ISHRA SS||BURNING IN JEALOUSY|| PART 8 AT PG 112

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zohakhan7

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Kavya

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Awesome chappy
Update soon

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nafnaf

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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 1

Absolutely brilliant!!
Expressed all emotions beautifully!!
Raman so jealous of Shani!!!
Ishita so jealous of Shagun!!
Raman missing Ishita so much!!
He comes to her apartment and tells her he will kill her and then kill himself before he lets her marry Mani!!
Their beautiful kiss and his confession before he passes out!!

But I suppose when he wakes up in the morning he will not remember anything and poor Ishita will be heartbroken again!!!💔

Please continue soon!
Thank you so much for the pm!!

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Heatsha8176

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice start
Raman getting jealous hearing from aliya ishita going to marry mani
Happy to see Raman telling shagun to back off n be in her limits
Liked seeing both ishita n Raman jealous
Raman drunk n determined
Kissing ishita madly confession he still loves her b4 he passed out
Now what's gonna happen
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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Soumita Chatterjee

@ria1990

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice concept ..

Great start ..

All emotions perfectly portrayed ..

Both burning in jealousy

Raman 😭remembering their moments

Their kiss😳

Update soon n thanks for pm.

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snehaseshan

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome story so glad u used this concept and wrote a story & fabulous update.. continue soon...

Edited by snehaseshan - 8 years ago

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Dilpreet kaur

@cooldilkaur

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome story

I hope this could have happened in yhm also

But anyways start was awesome

Ishita herself proposed mani

Raman was shattered

Lets sea what happens nxt

Ty 4 d pm

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threeta

@threeta

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Posted: 8 years ago

Its awesome update..

How beautifully u brought Raman possessiveness.

U do full justice about this part rather then cvs.

Thanks for updating

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Yuvashree

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice update.. ...ishita is soo jealous of shagun.. ..raman is sooo jealous of Mani...nice. ..nice.. .waiting for next update di.. .bye..

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Kadianvi

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Awesome start. Raman is fully jealous. Ishita also declared that she is going to marry mani in front of Raman. Drunken Raman went to Ishita and confess his love. Superb. Update soon