||O Jaana...|| OS Series - #5-OS

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Khidki

@Khidki

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello IBians..

Back with yet another idea ..!

We hum it

We sing it,

We feel it,

We Love it..!❤️

"O Jaana..."

Every line of this song is so apt for Shivika,

This song has been an essential ingredient in the Creating the master recipe "Shivika"..!!

The lyrics are love.! I don't think O can say enough for them.!

And the instruments, music and rhythm complement and Complete The Song.!!

Well,

I thought why not take each line as a theme and write. So here , I am Doing Just That..!

Taking every line of this beautiful song as the theme and writing on it.!

Here's the names of a few people, I would love to thank a few special people...

Singer: Pamela, Bhaven Dhanak
Music: Sanjeev Srivastava
Lyrics: Shaheen Iqbal

A Big Thank You To All Of You For Giving Us This Beautiful Song!!

This will be an OS Series.

Each Individual Shot Won't be connected with other.

Don't know how well I will carry it forward, but hoping for the best.!

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Khidki

@Khidki

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Posted: 8 years ago

O jaana
Khoya khoya rehta hai
Dil tadap ye kehta hai
Tu hai mere jeene ki wajah
O jaana..

Ishq hai aansu ishq hai naghma
Ishq sukoon hai raahat hai
Ishq hai sehra ishq hai dariya
Ishq junoon hai zahmat hai (x2)

Tanha adhoora sa
Khaamosh lamha sa
Tehra hua hai dil yahaan
Mehsoos kar le tu
Jazbaat ki khushbu
Khud se karun kya mai bayaan

Dard hai jo halka sa
Khaab khaab chalka sa
Tu muskuraaye har jagah
O jaana..

Khoya khoya rehta hai
Dil tadap ye kehta hai
Tu hai mere jeene ki wajah
O jaana..

Kis pe karun zaahir
Hain dard kya aakhir
Kyon sukoon mujh se khafa
Betaab lamhon mein
Benaam aashqon mein
Yeh aaks kis ka ban gaya
Ghum ko aazmaane de
Dil ko chot khaane de
Kya h chale kuch to pata

O jaana
Khoya khoya rehta hai
Dil tadap ye kehta hai
Tu hai mere jeene ki wajah
O jaana.. O jaana o jaana..

Edited by annikaa - 8 years ago

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Khidki

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Khidki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1-OS
"Ishq Sukoon Hai Raahat Hai"

She flung her arms around Saahil, taking him in her protective embrace. She caressed his hair as tears ran down her cheeks. He was her life! She looked at Shivaay who was standing by them. He was like their Knight ready to protect them from anything and everything. His mind went back in flashback and guilt engulfed him, he remembered how she had cried, in his arms after that explosion thinking she had lost Saahil. Damn, just remembering the scene he had goosebumps and his heart ached. Why had been such a devil!? Why did he have to hurt her this bad? Why !? How he wished he could turn back time and delete that scene forever.! Alas, no one had that option and having the name and power also he couldn't do that.He extended his hand to the little boy, but his guilt did not allow him to even touch the boy, he was scared of himself, he loathed himself, his actions now burned him inside. He slowly started taking his hand behind, when she caught it. She placed his hand on Saahil's shoulder. He looked at her, and met her eyes. Their eyes spoke the unspoken. She knew he regretted. She knew he was wrong. But she also knew he was ashamed, she also knew he cared, she also knew he loved, and today he proved he deserved..!He knelt down, it wasn't his thing, but he did. It din't matter if the world looked at the Shivaay Singh Oberoi kneel down, it really din't. All that mattered now was them. They were now his family. She was his family, and so was he. They were now a part of the family,his family. He hugged them both,promising in his head, to be their wall, to stand between them and sorrow, to protect them from adversities. If anything had to come to them it had to first face the Great Wall Of Shivaay. He hugged them.
She felt protected. She felt cared for. She felt home. She always feared, whether she would be there always to protect her little one who was more like her son than brother, today she wasnt scared, cause she knew if she din't he would!! She trusted him more than herself. She kissed Saahil on the forehead. He smiled, he saw a reflection of himself in her. He saw him, in her.
Finally, they got up and went in. She fed him with her own hands. He looked on smiling. She was the same person, who was left abandoned hungry. She was the same Anika who probably never saw care but she cared for him(Saahil) like no would ever do. She loved him like the mother , like the father, like the brother, like the sister, like the friend, all rolled into one. She was the same who had never seen love.! He turned away, guilt punching him hard. He just added to her pains. She might forgive him, but he would never forgive himself for what he did to her.Never.
Soon, she carried Saahil to the room and patted his head gently to sleep. Never even having seen the love the care she did it all perfectly. He was by her all the time. He was now a part of their small world.
Saahil had drifted to sleep. She got up and pulled the bedcover over him. And gently walked out to the pool, he followed her in silence. She sat on the cushioned stool looking at the waters. He sat by her side and gently placed his hand on hers, letting her know he was with her. She looked at him and then his hand and whispered a "Thank You" with moist eyes. He placed both his hands on hers.
She couldn't keep it inside, she broke down. The storm inside gave in to the rain. She cried!! "Anika..!" He whispered, placing his hand on her shoulder. She turned to him and hugged him tight and cried placing her face against his chest. He was taken aback. He always was. Seeing his Anika cry pained his heart. He soothed her by rubbing her back gently."Anika...sab theek hain..main hoon naa.!"
She looked up at him-"Thank You Shivaay! "
He nodded in a no.."Anika its me...jisko Sorry Bolna chaiye..Maine galat kiya hai!I m sorry Anika...I know it will never be enough for what I did...but...She nodded in a no...and he nodded in response, she hugged him.
They sat their a while, with her in his arms. She needed someone, someone who just understood her , who was there to care for her, to understand the storm within her without any communication and he did that perfectly.
She din't mind showing her tears to him any longer. She knew, he would only strengthen her. They broke apart, he rubbed her bare arms which were now cold sitting outside for too long. She felt warm, she felt safe, she felt contentment. He made her feel at peace.
"Anika...Maine kaha naa...tum rote huye bilkul achi nahi lagti...shh..stop crying!"She sniffed as he rubbed away her tears."Better???" He asked.She nodded. And he hugged her, she hugged him back. He rubbed her back, calming her in his embrace.She slowly realised. He was rubbing her arms and kissing her hair. She loved it.
But!?
She slowly withdrew her arms from his back, but he continued to shower her with his care, rubbing and kissing her head, her hair and forehead. He gently caressed her arms up and down.
She looked at him, his concern for her! While he kept mumbling a few sweet reassuring words, pulling her still closer. His heartbeat thudding aloud for her to hear.

Bahon ke darmiyanDo pyaar mil rahe hainJaane kya bole mannDole sun ke badanDhadkan bani zubaan

She stiffened slowly.She had goosebumps on her almost bare arms. He realised the tension in her body he slowly let air between them and looked at her, whose eyes shone with love. He slowly pushed away her locks that stuck to his face back behind her ear. His hand then tucked those locks covering her face behind her ear as well. Slowly his lips followed and then moved upwards and he placed a wet kiss on her forehead. His eyes traveled downwards towards her eyes. While her eyes opened slowly to meet his. His lips parted his words were now long stuck behind. She let out an inaudible deep breath. He was still cupping her face while she gently held on to his arms. He inched his lips closer to hers. She din't back off, her heart beats raced. She waited for him to inch still closer. He stopped midway. She advanced closer this time, reducing the gap.

Khulte bandh hoteLabhon ki ye ankahiKhulte bandh hoteLabhon ki ye ankahiMujhse keh rahi haiKi badhne de bekhudiMil yoon ki daud jaayeinNas nas mein bijliyaan

Before she knew, he had once again moved up and placed a kiss on her forehead, and hugged her. She broke the hug and moved her lips to his lips and pecked them, gently and delicately as a flower. Smiling she broke apart and all he saw was love. Love in her eyes, he felt home. His body and mind dont work. He saw only love. She saw the reflection of the same on his eyes. They wanted to stay like that until eternity, in each others arms.
Aasmaan ko bhi yeHaseen raaz hai pasandAasmaan ko bhi yeHaseen raaz hai pasandUljhi uljhi saanson kiAawaaz hai pasandMoti luta rahi haiSaawan ki badliyaan

He placed his arm around her she placed her head on his shoulder as he pulled her closer. He kissed the side of her head and placed his head over hers as they looked away at the falling droplets of water which created ripples the moment they touched the surface of the water in the pool.
The cool breeze witnessed the warmth of their love. The water sighed at their flooding emotions. The crashing droplets shied away at the sound of their rhythmically synced heartbeats.The night smiled at their peaceful hearts entangled in contentment with the each other.

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This one is dedicated to Farah(farinaks). You wanted me to pen on this song. I tried , hope you like it.
This song is generally, of the sensual environment sort, I twisted it to a much deeper meaning with emotions of love.!!Hope I did justice.!

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P.S
Hope you all liked this one.Looking forward to your feedback and reviews.😳

Edited by annikaa - 8 years ago

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Pritha Roy

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Posted: 8 years ago

Blooming my heart with Emotions ❤️ This was peaceful, serene, music to soul and so much beyond Love ❤️

How gentle is he and how Soft she is! they are souls floating with the notes of this song ❤️

U have expressed the inner dept so beautifully Annika ... Where can I come and hug u 🤗 for this Soothing my racing heart kinda OS.

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Khidki

@Khidki

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pritzz
Blooming my heart with Emotions ❤️ This was peaceful, serene, music to soul and so much beyond Love ❤️
How gentle is he and how Soft she is! they are souls floating with the notes of this song ❤️

U have expressed the inner dept so beautifully Annika ... Where can I come and hug u 🤗 for this Soothing my racing heart kinda OS.

You always make me speechless.!

jhappii...

🤗