Date Night! ~Rikara SS (Last part updated, page 3, May 28th) - Page 3

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Superb ending

An amazing date night

Never have I ever seen such a wonderful date

How they confessed was heart touching

Vivaan as usual.like shivaay

But glad Omkara didn't back out

And went further

Finally they are together

Good job with the SS

Plz write.more SS n FF on RIKARA

Originally posted by: writergenie17

Okay... I seem to have been gone for too long since I missed an update in the middle and now we're already done with this amazing story!

What can I say luv... except that I adore this entire story... every word of it!

You write so well, your expressions are so quirky and realistic, they gave me a different way to visualize Gauri and Om.

Vivaan seems adorable... I sure he'll grow into a khidkitod darling of a kanji eyed toddler soon and interrupt more of Om and Gauri's date nights.

As for Nandi and Chiraiyya, they just stole my heart. Just one question tho... are they both around forty in this fic? Just clarifying...

This was amazing, thank you for sharing your wonderful writing with us, please continue to write and post lots more... Eagerly awaiting more from you!

Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit

Nandi and chiraiyya was an amazing combination...

Loved it to the core.

Such a simple yet deep version of love..

Do write more aashna..

And pm me ,once you get its way

Originally posted by: .Aashna.

I wanted this to be a bit longer but I kind of went in a completely different direction than I had anticipated.

Aw...thank you! It's such a big compliment especially coming from you--I had to do it, given that they're both quite protective of their feelings. They'd need serious proof before they confessed.

Vivaan is in words of Anika/Gauri, 'A little tyrant' who is the sole reason that he doesn't have a sibling. He's got a family/generation of professional interrupting people in his blood.

I was thinking early 30s--Omkaara lost touch with Gauri when they were 18 because of his teenage stupidity and he 'found' her again when he was 26 through pure coincidence--took him about 2 years to convince her that what he said was just 'heat of the moment' thing/ mend their friendship and a whole of 4 years ok dancing around their feelings to finally confess.

I will! Thank you so much once again genie

Originally posted by: writergenie17

@bold : I asked because in the beginning you mentioned that they'd met in school when Om was 13 and that they'd known each other now for 27 years... I did the math and came up with 40.