Rikara OS - I care for you..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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So guys im really excited for the mehendi track and coudnt resist writting it down so yeah .!




It was one of the brightest days of the year.Everybody bloomed with happiness as today was the day when the brides would write thier bridegroom's name in their hands and forever in their heart.Even then their was someone who was not really happy about this.Omkara.


He was determined that tbis time he would not allow gauri's name to be written down in his fate unaware of the fact that it was now gauri's turn to write down his name in her destiny.Forever.



O- Tum mehendi nahi lagaogi...

G- Ab apko hamare mehendi lagane se bhi problem hai !

O-Mujhe tumhare mehendi nahi balki tumse problem hai

G-Dekhiye ...

O-Shut up ...you know what tum yaha se Jana hi nahi chahti..par tumhe Jana hoga and I'll personally make sure that you do !!
Tum Chalo mere sath mein khud tumhe nikalta Hun...

G- omkara ji...

He held her with her wrist and pulled her...

He was about to push her out of the house when Dadi called out his name...

O-dadi ap..abhi ...yaha ?

D-kyun nahi a Sakti aur tum dono Kya Kar Rahe ho aise hath pakar ke..

Omkara didn't know how to react and pulled her against himself..

O - Dekhiye na Dadi Meri baat nahi sun Rahi hai aur mujhse gussa hokar kaha ja Rahi hai..
He pulled her even closer then her waist...

This action of his made gauri shock but she faked a smile.

D- om tu apni ishqbaazi badme karna ab Chal mere sath ...

G- gauri tum bhi Chalo taiyaar ho Jao.


_______|Few hours later|_______


Gauri came down the stairs absolutely looking splendid in her lemon green lehenga with a yellow dupatta.


This wasn't the first time om was mesmerized by her looks but decided not to accept it !

Both sat opposite to each other their elder siblings by their sides.


The mehendi ceremony started.
Everyone seemed happy but om noticed something which was missed by all others.

Though gauri was faking her happiness but their were tears in her eyes.Eyes full of pain yet the innocence in it stayed unaffected.
She was occasionally found blowing air to her hands.


As soon as the ceremony ended gauri excused herself and ran towards her room.This wasn't unnoticed by om,he followed her to .


When reached the room he could her silent sobs which were coming from the washroom.

Few minutes later gauri came out of the washroom but was shocked to see om.

She tried avoiding an eye contact with him.
This made om even more irritated

O- Aise toh bohot baat Karti ho ab jab mein tumse puch raha hn toh Kuch nahi bol Rahi ho...

G- Dekhiye hume apse koi baat nahi karni...

O- what tumhe mujhse baat nahi karni??

G- koi baat nahi hum is room se chale hate hai

She was about to leave when om held her by her wrist

O-kahi nahi ja Rahi ho tum.

G-plij choice hume dard ho raha hai ...

O- Kya tumharw hath resham ke ba...

[This was when he noticed the burn ]

Yeh Kya you have burnt your hand completely dikhao mujhe

G- Dekhiye hume Kuch nahi hua hai app hume Jane dijiye

O-jab Jane Bolta Hun tab nahi jati ab tumhe jana hai ...u are not going anywhere sit...

Let me bring the medical box

Tum pagal wagal ho Kya jab mehendi suit nahi Karta to lagati kyun ho Pura hath jal gaya...aur tumhe itna dabangg bane ka Kya hai ...niche kisi ko Kuch bola bhi nahi ..has Rahi hai...tumhe Kuch ho jata toh...

G- hume Kuch ho jata to Kya om..

O [monologue]-tumhe Kuch ho jata to I don't know Mera Kya hota...I mean I don't know why but mein tumhe takleefein nahi dekh sakta ...Na tab dekh paya jab Kali Thakur ke gunde Piche pare the Na ab..par...

G-boliye na...

O- mein tumhe batana zaroori nahi samajhta..

*He leaves*

G- Hume pata hai omakara ji ap dil se bohot ache hai bas bura banne ka thing karte hai ...aur ek baat kissne kaha ki hume mehendi nahi pasand woh toh...

{Flashback}

Gauri exchanged the mehendi bowl with anika's one coz she had seen pinky mixing something.

(Flashback ends)

Par ap tension mat lijiye hum ajj raat ko hi app sabse dur chale jayenge Jan sab so jayenge



Both cared but never dared to show !

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unicornangel thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is really nice... I really hope something of this sort happens on the show... I am also waiting eagerly for the mehendi scene.. I just want a caringkara or concernedkara on the show and I want him to know why Gauri did this so he can see her in a nice light... But, I really dont know if this scene will be in the show or not because Shrenu posted a picture of her mehendi on her insta story... Fingers crossed that we actually get this scene.. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh so sweet of Gauri to save Anika
But she hurt herself
Omkara was continuously watching her
Hecould bear her pain
Wish he says something before she leaves
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's a really wonderful update we wanted scenes like this but gul ko sso see fursta nhi mahasangam teeno k liye tha dikhe sirf Shivaay Anika and pi ky drama...

Ney your story was cute... Awh both car but never show specially omkara... Hope you continue this one
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Plz continue it... Its very interesting...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thank you so much
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thank you😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: unicornangel

This is really nice... I really hope something of this sort happens on the show... I am also waiting eagerly for the mehendi scene.. I just want a caringkara or concernedkara on the show and I want him to know why Gauri did this so he can see her in a nice light... But, I really dont know if this scene will be in the show or not because Shrenu posted a picture of her mehendi on her insta story... Fingers crossed that we actually get this scene.. 😳

I so hope the same and therefore couldn't resist ...I so wanted something like this in the show but after yesterday's episode I doubt it ..still fingers crossed
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Oh so sweet of Gauri to save Anika

But she hurt herself
Omkara was continuously watching her
Hecould bear her pain
Wish he says something before she leaves

yeah at the end sisters you know😉
But main toh hai om keeps on staring at her ...Hayes lash aisa real mein hota
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam234

Plz continue it... Its very interesting...

thank you ..and guess what I would have loved to continue but of of ideas at the moment😛

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