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KashiTessa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Annii I want to give you a teddy hug right now.
You are an amazing writer.
You just showed that love is like a paradox.
It gives you happiness as well as sadness.
Loved the update

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Mystery1234

@Mystery1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

RES

will be back sooon😊

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--Nargis--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Beautiful and heartfelt!!!Loved it!👏

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Tadibaaaz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Beautiful I loved it

Can you please update the ts of Mallika marriage where obros kidnap her

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Khidki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: water9786
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Amazing as always Anni..👏
Loved this.
This was soothing after all what is happening around, after Gul.
Lapse🤢
Meeting after three months🤢

Thanks for this piece Anni at much needed time.
Waiting for next..
Update soon

Thanks Chhaya..!

Yea saw a few post saying time lapse...not quite around anyway i like the CVs to surprise me ..!😆

O I wrote it like more than a day before posting... Couldn't make time to post.!

Thanks Again..!⭐️

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farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Beautiful... It was calming and soothing
Tq fr sch a beautiful... Amazing... Fantastic... Fabulous treat
Continue soon

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Sri vidya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Thanks for the post dear . It came as a soothing thing after lapse confirmation. Hope they both join soon let the love blossom

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.Dalisay.

@.Dalisay.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

OS 1 : Ishq sukoon hai rahat hai

omg that was BEAUTIFUL .Shivaay's guilt, Annika understanding his emotions trusting him with Saahil now , n shivika scene near pool. sooo good. 👏 n that song baahon ke darmiyaan suits them perfectly here. 😳

Great job sweetie 👍🏼

ishq sukoon h raahat hai. ❤️⭐️

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.Dalisay.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

OS2: Ishq hai sehra, ishq hai dariya

I love SHivaay. bas ! 😳 He is truly in love wid his wife n totally understands her. he knew she was faking it. he too bcme upset bcz she is upset ❤️
They are faking it for the sake of OmRi. n the other couple is faking it for SHivika ohh how poignant that bit was.

we always get Annika's povs in the show. so glad to read the scenario from SHivay's pov. Thank u for that Anni. :)

You were fab at writing comedy I knew but here u were amazing writing emotional stuff.
⭐️ 😳

Keep writing more in this series. wd love to read!

Edited by .Dalisay. - 8 years ago