Asya FS:ETERNAL SUNSHINE OF SPOTLESS MIND..all chapters on page 3.

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Hai friends,
How are you all..After a long time in qh forum...
Actually I wrote a story on another couple...If u r interested I will post it Asya Version...Let me know...Story is completed...So if u r interested then i will post 4 parts today itself...

Here is the prologue...



Two persons came from the opposite corridor of JLS Cancer hospital bumbed to each other.The man bent down by saying sorry to collect the things which fell from his hand without giving his face's glance to that lady. But that voice was enough for her to recognise the person. When the man stood to say sorry to the lady,time became still for them..There stood Asad and Zoya after long 4 years by facing each other unable to utter a single word where Asad's face showed happiness after seeing her. But he couldn't understood what is reflecting on her face..How can he expect that she will be happy after seeing him even after what happened four years back.
'It's okay' by saying that Zoya moved to her cabin with a heavy heart. Zoya didn't wanted to see his face,but why he is here??here she is hardly trying to forget him and move on,then his presence will do anygood for her?..No,She is not going to allow him to break her heart anymore..He is her past and she is not going to let him ruin her future.. ,
Asad stood on the corridor feeling dejected..She have all the right to behave like that after what he done to her..A tear drop fell from his face by thinking about his lost love..
How was that...😳
Asad and Zoya separated 4 years back...What was the reason??..Any guess ;)..How they met and separated??What Asad is doing in Cancer hospital??..Will they unite??..Yeah..Zoya is oncologist in this story..Should I continue??..plzz let me know in the form of likes and comments..


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Binuuu
it's a plesant surprise to see you on the forum with new story
And the plot seems so much interesting
eager to read more and as the story is already complete why don't you post it soon...
jaldi jaldi update plz
😊
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Interesting!!
Cont. soon!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Cntinue.. And update soon
If possible plz pm me
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Originally posted by: --Mirage--

Interesting..!

Do continue..


Thankuu arpita...i have to edit names...will update soon...
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Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Hey Binuuu
it's a plesant surprise to see you on the forum with new story
And the plot seems so much interesting
eager to read more and as the story is already complete why don't you post it soon...
jaldi jaldi update plz
😊


Hii deepu dii...
Aww...thankuu dii...
I have to edit names dii...after that I will post...

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Originally posted by: Minahil_Hanjra

Interesting!!

Cont. soon!😊


Thankuu...
Will post it soon...
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Originally posted by: aashiqua

Cntinue.. And update soon
If possible plz pm me



Of course...i will
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part-1

Asad got a big surprise by seeing Zoya on the hospital corridor after four long years. He never thought God will bless him with this moment ever.Last four years were like a hell for him, he searched almost everywhere for her but she didn't left any clue about her while disappearing from Delhi.Now both Asad and Zoya standing miles distant form Delhi Where he didn't saw any emotion on Sona's face.. The sparks of her eyes while seeing him were not there,the smile on her lips while seeing him was not there,the glow of her face while seeing him was not there,indifference was the only thing left on her face. That thoughts made flow tears from his eyes. Unable to hold himself he sat on the bench on the hospital corridor where his thoughts travelled to his beautiful past.

Zoya Farooqui and Najma Khan were best of friends.Both of them met each other during their MBBS studies, Najma and Zoya were inseparable, everyone adored their friendship.. The only person who hated Zoya was Najma's brother Asad Ahamad Khan. He never met Zoya ,but hearing her name was like killing him. The actual reason why he hate Zoya was Jealous Khan.Yes, Asad loved his baby sister very much and she loved him too. Bhai was Najma's favourite person until she started her college studies. Najma met Zoya in her first year and there started the journey of their beautiful friendship. Najma shared everything with Asad,she never forget to share the happenings of her life to him. Being Zoya is her best friend Zoya was always in her stories.. Initially Asad didn't had any problem,but her continuous talk about Zoya made an insecurity within him,he felt like his baby sister is giving more importance to Zoya than him. He thought his Najma will not give much importance to him anymore and she will enjoy Zoya's friendship than their bond. But Najma was not aware about this and she will try to fill him about her day's happenings where Asad will try to escape from Zoya's talk. He never knew that he can hate someone whom he never met or talked before. Najma tried many times to show Zoya's photo to Asad , those times somehow he excused from there. He didn't wanted to see the person whom his sister love more.

Where on the other hand Zoya adored Najma-Asad bond. Zoya had good knowledge about all Khan members like Najma knew about all Bose members. When Zoya saw Asad's photo first,she literally fell for that handsome man and she got to know every minute details about Asad from Najma .
It was a fine morning,Asad was going for a meeting ,suddenly his eyes caught a beautiful sight.A beautiful girl clad in blue anarkali was laughing uncontrollably with her friends not caring about the outside world. He parked his car on road side and continued to watch that girl where he was not aware about what was he doing or he is becoming late for meeting. He continued his stalking until she left from there with her friends.Never a girl attracted him like this ,it was a new feeling for him. When he reached home he discusses about this with Najma where she teased him for this. He started to see that smiling face almost everywhere and he was new with these feelings.
Next day morning Asad started to leave early from home with a hope to see that girl again. Najma was helping Dilshad in the kitchen where Asad was starting to leave.

'Areh Najma what are doing in kitchen..Don't you have college today'

'Bhaijaan,I told you naa...Our college is conducting camp for final year students.It is nearer to our place.So me and Zoya going from here'..

'Yeah...I completely forget about it..'..



'Ahem...ahem...What happened to you Bhaijaan.. You started to forgetting things...What's happening'..Najma continued her teasing..

'Najma, I need to go..bye'. Asad tried to escape from Najma's wrath..

'Areh Asad beta..Where are you going.. You know naa Najma's friend Zoya is coming here first time.. Leave after having dinner with all of us'.

'No mom.. I have an important meeting..I need to go..By the way Zoya will come whole two weeks naa...I will meet her some other time'.By saying this he started to leave.

Within these years Asad realised how silly was he to hate Zoya and he have no probem with Zoya now.He don't like or hate her anymore.

Najma accompanied Asad till door...'Bhai,are you sure about you are going for meeting???...Or are you going to meet someone special'.By saying this Najma ran from there before getting a smack on her head from Asad.Where Asad proceeded to his car with a smile.

Zoya reached around 9'O clock and had breakfast with Khan family.After one hour Najma and Zoya left to the camp.Within that one hour Zoya created a special place in Dilshad's heart. This routine continued till one week, Asad leaving to office early and Zoya spending time with Najma's family. Within these seven days Zoya made a good bond with Ayan and Dilshad ,everyone enjoyed her company.The person whom she was eager to meet didn't appeared infront of her in those seven days. On the other hand Asad continued his routine with a hope that he will meet that girl again ,who is not giving any peace by invading his mind.What Asad didn't know is that the girl in his dreams is in his home only.
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It was the final day of Zoya's camp.. She came to Najma's home to say good bye to all family members,she was sure that she will miss this wonderful family. Dilshad insisted her to go back after having dinner. Zoya was bit sad about she never got a chance to meet Najma's bhai..
Dilshad called Asad and asked him to come home early.. Since there was no work left for him that day, he thought to go evening itself. When he entered into the hall of Dilshad Mansion time became still for him, the scene infront of him made him root in the spot.. He couldn't believe his eyes, he blinked his eyes many times to make sure that what he seeing is real. There she is sitting, the girl who was invading his dreams not awaring of his eyes. He was searching her past seven days and she is sitting in his home minkling with his sister.. Finally he took the courage and slightly coughed, Najma and Zoya turned to the spot of the noise .. Najma ran to her bhai to welcome him and hugged . Zoya's happiness was visible on her face, she passed a smile to him and he returned back.

"Bhai,Meet my friend Zoya Farooqui and sona,this is my bhai Asad"

Zoya Farooqui,the name was very familiar to him. He know almost every details about her. It was Najma's friend who invaded his dreams . He couldn't believe his ears, the girl whom he hated once for no reason is the girl who caught his eyes. He chuckled lightly.

" Bhai ,why are you smiling"

He frowned for a moment.

"Mai abhi aathi hun " By telling this he escaped into his room..

Asad ran to his room and sat on his bed with thud. Past 7 days, he was searching for this girl like a mad man. He examined all faces to see Zoya. But how can he saw her, she was here only, in his own house. He felt like a stupid. He was deeply in love with that stranger girl , within past seven days he got all proofs. It was like love at first sight for him. Najma's continous tantrums and sleepless nights made him realise what he is feeling for that stranger girl. Never in his wild dreams he thought that the stranger will be Najma's best friend Zoya Farooqui. A fear gripped in his mind, How Najma will react after knowing the truth. He was in complete dilemma.

'Now forget about Najma Asad. First of all concentrate on Najma 's friend.. First you have to impress her and you have to make her fell in love with you.. ' His inner mind warned him.

He went downwards to have dinner with his family. Asad and Najma sat opposite to each other... They eyed each other, but they were not aware that they were looking at each other.

After the dinner when Zoya started to take her leave Dilshad told Asad to drop her. He was on cloud nine at that moment. Both Zoya and Asad took leave from Khan mansion. All were sad because that was the last day of Zoya's camp and Zoya will not come regularly there anymore. Within
seven days Zoya made a special place in all Khan's heart.

Asad and Zoya were in car last 15 minutes. None of them uttered a single word. They waited other to talk. Zoya wondered about her own behaviour, ever talkative Zoya had nothing to talk. Suddenly she made him stop the car..

"Stopp...Mr.Khan...please stop the car"

"What happened Ms.Farooqui,are you Okay" .He suddenly applied the break..

"No..no..I'm not at all okay..Look at there Mr.Khan...How can you expect I will be okay..."

First Asad didn't got any idea about what she was talking..Then he noticed dhaba on the roadside..

"Don't tell me Ms.Farooqui that you want something from that Dhaba"

"Yes Mr.Khan..You guessed right..I want pani puri"

"How can you eat that Ms.Farooqui.. You just had your dinner,moreover roadside food is not healthy...Let's just go"

"You are so meannn!! If you are not letting me to buy panipuri, then you can go back Mr.Khan..I will go myself..."
By saying this Zoya opened car door and started to walk towards that dhaba. By having no other options he followed her, afterall she is his responsibility and he can't let her go alone at this odd hour.
Zoya ordered one plate of panipuri where Asad didn't order anything.And also she bought two icecreams from nearby shop and carried all these to his car and placed on bonnet and asked him to follow her and sat on bonnet.

When she offered panipuri he refused to eat, but Zoya is Zoya, how can someone refuse to eat her favourite dish..When Asad opened his mouth to tell something,without wasting a single moment she put panipuri in his mouth. Asad had any other option than eating that peice.. When he tasted panipuri he realised the real taste of panipuri and started to eat from her plate. After that they had their ice cream which brought moustache on their faces..They made fun of each other. Their awkwardness was all forgotten and they were behaving like they were best of friends since past years.Both of them enjoyed each others company.

Soon they reached Farooqui mansion. Asad wanted to ask Zoya's number,but he was not comfortable to ask her.. What will she think..For God's sake ask her number man..His heart warned him..Finally he decided to ask her..

"Mr.Khan..If you don't mind Can I have your number"

Asad heard what he wanted to ask in the form of Zoy
a's words. Without wasting a moment he gave his number to her and told her to message from her number.

Asad was lying on his bed while thinking about the turn of events happened in that day. Suddenly his phone beeped and he saw a whatsapp message from an unknown number... When he opened the message his smile grew wide..
"Mr.Khan..Zoya here"
He saved her number and he was grinning when he checked her DP, ..It was their selfie which they took while eating icecream where they had moustache on their faces...
"An unforgettable day with a crazy person like me...#night fun..#ice cream...#panipuri...lot of #masthi...looking forward" .. From her status he became sure about she likes him and she is looking forward for their friendship...

He replied to her and their chat continued till late hours.. That was just a start of their friendship.. But deep down Asad was sure about his feelings, she is not just a friend for him, he loves her... But will Zoya fell in love with him...An important question to be answered..

That was just a starting of their friendship, they got to know each other through messages and calls. They tried to meet each other in weekends and they became important person in each other's life.
Asad got a best friend in her, she became his pillar of strength.. He had no one to share his feeling till he met Zoya, he was his family's strength but he had no one as his strength. But now he has someone to share his feelings, his thoughts. He started to live his life in a new way, he started to enjoy every phase of his life... Zoya taught him to how to live happily and she gave a new definition for life for him.. He reached in a level where he couldn't think about a life without Zoya.

Tocken number 101,Mrs.Dilshad Khan..

He heard call for his mom's number and walked towards Dr.Zoya Farooqui's room with his mom to meet her new doctor.


Edited by binuuu - 8 years ago

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