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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Lovely ending. Chakor reminded me of Cindrella, she got her prince charming and defeated her evil step mum and sisters. Their surprise when they found out about her degree was great to read.

It was great how Suraj quickly announced his intentions before the elders could tie him to Imli. Loved how proud he was of Chakor's achievement.

KN and Tejaswini are so nice and kind, loved them.

Thanks maithu, it was a wonderful story.

Edited by meshmesh - 9 years ago

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Ending of another beautiful story...

I like this one...

Love kn and teju never expected this...

yeah Suraj is blessed..

Finally chakor ki life main khushiya aa hi gayi...

No more family drama all is well...

At the end sukor they are the one for each other...

Outstanding writing Maithu...

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Beautiful ending of a beautiful story👏

Loved how suraj introduced chakor to everyone🤗

Kn & teju were so nice here😊

Loved the ending part , sukor are made for each other

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SofiaIshVeer

@SofiaIshVeer

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#94

So beautiful end..❤️ Loved this part and all others so much.. Will you write epilogue?

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Chasa

@Chasa

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Aww..such a warm ending..loved this story so much...

Awesome maithu..

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av131

@av131

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Lovely ending👍🏼
Would love to read an epilogue with Suraj,his queen and his princess😉

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Guys don't ask for an epilogue as I think this is an apt ending for this story!

If I was in Chakor's place, I know that I may accept the other family but will not let them enter my space as they were never there for the last 8 years.
And Suraj he knew Imli and he know everybody there, so no way they are going to be accepted by Suraj.
And the ending will be a happy wedding.
So I let you all imagine the epilogue you want guys!

Sorry!

Thanks a lot for all your support!

Edited by maithu_ - 9 years ago

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chink

@appledesire

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Perfectoo..

The way.. family support them.. *liked it*

Simply. Beautifull.. written dee...

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: vk1nonly
Awww so cute.i loved it.matlab Maza aagaya.
Sukor is always awesome,so no need to write it specifically.
I would like to write about imli 😛 .I loved her here.She wasn't able to come between our sukor.Hope this happens in show also.
Loved it and waiting for more cute stories like this. 😊

Glad you loved it dear!

I too wish the same happens but what can we expect from CVs? Nothing!

So try to fulfill my wishes and others through writings!

Thanks a lot dear!

Hope you will like Orenda too!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
It was the superb ending..di
I loved tis part very much..
Suraj has so much guts..how he introduced her to his parents infrontbof everyone..
I just loved both teju and kamal here..they accepted her as their daughter..and didn't reject their son's proposal..
Great nose cut for imli..
Tq for giving such a nice story sis..
Luv u sis..

Thanks a it dear!

Glad you loved it!

Suraj is just like that, do what he thinks without hurting others most of the time as it'snot easy when he does things for right purpose.

Love you too dear!