Not all Roses Ss Sukor up pg54

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Chapter 1:- The makeover

"I can't Bhagya!! These night clubs and stuffs are just not my department and see i still have to study for my finals" She tried to poke sense in her bestfriend's mind who was soo determined to have her enjoy a last time

"Chakor this is the last chance for all to see you are not boring, for once just once let go of your boring self and ENJOY" her bestfriend Bhagya yelled at her

True was her words, She was Chakor Bhuvan , the nerdiest of them all , she was a scholarship business student , she had a part time job at a lawyer's cabin.she was smart and hardworking but it seemed like God had fail to insert the fun nerve in her. While she stayed in the good books of every teachers, she failed to make good friends and impression on the other students except for Bhagya who was her roommate , all thought of her being a stuck up nerdy girl and all glory went to her sister Imli

Imli was not only beautiful but she was popular , she knew how to dress to look appealing, make use of make up , make friends and stay interesting

She took a look at her bestfriend's face who were making puppy eyes at her then back at her books, it was the toughest decision she ever had had to make

"Fine" She muttered with a sigh knowing she'll probably regret it later , wait scratch that , knowing she will for sure regret it later, she winced as her friend squealed loud

"Great awesome!!! now shoo off to the bathroom get yourself a good relaxing bath while i set your clothes" she added gleefully clapping her hands

"What???? No way i am letting you do that" She glared at her an ectastic Bhagya, allowing herself to leave her books sanctum was bad enough to let Bhagya dress her up and knowing her bestfriend , she might just be the next barbie doll in history

"I knew! I just knew it!" Bhagya pouted sitting on the bed sadly directing her gaze to the floor

"Knew what???" She was smart enough to know it was one of her bestfriend's dramaqueen stunt but she could only wish to not fall into it like she always did

"i knew you never trusted me , had imli been insisting for you to wear her taste of dress ,you'd no doubt agree"

She made an I-knew-it face Sighing once again before giving in her words, not wanting to be anymore emotional blackmailed she turned to the washroom not before gazing at Bhagya whose glumy face was long gone as she devilishly emptied her wardrobe

She stepped out of the shower looking at herself in the mirror , why wasn't she like other girls? why couldn't she enjoy easily? , oh yeah , it was because she was from a middle class family , she was given all before Imli's birth but after she had to act as a grown up , she couldn't rely on her parents who were actually busy with imli and their job , she was taught to be responsible at very young age , this was one reason she'd never allow her parents to stress about her, she wrapped a towel around herself leaving the bathroom

"What is this??????" she yelled at Bhagya , looking at the dress which laid on her bed

"it's what you will wear tonight and please Chakor before you argue on it , it's just one night please wear it i promise i will never ever ever ask you anymore favor , never i swear" this was always what she would say but God knew and she herself did Bhagya's never ever actually never ever came

She paused examining the dress again , it was a short black sequin dress which went off one shoulder and cross straps with a full sleeve on the other shoulder , she never ever wore such a thing, infact she'd always wear kurtis and jeans, reluctantly she wore the dress and suddenly felt exposed , she was nothing like her sister, skinny , she was infact curvy but at the right places and this dress actually hugged her curves out giving her another look , she opened her long hairs ,they were straight and curly towards the end

She pinned some of her front hair strands back leaving the rest open resting her shoulder "Where are you going with those???" She yelled backing towards the wall , no way she was having that curling iron close to her and those make up brushes

"Bhagya i am not over doing it"

"Fine!!! But atleast just some powder and lipsticks!" She grinned at her childishly

Once done with all the insisting and argument about make up , she looked at herself in the mirror , it felt soo strange she almost felt unknown to the girl staring at her in the mirror , she smiled at her look for once though strange she felt normal , not like she was supposed to be responsible or mature , like a normal 22 years old who had every rights to enjoy

She turned hugging her bestfriend "Thank you Bhagya!!!" who gladly hugged her back

She was not confident about the club but she somehow felt a rush of excitement stirred in her

Once bhagya was ready they headed towards the club which were around 100 metres away their campus

"Bhagya it feels soo alien" She winced watching all the people who rushed in and out the club , some drunk , some making out in corners , girls screaming squealing , boys brofisting each other , it was a completely different scenerio for her

"I know now chill and behave normal , we'll meet the others at the entrance" She said before biting her tongue

"others????" She asked all puzzled , wondering if she misheard something

"Chakor ...actually...My bro and their friends will be here too" she quickly added

"okay subtitles please?" she stayed calm

"My brothers and their friends wil be here too" This time she was slow and clear but still she sounded terrifying to Chakor

"What????? and how come you'd not tell me that earlier" She yelled , Bhagya's brothers were the Rajvanshi , damn she couldn't help but facepalm herself

"I am sorry okay??? its just that i knew you would never agree to come if you knew"

"Obviously Bhagya , your brothers hate me , ever since i told the teachers about them bunking detentions and worst of all one of them are dating Imli , remember imli my little sister , if they'll be here so will Imli " she was exaperated , every positive feeling she had for the night were thrown out of the window

Her accounting professor had asked her to look after the detention students back in highschool and if she failed to do it properly it would have had costed her few marks less in accounting for others few marks would have costed nothing but for her it might have pulled off her entire scholarship , she had no choice but since then they failed no chance to taunt her and pick up at her , even her sister stopped talking to her

"It was soo highschool Chakor forget about it" She placed a hand on Chakor's shoulder knowing her bestfriend has had a tough time dealing with her brothers and their friends bullying on top of that her sister's participation din't help it at all

"You know its soo not they still call me..."

"Jagat Mata!!??" A rude yet confused tone interupted the two bestfriends

It was as if the mother of all coincidence were tagging along with them , Chakor pursed her lips together looking back at bhagya with an i-told-you-so look

"Enough Suraj!!" Bhagya scolded standing infront of her brother , they were twins but they had nothing in common , while her elder brother well elder by 3 mins were rude , arrogant , she was a lot sweeter and compassionate

Chakor wrapped her hands around herself feeling Suraj's gaze at her

"Whats up with the ugly duckling? why is she dressed like that covered with tacky make up?" He asked all disgustedly

She closed her eyes feeling well acquainted with the awful words he had had thrown at her in past but much to his displease she'd never break down infront of him

"Well the ugly duckling thinks whatever she does is not of the arrogant bighead's business" she spatted angrily before turning only to meet up with her sister all clinged up in her boyfriend Vivaan's arm

"Really didi??? He's my bestfriend atleast for that sake you should give him some respect" Imli looked down at her sister disgustedly "and what the hell are you wearing??"

There goes all her confidence but then she looked what Imli wore , a little tight red dress which screamed 'dress to seduce'

"not sure about what i am wearing but what the hell are you wearing???" She retorted back

"Enough!!! lets just go inside before the night end in arguments" Bhagya interupted the whole thing before things turned nasty

She entered the club again feeling out of place , she wasn't the one into drink and dance

"Come on Chakor lets go and dance" Bhagya offered her hand to her but she din't know how to dance , not wanting to make a fool out of herself she declined and sat on a chair by the bar counter watching her friend swing at the music beat

"Hey beautiful what should i serve you??" a husky manly voice interupted her trail of thought , she turned to the source , there was a guy wearing the bartender uniform , on a second thought he was pretty handsome she recognized

"Do you have hot milk" Another person answered before she could but then she dint have to budge to see who was he

She looked at the bartender whose expression changed drastically , "what do you suggest goood and non-alcoholic here?" she asked ignoring Suraj's presence

The bartender leant over the bar counter taking a curious look again at her face smirking "cuddles on the beach" he answered

Flustered by his suggestion she bit her lips trying to pull herself far from the bar counter , by doing that it did confirm to the bartender she was no doubt an innocent one

He left a chuckle before continuing , "It's a mocktail beautiful, relax , i'll just serve you" He sent a genuine smile towards her before moving to his job

But that surely din't help her blushy cheeks to retain its natural color

"Who would have thought i'd survive to see The Chakor flirting with a bartender?" He said taking a seat besides her

"I wasn't flirting and should i repeat myself , whatever i do is not your business , why don't you just go irritate someone else because it clearly doesn't work on me" She glared at him , Suraj never failed to irritate her beyond fits

"Oh yeah i forgot , who will be even interested in an ugly duckling? are you sure you're Imli's real sister?? i doubt your parents picked you up somewhere around" He uttered sarcastically watching her grow red with anger , they were practically in the same school , same high school but he never noticed her not until she ditched them and complained to their teacher which did earn him a week of suspension and a month deprived from his bike , pocket money and phone

On a second thought Chakor wasn't ugly and he could clearly see that , eversince he saw her tonight , he could see she had a body and looks which could drive any guy crazy but he had already fell for a girl who danced in her brother's arm at the moment so wise decision would be to continue bullying his Jagat mata

His words were hurtful , no she wasn't adobted , she was the daughter of her parents but true , perhaps Imli was prettier among the two for having had all her parent's attention after her birth , she knew it wasn't true , it wasn't about beauty but she was younger she needed that love and care more than Chakor did , feeling her head filled with the negativity Suraj filled her , she turned and found her Order had been served , in a go she grabbed the glass and gulped down the drink , ignoring the momentary burn of her throat

She looked the glass again , it did taste good but why did burn down her throat , "I want this again" She asked another bartender who gladly served her

After 40 minutes and five drinks she kept on insisting for the same drink but she stopped as a drunk suraj's laughters reach to her ears

"You nutcase why ...the hell are you laughing!!" she slurred but kept her glare constant at him wishing in a corner of her mind to castrate his balls or perhaps hang him by hs balls

"Sunlo Gaon walon , the Jagat Mata , The pet of every teacher , the nerdiest of them all is... Drunk" he announced laughing louder much to Chakor's displease but she frownd wondering the heck was he talking

"Idiot!!!!! Stupid!!! I always knew you had an IQ level below than zero and today you proved it" She pulled the glass against her cheeks pressing it as if hugging it and continued " this cuddly yummy content is ...Cuddles on the beach" she smiled victoriously at him but soon her smile vanished as his laughters din't cease

"Oh my God , cuddly yummy content ...cuddle...is not...it's Pina colada, the drink you see me , i ordered for myself , it's far away from cuddly and non-acoholic , it has 2 and a half part of rum in it" he flicked her head as he ended

She dropped the glass quickly on the counter , placing her free hand on her mouth , eyes growing wide open fixing itself on Suraj, her dizzy head was one proof he was not lying she was indeed tipsy , well perhaps more than tipsy

"Jerk , moron , but you see the plan clearly failed , i am not drunk" she hiccupped as she ended talking clearly showing off her lie, his laughters made her want to throw him in a pit filled with hot lava

"Whatever floats your boat" he said ordering for more whiskey

Knowing her state would not be beneficiary for her to fight, she stayed quiet but still keeping her glare at Suraj wishing her eyes had some kind of superpower which will cause him to reduce into ashes by just glaring but it din't happen , minutes apart the loud music caused her head to throb , suraj continued drinking and her mouth felt glued by staying quiet

"Why do you even hate me???? for highschool days????but thats sooo years ago" she broke the silence whining , but true to her words she was never too sure why did Suraj hate her

"Because , you are the witch who jinxed my happiness" He said holding his glass away from his lips

"How did i do that??? Enlighten me please oh great sage"

"you took away my closest one , youuu" he poked his index finger in her arm which she quickly retracted

"Dumb , stay away and talk i dont want you drunkard touching me inappropriately" she did pull away but she was confuse what did he mean by she took away his close one , "The heck are you saying i took ????"

It was then she noticed his attention wasn't directed to her , he had this puppy struck lovely dreamy look plastered over his face , she followed his gaze and found it fall on ...The heck??????

"Hawww Holy mother nature!!Howw could you?????" She yelled dragging her chair closer to him scrutinizing his visual expression again to confirm hee doubt but yes

He pulled his attention to a shocked Chakor , his sight felt blurry for a moment, he shook his head "How could i what????? did you finally lose your sanity??" He asked sarcastically

"Nopesss But I am going to announce to the world the most biggest news ever!!!" She announced slurily , standing on her feet confusing Suraj harder , what on earth was she upto

"What news?????" He questioned not having enough senses to think straight

Without turning and keeping her eye fixed on a certain dancing couple she answered "That...somee...one...isss...fantasying his own brother'ss girlfrienddd" She spoke stretching every singlee word of hers

For Suraj it was as if someone passed a high volt current throughout his body , she knew , she understood , how the hell ... he hurriedly stood from his chair , wrapping one hand around chakor's mouth and the other around his waist , preventing her from talking and moving

She tried to struggle out of his grip , people who noticed them in the club were either too wasted or too busy to care

She tried frail attempts to get free but he simply tightened his grip dragging her out of the club , straight infront of his car

"The heck is wrong with you?????" She yelled as he removed his hand away from her mouth

"You were talking bullshit so i had to take the rougher option to shut you up" he felt frustrated and she was breathless

"I was sooo nott!! and you knew it , shame on you , you were fantasying over Imli???? i saw your lovelost look towards her and guess what i am going to tell them all about it , watch me" She challenged angrily but before she could leave , she suddenly felt him push her against the car , his lips crashed against hers taking away her first kiss ever

His lips moved angrily against hers as if almost trying to bruise them , she struggled until he stopped kissing her

She was in shock , she stood uprooted , feeling her lips ache , her finger lifted on is own touching her lips wondering if it really happened

He ran a hand along his hairs cursing himself for having kissed her but damn , her lips was nothing like he imagined , she tasted good against his lips , while kissing her he even forgot for once he was kissing her to shut her up

"Youuu A-certified-hole , damn you stole my first kisss" She yelled smacking his chest hard again and againn

"I had to do it because of your big mouth damn you even being drunk doesn't change your nosy manners" He cursed harder for not having had masked his emotion infront of his worst nightmare

"i am smart , born smarttt" she bragged about herself forgetting for an instant he stole her kiss " go cry in a corner you...you.. jerk no matter drunk or sane you are staying the biggest A-hole ever"

He was enduring it quietly regreting for his doing until she said the next "and... I am soo telling Imli"

That's it , he pulled her with him in his carback seat locking the car with his automatic key

"You can't do that Suraj" she turned to the door trying to open the door manually but it just din't work , she turned to him throwing her hands and feet trying to hurt the guy she hated the most at that moment

"Stop it chakor!!" He tried to hold her arms and legs still but she was way more volatile "Arghh Jungli billi , stop doing this" He tried once again but she only persisted harder , hitting him at his baby maker,"damn!" He cursed , having no other way he tried his earlier attempt again , by crushing his lips again against hers, though this time he wasn't rough , he sucked on her still lips gently and soon felt her growing still

Her eyes closed on its own letting the feeling he stirred and alcohol take over her senses

She din't realize when her own lips started nibbling at his, soon after her lips left a moan against his as he laid her on the car seat pinning his own weight against hers

They both felt lightheaded at that moment but continued moving their lips in perfect sync to each other , he licked her pursed lips begging for an entrance but realizing she wasn't giving in despite his every tries , he moved one of his hands around her back rubbing her soft frame slowly

She left a gasp as she felt the soft caress through her dress and he seized the moment to wander his tongue in her mouth , as if on its accord her tongue entangled to his fighting for dominance and warmth of each others, pressing their lips harder against

She felt a warmth rush into her body and instinctly moved her hips grinding it against his tool unaware what she was causing him

His heartbeat raced as he started growing hard against her , she had the perfect body frame, he realized , and she was soo soft against him

He left her lips groaning , looking at her face as the moonlight allowed little light , her closed eyes , swollen lucious lips and heaving chest , she was driving him crazy , it was all forgotten at that moment , he forgot he was supposed to hate her for no matter what , he was there supposed to lock her for her to shut her mouth

He lowered his lips on her neck kissing along her collar bone to her ears only to have her moan slowly which drove him crazier , she sounded soo sweet to his ears

Chakor moved her head giving him more space towards her neck and wriggle as he found her sweet spot along her collar bone , he ran his tongue around the spot followed by slowly grazing his teeth around it , she moved her hands around his back holding him tighter on her allowing him to continue , he slowly bit her sucking her soft skin between her lips

Feeling herself growing weaker she shifted herself comfily on the back seat , wrapping her legs around him grinding against him again unknowingly

She was experiencing a never before had feeling and he felt soo right , all the good bad abilities were thrown out unvoluntarily by her , he was kissing her soo gently , it was as if he cared the most for her and she needed at care , she wanted to feel beautiful and he was making her feel that

She din't realize when he unhooked her dress and lowered it down her chest , she opened her eyes slowly feeling his hands on her bare skin , his dark eyes were darker with the shade of lust

His lips begged to touch her soft twinies , giving into its will , he grabbed those between his lips sucking them hard ,a satisfaction filled him as her pleasing moans filled his ears

"Goshhh" She purred moving restlessly down him

"Damn Chakor you're beautifulll" He whispered mindlessly lowering her dress further

Feeling hot , he pulled his own jacket and shirt throwing it on the front seat carelessly

"Suraj pleaseee!!" She begged as his torture persist on her body , he kept on kissing her not leaving an inch uncovered by his lips

She din't even realize when she was stripped off her dress and he was of his own, it was just in the heat of the moment she felt something rubbing at her wet entrance

Her moans and wetness encouraged his hardness making it ache for her harder, he took a glimpse at her face ,sweat beads forming on her forehead the alcohol and heat in his blood stream drove him crazier

In a flash he plugged himself hard in her ,the car momentarily filled with her cries of pain , he stopped thrusting but crushed his lips with hers muffling her cries after a while he started thrusting in her feeling her nails digging in his back

Her pain were slowly replaced by pleasure as he continued moving ,her body urging for more , she moved her hips in sync with his soon after they both wished no more than their release and both moaned louder as they reached their climax exhausted to utter anymore words , and they gave into thet exhaustion but before she could swear she felt him leave a kiss on her wet forehead but was too drunk and tired to respond.

hey guys it's just another random cliche idea i ever had , its a short story of not more than 5 parts or so i'll wrap it in a week , hope its enjoysble while it lasts

Love,
anjali


Chapter 1 - Page 1
Chapter 2- Page 2
Chapter 3- Page 3
Chapter 4- Page 7
Chapter 5- Page 9
Chapter 6- Page 12
Chapter 7- Page 16
Chapter 8- Page 18
Chapter 9-Page 20
Chapter 10-Page 23
Chapter 11-Page 25
Chapter 12-Page 27
Chapter 13-Page 29
Chapter 14-Page 31
Chapter 15-Page 34
Chapter 16-Page 37
Chapter 17-Page 37
Chapter 18-Page 40
Chapter 19-Page 42
Chapter 20-Page 44
Epilogue - Page 46

Bonus 1- Page 50
Bonus 2- Page 52
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Chapter 2 oh no

An unfamiliar headache woke her the next morning, her throat felt dry and itchy and a certain weight on her din't help with the pain her muscles were screaming , 'wait a certain weight????' she slowly opened her eyes facing the roof of a car? a car? She moved uncomfortably completely confused by her surrounding but froze as she was unable too , she looked down and found dark messed up hairs , a head , no way , a whole guy , sleeping on her , his face dug in her chest , she panicked pushing him away from her , he groaned painfully , lifting his head revealing his face to Chakor but not only that , as he unwrapped himself off , she could see her naked body ,she breathed heavily as realiziation rushed to her

He sat straight on the seat pushing his head in his hands ,where was he ?? what was he doing???, he turned his face only to find a shocked and panicking Chakor

"Nooo...noo.nnooo" She kept on saying like crazy looking around for her dress and found it down

"Will you Just stop mummuring , it's troubling me???" He whined trying to focus on the previous day

"Just shut up and turn your effing face!!" She yelled embarassed by herself , she was a responsible mature girl how on earth did she let this happen to her , lost her virtue , unmarried , to a guy , not any guy but Suraj ,in His Car's Backseat she grew redder and tears threatened to flow out of her eyes as she pulled her dress over her head

He turned but felt the uncontrollable urge to say he'd have had seen everything already but it wasn't the right moment

He pulled his jeans on , finally the previous night clicking to him , she knew!!!! She realized he liked Imli , and in trying to shut her up , he slept with her , he wanted to bang his head somewhere , it was an unpardonable error , even if the girl was Chakor , she was the last one he'd chose to have a drunk one night stand with

Their deed of last night flashed in her mind like a movie playing to her , she was disgusted by how easy she gave in , true she was drunk but she could have tried to push him away , she didn't , she din't try a single time to push him away

"Look..." He started but then the fear of last night rushed back to him , "You will not tell Imli right???" as he ended she slapped him hard which rang across the car

He lifted his head angrily to yell at her but shut it as he faced her teary face

"I Lost My Virtue to you...
a guy like you and the first thing you ask me is Not to tell Imli?? Well guess what Mr Suraj Rajvanshi , i aint telling her anything , okay??? " She turned to open the car but it din't

"Chakor i am so..r"

"Enough , open the car , i wanna go" She adamantly asked refusing to hear a word more from him

"Just open the car!!!!" realizing she'll not listen , he clicked on the unlock key and watched her leave the car , he sighed frustratedly , wishing not to see her again, it was a whole mistake and he was not ready to face it again, he was going to lock the last night in his 'to be forgotten' cage of his brain

She ignore the sore feeling between his thighs and hurriedly caught a cab to his hostel , running to her dorm , she rushed to her bathroom, grateful Bhagya wasn't there , it'd be damn hard to tell her , she has had spent a night banging her brother

She opened the tap allowing her tears to finally fall , she slid down breaking into sobs , she did dream about a perfect guy , having the perfect first time , she'd adjust if she had too but having a one night stand with a guy who liked his sister , she was drunk but she could reminsce his lovestruck expression while looking at Imli , she brushed her skin roughly as if trying to remove his every touch away but it din't go , she couldn't stop cursing herself for her grave mistake

But then she regained herself..why not???she worked damn hard for having reached the stage she was , she just couldn't give it all up now when she had only one a half month before her degree, she wiped her eyes with a determined thought

After a month , she was more quiet than ever , even towards Bhagya , who easily recognized her fake smile , she worked harder for her finals but as she reached closer to her goal , her health grew weaker

She woke up a morning rushing towards the sink emptying her last night meal in, she felt Bhagya's arm rubbing her back as she kept on puking , her stomach churned as she finished her head dizzy , she was directed towards the bed by Bhagya

"you're alright??" She asked

Unsure about her voice she simply nodded but she knew it wasn't the case , she hasn't been well since days now , but she called it stress of the finals

"No you're not Chakor , stop lying to me and yourself" She raised her voice angry at her bestfriend " I have been noticing you for days and it all began after that night at the club"

Bhagya knew she was on the right track when Chakor grew pale at her mention of that night

"Bhagya please"

"No please Chakor , you think i din't notice that huge hickey onyour neck??? i din't question you because i trust you , i thought you wanted space and you'd open up at the right time but i was wrong , the right time never came , and you turned into this Zombie Chakor i don't recognize anymore" she ranted

She broke into tears as the night's memories flashed back to her , she feared to open herself , feared to be misjudged , but she knew it was the right thing to do after her bestfriend rushed to her side , hugging her tight

And she started telling her about it all , her encounter with Suraj , she getting drunk , finding out about Suraj's liking for Imli and worst of all She slept with him , she was ashamed of herself when she ended , she hid her face in her bestfriend's shoulder wiping hard

Bhagya was shocked to no bounds , she felt angry at her brother for most part , she knew it took two to tango but it wouldn't have had happened if Suraj actually left Chakor alone and she also felt guilty since she was the one who pursuaded her to go to the club that night

"i am sorry Chakor" She whispered

She broke the hug confuse why would Bhagya apologize

"I was the one who convinced you to go there that night" She said guiltily

"It wasn't your fault Bhagya , you wanted me to enjoy , you had good intention , anyway leave it , i feel much better now having had told you all" She wiped her tears and pulled her lips in a smile while Bhagya looked at her with admiration , could this girl get anymore stronger? But then it hit her , she did notice Chakor ill for a few days

Looking at her friend lost in thought she click her fingers infront of her "Whats wrong????"

"i have a doubt, just wait i want to confirm it" Saying soo she left a confused Chakor behind and rush towards the exit

After a while she came back with a plastic bag with the pharmacy's logo stamped on it

"You din't have too get me medicines Bhagya , i said i was fine" she said going back to her business books

"It's no medicines actually" she said dragging Chakor's attention back at her , she lifted her eyebrows waiting for her to open the plastic bag , she did and removed three boxes , which shocked Chakor to no bounds , it was

"Pregnancy test??????" She asked fearing for the wildest outcome

"Chakor i am studying medicines , trust me , i can recognize a syntom even far away , i am not saying it's for sure that , but you need to be on the safe side away from doubts"

She felt her breath stuck in her lung , she din't remember if Suraj had had used any condom that night and true to Bhagya's words the possibility of her getting pregnant were high but she couldn't help but pray it was not the case, she looked at her flat stomach , to Bhagya's face and then to the tests

With a heavy heart , she took the tests and entered the bathroom

Every click of their dorm's clock caused their heartbeat to palpitate as they waited for the test's result

And when it finally did , she pushed the test toward Bhagya , afraid to see what it actually showed

"Nooo wayy" Her bestfriend's surprised yet shocked tone did conclude it wasn't something she'd be please with

She closed her eyes tight and asked , " What is it????"

Bhagya took a long breath before answering in a faint voice it was almost inaudible to Chakor , "Positive" she said in a breath

She all of sudden felt her breath being sucked out of her lungs , she opened her eyes only to let out a few tears out amd rushed to get the tests from Bhagya re-verifying those and she was right it had the plus sign one the double lines and the other changed color , it meant only one thing she was 'screwed'

Just 2 weeks away from her finals , she worked soo hard even if she'd manage to through the finals how was she supposed to start trainingship with a baby in her womb , it was impossible and it might be a factor which would actually denied her the trainingships she applied for , how could she be soo dumb?

Once again Bhagya wrapped her arms around her as she cried

"What am i going to do Bhagya??? I just can't do it on my own and on the other side i can't get do the sin of getting it rid off" She silently nulled the option of abortion heck she wouldn't consider it even if it was the last option , it was hers and Suraj's fault not the baby's

"And this is why you are going to have to let Suraj know , he can't be out clean handed out of it , it was all that idiot's fault" Bhagya said encouraging her

But she was right , She had to let Suraj know about it , she might hate him and wished to never see him again but right now her life was under scanner , she'd have to do it

"But first i am going to have a second opinion from a doctor , i am not relying on these tests Bhagya"

"Three tests Chakor? how many more proofs do you need????" She said pointing at the tests which laid on the floor

"Still i am going to book an appointment" If she had to do it then she had to be sure about it.

The next day she stood nervously infront of the gynecologist office, she nervously entered and the check up began , she was never the cry baby , never the one scared of doctors , medicines infact whenever she was ill she would stay firm with the doctor just to be better quicker but at that moment she wanted to cry like a baby and run out of the maternity unit only to be held by her Mother , damn her parents , mere the thought about facing her parents brought tears to her eyes

"You're 4 weeks pregnant" Those word sealed her future and confirmed every single doubt

"Where's your husband???" Was the next question the doctor asked which made her go more nervous

"He doesn't know i came to keep it a surprise" She lied wishing not to be judged

She left the doctor's office with a vitamin and other supplements prescription , she only had a thing to do now and she will do only the right one

She heavy heartedly dialed a number and waited till he answered "Hello" he answered grudgily

"H...hello Suraj, it's me Chakor we need to talk" She managed to pull out single breathly , she could hear a gulp coming from the other end of the phone and wish he would listsn not disconnect the phone or act like the jerk he always did and

"Okay meet you at the coffee shop in one hour???" He said surprising her , he din't taunt her neither refuse her , that only made her hopeful

Suraj has had negative feeling about her sudden phonecall but he needed a closure , he needed to put an end at all those guilty feeling he had been having past days , he couldn't get rid of Chakor's teary face that morning and for that he needed to face her again , he rushed for his leather jacket and ran to his bike , he'd never use his car ever since that night , he would feel suffocated and it was still filled with her fragnance something he found weirdly annoying , he'd have the thought to sell that car

Reaching the coffee shop , he found her sitting sulkily at a table in a corner , he was seeing her after a month or more , she seemed to have grown pale but meh , he would just listen to what she had to say , get rid of his guilt feeling and leave , soo easy

Chakor frowned at him pulling the chair causing it scringe loudly , she controlled herself knowing better than saying anything rude

"Hi" He said not knowing how to initiate a conversation with a girl for the first time

She pulled her chocolate milk to her lips taking a large sip out of it and all of a sudden said "i am pregnant" She whispered slowly keeping her eyes on her milk mug holding it tight to keep her hands from shivering

Did he get that right? he raised his eyebrows and straightened himselff on the chair "repeat that ...will ya?

She closed her eyes taking a deep breath , raise her head to finally meet his eyes and answered " i am pregnant"

"What??????" he yelled attracting the attention of the other people but he covered it by sending a fake lips smacked smile towards then ensuring everything is alright , but it was not , he was feeling hot in an air-conditioned room

"You heard it Suraj" she could see he was finding the news as unbelievable as she did

He sat thinking about the cons of the situation , he felt stupid and cursed himself harder , 'unprotected sex was the last he'd indulged in and with sister of his love? that was worst , he couldn't do it '

"I don't know Chakor , just ...you know...get ...rid of it " He said fearfully scare to lose his everything , if his father knew he'd knocked up a girl ,he'll be doomed


For once his reaction was not surprising to her , she'd expect him to say something like that but instead of getting angry she decided to handle it calmly , "Suraj , i know it's tough but see even i am doing it , we can raise it together , i alone will not be able too , and we will not even have to be together for it , there are single parents coping with each other for their child's upbringing we can be like that we mutual understanding" She pleaded to him pushing aside all the pride she had

But her words did nothing to him , he was thinking about all the cons this baby would cause , his chance with Imli , his chance with his father's company , heck even his reputation

"You don't get it do you???? Get rid of that...that thing!!! Or perhaps...You need money huh????" He frowned at her , he wasn't getting it why wouldn't she understand that child would ruin the both of them

'money?' How did he even think so low about her , she stood up feeling suffocated ,"Suraj i know this is tough for you to cope with , but that doesn't mean you say whatever shits come to you , if i had wanted money i'd go to your rich daddy and say hello your son knocked me up , but i din't, i am trying to help you think maturely , we can do it together if we act rightly , we can explain the others we were drunk but still responsible towards our acts" Again she took a dig at her ego

"i don't know" He answered sweating hard

"Then take your time and let me know i will wait for your decision" She said leaving the coffee shop not before taking a last glimpse at a dead worried Suraj , she could just wish he take the right decision

Three weeks later , she was done with her finals , she received no news call from Suraj but thought maybe he'd need more time to cope with the news , it was time for her to return home , to her village ...to her parents

The moment she dreaded the most had came , she had to face her parents and tell them she broke their trust

She stood infront of her house wishing the most to run away but could she really do that??? no...she atleast deserved to give an explanation to her parents and the sooner the better , she rang the doorbell and felt the floor slip down her feet as she saw the person who received her first

"Suraj????" She was confused , what was he doing at her house??? and looking at his face she could say he din't know about her arrival either

"Chakor " Her mother heard her and ran to hug her , she was seeing her daughter after more than a year , the last time

Her mother's arm wrapped around her drove her even more nostalgic all she wanted was to confess her mistake and lay her head in her mother's lap and perhaps luck was by her side , Suraj was there too

She sent a gentle smile towards him , she would not act pricey , but he remained emotionless if anything he was scare

She entered the hall and found her sister and few more people sitting , she could recognize one of them as Suraj's father , she read about him in newspaper , he was a famous textile businessman

"What's happening ma?" She asked after having had greeted all

"They are to ask for Imli's hand" her mother announced proudly

She smiled at them looking around for Vivaan , Her sister sat there blushing , she was 2 years younger to her...why getting married now?

"Kasturi You have beautiful daughters i am soo happy one of them is going to become my daughter in law" Suraj's mother happily announced

"Haan bhai , Suraj is a lucky man" His father joked while all laughed , all except her and Suraj , she looked at him wondering what was happening and confusedly asked

"Suraj???"

"Yes Chakor , There are here to ask for Imli's hands for suraj" And there she almost felt the room spinning around her , Suraj? Imli's hands? what the heck was happening , she was dating Vivaan!! How ???

"Ma i need to use the washroom" without waiting for her mother's permission she ran towards her room straight to the sink , puking her guts out , she was feeling weak and slid down sitting on the floor , she din't know for how much time she stayed

Her trance were broken by a click at her door , she raised her head to find Suraj standing looking more nervous than ever

"really?" she asked feeling numb, "i wasn't asking you to marry me , i was asking for a bit of support not for you to go marry my sister and rub it in my face" She nearly screamed as she spoke

He felt guilty needless to say but what could he do? He was finally getting all what he wished he could help but say "i am sorry Chakor this is why i asked you to get rid of it , please don't ruin it for me" He begged wishing she would understand

She looked at him in disbelief , he was asking her not to ruin it ????? "I am myself ruined Mr suraj Rajvanshi , how the heck am i suppose to ruin anything for you????" She felt like someone set her heart on fire not because she loved Suraj or anything , she din't but her hopes were reduced into ashes in mere a go , she had no other way , except , she walked besides him having made up her mind , the Rajvanshis had left exceptt for Suraj , she called for her parents desperately

He ran after her frightenedly wishing she would not take any rough decision , what if she told all about him ?

"Maaa baba" She screamed shivering , she held the mad urge to burst up into tears but it wasn't time to fall apart

"Chakor" Suraj tried to call her

"enough!!!!!" She screamed and faced her parents , her sister stood in a corner all confused

"I have to tell you something" She gulped ignoring her dizzy head , her parents concerned face made her more and more guilty

"What's wrong with you Chakor? why are crying???" Her father asked

She clenched her fist tight before letting out the news and Suraj thought it was over he had lost his everything

"I am ..pp...pregnant" She said lowering her head feeling ashame for having had to say it , she could feel her parents gasp , she refused to lift her head and face them , a slap on her cheeks echoed around the room , she din't even lift her head to see who did it

"How could you??????" Her mother asked feeling betrayed , Chakor was her responsible daughter

"We trusted you with everything Chakor and you rewarded us with this??????" Her father was shocked and disgusted , all the times he told his daughters their virtue was precious

"Who is he????" Her mother asked and for the first time she lifted her head , looking straight towards Suraj , he felt like he would stop breathing at any instant but then

"I don't know" As she ended another slap came in her way followed by her sister's sarcastic laughters

"And you always told me to be like Chakor didi , she doesn't even know who knocked her up , was there too many????" She asked fueling the house matter , she din't hate her sister but she had always disliked the fact everyone wanted her to be like the perfect Chakor and this was the main reason imli distant herself to chakor

Suraj was failing to believe his ears , she said she didn't know??? She was lying , why?

Inspite of her lies she was wishing deeply for Suraj to step in and save her from all the humiliation that would follow but he stayed like a statue there watching it all unfold like some cheap drama

"You can't stay here , i can't let you ruin Imli's life" Her father said while her mother cried

She accepted the ordeal without any word said , picked up her unpacked luggage and left the house , silently vowing not to cry anymore , she would be strong , she had no feeling about motherhood but she will abide her responsibilities

Another whole month was gone and Suraj din't hear of Chakor , the day after his meeting with Chakor , he would have had thought about supporting her but that was before Imli rushed to her crying her eyes out saying Vivaan dropped her , his doorbell rang and the person he least expected stood there

She looked soo different , her hairs were pulled in a side instead of her regular jeans and kurti she wore a classic suit ,and the look on her face were soo unfamiliar to him

"Can i come in?" She asked with confidence lacing in her voice

He moved off the entrance allowing her in , without saying anymore words , she digged her hand in her purse removing some clipped papers , 'Sign it" she said

He was puzzled but he chose not to say anything he took the papers and read it , it was legal papers stating that henceforth he denies to any right concerning Chakor's unborn child , he don't want the child and in future he'd never have the right to claim it

"what the hell is this??" He raised his eyebrows at her

"It's legal documents to make sure you never step your sorry ass back into mine and my child's life , now sign it" She was definitely different , the previous Chakor would fight with him but she would never talk with such hatred

"I will not do it" not that he would ever want to be part ofhers and that child's life but he wasn't sure of such contract

"fine then , watch me call your father and imli telling them about you being the father of my child" She pulled her mobile out of her bag only to have it pulled by Suraj

"What the hell?"

"Sign the God damn papers" She said again and this time her determined face worked , he placed the papers on a table and signed the documents still not sure if that was the right this to do and just like that she took her phone and the papers leaving his house , without even saying a word in addition

She was sure of her decision and this time nothing will stop her , she had her hands full , a flight ticket and the registered legal documents that Suraj signed in

"Chakor yaar don't go" Bhagya pleaded

"I have too Bhagya , it's a lifetime opportunity" and she was right , her hardwork paid off , her project assignment was liked by some indo-italian delegates and she would get to do her trainingship in a completely new country , it was as if luck were finally standing by her side and she'd not regret accepting it

"But you'll do return right????" she blinked her tears away

"I will And we have the internet we'll stay in contact" She said before the announcement call

She ran a hand on her still flat stomach , she had no clue what wil happen next and she knew it'll not be all roses but she'll stay positive and strong. A silent promise made to herself as she passed the check in point


Edited by Blushy_Auntacid - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fabulous 👏👏
Chakor is such a strong girl
Hate Imli 😡
I guess Suraj will dump her at d last moment
Waiting for next !!
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Wow!
Loved it!
A different concept, contrary to the soap at some points.
Interesting and intriguing.
Waiting for the next.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow... Very interesting... Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was awesome..
I loved it very very much..
I hate suraj..how can he treat a girl like a cheap thing..
Loved tis brave chakor..
Pls pls update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#7
Good story waiting for next part.
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Plz update soon. I wish you could update all parts in one go as it feels really irritating to terminate the reading when one is in such a great story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great story!
I'm glad Chakor is rebuilding her life.
I wanted to slap Suraj when he stood by as Chakor was facing her parents on her own and Imli was insulting her.
Looking forward to the next part.
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intresting...my guess is that there will be a leap in the story..
pls don't take long to upload

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