Date Night! ~Rikara SS (Last part updated, page 3, May 28th)

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I'm currently perturbed by the way Rikaara is shaping out to be in the show--so I just need a bit of fluffy story.

There is a plot but it's very cutesy. This also a slightly au-ish too.

Summary: In which Omkaara gets roped into babysitting duty with Gauri and things do not progress as expected.


Part 1

The ringing of the phone is startling and unexpected, cutting into a perfect evening consisting of Omkaara's favorite easil, a strong cup of tee--glucose biscuits dissolved in it, and a plethora of paints. He glares at the phone as it vibrates its way across the pocked wooden tabletop, but he knows that no matter how much he wants to ignore it, of course he's going to answer. Thusly resigned, he set his paintbrush down and exchanges it for the maddening device. Doesn't bother checking hte ID because he knows who it is well before he answers with a grouchy, "Omkaara."

"Nandi!" The voice on the other end is downright chipper, which only serves to further aggravate Omkaara. This is nothing new, really. Part and parcel of being friends with questionable people is being annoyed more often than not. "Need a favor."

"Of course you do." Omkaara sighs into the phone, pinching the bridge of his nose and trying to adopt a scolding tone, even if he knows how useless such a thing is to such a person as Gauri Kumari Sharma. "All right, let's have it," he finally says. "What sort of misfortune have you got yourself into this time?"

"Omkaara, darling, light of my life, you wound me!" Gauri says, and Omkaara can picture her, wherever she is, clutching her chest and trying to make like she isn't trouble of the worst sort.

"I certainly will," he promises, "if you don't get on with it."

"Love it when you get all growly at me." Gauri is grinning. Omkaara can hear her grinning.

"Gauri..." Omkaara says it like a warning.

"Babysitting," is the inexplicable response.

"Er...sorry?" Omkaara takes the phone away from his ear to blink at it, wondering if it's somehow malfunctioned while he wasn't looking.

"Babysitting," Gauri says again, laughing a bit. "Need your help looking after Shivaay-Anika's little poppet."

Omkaara is appropriately horrified by this. "Shivaay entrusted you with his child?" he demands. "Why in the world would he do that?"

"Words hurt, Nandi." Gauri gives a dramatic sigh. "And also, yes. Well, I sort of bullied him into it. Poor boy needs a break! You should see him, all dark-eyed and yawning and tripping over himself, poor sod. I told him to take the lovely Anika out for a well-earned date night."

"And he didn't...argue?" It's possible exhaustion had caused poor Shivaay to lose his sanity. Omkaara has never had children, but he's heard stories. Mostly from his own mother.

Gauri chuckled. "He practically disappeared out of here, he moved so fast. Probably gave himself whiplash."

God, if Gauri is alone in the house with little Vivaan Singh Oberoi, that cannot be allowed to stand. Omkaara is going to have to go, damn it all. "I'll be there in twenty minutes," he says, already standing and reaching for his cardigan.

In his ear, Gauri laughs. "No faith in me at all, Nandi."

"None," Omkaara replies dryly. "Try not to traumatize the poor thing too badly before I get there."

He hangs up before Gauri can answer.


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This is short but currently creative juices are being directed towards the fanfic. hopefully next update is longer.


Enjoy guys!!


Part 2: See below!

Part 3: Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh My God! This is the most delish thing I've read in a looong time.
I am so into this I can't even tell you how much. Hook, line and Sinker.

Your writing aesthetic is fantastic!

I love the vibe you're going for and I am all for more of the same awesomeness to come knocking on my screen soon!
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Fantastic OS
It was all in one
Hilarious romance anger everything in one

Gauri given the responsibility of small Vivaan
And Omkara doesn't trust her

Best was Nandi
Really it was hilarious

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😆 something cokking in gauri's mind update next part soon😆
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This is so cute!
The mentioning of Nandi was adorable. If only Om could get used to it in the show.
Please continue soon.
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Part 2

Omkaara Singh Oberoi met Gauri Kumari Sharma twenty-seven years ago. Omkara was thirteen, attending St. Teresa's for the first time, and Gauri was everything he was not. Most notably, she was was popular despite being a scholarship student. Omkaara, meanwhile, shut himself off from his fellow students, and was too quiet (and too rich) to make friends easily.

It's a wonder that they ever spoke two words to each other, let alone became friends. Gauri has always joked that fate played a daring hand, and Rudra always attributes it to his influence, them being in the same year at the time (though really, Rudra Singh Oberoi was far worse than Omkaara in those days). Omkaara has never offered his own opinion on the topic, but privately he thinks he must have chosen the task of friendship in order to keep both of them in line. For all the good it did, what with getting roped into their schemes more often than not, but at least his teachers all told him he was a good influence.

The point is, while Omkaara doesn't quite know how their friendship started or, really, worked, it did. Indeed, it had thrived. And it's weathered seventeen years of all sorts of storms, including Gauri disappearing for eleven years--a result of an accusation he had thrown her way for a crime she hadn't commited

(Omkaara searched for her relentlessly once truth had come to light, without fail, and Gauri told him, after, that it she knew he was going to come to his senses, but she was still hurt. She was heavily sloshed at the time, and it had come out far too honest for comfort.)

Twenty-seven years of stormy friendship in no way prepares Omkaara for what he walks into upon entering Oberoi mansion.

"Shh," Gauris murmurs, beaming at Omkaara. She has Vivaan against her shoulder sound asleep as she sways back and forth and runs one hand gently along his back. "Good to see you, old friend."

"You saw me just last week," Omkaara says, and hopes that the quietness of his voice hides the way it cracks. He swallows. "Are you sure you haven't killed him off?"

"Nah, he's fine. Was singing some of my Ma's old lullabies and he went out like a light."

Omkaara is suddenly very glad he came now and not, say, ten minutes ago. Singing. God.

"Well." He clears his throat. "Seems like you've got a handle on things, then." Somehow, against all expectation. Has Gauri ever been around a baby in his life? Maybe some of the kids she worked with Omkaara has never met, but certainly no one he knows.

"Just making it up as I go, yeah?" Gauri coos gently at Vivaan and leads Omkaara deeper into the house so he can set the baby down in his cot. "There you are," she murmurs when Vivaan fidgets a bit. She tucks a blanket close to him and Vivaan latches on, gnawing sleepily on a corner as he drifts off again. When Gauri straightens, she releases a slow breath and steers Omkaara back out to the kitchen. "I can handle him when he just wants a bottle and sleep, it's the waking hours that scare me. What happens after his nap?"

Omkaara does a poor job covering his snort of amusement, judging by Gauris's wounded gaze. "He's still very small, Chiraiya. Mostly all he does is eat and sleep and cry."

"See!" Gauri says, pointing a finger at Omkaara. "That, that right there! The crying! I'm not cut out for that sort of thing. That's what I need you for."

"Well, you've got some time." Omkaara eyes the clock. "He'll be down for a good hour or two, I'd wager." It's early yet, not quite gone five, but Omkaara suspects Shivaay will take full advantage of as much time away as he can get. Especially if Gauri hinted to him that she'd con Omkaara into helping. "What's your plan till then?"

"Spending some quality time with my best friend?" Gauri says with what he probably thinks is a winning smile.

(It is, but Omkaara will never admit so aloud.)

"Well, seeing as you've already got me here, I suppose." Omkaara sighs, but accepts a playful nudge to the shoulder. "I'm surprised to see you don't have a date night tonight. It's Friday, isn't it?"

Gauri shrugs, and again takes Omkaara's arm to guide him into yet another room. The family room, now, where she flops onto the couch and pulls Omkaara down beside him. "Ended things with Salman," she finally admits.

"Good," Omkaara shoots back, carefully not allowing himself to dwell on why that's such a relief to hear. "He was too old for you and your mother was ready to turn into a dragon and roast your arse for even looking at him."

"Ma adores me," Gauri says with a casual wave of indifference. The worst thing is that he's perfectly right, she does, even if she finds herself baffled about it. Still, Salman is eleven years Gauri's senior. he had still been attentive to her and never treated her a miss, but it will still be a relief to have it over, Omkaara is sure.

"So what happened?" Omkaara asks, trying to be supportive.

Gauri shrugs, leaning back and focusing his gaze up towards the ceiling instead of at Omkaara. "Bit of a row about how I wasn't emotionally available. Which is true enough, anyway, and Salma deserves better than a girl who's been gone on someone else damn near forever, yeah?"

Omkaara blinks, parsing that. It makes something twist unpleasantly in his belly. "I...didn't know you were," he tries, which seems safe enough (and true), but Gauri still goes very red and shifts herself away by a few fractions.

"No, no, you wouldn't, it's, ah. Well, maybe not as serious as all that." Gauri looks as though it's exactly as serious as all that, but Omkaara doesn't say so. This has become an entirely uncomfortable conversation all around, and he'd have it finished sooner rather than later, if given the option. "Anyway, we agreed it was better to end things before we wound up hating each other, parted with a kiss and a promise to stay friends, you know. All very cordial."

"That's good," Omkaara murmurs, halfway lost in thoughts he'd rather not be thinking. "So. No date night for you, then."

"Well, unless you count this?" Gauri flashes a halfhearted grin at Omkaara, doesn't even include the lecherous wink Omkaara would normally expect from him.

He rolls his eyes because it's better than saying any of the things that immediately pop into his head. "Two friends and a baby seems more like the setup to another bad sitcom than a date, Chiraiya, but the offer is of course appreciated." He doesn't quite hit the sarcasm he tries for, but he thinks he manages a close approximation.

Something in Gauri's eyes dims, but she covers it well with an exaggerated yawn and stretch. "Well then, if you're all about breaking my heart, I suppose I might just nap along with the kid."

Omkaara hesitates. He doesn't understand the look he saw pass over Gauri's face, and it's rare that he doesn't understand Gauri these days. He doesn't like it. Doesn't trust it. "You're all right?" he asks, because really that's the only thing that matters. "I mean truly all right, not your usual blustering version where you're really not but want everyone to believe you are."

"I'm all right, Nandi," Gauri replies softly. "Better with my best mate here." The smile seems a touch more genuine now, and the coiled tension in Omkaara's chest eases a bit. Perhaps this, then, was why Gauri wanted him here. Not for help with a baby he clearly (somehow) knew how to handle, but for simple companionship. Omkaara won't begrudge him that.

"Well. Let's see what's on the television then. I'm sure we can find something watchable." So saying, Omkaara picks up the remote and carefully doesn't look at Gauri as they settle more comfortably beside each other.

They don't speak again, waiting for Vivaan to wake from his nap and neither particularly focused on whatever is happening on the screen, but it's not an uncomfortable silence at all.




This was supposed to go one way and then it did a U-turn and went in a completely different direction. I don't hate it. Next part is the last part though. Enjoy!

Edited by .Aashna. - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: writergenie17

Oh My God! This is the most delish thing I've read in a looong time.

I am so into this I can't even tell you how much. Hook, line and Sinker.

Your writing aesthetic is fantastic!

I love the vibe you're going for and I am all for more of the same awesomeness to come knocking on my screen soon!


Aww...Thank you. Sweetest thing anyone has said about my writing.

Thank you. aesthetically pleasing stuff is my jam.

True, I'll die and go to heaven when that awesomeness is brought to tv.
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Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Fantastic OS

It was all in one
Hilarious romance anger everything in one

Gauri given the responsibility of small Vivaan
And Omkara doesn't trust her

Best was Nandi
Really it was hilarious


Aww, I love your comments.

Omkaara thinks, Gauri is too much of a child herself!

I know, I can never get over Gauri's "Nandiii!!!"

Thank you once again for sucha lovely comment.
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Originally posted by: pt311288

😆 something cokking in gauri's mind update next part soon😆


Gauri's just ready to act on her feelings.
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Originally posted by: Love_Family

This is so cute!

The mentioning of Nandi was adorable. If only Om could get used to it in the show.
Please continue soon.


Nandi is DBO's "SSO" HAH!!!!


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