Ishra SS:Hum Phir Bhi Tumko Chahenge (Pt8 on pg65 on 01/09/2019)

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Hlo friends.
I'm again back with a new story this time wishing my friends.
Firstly, Wishing a very happy belated birthday to our lovely friend Gunita. Sorry for late wishes but...





Now, a very congratulations to lovely friend and a very great writer, Anju di for new colour. I wish u will get new colou soon.





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This is not starting of the story but two parts of the story.

Prologue

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There was a crowd of two families, Iyers and Bhallas, along with Police and whole hospital staff in a hospital. Police were arresting the criminals, hospital staff were gossiping about the happenings, Ishita was sitting on a chair with some wounds on her body, shocked with the new revelation which she get to know few minutes ago and looking at whole scene and Raman was standing at a distance from her with a guilt filled face looking at all while Ishra parents were sighing in relief seeing their problems will end. But in reality Ishra were looking at each other from the core of their eyes.

After police left,

Raman (folding his hands in front of whole staff) I'm sorry. I know maine bhot hurt kia aap sabko, bhot pareshan kia hai or sabse jyada mere karan aap sabki favourite Dr Ishita Iyer ki jaan khatre mein dali...

Mr Iyer Raman stop doing this beta. Now everybody know that u were right. U were just trying to find the culprit.

R No uncle. I know u will not blame me for anything as u love me like ur son even if ur daughter was struggling with her life. It was not intentionally but I hurt these people a lot, I always behaved rudely with them without their fault. Buyt now u all need not to worry because I will leave from here.

Mr bhalla R u sure Raman?

R Yes Papa. I want to go back to Mumbai.

R (thinking in mind) I know Ishita I hurt u a lot and now u will live peacefully without me. I know we have feelings for each other but this is best for all. I'm sorry. Ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dena.

I (thinking) I know Raman u r guilty and this decision, this decision is just ur guilt for all. U always did according to u and this time u also doing this. But I will not stop u in fact I will love u, Mai phir bhi tumko chahungi.

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R (angrily) What do u think of urself, ha?

I (straight) What r u talking Raman? Please stop following me.

R (irritated) U really think u will run from me.

I (angrily) And u really think u r important for me. Just leave from here right now. Otherwise u know what I can do.

Raman started walking out looking at her.

I (thinking) I'm really very sorry Raman. I can't make u suffer because of me. I will not let u know the truth.

R (thinking) I know Ishita what u r trying to hide. I know the truth and u will never agree with me till I will make u understand that nothing is important for me than u. The thing which u r hiding from me will never matter for me. Tum aise hi meri jaan ho or mai phir bhi tumko chahunga.

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updated prologue. hope u like it and wish the girls...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Image result for thank you nisha dear

hello Nisha..
Thank you so much for the wish dear..
you started a new story to wish me..its means a lot to me..
thank you very much..
i loved the concept very much dear..
there is something which is stopping them to express their feelings..
i surly wants to know the reason dear..
both are in love with each other but in heart
the title was awsome..i love the song the way too much..
now with your story i will love the song more..
once Again thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting teaser dear
Update soon plz
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
I'm So Sorry for Late Comment,I was Busy in Internal Exam.😭
It was So Nice to see your New Story.😊
The Prologue was so Interesting.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful prologue..
Congratulations anju.
Happy Birthday gunita
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting prologue...
Continue soon..
Thank u for pm & update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations on new story nisha 👏

Very nice prologue dear
Looking forward for it's first part
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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