went away and restless om searching for her here and there
Whe she come back he asking her where she was.this time i want gauri also yelled back on him
Thanks for the pm
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey rikarians & Shrenalians,I'm back with back 2 back double chappies

I'm extremely sorry to all who commented as I couldn't reply back.Thanks a ton for ur support.I will definitely come back to u after these 2 chappies

Check 1st page for index.

Recap:-Anika and gouri r part of Jodhpur royal family.Om came to know the truth & apologised to gouri.Kali attached Gouri but was saved by Om.Finally, rikara married.
Tensions develop in their married life.She goes missing & came back to OM after one day.Om questions her.

Hope u will like this part.Sorry for typo errors.

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O: where were u gouri, I had searched the whole world for u
G: when ever I come near u, u shout at me ,so y r u angry if I'm not there.
O: when did I say that I'm angry on u?
G:I could see it in ur face .
O: omg, that was because I was tensed that day, thinking of svetu's plans.I was worried about her attacking our family.
G: now also u r angry!!! u r talking angrily to me.
O: come on gouri , can u see only anger on my face? can't u see my love & care for u??

Both were shocked by this; they were seeing each other intensely.Om was embarrassed on his confession.He didn't know how she would take this.But he thought he couldn't hide his feelings any more.

G: so u care for me? but u told that there is no rishtha between us ...
Om kept a finger on her lip & pulled her closer.
O: dont say this anymore, Varna...( soft voice)
G: Varna? ( rolling eyes)
O: ek jhaap de diwar pe sat jaayebe!!!
Gouri slightly smiled.

O: u don't know how much pain I had experienced without knowing ur details.The same fear I had on that day when kali had kidnapped u.I was living on fire; y don't u understand that rather than thinking of useless things?
G: kyun , y did u feel pain( teary eyes)
O: should I say y? haan...U told bhabhi right, when clearly shown, IT need not b expressed in words? should I say more, hmmm???


Gouri smiled thru her tears; she knew what was IT.She was filled with joy.She didn't want to hear it from him but just see it in his eyes.She wanted to give him a tight hug; but no he was not to be left unpunished.She quickly jerked herself.She decided to play with him.

G: leave me, don't touch me .
O: y gouri, don't u like my presence?
G: I won't forgive u because u Have hurt me.( controlling her smile)
O: no gouri, please...don't be ziddy... please...
G: no way nandi!!!
O: should I say sorry?
G: of course
O: no way chiraiyya...OSO is not gonna say sorry. After I have told u this much, u can't do this to me.U r showing taddi.
G: fine, then I'm going back.

Gouri climbed the stairs, took his portrait & her travel bag .She began walking downstairs without looking back.She expected him to call back her; but he didn't.
" man me sanka lag gayi Lanka, I was just kidding him.Did he take it seriously?What if he doesn't call me back? Oho..."


She ran back to room.There she saw a playful Om talking to someone over phone.
" oh thank you dear , ya will u come for party tomorrow.Oh fine, what dinner?"

It was one of his college friend who had called him for a dinner; he thought to refuse it .But as he saw gouri, an evil plan came up in his mind.
"hey jiya, of course dear I will come for dinner tomorrow.Is it candle light? fantastic.No ...I will come alone
My wife is not interested. she is a typical traditional Indian wife, so she doesn't like this.Ya..fine I will pick u up.Bye, buddy"

He could smell something burning; it was gouri's mind of course.Her eyes were red.
G: who was that?
O: hmmm...my college sweetheart.
G: oh so u r going for dinner, right?
without wife?
O: ya..
G: hey you, u r a shadi shuda aadmi.How can u go like that?
O: u r going back right? then what? moreover u don't like all these modern things..
G: oho... so I'm not modern right?

She began taking pillows & throw it to Om.They were running around like kids, by chasing & throwing.Om opened the big window & jumped through it; gouri did the same but her dupatta got stuck in between and she was caught hold by Om.She was in his arms.

Both got aware of their proximity; but this time both were enjoying.They were comfortable in this closeness; in fact they were yearning for this moment for a long time.The sweet breeze blew up both their hairs creating a romantic ambience.Their faces were glowing not only due to moonlight but also due to the new found comfort in each other's presence.They were not hesitant any more.

Om was holding her by her waist; she was looking down & then her eyes shifted to moon.Om was adoring her; he closely moved to her ear & asked her, " how could u draw me?"

She was startled, she didn't have any answer to say to him; but he got his reply from her eyes.She was smiling.

O: don't u want to go back now??
G: oh, so that u can have dinner with her?
O: of course, I had many plans gouri,( pouting)
G: chi...besharam aadmi( she bet him on his arm)
O: not with jiya, but with u.

Her eyes widened.She got herself loose from his grip.She was looking at the moon, holding the railing.Om went inside ,took his portrait & came back.He was enjoying it;he never thought that she had observed his every details like this.
G: waise omkaraji, I ..I was in bareilly!!
Om was amazed; it was true that he hadn't checked bareilly alone since aayi was here.
O: but why gouri???
G: I had gone to an orphanage & old age home of bareilly.I stayed there also for one day.Because on my and my aayi's birthday,we used to go there & spend time with all of them.I do give food & gifts for them with whatever little money I have in my hand.So since it was your birthday, I wanted to go there with you but...u were not talking to me for few days...so I thought not to tell you and go by my own.

Om's eyes were filled; so she considers him as her own.After all she is gouri, she can never hate him.Till now she had forgiven all his mistakes which he had committed; he was her bhagvan.He thought, never in his life he would hurt her in future.Om hugged her from back; he wanted to wash off all his sins by his tears.

Gouri was smiling, she could feel his warmth; the warmth of his love & guilt.She turned back & wiped off his tears; she cupped his face.
" y is birthday boy crying, no.. u r not supposed to cry ok? oh..may b because I didn't forgive u, that's y u r crying .."
O: yes that's y I'm crying.Please gouri...can't u forgive this nandi
G: hmm...let me think, I want to check u for few more days.
O: but I want to check u now!!!

Gouri didn't understand about what checking he was saying.Om took hold of her; he was moving close to her...close to her face.
G: yeh..yeh...yeh sab kya hai..
O: I'm checking u gouri...Y...what happened?

Gouri gasped; she understood his intentions.As Om was about to reach her lips, she turned her face & he kissed on her cheek.

G: chi...ye kya Kare tum.. Omkaraji...I'm feeling michmichi..I've to go...
O: no way gouri, if I leave u now, u will again go somewhere.
G: nahi nahi...pakka...I won't go...Chodiye humhe..( tensed)
O: what about my punishment ( strictly)
G: tum bohot ...sweet hu...cute bhi hu...who can punish u...leave me na...
O: hmmm...no need, I can't believe u...so I'm not leaving u; now I will be punishing u for being angry on ur pati.( he pulled her more closer)
G: nahi...nahi..omkaraji...I won't , never ever leave u in my life...sure...( hugged him with closed eyes)

Om was laughing, hearing her confession.Someone knocked the door.Gouri suddenly opened her eyes & looked a smiling Om.She pretended fake anger, pushed him and opened the door.It was jhanvi & anika.

A: haan... finally...all compromised? could hear someone screaming, I won't leave u ,from this room.Who was that gouri?

Gouri was blushing.She didn't know what to say.

Suddenly Om came to the door
" woh bhabhi, kya hai na..It was the meowing sound of a tiger , who became a cat!!!"

Jhanika were laughing hard, gouri was rolling her eyes at Om.
J: fine gouri,come with us na.We have to do some arrangements for tomorrow.
A: y hurry anty, let them take their own time, hain na Om..
G: ( scared) nahi...didi...I will come with u now itself...abhi bhi..
Jhanika went & gouri was about to follow them.Suddenly she was pulled back by Om.

O: ( whispered to her) pagli chiraiyya, jaldi aa jao na!!! Some more punishment is left,ok???

Gouri slipped from his hold & just ran away.Both had a hearty laugh, thinking about all their moments.

Precap:- special surprise on Om's birthday party!!!!

Hope u guys liked this, scroll down for next...😉


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Hi all,moving on to next.Hope u will like this.

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Jhanvi could notice a special glow in gouri's face after her return; she was happy for them.
J: gouri beta, r u fine?
G: bilkul maaji.
J: how is Om's attitude towards u.
G:( shyly) he is also happy maaji.
J: I know , anika told me everything about the past few day's incidents.I'm sorry on behalf of Om..
G: nahi maaji, aisa mat kaho.I know he didn't say all those intentionally, it was the situations.
J: he had a very tough time all these years.But his very own strength & weakness was his love towards me.I know that.He has only experienced love from me & shivru.Now it is u who have to lead him to the right path; to give him courage to overcome all his dark past.I know u might get hurt in this process but remember, he will never ever hurt u intentionally again.He loves u so much; I have seen that in all these days.
G: mujhe pata hai maaji.I was very insecure when v had started life for 2nd time; I was unsure about his feelings.But now I know that I have a place in his heart; it is enough for me.I'm always there with him to share everything & face anything.I will never allow any bad shade to cover him in future.This is my promise.

The saas- bahu shared a hug.But at the same time, someone hearing all this was resolving in mind to destroy rikara's life!!!!!!

As gouri came back to room, she saw a sleeping Om on the bed; he had slept waiting for gouri.She gently stroked his hair, covered him with blanket and herself slept on the couch...

The most special morning had arrived.As Om opened his eyes.he saw shivru on both sides of the bed, happily wishing him.They had a beautiful moment out there.Both kissed Om on his both cheeks & shared a tight hug.

R: waise O, how old r u now.
Sh: ( slapped him)Chup rudra, r u asking him his age on birthday?
R: bhaiyya, I want to know his age so that I can give him that many no: of gifts to Him ( logic sign)
O: shivay, rudra this family is the greatest gift that I have got. Specially u both( crying)
R: Come on O, don't become senti...then I will cry & my make up might b spoilt.
Sh: yew...rudra... talking like teenage girls...
Anyway, come on Om get ready fast & come down,ok?

Om slowly stood up from the bed; he wanted to see gouri.He saw her blanket on the couch & was sad that she had to sleep on the couch yesterday.The staff brought tea to the room; it was special glucose wali chai but he wanted it from gouri.Reluctantly, he went to washroom...

As he scanned the hall, his eyes were searching for gouri.He couldn't find her; he badly wanted her glance.
As they sat b4 the perfectly arranged breakfast table, all were seated.Anika was serving, she called out for gouri.

& there came gouri holding a glass of musambi juice for Om.As their eyes met, they were talking to each other thru eyes.

Jhanvi made gouri to sit with Om; gouri was overwhelmed with emotions.She had wished for this long ago.Gouri was serving Om with everything he need; it was indeed a sight to watch this lovely couple.

After breakfast, Om took the blessings of all elders.He turned back on seeing Tej; but gouri signalled him with eyes.So Om took the blessings of Tej too; dadi was happy.

In the evening, there was a small party for Om in the garden side.He received many gifts from all; but after the gift session, he presented his portrait done by gouri as his most special gift.All the guests were amazed & envious seeing this talented& beautiful duo.


It was almost 8 pm.Om took gouri out for a surprise .They reached the same old hotel; he noticed her face dropping down.Gouri didn't say anything to him as she didn't want to make him desp.

As they entered inside, another couple was waiting for him.
O: gouri this is my friend jiya & her husband.
G: the one to whom u talked yesterday.
O: ya, she had invited both of us for dinner, I was simply kidding you.
G: omkaraji..tu na...( fake anger)
O: ka hua patniji...( laughing)
Both the couple had some good time chatting & later moved into separate tables for dinner.

O: hey gouri, did u ask anything about me to jiya?
G: no...but she told me.
O: what..what did she tell ?
G: oh..I won't say those...
O: ok, fine...(pouting)
G: woh omkaraji, she told everything good about you.U were a nice boy, then...u were a good artist &...
O: and???
G: aur...u were the dream boy of college...
O: oho...did my chiraiyya become jealous?
G: (angry)kyun...I'm not jealous... because I know that you r only mine na..( she bites her tongue)
O: hey... what did u say gouri? I didn't hear clearly...say once again.
G: hmm...no...kuch nahi.

Om liked this side of gouri; finally she is coming out of the shell.

O: gouri, do u remember our last visit to this place?

She didn't expect this , but was calm & composed.
Om mentally gave himself a slap for asking that question; he wanted to make the mood light.

O: I wouldn't forget, becoz I got to see my dabbang gouri that day.What an answer u gave to that lady!!!
G: woh...galti tumhari hai.
O: what did I do?
O: when she insulted me, u could have asked her . Since u remained silent, I had to respond ( angrily)

Om was feeling guilty;she had expected support from her husband,she isn't wrong.

O: gouri, I know I did a mistake.
.I , I'm sorry.I kept quiet as they were our guests; not because I ignored u.

Gouri didn't mean it like that; she felt sad that she accused him.

G: this is all purani baat omkaraji.I know u r a good pati; I didn't mean that u should have shouted at her.Even I would have kept quiet; but that situation made me to do so.Actually I was not in a good mood for many days; your absence during that time had really affected me.I knew that u were busy in work; but that loneliness was unbearable for me
I tried to divert my mind to other things; but it was a failure.I really longed to spend some time with u.When I came here & saw a large group, I felt disappointed.

Her eyes were being teary; Om noticed.He touched her hands on the table giving an assuring look.

O: I now understand ur pain gouri; even I faced the same situation after our fight, when u were upset with me.Specially when u went to bareilly.

It was being emotional; Om wanted to change the atmosphere.
O: waise gouri, u r lieing!!
G:kyun omkaraji ?
O: now u told that u badly wanted me with u.But yesterday, u suddenly jumped & went with bhabhi, ignoring me( pouting)
G: oh...that was because...
O: because u don't like my presence!!!

He was trying to ignite her.
G: what r u saying omkaraji, I had always wanted to spend time with you,sit with u, talk with u...
She didn't notice what she was saying.

O: oh bte ki, u want to do all these.But whenever I come near you, you push me away...Not fair gouri..
G: nahi nahi omkaraji...aaj se, I won't push u away when u come near me. I won't stop what ever u r doing.

His eyes glittered with a naughty smile.
O: pakka.
G: bilkul pakka.
He took her hand& brushed the knuckles; she was feeling tensed.
O: pakka ,gouri?
G: haan...(she was trembling, she had fell on her own words!!)

He gently raised the hand & kissed on it.

O: is it a pakka now?( naughtily)
G: omkaraji...tum bhi na...bohot...
O: bohot cute hai na?? Mujhe pata ( smirking)

She smiled, which lit up his face too.
Even though words were finished, they were still speaking thru their eyes.


Precap:- you can guess it, love in the air!!!!!

Hey guys, I am not good in romantic scenes I guess..However I don't want to give usual rom moments for rikara; I'm definitely trying for a different level, coz they do deserve it.Hope u would have understood this from chap 22& 23.I do hope I can keep the expectations.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Rikara ki Angel ... I love you Shradhha ... Haaye Omie ke bday celebrations ... Tensed Kara romantic Kara ... Now I am very happy that they are opening up to each other ... You even gave us an obro moment 😳 and then romantic Kara ... It is so genuine of him to take her to the same restaurant and apologize ... I loved the jiya angle also 😳 ...
I am waiting for the next update

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