Conflicting Emotions - RiKara OS Part 2 (Page 4)

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Teju

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Roselind
Teju...The first part was Splendid...😃⭐️
Om's feelings were portrayed so aptly...⭐️😃
He was hurt, restless, disturbed, bothered, etc., etc., & lastly shocked...everything written so incredibly...⭐️👏
He kept on jumping from Chulbul to Gauri in his thoughts...& the outcome was the painting which might have told him that Chulbul & Gauri are same...😲😉
I loved that bold line which Om said...that 'humari kahani bhi kuch aur hoti' one...😳😳

I will read the part soon...😉😊

Thank U rose.. haha I wanted to show artistic Omkara's heart n mind.. So used idea of painting.. 😳

No matter take Ur own time.. 😊

Edited by --Zehnaseeb-- - 8 years ago

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Amzaing os...

Both parts are very nice😳😳

Loved it

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Teju

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: rikara94
Amzaing os...
Both parts are very nice😳😳
Loved it

Thank U jyoti.. 😊

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

great one why dont serial writers read our fan fiction they will get so many khidtod ideas that they wont follow these khis pita ones

please do write more

bye sumi

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Teju

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
great one why dont serial writers read our fan fiction they will get so many khidtod ideas that they wont follow these khis pita ones
please do write more
bye sumi

Thanks Sumi for Ur nice words.. yeah.. since writer won't give us.. thought to pen it down.. 😳