SAHIL! MAIN GHAR CHODKE JAA RAHI HUN! - A mini SVS Fanfiction!

Well i.must say this is a master piece...

wow this is mini ff
so many more parts to come...
whoopie...

so happy to see this forum flourishing now

this was fab...
& more happy to know it is ff😆
Monisha zindabad😆
continue soon
waiting already
pm me wen u update
but i always like how Maya explains & understands Monisha-Saahil equation
& supports Monisha

Superb story concept this is...

title is just d fab..

MOnisha ready to leave..
this time seriously along with her luggage
she comes to say good bye to Maya...

Maya first thinks she is just bluffing as ever
but realises it is serious when Monisha reveals...

So sahil is not paying head to monisha now a days...
he just shouts at her & then doses off...

Maya realises he is just like all other men..
taking women for granted...

but she even confirms abt Saahil being with another women..
this shows how much she genuinely thinks abt all...

though she doesnt like monisha
she knows monisha is genuine & loves Saahil trully

i love when she supports & explains monisha abt various things...

this is women power & Saas bahu bond..

well written...
loved it completely...

waiting for another part & how Maya wil help monisha to woo Saahil or make men realise women's worth

continue soon

plz pm me wen u update!! 😳

Thanks for all the sweet comments dearies.😃 Will reply individually to everyone tomorrow. 😳

Originally posted by: svs_2

this was fab...
& more happy to know it is ff😆
Monisha zindabad😆
continue soon
waiting already
pm me wen u update
but i always like how Maya explains & understands Monisha-Saahil equation
& supports Monisha

Originally posted by: LakshMila

Awesome! Totally enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Superb story concept this is...

title is just d fab..

MOnisha ready to leave..
this time seriously along with her luggage
she comes to say good bye to Maya...

Maya first thinks she is just bluffing as ever
but realises it is serious when Monisha reveals...

So sahil is not paying head to monisha now a days...
he just shouts at her & then doses off...

Maya realises he is just like all other men..
taking women for granted...

but she even confirms abt Saahil being with another women..
this shows how much she genuinely thinks abt all...

though she doesnt like monisha
she knows monisha is genuine & loves Saahil trully

i love when she supports & explains monisha abt various things...

this is women power & Saas bahu bond..

well written...
loved it completely...

waiting for another part & how Maya wil help monisha to woo Saahil or make men realise women's worth

continue soon

plz pm me wen u update!! 😳

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Thank u so much for the detailed comment dear! 😃 It was lovely to read it!

N yup women power it is! 😉 U knw I think is the first shw which represents women power without being in the face abt it... Its subtle but is perfectly on point! Like Maya's famous 'u cant cure 'MARD' disease' to Indu 😆 Makers r surely feminist n I love it! 😆

So yeah like u said, I too luv when they team up together! N seriously it is so much fun writing abt them! 😆 I actually imagined the whole thing in my head and it was like a nice eppy in my head! 😆 Now, I dunno how much of it is being transmitted thru my writing bcz I guess half is lost in translation so to say from my head to paper! 😕😆