LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018 - Page 58

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hello! thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! superbly written! Geet was annoyed with the stranger! he teases her! she is angry! bt surprised n happy seeing its Jai! Jai n Geet share a lovely bond! update soon


yeah they too thanks for the comment
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry for been late again
thanks for the note
and yes I'm eagerly waiting to see who this guy is that is following Geet and why is he following her
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice finished all pt
geet here to prove ACP jairak innocence
maan and guatam helping hr
and she living with jairaj's wife
jai also came and annoying geet
but soon he told he's jai wrn geet
start beating him
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

nice finished all pt

geet here to prove ACP jairak innocence
maan and guatam helping hr
and she living with jairaj's wife
jai also came and annoying geet
but soon he told he's jai wrn geet
start beating him



Thanks for the comment dear...


I am glad you liked my story
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

Superb update
Oh is its jai n he doesn't know about jairaj n his case
Loved how jai pulled geet leg n their bond




Thanks Insaneniyu for liking it...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nakh5683

Lovely update geet was buying Bangles when a guy started to trouble her and geet was in full sherni avatar and it turns out to be Jai her brother in disguise he is on a training here on a case that's why all dressed up and thought to look around but he bumped into geet and start his experiment on her he was teasing geet when someone punched him I have a feeling it's definitely maan that's why geet is angry




Thanks nakh5683... Welll its upto writer's choice but jayda nhi tadpa paungi...😛😛😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Ash1991

superb part...

i was right its jai...love the sibling bond...
waiting for next part...



Thak you Ash1991 Glad you like it...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Risingsun626

Thanks for pm. Nice update. Yeah i guessed it right to be jai, her brother in disguise. Their interaction is wonderful n lovable. They are so close to each other. But again u give next puzzle. Someone punch jai in face and this time i guess him to be his mentor who ever he may be who misunderstood him or it can be jealous maan or insecure brother gautam. I think they all are tough nuts. Hehehehe

Waiting for next.




Welll... Hahaahaha... You introduced everyone here to guess the secod oe Mentor part i haven't thought i think i should change the storyline...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jashu08

Lovely update. . That stranger s jai geet brother who annoyed geet.. Lovely bonding between brother and sister.. Jai will help in case if he comes to know. . Thank you so much for translation.. Thanks for the pm buddy


Jai is not that much icluded he is there but not i case he too small to taake part but in near future may be i will make his presence more...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vj3072

Ila thanks a lot for the translation ...had hard time understanding Hindi dialogue, only 5% can thanks to Hindi serial learning bit by bit 😉



glad you learning lolzzz dont worry you will learn it soon its not that difficult😃

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