Asya FS:ETERNAL SUNSHINE OF SPOTLESS MIND..all chapters on page 3. - Page 2

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When Asad and Dilshad heard Ishwari's name, they moved towards doctor's cabin.

Zoya was busy in checking the details of her new patient's health condition, suddenly she noticed her patient's name...'Dilshad Khan'... But it was too late, before deciding anything she heard the click of her cabin's door... She was not at all prepared.. But she has to be strong.. She is not going to let her past to effect her present. She is the doctor and Dilshad Khan is her patient..Nothing more, nothing less..

Dilshad's case was also not different.. She met Zoya after long four years. A smile started to form on her face and she had an urge to hug her.. She moved forward to hug Zoya, a girl with golden heart whom she loved like her own daughter. But Zoya's next words stopped her..

"Take your seat Mrs. Khan"

For a moment Dilshad halted on the spot. The girl, once she called her phuphi is addressing her as Mrs. Khan. But she can't blame her..She is the soul reason for everything ,so she can't expect anything from her. Dilshad and Asad took their seat and Zoya engrossed in the file.. Once she checked the reports, she got big relief.. Dilshad was in curing stage...
Asad never expected Zoya will treat his mom.. He didn't had the courage to talk with her...So he listened her words without saying anything...

Zoya discussed Dilshad's health details with them. After hearing Zoya's words Asad got a big relief..


Atlast Zoya said

"Mrs.Khan...No need to worry..You will be completely fine...I prescribed you some medicines and please come after two weeks. Now you can take your leave. "

After that Zoya turned to take something from Almirah..Actually she wanted to avoid any conversation with Asad and Dilshad..

Dilshad wanted to talk with her , not as her doctor. When she was going to tell something to Zoya, they heard clicking sound of door followed by a man's voice...

"Zoya..., Mai aagayee"

That man didn't notice Asad and Dilshad, directly landed infront of Zoya and hugged her tightly.

"I missed you Zoya...I know you also missed me..."

"Haan Hadu, I missed you too..but now you are back, I'm soo happy"
Haider was really surprised to hear she missed him. Actually he know she missed him when he was not around , but she never admitted it infront of him.

Dilshad and Asad was still in her room.. Asad's jealousy hit him when he saw Haider hugging Sona. He fisted his palm out of his anger. Zoya was facing Asad, so she saw his expressions and how much jealous he was.


"Woh Hadu..This is my new patient Mrs.Dilshad khan and her son Mr.khan"


When he heard that he turned to them..

"I'm so sorry , I didn't notice you out my excitement. Meeting Zoya after long one week made me forget my surroundings.. Moreover this is her free time, So I thought she will be free now.. So sorry"

"Areh Hadu, Our section is over. They were starting to leave... Oh Sorry!! I forget to introduce him.. This is Haider Sheikh, my fiance..."

Haider looked Zoya for a moment..She blinked to him. Haider got shock after shock.. But he didn't express it on his face.


"Yeah..I'm Haider Sheikh.Neurologist of this hospital... Nice to meet You MR.."

Haider forwarded his hand towards Asad..

"Asad...Asad Ahamad Kan"

Asad shook his hand with Haider.

Asad excused from there and Dilshad followed him. When they were out of sight Ritwick closed their room and turned towards Zoya...

"I need explanation" Haider firmly stated her.

"What..what are you talk..talking Haider Hadu" She stammered..


"I need explanation on what happened few minutes ago..You introduce me as your fiance..How my sister can introduce me as her fiance.. I know something is wrong.. Why did you do that Zoya...why?? "


"I wanted sadistic pleasure Hadu..I wanted it... I wanted to show him that I was not at all affected.. I wanted to show him that he is my past, he has no right on my future..I'm living a happy life without him where he has no place.. I wanted to show him that he couldn't broke me where I 'm completely broken inside.. I wanted to prove infront of him that Asad Ahamad Khan can't control Zoya Farooqui's life"
by saying this she slummed on the nearby sofa..By next second Haider was on her side and consoled her. She clutched on his shirt and started to cry her heart out. She was holding her tears last four years, but now she can't take any control over it... He let her to cry without uttering a single word..

He was not aware she was this much broken inside. He knew she had a past, but he never pressurised her to tell her story to him. Once she told him that she had a lost love, she had no problem with sharing it with him, but she feared it will broke her again and told it to Haider. He understood her situation and didn't compel her to share with him. Deep down he hated that person who was the reason behind her sadness.

Asad completely broke after seeing Zoya in Haider's arms. He never thought Zoya will move forward. How can he think that, she has all the rights to move forward. He is the main reason why they broke up and how can he think that she will wait for him, that too when he himself told her that he is going to marry other girl. Immersed in thoughts he walked and suddenly bumped to a lady... Tanveer , Tanveer Sha...How can he forget that face..


"Asad, Tum yahan...sab teek hena..."

"Woh actually, Mom ki tabiyath teek nahi thi...So.."

"Oh God! What happened to phuphi...How is she now??"

"Nothing to worry..She is okay now"


Asad didn't wanted to share Dilshad's health details with others.

"Thank God! , I'm so happy to see you here Asad... Meeting you after four years is such a pleasant surprise..."

"Same here Tanveer...By the way what are you doing here"

"Seriously Asad?! You are asking this question to a doctor...okay bathathi hun...m a gynacologist and haan, my hubby is also working here...Let's have coffee..I will call him too.."

Suddenly Tanveer's phone started to ring and she attended it..


"I'm really Sorry Asad, some emergency came. Gotta go..meet you some other time..please give me your number"

Both of them exchanged their numbers and Tanveer rushed towards labour room and Asad to his memory lane.

After completing her works Tanveer moved towards Zoya's cabin , where a cute scene welcomed. Zoya and Haider were sleeping by Zoya placing her head on Haider's shoulder. She always adored their bond. Zoya is not only a wonderful sister but also a wonderful sister in law. Tanveer considered herself as very lucky to have them in her life. She didn't disturb them and waited them to wake up. But she noticed the stains of tears on Zoya's face, it made her restless.


Soon Zoya and Haider woke up , Zoya surprised to see Tanveer.

She ran to her and hugged her.

"I missed you bhabhi..."

Tanveer knew something is wrong with her. Usually she call her Tanu but when she is not in her usual self she call her bhabhi.

Tanveer patted her by looking Haider with her questioning eyes. He assured her.

After sometime Zoya told them that she want to talk with them and they planned to go to their favourite cafeteria.

Sona determined to share her past with them. She never shared her pain with anyone. She thought she was healing, but Asad's presence made that wound refresh.

Zoya started to share her past with them. Haider and Tanveer sat either side of Zoya as a pillar of support. She told them how they became friends and each others everything. Both of them were aware about their feelings but none of them was ready to confess. But one day Asad confessed his feelings to Zoya. She was on cloud nine at that day. She wished for her fairy tale love story. God heard her prayers and gifted Asad as her prince charming. She too confessed her feelings to him. That was just a beginning of their love story. There started a beautiful journey of them. Zoya always teased about how he will propose her. Asad always said her that he will give world's best proposal to her. And she knew that he will give best to her.
Edited by binuuu - 8 years ago
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Part-4
--Flashback--
One day evening he gifted her a packet and asked to open it from her home. Soon she reached home and ran to her room. When she opened that gift box she saw a beautiful saree with accessories. Asad messaged her an address and asked her to meet him there.

She was sure Asad is planned something good. When she reached the place she saw a beautifully decorated venue.. Deep down in her heart she knew that he is going to propose her. She asked her to come at 8'O clock, but he was not there, she waited him for whole one hour and she tried to call him. But all the time she heard busy tone from other end. She waited long two hours there with worry filled mind. Suddenly she heard the screeching sound of car. She ran to the car and saw Asad. From his face she understood that something is wrong with him.


"Asad.. Where were you?..Where was your phone. How many time I called you..."

She went on with her quetions.

"Enough Ms.farooqui... Please just shut up your mouth"

She never heard thin tone from him. She really shocked to hear Ms.farooqui from his mouth, he always addressed her as Zoya. But this sudden change made havoc in her. She became quite after hearing his words.

The scenes happened after that was just like nightmare for her.She wished to open her eyes from that sleep. One of the best evening turned to worst evening of her life.

Asad told her that he was playing with her emotions and he never loved her. He was loving someother girl Tanveer and he is willing to marry her. And Zoya was a time pass for him. He really loves Tanveer and going to marry her within two weeks.

She shuddered after hearing his words.Tears started to flow from her eyes where there was not a single stain of tear on his face, no emotion , no guilty. The man whom she loved was playing with her emotions, how fool was she to let him make her fool. She sat on the mud by crying her heart out, after sometime she stood with determinations in her eyes.

"What you thought Mr.Khan? You can fool me and I will cry for my lost love forever...So you are completely mistaken Mr.Khan.. I'm not going to waste a single drop of tear for you. We are over. So goodbye forever. I wish you a very happy life ahead with your partner. I hope we never cross each others path again. "She acted completely strong infront of Dev, but deep down she was completely broken.

On the other hand she was not aware that he was more broken than her. He made her go from his life. He immensely loved her but destiny was cruel to them.

When she reached the home she avoided any interaction with her family and ran to her room. There was something waiting for her. An admission letter for her MD course. She always dreamt of studying the most famous college in Mumbai, finally she got a chance to start her life afresh from the memory of Asad.

She had to join after two days and planned to go next day itself. Her family members were very happy and proud about her. Her brother was settled in Mumbai long ago, Bose family was staying in Delhi only because Sona is doing her MBBS from there. Now she is going to Mumbai, so whole family planned to settle in to their house in Mumbai.

Zoya didn't inform about her departure to anyone. She was not in a state to do that. There she met two beautiful souls Haider Sheikh and Tanveer Sha. Soon they became best of friends. Sona found a brother in Haider. They were her pillar of support. Soon Tanveer and Haider got married. Her best friend became her bhabhi. She was very happy for them, unlike her love story her brother got his love of life. These past four years they were with her in all ups and downs.

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When she finished her story she was crying her heart out. Haider consoled her ,but Tanveer's mind somewhere else. The names Asad and Tanveer striked her.

"What's his real name Zoya? " Tanveer asked her.

"Asad, Asad Ahamad Khan..."

Tanveer felt she is seeing some horror film. Her friend was in pain all these years, if she was aware about this she could have mend it at that moment.


Suddenly Tanveer's eyes caught something rather someone. Far corner of that cafe a man was sitting in his deep thoughts by sipping his coffee.

She realised that is none other than Asad. She excused from Haider and Zoya, and moved towards his chair.

"Hai Asad"

"Hai" , From his body language she understood that he is not interested to talk with her. But she want to do this, life of two innocent souls are in her hand, she want to solve their misery.

At that moment Asad spotted Haider and Zoya. Their proximity made him break the glass on his hand. Tanveer followed his gaze and she spotted he is looking at Zoya's and Haider's direction.

"Come Asad, I need to talk you. "

She held his hand and walked towards their table. Haider and Sona raised their eyes to look who came there and they saw Asad with Tanveer. Suddenly Sona stood up seeing them and started to move from there. Haider too understood that person is none other than who broke his sister's heart.

"Zoya, please stop and hear me out.. I'm one of the main reason you guys separated. Let me give a chance to explain"

Zoya looked Tanveer in shock.

"Please take your seat Asad ". Tanveer told Asad.. Asad and Zoya avoided looking at each other.

So this Tanveer is none other than the girl whom Asad oved and going to marry. But why she didn't marry him and married Haider. Lot of unanswered questions started to form in her.

"I know, what you are thinking Zoya... Everything happened due to some misunderstandings. Your assumption was right, Asad was going to propose you on that day. He was madly in love with you.
You know what, we were family friends.. And my dadi helped phuphi on her crucial time and phuphi promised her that she will fullfill all her wishes.. But dadi ji never asked anything from her. But on that day dadi ji's tabiyath bigad gayi and she asked phuphi to come hospital. From there she asked Asad's hand for me. My dad was also there,he didn't said anything. But phuphi thought she got a golden chance to return back and instantly agreed for dadi's wish without considering Asad's opinion. She was not aware about ur relation. That day phuphi talked with Asad and asked him to marry me. He refused by saying he loves someone, but phuphi thought he is trying to find an excuse to escape and threatened him. She told him that she will end her life if he didn't agree for her decision.. He was shattered and finally he agreed for his mother's sake...
The next day when you guys broke up Asad came to me and told me about you and he can't marry me. He can't give your place to anyone else. I assured him that I will handle the situation. My abbu was very understanding, he always fullfilled my wishes.
My dad asked me whether I'm ready to marry Asad, you know, I love Haider and I told him that and he promised me that he will talk with phuphi and dadi. He made them understand.
Soon phuphi too understood that he loves you. She felt very bad at that time. She considered herself as the culprit for your separation. She was ready to accept you Zoya, She loved you very much..But she was not aware about you two. That's why all this happened.
Next day he came to meet you. But you were not there. We searched many places in Delhi as well as in Kolkata. But you didn't left any clue. You know the remaining story...You got admission in Mumbai and you settled here. I came here like you and shadi hogai and I lost all contacts with Asad.
If I had a small idea about your story I should have helped both of you Zoya..."

After hearing the story tears started to flow from their eyes. Asad got a big relief. He wanted to make her understand , now Tanveer done it. What he is going to do now , she is already engaged, from her face he can clearly understand that she really likes Haider.. Was he too late.. Haider understood his dilemma and initiated the conversation..

'I'm Haider Sheikh, Tanveer's husband'

Asad looked him with wide eyes and he assured him.

Soon Haider and Tanveer moved out of the screen leaving two love birds alone..


Asad held Zoya's hand

"I'm so sorry Zoya... I know,I don't deserve your story..I broke your dreams.. That day I had no other option. I knew if I say truth then you will definitely tell me to marry Tanveer.. And I knew that you will never forget me too... So I thought to make you hate me.. So I told all the lies Zoya...I'm really sorry Zoya..Please forgive me"

"Please Asad...Let's forget it...Let's start afresh... Friends..." She forwarded her hand to him...

He shook her hand with her...
"Friends...By the way your fiance kafi handsome h "

She knew he was teasing her...She nudged him and told

"Bhai h voh mera"

Asad's phone started to ring..It showed Najma's name.. He told Zoya to pick up the call.. But she feared to take it, she really missed her but she never tried to contact her. She nod her head in negative, Asad assured her and finally she picked it...

"Hell...hellloo"

There was complete silence on other side. Najma felt she is dreaming... When she again heard the sound she jumped from her place

"Zoya...Zoyaa...where are you yaar...I missed you...where the hell you disappeared...Don't talk to me..." she started to sob..

Zoya's state was also not less..She missed her bestie, she asked sorry 100th time...Atlast Najma forgave her...


"Ek minute...ek minute...I called bhai and you picked it...ZOYA BHABHIII...Ahem...ahem...I want to meet my bhabhi come bestie...jaldi bhaijaan ke saath gar aajaan...ammi and I will wait for you guys"

After that Zoya and Asad spend some time with each other...There started their friendship again... History is going to repeat.. But this time only happy ending.


That's it guys...finally i completed it😆
Let me know how is it...criticisms are always welcome...
Happy Ramadan everyone..Ramadan Mubarak
Edited by binuuu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow this is interesting
So asya has a past
So he fell for this sister bff who he hated ...haha
So they became friends and more
But who wss asad to marry and did dilshad fix it bcuz she said her fault for asya separation
Wad the gir tanverr but tanveer is haider wife zoya bhabi
Omg she introduced haider as her fiance
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was so cute n thnxx fr pm
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Thankuu😳
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Originally posted by: anopama

Wow this is interesting
So asya has a past
So he fell for this sister bff who he hated ...haha
So they became friends and more
But who wss asad to marry and did dilshad fix it bcuz she said her fault for asya separation
Wad the gir tanverr but tanveer is haider wife zoya bhabi
Omg she introduced haider as her fiance
Cont


Thankuu somuchh anopama diii...
Yeah...they separated 4 years ago...
U will get to know that soon dii...😉
Updated next part...
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Originally posted by: raspi

It was so cute n thnxx fr pm


Thankyuuu😊
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Thankuu😳
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Hiii Binuuu
So nice that got to read all four parts in one go... Very nice Story!!!
Poor AsYa suffered for four years... good that Tanveer finally cleared everything...
Lovely read it was!!!
Thank you for AsYa version 😊

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Beautiful work..
Loved it!
Thanks for pm!

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