Rikara ff: When she coloured my canvas!!! Pg 29 ( 21 Aug) - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

bhai waaahhh kya baaatt hai...m a bengali so Fatafati chapter!!!!


OM is nearly broken...n its good gauri given cold shoulder to Om only that OM could learn something...
its brilliant to see OM have feeling fr her...bt cant say...they paint together...wooww



see this painting...is this the painting Rikara painted






Of course yaar, the same one...


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit





Of course yaar, the same one...


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m following...pls give the next 2 chappy today soonn...m loveing it dear...apni is reader ko smjhna...n acha acha post dena...n itna jaldi khatam nt krna
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Posted: 8 years ago
You're amazing yaar! Love this fiction of yours!!
Do everyone else in d household including Surya know that RiKara are married?! Anyway its a delight to watch them plotting to unite Om-Gauri!!
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Originally posted by: sreekailas

You're amazing yaar! Love this fiction of yours!!
Do everyone else in d household including Surya know that RiKara are married?! Anyway its a delight to watch them plotting to unite Om-Gauri!!


They didn't know it initially but later oberois will inform thwm for executing the plan
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Hi all this is the next chap.
Hope u would like this, sorry for typo errors.

Check 1st page for index.

Colour 12

Recap:- Anika and gouri r part of Jodhpur royal family.Om came to know the truth. Gouri is getting a marriage proposal from her bua's son.

Few days later...

Om was getting ready. Today is a special day; but not really special for him. Om is gonna marry again, on everyone's insistence. He is going to meet his would be today.He wasn't interested at all; in fact he was. doing this only to satisfy his mom.He was wearing his suit; suddenly he remembered gouri. She was the one who would always make his dress ready for each and every meeting he had.He never liked it at that time; but now he was missing her. He smiled thinking about all her antics.

She had taken back every belongings b4 going to Jodhpur.Only her anklet remained here; the one she wore on jagratha & the one which he didn't return.

He always had that old picture of gauri which he had sketched even b4 meeting her. He always used to see it when ever he thought of her. He was really confused with his feelings; he had decided not to have any feelings for any girl due to his past.But this was..he didn't know y he was doing this.

Anika suddenly entered his room and saw a lost Om. He was started when she called him.
A: kuch gadbad hai, om..
O: wo...wo.. kuch nahi bhabhi.
A: y do u lie Om? I know u r not happy?
O: haan bhabhi, I don't want to marry again
A: gouri ??
O: nahi nahi bhabhi... I
not because of her Y should I ..it was not a proper shaadi..I'm not really interested...that's all
A: r u sure? shaadi was not proper. But pyar..
O: nahi bhabhi, I don't have those feelings. But I'm guilty... I had done injustice to her.. that's it..
A: fine , now u just come. V r getting late.
O: haan bhabhi...
She went down.

Om looked at the mirror. He was thinking about their shaadi in bareilly. Somehow he wasn't able to forget her.

The oberois reached their hotel in the city. Since it was their own hotel, it was totally booked for them
No outsiders except oberois & other family were there.

The oberois were sitting in the hall. Shivika took Om to the poolside. Om asked them about the girl's family. They told him to 1st meet the girl & then the family.

As they moved forward, he could see a girl facing the pool. She was wearing a pink stone worked designer sari; but Om's mind was filled with gouri only. He was restless . Shivika noticed this and smiled.

As they moved forward, the girl turned back. Om was flabbergasted as it was GOURI.He thought he was dreaming; he was feeling heavy due to happiness.

Gouri was equally surprised. She hadn't expected Om to b here. She knew she was coming in Mumbai, but hadn't expected this moment.

Both of them wanted to share a hug, but both were hesitant thinking what the other person would think.

RIKARA questioningly looked shivika.
A: S, both the families have decided to do ur shaadi.
Both were shocked. They were happy in their mind but something still kept them backing off.
S: we know in which circumstances u had married. There were many confusions between both. Now that all is cleared, u should try giving one more chance.
V r not forcing u both, because shaadi is not joining of 2 individuals but eventually their heart. V know that both of u have some feelings for each other. Just try to sort out ur problems and try to give a new start. It's all up to u. Come anika.

Shivika went off and now only rikara were there. Both were restless, but still they were, inside, enjoying each other's presence.
" Did u miss me?" , both asked together.
O: gouri, ur marriage was fixed with Surya right?
G: not at all,Om after all he was like a brother to me. Even he considered me like that.
Om was relieved, so it was all their plan, he thought.
G: r u still angry at me?
O: y gouri?
G: no, because u had to come here because of me.
Om was actually happy, but he didn't say this.
G: I know u were not interested in our marriage back in bareilly.
O: yes it's true. I thought I would never marry, because I can never a girl anymore in my life.
Gouri was sad hearing this.
O: gouri , r u ready to marry me?
G: I...I don't know. Of course I'm thankful to u. For saving me, my mom, for giving me back my family.

Even Om was sad. How can he expect an yes from her, after all this tortures.He wondered, he wasn't interested in shaadi, but his mind was yearning to hear an yes from her. But he knew she wouldn't

G: what about you Omkaraji?
O: woh...main.. actually my mom and buama , they want me to do this.

Gouri thought, so he is doing this only for them. It's ok, I'm not that good to be loved by him, may be.

But both were unaware about each other's thought.

O: what ...is ur decision gouri...
G: I'm afraid omkaraji
O: kyun?
G: because...what if something negative like before happens again??
Om was shocked. He knew that she is insecure about his attitude. She is not to be blamed; because he had tortured her to that limit. But he felt happy that she had atleast opened this much to him.

O: gouri I need to tell u onething. Whatever ur decision is, I will accept. But I'm asking u for an apology. Please don't see me as an evil.I know I have made u cry a lot. I don't want to hurt anyone. I didn't do it purpose fully. It was all due to those situations. I know that I'm the reason of this insecurity, I agree. But please please don't hate me. I wouldn't b able to gear this.

Gouri couldn't bear to see Om crying. How can she hate him.
She moved closer to him and holded his hands.


Both were just looking into each other's eyes. They didn't speak, but their eyes could speak.Both of them were reading each other's minds thru their eyes. Gouri was consoling him silently.

She wiped his tears; he was shocked. He asked her...

O: gouri , I...
Gouri was anxious!!!
O: I...( hesitant) v cab b friends na?
Gouri was expecting something else; she was bit disappointed. But then she smiled and asked him
G: u want chulbul or gouri??

Both laughed. Suddenly their families entered to the pool area.

All were happy,
A: so chutki, is it a yes??
She just smiled looking at Om.
R: oh come on bhabhi, what is there to ask now??it's a double yes, haina chulbul bhabhi?
A:are rudra, kya pagalpan naam hai yeh,?
R: oh bhabhi, today is my day. For the first time , my plan had found its success.

Rikara were shockingly looking at Rudy.

R:O, u r the one who used to call me dumb bell. Now u see how smartly I had trapped u( logic sign)

O: rudra, come back to home ok??

Both the dadis were happy. They were hugging and blessing rikara .Tejvi were also happy; they blessed gouri.
It was a beautiful moment for both families...

It was night. RIKARA were in their homes. Both were watching the moon . Om was seeing gouri & gouri was seeing Om in the moon.They were confused..

Because both had decided to say a no for the upcoming marriage, b4 knowing whom they are gonna meet.

But after seeing each other, each one's heart was yearning for a positive reply from the opposite person.They were confused as to y they agreed for shaadi like this. They were remembering all their moments from the very first meeting; they had seen each other in dreams even b4 their first meeting. They felt totally strange.

Both were very much engrossed in each other's thought.But the moon, stars and the breeze only knew their minds.

They could witness the commitment phobia of Om on relations and the insecure feelings of gouri on her married life with him.They were very anxious on their future; but still both of them longed for each other's presence in their life.

The nature just smiled at both of them as they knew that these 2 r gonna a lead a most beautiful life ahead in future.

Precap:- all of u r invited to the pre marriage rasams of RIKARA!!!!


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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi all, here is the next
Colour 13


Rikara's sagai was done. The marriage was after 1 month. All the rasams were planned to be conducted in the palace and the marriage in Mumbai. As this marriage was to be a centre of attraction of public, all the arrangements were made to be perfect. Anika was in charge of arrangements of both sides. As she was part of both families, she had kept assistances too to manage the work.
Both gouri and Om were busy this time. Gouri had started taking classes from a tutor whereas Om was busy with business and his artworks.

In all these months, shivika and Om used to visit the palace in every weekend.Even though Rikara had not opened up their feelings, they used to communicate each other through their passion - Art. Everytime Om came , he used to take classes for gouri and they used to talk a lot about art. He even taught her some lessons of sculpting .

But day by day, both were becoming closer to each other even though they only used to see rarely. Slowly, they were coming out of their shells; but still something kept them away from opening up their feelings. They were afraid as to what the other person would think.

Anika reached Jodhpur palace ,1 week b4 the wedding. She wanted to do all arrangements for of her chutki by her own hand.She was so excited for the marriage.Even though shivay couldn't bear her sending away for 1 week, she insisted on going.

Now, the whole oberoi family reached the palace for the rasams. Everyone were astonished by the decorations and celebrations of the Royal family.

Rikara were also very excited, but they didn't show it.Already both were being teased by all family members, specially by Rudy.

Gouri was in her room. She was there to welcome everyone, but did not get the chance to talk to Om.She was about to take some of her art stuff from the top of her big wardrobe. It was unreachable for her. As she was about to climb a stool, she saw Om coming
Her heart beats were raising; she wondered y.
O: hmm.hai gauri.Didnt see u downstairs.
Gauri was a bit naughty.
G : I'm upstairs na, then how will u see me downstairs??
Om was astonished.Gauri already climbed the stool.
O:hey just move. I will help you.
G: ( attitude)oh, I don't need anyone's help. I know to do it by my own.
O: ok fine.Anyway I'll be there here to catch u if u fall down.
Gouri was tensed.
G: no it's not needed. I will manage.

But as she was about to take it, she almost slipped from the stool and she fell down hitting her back.Om was laughing seeing this.

G: ouch, what type of a man r u? Couldn't u have helped me?
O: ( laughing) come on gouri, u told u don't need any help Na?
Gouri was irritated.After some time Om gave her a hand, but she refused. But Om took her in his arms.

Gouri was shocked.He kept her in the bed and tended her leg. But she was having back pain.She couldn't apply the balm alone. Both were confusedly looking each other. This is when shivika entered.

Sh: ( coughed) anika I think instead of pre wedding rasams, v r having pre wedding romance.

Rikara were embarrassed.
O:wo..shivay, actually she fell down and I was helping her.
A: oh..so filmy romance haan??
G: nahi didi, darsal he didn't catch me when I fell.He was laughing.
Sh: that was so mean Om.
O:oh come on guys, just stop this. Now anika please help her to put some balm on her back; she has back pain.
A: y Om, u could have did na? after all u r already pati patni.

Gouri was rolling her eyes at her didi.
She was continuously watching Om who went out of the room and smiled.

It was the haldi day.Haldi for Om and gouri were done in different floors of the palace. Gouri had specially made some kheer for Om, she knew Om didn't like sweets but this was their custom.

She saw that all were busy with work. So she herself decided to give this to Om.As she approached Om's room she saw a very funny view.

Om was struggling to wear his kurta
He had inserted it but it was stuck by halfway; his face was inside the kurta.

O: hey rudra, just help me out yaar. Actually I slipped and fell down here and my right hand is sprained , I'm not able to wear this.

Gouri thought of helping him as she saw rudra downstairs.She didn't speak & Om didn't see her as his face was inside the kurta.

O: come on first help to take this outside. I wore this in the wrong way.

Gouri was tensed, Some how she removed the kurta. Om was relieved after coming out of it; but was utterly shocked seeing gouri.Ge didn't say anything.He was actually happy.

Gouri turned to go, but Om grabbed her by her wrist.
O: ( softly) help me to wear this gouri...

Gouri was tensed, she had never did this even during chulbul days; but she made him sit on the bed and slowly helped him to wear the kurta.Om was simply looking gouri; he felt very happy at this moment. He thought how happy I will b if she is there with me in my whole life.

Gouri gave him the kheer & told him.
" I know u don't like sweets but it is our custom. The bride should give bridegroom on the day of the first rasams so that all the rasams would become sweet for both. "

Om took the bowl from her and ate 3 spoons . Gouri hadn't expected this ; she was happy. She wished that Om's future life would b as sweet as the kheer.
" Omkaraji, I will send u some medicine to apply on ur hand.Please get ready fast." She went down saying this.R Rudy was watching all these

Rudra entered Om's room and began teasing her.

R: 8th wonder if the world. Mr.artist ate kheer for the first time.
O: it's their custom Rudy...
R: but still u ate thus kheer na? That is chulbul bhabhi's magic. Ha, O u r going to become a paraya mard hai na?
O: duffer, shut up!!!
R: do u know something like, without this Duffer's help u would have never eat this kheer ok?
O: I'm gonna kill u rudra...
& there goes the fight...

It was haldi time. Both the bride and groom had haldi on different places as men were not allowed to see women's haldi.

In between the rasam, somehow Om managed to move out and went in search of a tap in the garden. He just wanted to wash out the whole thing. Gouri who was walking to her room, saw Om in the garden from the top floor. She immediately went to the garden.
G: omkaraji, tumhe kuch chahiye?
O: wo...I need to wash this off
G: par rasam is not yet finished.
O: ya that is y I came out, other wise I've gone to the room.

Gouri led him to the tap in the garden.But it was difficult for Om to keep the hose and clean at the same time since his right hand was sprained.So gouri opened the tap and water came out from the hose.

But something was going on in her mind. She suddenly increased the speed and ejected the water to Om.She was continuously spraying water on him and laughing. Om was shouting to stop this, but she didn't.

Suddenly he grabbed her by her waist . The hose now fell down from gouri and the oozing water was wetting her now.

An awkward silence was followed. Gouri never thought that a playful moment would turn into something like this. Both were wet and they were aware about that. They were so close to each other.Both were scanning each other's wet form . Suddenly gouri came to her senses and pushed him but Om stopped her.
" Can u help me in cleaning this?" his voice was so soft. She felt a heat in her cheeks.

Om was surprised, he thought" Oh God y am I behaving like this? What is happening to me when she is coming close?"

Gouri thought for a moment. He can't do this alone as his hand is sprained.So she took the hose and slowly sprayed water. She began cleaning his face.

As her hands began touching his forehead , his nose, then his stubble Om was just melting.H er little fingers were actually tracing all his features.This was new to both.
He never thought he would have this sort of feeling when she does this. Slowly her hand moved to his neck, she could feel his throbbing pulse.

His kurta was a bit open. Gauri nearly shivered when her hand moved down past his neck, even him.

Both were lost in some other world. Om suddenly caught both her hands. She gasped.She was breathing heavily. She didn't want to show her blushing face so she lowered her face.

But Om slowly raised her face up.He wanted to see her blushing face.

" Gouri, thanks for the sweet. U r the first one to feed me a sweet in all these years. The kheer was so tasty."

Gouri felt bliss.She was so happy to hear this.She was simply staring him to see those lovely eyes.

But soon someone called gouri ; she just pushed him away and went into the palace, smiling. Even Om was smiling seeing her antics.

Precap: - what?? a hurdle in rikara marriage?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wonderful ff. Loved all parts together

Rikara haldi washing was sooo romantic. Gauri blushing and om melting..ufff... 😳

They both have feelings have for each other but are hesitant to confess. 'Andekhi anjaani kya yeh mohabbat hai'

Precap tensed me don't know what hurdle is gonna come.

Thanks for pm please continue soon. Waiting for the canvas to get filled with another colour
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome Loved it
both have feelings for each other but don't accept it
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Posted: 8 years ago
These chapters were a great to read!!!
For the part 12 I want to do 'ek jhaap mein deewar pe sat jaibe' to both of them for acting like such fools! Concealing their own emotions being scared of the other ones reactions! But I can't b really angry at them.. Coz its natural to behave like that when ur not sure about ur position in d other one's life. But part 13... I'm still dreaming!
They are such cuties.. N their romance..
Upar se, om sprained his hand and is always in need of help!!! Air kya Bahama chahiye romance keliye?!! If rasams n the romance in b/w are going to b like this, I want more of them!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yesterday i read all the colors of your ff dear
And it was amazing experience to read
Each and every color described emotionaly
Each and every color is perfect
Superb updates👏
Back to the update.. color 12 and 13 are also amazing
Finaly rudy's plan worked and they accept marriage perposal😳
But what about precap😲
Can't wait update soon

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