Conflicting Emotions - RiKara OS Part 2 (Page 4) - Page 2

Originally posted by: --Zehnaseeb--

Haha Sumi thank U.. 🤗 that shyari was all from Om's mind.. Om shows his anger n hatred for her when circumstances came.. I mean jahaan ussse ankhon ke samne dikhta hain//..ya phir lagta hain uski ankhon ko that she is doing wrong then he becomes angry on her.. So I wrote that shayari.. 😳 yeah will post another part till night.. 😊 aaj d end OS ka.. 😛 Writing is not very good job.. specially for science students.. 😆 Art lovers are so good in that.. 😳😊

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

I really really loved this introspective Om kash show mein. Bhi aosa hota... And that shayari was bang on... Plz continue

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

It was amazing teju such a beautiful update... The way you expressed events that happenedwih gauri and omkara was amazing... And the revealetiin was amazing I was also thinking of it in one of my OS's but you did it... Nice one do write more

Originally posted by: lakshmi32

Tejuuu 🤗

O bete ki itna lamba os...but I thoroughly enjoyed ur update..om is remembering each and everything happened his life after gauri's entry... You did anatomy of bareilly and chulkara track 😆 I love the way om analysing each and every event of his past...he want to blame gauri for everything but somewhere he is failing misserbly...so at last he discovered who is chulbhul that through his art ...

He discovered his passion through his art...

Thanks for the beautiful os and pm...