FF: HUM part 16 Last pg 7

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Part 1 below
Part 2 below
Part 3 below
Part 4 and 5 below
part 6 pg 2
Part 7 pg 3
part 8 pg 3
part 9 pg 4
Part 10 pg 4
Part 11 pg 5
Part 12 pg 5
Part 13 pg 6
Part 14 pg 6
Part 15 pg 7
part 16 last pg 7
i am new in this forum and my first story hope all like this about our favourite couple
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Posted: 8 years ago
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this story is about two people whose destiny made them one as they never thought to be together
she is beautiful simple caring loving
he is handsome smart and clever😉
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hope it was true😊😳

Part 1

They have been working together since long and have become good friends..they indulge themselves in good conversations and have fun along others. Have started to understand each other moods and help each other in work.

They were working on other project and also having fun but then a mishap occurred and she has been hurt badly..he ran towards her and panicked to see her in pain...he carried her in her arms and scolded her that what have she done to herself...she had her arms around his neck and cried sliently by keeping her head on his chest...he saw that and his anger melted...he was too concerned for her and he felt hurt to see her like that she was too weak from last two weeks he observed that...they visited the hospital and doctor advised her rest...

She was at her home resting due to pain but she had other pains which she hided inside her by kept smiling. The door bell rang she was surprised to see him but was waiting for someone else. They greeted each other he sat comfortably on sofa and she asked how come u r here have not gone to work he said Meri madrasan idr hai tou Ravan kumar kam kaise kar saktha hai.. she chuckled and said what will u have? He said U...she looked at him he said u are not able to walk and asking me wht i will have come...i have ordered food will have together she was somewhere happy tht someone is there to care for her and share her loneliness...Both had food and he asked her abt coffee..she said yes i will make but he stopped her abd said i asked would u like to have coffee by the handsome man she asked u know how to make coffee he said he makes the best coffee taste it urself she said lets taste...they had there coffee along with some good conversations suddenly her phone rang she become happy to see the caller name and he noticed that and knew who it was...his phone also rang and friends asked to attend the party he said yes he will be there...he turned and saw she was in tears and crying uncontrollably...he went to her asked the reason...she saw him and said nothing its just...words died in her mouth and she again cried he cant see her like that...he hold her face in his palm and asked her with full concerned she told him everything in her hicups due to crying he was shocked to listen how can someone do like this to her he was worried and hugged her tightly she to hugged him and cried her heartout ...seeing her like this he also had tears in his eyes he was strong man but cant see her like this... He kissed her forehead and make her feel relax but both felt something and looked into each other eyes with tears he said be relax dont worry everuthing will be fine...she nodded and said she want some time alone if he doesnt mind he understood her feelings and said takecare of ur self pls and went to his home instead of party and her crying image kept coming in his eyes and he become frustrated that y he is feeling pain to see her like this..

Part 2

Few days passed everyone knew y she was depressed and all helped her to recover from it...He took special care of her but didnt show her bcz he knows she will be hurt more.

One day all planned for hai party...actually it was his plan but involved everyone she was in no mood to come but due to everyone insistence she said yes...she also thought to firget everything and start a new life...she dressed beautifully in white skirt and black lacy top...as she entered the hall everyone praised her but he was amazed and he was too wearing same colours colour cordinated

He knew she doesnt like smoking and drinking so put a banner in hall no smoking and drinking...she smiled seeing it and he asked so hows the theme sge said loved it thanked he smiled and said lets have something then games will start...she said that did u make best coffee again he said its a secret dont open it its for only special ones and winked and goes from there...she smiled happily and something tickled in her heart

All enjoyed the party and later went to their respective homes but she was still there and she somewhere knew he did it for her so she thanked him and said i am so happy to get a friend like u who without any agreed did all this for me..he smiled and said i had a agreed as i want madrasan back in her JKR mood he indirectly told her what he actually wanted...

Then she went to her home and changed into her nightwear and relaxed and thought about the happenings that how her life has been changed in one sudden move...she then remembered him that how he is there for here everytime and at last she thought about the real kiss on her forehead and a smile crept on her face she thought again what is she thinking about he as a friend helped her so stop thinking other things and u are not worth him...she closed her eyes and dozed off

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Part 3

In the morning she got up, did daily chores and ready to leave for work. She was all ready to have the work started but as usual he was late and she was waiting for him and somewhere in deep inside eager to see him now but she didn't realize her these feelings...soon he entered the workplace and she smiled greeted each other and said now u don't think that I am fine now so u are not going to be on time again please change ur habit😛...he said lions wake up on their own time😉😛...and lets start the work otherwise u will again be after me...

The day passed well and then they were informed that they have to work outdoor tomorrow in evening...

They were happily engrossed in there work and completed it but there were some boys who were eyeing her again and again they both noticed she ignored but his anger reached its peak and went to those boys and asked the reason they told that they are her fan and she is beautiful hot and there was a slap on the face and he started beating them black and blue...other workers came to rescue but he was not stopping...she came and pleaded him to stop and said u have hurt urself too please stop...he saw her and stop but warned the boys and they ran away.

She dragged him to the rest place and took out aid box to heel his wound...his eyes were filled with anger as he can not tolerate anyone talking about her infront of him and her eyes with tears bcz this happened due to her and mouthed a sorry to him that he got hurt he said no its ok and it does not pain as I am hero...to lighten the situation, she said yes now u r real hero and bandage the wound he was just staring at her that how beautiful she is by her heart and face and smiling thinking that she is near him that to without any official reason. She did her work and said now I am thinking that how u will make best coffee for me with injured hand but lets taste my hand made coffee may be u like it...in his mind I like everything made by my madrasan and chuckled she asked my u are smiling like this did I say a joke he said to her i will even have zehar by u my darling and winked... and waited for the coffee...while they were having coffee someone called her outside for some work...he took her cup and drink from it where her lips touched the mug and he thought that y he did it but just smiled and put it back...that was the best coffee I had till today😳...his feeling were growing more but he did not want to be in hurry and also wanted to know her feelings too...she saw from window what he did and smiled and felt shy.😳😳

Some days passed and both started having some feelings more then friendship but never showed to each other...they had to go on a tour and promote their work both were happy to know that they will spend some more time together. They were fully engrossed in there work and there was two day off for them so both decided to go for outing and enjoy the place...they did shopping and he bought a beautiful dress for her and gifted her...she was too happy to get it and thanked him...then had dinner games and at last after having dinner they went to beach side...both sat on sand near the water waves those were touching there feet...he closed his eyes and felt relaxed she looked at him and thought that he is so different first I was so wrong to think about him as arrogant and selfish but he is not what he shows to world he is just a cute little baby and loves everyone😊...then she looked at the sky filled with stars and a moon he opened his eyes and saw her beautiful face and praised her for her beauty, clean heart, bravery and how she smiles in every situation. He cleared his throat to seek her attention and said what r u looking at koi horoscope pa book likhni hai kia...she said her kuch bhi line...he chuckled and said ya phie twilight ka wo wala scene yaad aa gaya tujhe...she innocently asked which scene he said boli na ban...she said I really don't know kis ki baat kar rhy ho he said ma kiss ki hi baat kar rhahun😉 she felt shy😳😳 and remembered his real kiss...he moved bit closer to her, her breathe stopped and he said ab yaad aya both shared an eyelock and suddenly he throw water on her face and ran she was shocked and ran behind him...then stopped in way that she cant run more, he came back and said u lost...she said not so soon and threw water on him making him wet and she was wet too and ran again but he caught her and they both fell down he was on her and they were never so close to each other instead of their work requirements and now having different feelings...he was looking in her eyes and asking about her feelings and moving down to her lips...she was shy her breathe stopped her heart wants him to go on but suddenly water waves touched their body and the parted away... to get away from embrassement he said u have become old cant ran too much see I caught u and said now lets go back hotel...both reached hotel and remembered their first real moment together...😳😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful story dear
congrats for the new story
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Part 4

After few days she has to go her town and was very excited to meet her family and spend time with them...when she told him he smiled and said good it will be change for u but actually he doesnt want her to go away for three days only...it will be equal to him three years and further more he knew that he cant call her on daily basis as they were not that much free, he will miss her sweet voice and her cute antics...she was packing her luggage when her eyes fell on the dress he gifted her she took it on her hands roamed fingers on it brought near to her heart and smiled...

She went to her home and was enjoying...one of her friend called her to know tht if she has reached safetly so she answered yes and all is fine...she wanted to know about him so indirectly asked how are others and hows work going on...the friend told work is fine but dont know wht has happened to him. He is giving us a tough time his mood swings like a pregnant lady she laughed at her friend's talk and said he is such a baby...

She was relaxing in her room when suddenly she remembered the dress she got up...wore the dress and tight her hair in a bun took a pic and posted on her account...his mobile beeped he saw the nofication and opened the account he was surprised drum strucked to see her pic in the dress which he gifted her...she was looking cute beautiful without any makeup and he knew that she was pure from heart thts y she is most beautiful girl...he commented on her pic and then msged her personally...saying thank u for wearing the dress but i did u shouldnt tied up ur hair...she smiled at his msg and wrote that she will take care next time...

After that his mood was full of fun and he didnt spoiled anyone else mood too...at night he again open the mobile abd its gallery and saw her pic and smiled widely he was going mad day by day...she too checked his comment atleast 20th time and smiled like a teenage who has fallen in love first time...

Fews days later there was holi...she was all covered with colour and went to wash it away...he turned her around and opened the shower both were standing close to each other all drenched...he slowly put his hand on her waist and pulled her towards himself and caressed her face from her forehead to eyes to cheeks and lips her breathe stop she closed her eyes and he kissed her forehead...she turned around but he pulled her back and moved his fingers on her back and kissed the water droplets on her neck and smiled while kissing havoc was created in both of them she turned and hugged him tightly and then there was a sound cut...both parted away but what happened just was there real feelings he held her hand for few seconds after cut she didnt knw what to do she immediately took towel and went to her room...closed the door and shyly touched her face as his fingers still lean on her face and he was just admiring what happened btw them😳😳😳

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Part 5

They were happy to have these new feelings developed in them but she was scared that he cant like her as she is not the girl with whom he wants to spend his life she told her self that she was over thinking about their changed equation but he was admant that he loves her so much and she is the only one with whim he wants to spend his rest of the life...
Both worked together and he used to tease her just to talk her and she loved the way how he changes her mood and both herats dance while having each other around.
There came a new man in their life,he was good person but his closeness with her was effecting him...they used to chat and have fun along others but she missed him alot but didnt show...he wants to sit with the gang but seeing him near he gets angry...one day all were having coffee and chit chat whn he said near her and whispered to her that what going on now a days seems u have found someone special han...she looked at him surprised but didnt understand...he said u both look good go a head enjoy and she can see anger in his eyes and he went from there and shouted on others regarding work issues...she had tears in her eyes that how could he think about her like that with someone else she also went to her room and after work immediately left for home...she didnt knw what was his actually reason about anger and there he in his room was frustrated on listening from his close friend that the man likes her alot and wants to marry her...

He couldnt think anything expect this and was hurt alot...suddenly his door knocked and his mother came in...she knew his son very well and tried to figure out the problem...he was a baby in front of his mother who can judge everything, he just hugged her and cried his heart out about his feelings towards her and his mother knew these feelings are 100% genuine...
She asked him so when you want my bahu to come our home...he was surprised and glad that his mother wants the same...
Next day he didnt came to work and took an off..she was feeling bad that his anger havnt cooled down or there is something else she was worried she thought to txt him but stopped tht dont knw what he will think but she txted him after thinking 100th times...he didnt reply she was sad...
Next day was off for her...at late night he msged her that he wants to meet her at this place (address) at 6pm tomorrow goodnight...she read the msg again and again and thought why he wants to just meet me...thousand thoughts came in her mind and she couldnt slept properly where he was busy in his own work
As she was very punctual she came there at 6pm sharp and entered the hall...she was wearing anarkali of pink colourwith matching jewellery and hairs left open...he saw her and admired her beauty...he didnt came infront of her and then a romantic husky manly voice so heard by her...he said u r beautiful, u r the one for whom i can go to any extend, u r the one who thought me to love, u are the one with whom i want to spend my life, u are the one with whom i want to grow old and see our babies growing old u r the one in whom arms I want to die...i love u...i love u alot...will u marry me...and next was he on his knees infront of her and tears flowing from her eyes continously...
He forwarded his hand and waiting for her reply she was shocked surpurised excited feeling loved at same time she gave her hands in his hand and he smiled handsomely and hugged her the next moment...she too hugged him...parted they saw each other she was not able to say anything he wiped her tears and kissed her forehead...she closed her eyes and he asked her again will u marry me...she said yes...he was on cloud nine then asked say something else she was looking down and said wht more to say he said those words i want to hear badly from u her cheeks turned red and said i love u in low voice he said cant heard be loud like madrasan she looked at him at said I Love U... he hugged her tighty and said i love u tooo...and caressedher hairs...after few minutes they parted and he said wait hve some more surprise...
There comes in his and her family making her shock to hell and she turned to him and looked with questioning eyes...
All family members hugged them she was surprised and her mother told her every thing that how he and his family came yesterday to her home and asked about her hand...she was overwhelmed tears again formed in her eyes...his mother asked r u not happy beta she nodded no and touched her feet she hugged her and said more surprises are waiting for u beta come...she was again shocked and went along the ladies...
There she came gladed in mahnoor gown with golden border and matching jewellery he was dumstucked by looking at her and gave her a naughty smile and said someone will kill me one day she smiled shyly and they were engaged in the presence of their family member

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you all for liking it
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Read all parts in a go
Awesome story
Continue soon dear
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Thank you all this means alot to mehere is the next part hope u all like this too
Part 6
They exchanged the rings and took blessings from elders, everyone congratulated them and then they happily danced on the song...
And their family member made them dance on their very own song ...
Clicked pics and selfies...she was looking around and thought that how a beautiful turn her life has taken and suddenly a new feeling was created in her heart which she enjoyed...she was lost in her thoughts which was broken by him...he held her hand...and asked what are u thinking about? She looked down shly as he let her hand and something happened in her body ...she said nothing and said please leave hand everyone is around...he held more tightly and nodded no...he said y are u feeling shy i have held ur hand hundredth times so y knw i leave it, that time doesnot u feel anything...she replied ap ko nae pata kia kia hota tha jab jab hum kareeb athy thy he looked at her and huskily said acha...( the way he say this all know) suddenly then her brother came to call them for dinner and he said lo aa gaye sasural walay beech ma...they both had dinner along family and everyone was happy...
Later he took his mother in law aside to seek her premission if she allows her duagther to stay with him for some time...her mother agreed and smiled at him and said my daugther is very lucky to have u please take care of her...he nodded yes and side hugged her...
After few minutes the family member were gone and they both were left alone in the hall...she was sitting near the flowers and moving fingers on them...he asked so how u feel now madrasan she looked at him and said no madrasan plz he sat near her and said that u will be always my madrasan in any means...
Tears again formed in her eyes and looked at him lovingly...he said ok no madrasan but plz dont cry...she said i love when u say me madrasan in real too but i was just thinking that how suddenly everything happened dar lagta hai kay khawab nae ho...he said ya khawab nae reality hai aur ab tum aur ma (HUM) ho gaye hain hamesha kay liye...
She said i am so luckily to have u par ma ap say kuch kahna chati hun...he nodded to go ahead...she said apko pata hai last few months ma meray sath kia hua hai tou kia ap insecure feel nae karthy kay mere dill ma kahin abi bi kuch aur ho...he said ma janta hun kay tumara relation us kay sath tha aur i knw kay tumay bht dard hua tha jab sab kthm hua but ma ya bi janta hun kay mujhe insecure honay ki koi zarurat nae hai bcz tum nay kbi apni limits exceed nae ki...aur mujhe koi fakr nae parta ab kyun kay tum sirf meri ho aur ya baat ma hamsha say janta tha aur acha hua na meri madrasn meray pass aa gi...she was looking at him with love filled eyes...asked how u were so sure tht u will do all this and i will accept the porposal...he said i had always some feelings for u in my heart but ma janta nae tha kay excatly kia hain...and u were also a closed book in front of me but everyday i read a new chapter in it...u remember the beach night...he asked smiling she nodded shly yes ..he said that day i saw love for me in your eyes...she shy and hold his hand and said i love u ravan...she further asked so y u did tgis all suddenly he said with irritated face bcz of ur so called new friend...he wants to marry u ...she was shocked and said so someone is jealous han...he warned her in loving manner to stay away from him and tomorrow he will knw tht u belong to me only. she smiled and said yes
He said mujhe say toh sari kahani sun li madam ab apni story bata kay when u realized ur feelings...she said that when u were there for me all the time when i was left alone...when u first time kissed my forehead there a sprak occured in my body...then when u started showing your concern towards me indirectly.i knw u were doing all thatbut dont want to hurt me and yes the beach night again... and lowered her eyes...
He was admiring her and asked her that u also knw about my past and the rumors of my relation...she said i knw everything and i belive u i knw ur heart is pure...he was overwhelmed and said i love u my love...
She said u belive me too na...kay meray koi asa wasa relation nae tha...he nodded and tried to lighten the situation and said i knw madrasan u cant kiss so asa wasa relation toh ho hi nae saktha she looked at him with wide eyes and said i knw how to kiss he said acha...again in his romantic and husky voice and looked at her eyes deeply and moved closer to her...

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