Conflicting Emotions - RiKara OS Part 2 (Page 4) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome yar

it's a complete different take on RiKara
you well portrayed om's innerthoughts and emotions very well
plz continue it

Thank U so much.. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Naina280599

This was really amazing. I loved it. The way you wrote his pov was awesome. Best realisation idea I've read so far. You wrote amazingly well 👍🏼

Please continue this.
Much love.

Thank U..Glad that U loved it.. 😊 Yeah sure will continue it soon...
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Originally posted by: koochiekoochie


It is so beautiful Teju. U have penned down omkara's emotions brilliantly. How I wish CVS had given us omkara's monologues for gauri.

Thank U Reiynaah.. 😊 I know we might not get this in show.. Show ka Om is TRPwala Om.. 😆 so we shouldn't expect much..
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Thanks.. 😊
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Here goes 2nd part of OS.. 😊
Part 2

No it can't be possible.. how is it possible..? he looked at drawing again.. He was in his thoughts while drawing it.. so he might have done some mistake.. Omkara closed his eyes in frustration and those two faces one Gauri's-- girl whom he doesn't even want to see and ChulBul's-- whom he desperately wanted to free from KT's clutches.. Both images ..

Oh my god.. ChulBul N Gauri have so much resemblance. No this is not possible Om.. Something is wrong.. I need to find out the truth for that I need to meet that girl again. That girl why my every problem starts with that girl nowadays ?

Om again went to KT's haveli .. He was in corridor Where he saw ChulBul standing there.. ChulBul ..' he met his best friend finally.. Om was so happy seeing him alive n safe.. Om ran towards him happily n hugged him tightly.. he felt so much happiness seeing ChulBul in front of him.. (that happiness was so much that Om forgot what he discovered from his drawing.. N why did he came here..) At the moment ChulBul is safe n sound this thing is most important for him.. Om looked at ChulBul.. But wait why chulbul is looking so sad...?

Chulbul: Omkaraji, aap yaha se chale jaiye plz.. (ChulBul was pleading to him with tears in his eyes..)

O: I ain't leaving without U.. Why U are sad..? there is no need to get scared.. Mein hoon na kuch nahi hoga tumhe..'

Chulbul: nahi Omkaraji.. Aap jaiye yaha se.. hume kuch nahi hoga.. humara sath bas yahi tak ka tha plz.. isse pahile KT ke log aye aap jaiyiye yaha se..

Now Om got angry with his constant pleading look to let him leave alone in KT's den N go.. He said angrily "Not without U.. U are my friend and I'm not going to leave U here samjhe tum" n Om lifted him in his arms despite of ChulBul's protest.. Some tinkling sound came.. So Om looked at noise's direction and shocked to see chains in Chulbul's feet.. That mere sight made him angry.. But Om didn't have time to release them as of now.. They will do it later once they will go far away..

But to their bad luck KT's people started following them.. After some time.. They were surrounded by KT's goons n KT himself.. So Om took Chulbul's hand started dragging him and running towards jungle.. But due to chains it was not easy for Chulbul to run away.. Blood started dripping out due to wounds from ChulBul's legs.. Om couldn't see his best buddy in pain.. He has no option.. Om called Police station and told abt Kali Thakur's goon following him to kill them.. Though Police was hesitant to act against goon like KAli thakur... Om threatened them literally .. His Oberoi name was enough to make them move.. For a moment he behaved like Oberoi ..why not It was matter of his Best buddy's life.. Om was ready to keep his principles aside for ChulBul..When KT came near them.. Om pushed ChulBul and told him to run away but that push made Chulbul fall on the ground.. N wig fall.. N it was Gauri.. So it was true.. Omkara was shocked.. he got this doubt after that drawing but it was damn truth.. But he has forgotten that .. even KT was shocked.. That Gave Om idea that KT knew about it so he played this bali chadhana n all to make him fool.. so that after Chulbul's death Om can go away from Baraily and he can get amrried to Gauri.. KT started dragging Gauri along with him..

"ChulBul is none other Gauri.. she is the one.. How can she.. she lied to me.. Became my best friend.. told lies.. She is fake.. this girl can give nothing than betrayal to anyone.. But then she almost died when I accidently about to stab my mother. She saved mom when Mr.Oberoi tried to burn my mother..not one time but so many times.. She saved my life too when I was accidently abt to fall from railing.. helped me during svetlana's case.. She might have given me betrayal by becoming ChulBul.. but in form of chulbul she gave me best buddy.. What I have to do now..? Kya karu mein..He remembered his promise given to ChulBul.."

Om looked in direction where KT was dragging her.. Gauri's chains were hurting her.. KT was dragging her like an animal.. Don't know why but Om's anger shot up seeing that.. he screamed at KT to stop.. Whatever happened after that.. Om beat them all black n blue including KT.. Till then Police also reached N they arrested KT.. KT was dragged by police but before leaving he told Om that he will return one day to take revenge of all this..

Gauri Thanked Om saying "aaj aapne phir humari jaan bachayi Omkaraji.. uske liye Thank U.." before Om can say something Gauri became unconscious in front of his eyes.. Om looked at her feet they were bleeding badly.. Om picked her up.. She looked so calm in his arms now.. Om took her to nearby hospital .. There two kids came running near her saying Gauri didi.. Kya hua Gaurididi ko Jeeju.. ? Om was shocked listening jeeju from their mouth.. 😆Om sighed "look like these people took Marriage so seriously.." He first completed formalities.. Doc was shocked seeing chains in her feets n refused to take this case.. But Omkara made him talk with Police inspector who arrested KT.. after that Doctor was ready to treat her.. There came another girl running calling Gauri .. By that time Gauri regained consciousness.. She was shocked seeing that girl and asked her "Richa, What is she doing here in hospital? Maa toh thik hain na..?' Om looked at her.. and new girl Richa.. Richa told her her mother has been admitted to hospital .. After listening that she didn't even stop.. without caring about her wounds.. she started to get up.. Doc was telling her to lie down but she was not in mood to listen that.. Stubborn girl.. Om got it and he came forward to tell her he will look after her mother.. Gauri said "Nahi Omkaraji, aapne humare liye bahot kuch kiya hain.. Hum aapko aur parehsan nahi karna chahte.." here she goes again testing my patience.. Om said.. "Gauri lie down, I will take care of your mom trust me..ChulBul apne dost pe itana Bharosa toh kar sakta hai" Those words somehow affected her n she calmed.. Om told Richa to go ahead.. He will come back when Gauri's treatment will start.. Richa nodded n left from there .Om just did procedure N went to see her mother.. There he saw Doc was telling Richa to pay for Gauri's mom's treatment as soon as possible so that they can continue with her treatment.. Richa told him"Just few days Doc.. Her daughter is ill n she is too admitted in hospital.. Once she will be good she will start working.. N will pay for her mother's treatment.. Om was shocked to see Gauri's life truth.. That her mother was fighting with disease n she needed money for her treatment.. That's why she was getting married to KT.. "Maa ke liye sab kuch karna padta hain omkaraji".. He remembered ChulBul's words ..Om sighed.. He was feeling bad for her and angry on her at the same time.. why? She could have done something else not this.. In meanwhile Om's phone rang and it was from BuaMa..

BuaMa informed him about Svetlana's Shadi preparations and she knows he went to bring back ChulBul from Baraily.. She told him to come back with Gauri to oberoi Mansion... "Wait Bua Ma, how do U know about Gauri..?" BuaMa told him she and Janvi know about ChulBul being Gauri, Gauri told them entire truth about how U saved her.. "Omkie-Shomkie Itani badi baat tumne humse chupayi? Chal koi nahi.. Jaldi se us kudi ko ghar lekar aa ja.." "She lied to us BuaMa.. Dhoka dekar rahi who humare ghar me" "Omkie putthar, Buri nahi hain woh.. She lied to you, lived with U as ChulBul, but she never tried to be Gauri in front of U.. Did she ever try to hurt U or Ur family.. ulta usne hum sabki help ki hain... Aur beta har jhoot Beimaani nahi hota.. She helped U so much till date hain na? Toh Patni na sahi.. Apane dost ko toh sath lekar aa sakta hain na? Jaldi aa ja, tab tak mein is Jaleel-janaani ko sambhalati hoon"

She cut the call.. Om started thinking about what BuaMa has said to him.. It was true Gauri helped him so much.. Became his friend, he remembered when ChulBul asked him about why he is getting married to Svetlana? He said so many mean things about her.. He was telling this about her to ChulBul and both were same people.. Still she didn't say anything.. Still because of her One lady died by doing suicide but now I can't leave her here alone... Even though KT is behind bars she is not safe here.. First thing first.. He went to meet doc with Richa n told him he will pay expenses of all Gauri's mom's treatment hence forward.. He need not to be worried for money for Gauri's mom's treatment.. Richa was so happy seeing him helping Gauri.. She thanked him.. But Om said, "Richa I am requesting you.. I can't leave Gauri here.. KT is still alive.. She is not safe here.. so I can't leave her here.. Plz just take care of Gauri's mom.." Richa told him she will take care of Gauri's mom.. He was relieved ..

Now Om thought he needs to talk with her.. Meantime Gauri's wounds have been nursed and Om thanked doctor n went to talk to her..

Om: Gauri Get ready.. We are going back to home..

Gauri: Kya?? Hum nahi aa sakte aapke sath.. humari maa beemar hain yaha pe.. unhe kaun dekhega..?

Om: Aur jab Chulbul banke OM me thi tab kaun dekh raha tha? Tumhari dost Richa thi na tab.. toh ab bhi wahi dekhegi..

Gauri was speechless ..

Gauri: Nahi, Woh hume maa ki beemari ke ilaaz ke liye paise dene hain.. uske liye hume kaam karna padega..

Om: Uski koi zaroorat nahi hain.. Maine already payment kar diya hain.. uski chinta karne ki need nahi hain ab tumhe..

she kept looking at him.. N Om saw that..

Om: Kya dekh rahi ho..? Jaldi se ready ho jaon.. Quick..

Gauri: Nahi.. aapko humare liye itna karne ki zaroorat nahi hain.. Hum kar lenge.. humari ma ke illaz ka kharcha..

Om became angry hearing that.. This girl always tests his patience.. "Yeah really? Tum galat jagah pe galat dimag lagaogi na.. KT ke sath shaddi karne ke liye ready thi .. Par mujhse help lena manjoor nahi tumhe.. ? haan?"

Gauri: (Wo toh hum aapko KT se bachane ke liye kar rahe the..Par hum aapko bata nahi sakte..) Nahi aisee baat nahi hain.. Hum aapke aur ehsaan nahi le sakate Omkaraji..

Om was really frustrated in meantime.. yeh ladki.. Why can't she understand she is not safe here.. Yeh aisee nahi manegi.. Heneedsto trick her now..

Om: But what can U do now.. ? I already paid for Ur mom's treatment Gauri.. before she can say something Om said.. Can't U help me to remove Svetlana from our life.. Meri n meri mom ki help nahi kar sakti.. ? ChulBul toh meri bahot help karta tha..

Gauri: kaise..? Hum aapki kya help kar sakte hain omkaraji..?

Om: (Finally Om smiled.. It's working) wo mein tumhe baad mein bataunga.. But we need to move from here quickly.. Tumhe tumhari mom ki chinta karane ki need nahi hain.. Doc will give her good treatment.. Richa promised me to take care of her.. She will look after her.. don't worry.. Jaldi se ready ho jaon.. N before Gauri can say anything he left from there..

Gauri sat there looking at him.. She decided to go with him.. If Omkaraji needs her help to remove sultanaji from their life.. she will help him.. She got ready.. But before leaving she requested Omkara to let her meet her mom once.. When she came out after seeing her mom one lil boy ran towards her saying didi..

Gauri: Chotu kaise ho tum..?

Chotu: Gaurididi, Mein thik hoon.. aapki pair ki chot kaisee hain..? Peechali baar bhi aapko aise hi chain mein rakh tha na Kali Thakur ne.. dekho kitani chot lagi hain is baar aapko..

That caught Om's attention.. He realized Kali Thakur tortured her last time too.. he has seen it in front of his eyes now.. He became angry again.. N asked Gauri.. Chale Gauri.. We have to move.. Gauri nodded N then they moved towards their car to start their journey towards Mumbai..

Om was going to sat at driver seat.. Gauri moved towards back seat.. What are U doing, Gauri.? Waha nahi aage baitho.. Gauri nodded nervously and went to sit at front seat.. Om sighed thinking he had to do this.. Otherwise she would have never agreed to come with me.. To make Gauri Sharma ready to come with him he had to do deal with her.. He sighed.. Ajeeb ladki hain sach mein.. N then they started their journey back to Mumbai..

(Baraily To Mumbai...Back to home)

That's it.. Don't know how is 2nd part.. since Elvi gave spoiler that Misunderstanding might not be removed.. So I thought may be Hatred will go away.. n lil bit misunderstanding will be still there.. 😛 Don't kill me plz.. becoz.. Om can now help her only if her mother is involved so I thought for this idea.. Mom is soft corner for Omkara.. Misunderstanding will be removed slowly.. since Janvi n Bua Ma knows Gauri N KT's entire truth.. I might write after this to Mumbai if I will get time otherwise this one is finished of here itself.. 😆 Sorry for spell or grammar errors.. Hope U guys will love this part too..Thanks for all love U guys showed to piece written by one non-writer.. 😛😆 Thanks love ya all.. 🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome!! Loved it so much. ❤️
Please do continue this.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tejuuu. Great yaar😃..
Ur version of today's episode..haan..
Coz this never is going to happen in the show..hope its atleast half of it..

Anyways lovely writing. ..keep writing..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yay! you posted part two! And gave us a glimmer of hope for part three.
This made me very happy... if not complete renewal of trust and friendship, at least Omkara is leaning towards giving Gauri the benefit of doubt. That's much more than what can be hoped for from the show.

Thanks for the awesome update! Keep writing and posting more for us soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank U.. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pt311288

Nice update loved it

Thank U.. 😊

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