SurYa YuvAni KumSum FF - Ajeeb Dastan Hain Yeh

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I understand that you guys are waiting for this FF. It is dedicated to Piyali who wants it.

PROLOGUE
The story is about a girl named Sandhya who aspires to become an IPS officer, she is in the training camp for the same.

Suraj is the person with whom Sandhya encounters at the camp & start competing with her out of jealousy.



Yuvraj & Suhani A Mute boy with a girl elder to him


Sumit is Sandhya's friend who is in love with a widow named Kumkum. Sandhya is helping him to get her.



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Posted: 8 years ago
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it was a surprise from u.was waiting 4 it 4 a long time.sandhya as IPS officer is perfect.Surya,Yuvani n Kumsum.thx 4 adding Kumsum.it was rly a surprise as i rly miss Kumsum
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start
3 couples
3 love stories
Liked fact sooraj was competitive with sandhya but then later slowly fell for her
Now just need to see how sandhya feels
As for other 2 couples can't wait to see how their story progresses
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice prologue dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting prologue
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Nice to see you with New Concept.😊
The Prologue was so Interesting.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats on the new FF! nice prologue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow dear
New story
Congrats

M so excited for this
As I will be reading Surya story after ages
Also SK story for first time...
Plz start soon..

Waiting
Thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice prologue
continue soon..
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1

This part tells about the childhood of all the characters that are introduced in this FF. This is the girl who is frightened about the incident which only Pankaj, Lata, Yuvraj & Suhani knows. Yuvraj & Sandhya are staying with Suhani, Pankaj & Lata after the death of their parents. Pankaj is an IPS officer who is taking Sandhya & Yuvraj's responsibility after their parent's death. They did not differentiate between Suhani, Sandhya, & Yuvraj. Yuvraj is sleeping in a separate room. Sandhya & Suhani are sleeping together.

One night, Sandhya gets up with a start & begins to scream.

Suhani: What is the matter? Did you get any bad dream?
Sandhya: No Suhani, it is not a dream. It is real. I can sense that guy can do some harm to me.

Pankaj comes in: Nothing has happened to you. We are there for you & won't let anything happen to you. Sleep now. you need to get ready for school.

The next day, Suhani, Sandhya & Yuvraj go to the school. Sandhya & Suhani are doing combined studies. Sandhya encounters a boy named Suraj who is very much haughty & jealous of Sandhya as she is the topper in studies & sports. Both of them are in different houses. Sandhya is in the blue house & Suraj is in the greenhouse

One day Suraj decides to frame Sandhya for cheating in the exams. The exams are nearing. Suraj bribes the invigilator and said, "I know you are trying for the supervisor post. My father is a very influential person. I will talk to him but you have to do what I say."

Bakshi: What should I do?
Suraj: Well, all that you need to do is give the written supplement to the girl I say. If you do that, your work will be done. Here is Rs. 2000/-
Bakshi: Thanks a lot.
Luckily, Suhani & Sandhya are sitting in the same hall. Everyone starts answering the paper. Suraj is writing the paper as well as seeing when Sandhya will finish the main sheet & will ask for the supplement. Suhani finishes the main sheet. Bakshi had kept that paper in store for Sandhya so as to frame her. He gets an important call due to which he is unable to put the paperweight on it. The supplement flies near Suhani. Bakshi is in search of the paper who is unable to find it. He finds the supplement near Suhani.

Bakshi: So you are the one who is copying in the exam.
Suhani: No, I want supplements. I was waiting for you to give me.
Bakshi: Because you are caught, you are telling like that. Get out of the hall.
Suhani goes dejected. She goes home crying.
Lata: What is the matter?
Suhani: I have been falsely alleged for cheating in the exams.
Meanwhile, everyone completes the paper.
Suraj: Was your call so important that you have just let the written paper fly off. It was for Sandhya.
Bakshi: I am sorry. I will take care next time.
Suraj: Well, not bad. Today we framed Suhani. Tomorrow we will frame Sandhya. Both the friends will be suspended.
Sandhya overhears the conversation and records them. She goes to see Suhani.
Lata: Suhani, my child, I know you very well. I know that you won't do such a thing. I will talk to the principal. But I will be needing some proof to teach Bakshi a lesson.
Sandhya comes: I have the proof. Even Suraj is involved with Bakshi. I have recorded the conversation.
Sandhya plays the video before Suhani & Lata who gets furious. They go to the principal immediately.
Principal: do you have any proof that Suhani was framed?
Sandhya: Actually, it was for me but by fate, it had gone to Suhani.
She plays the video in front of the principal.
Principal calls the peon & said, "Summon Suraj & Bakshi here."
He goes to Bakshi & said, "Sir principal is calling you & Suraj."
Both come to the principal's office.
Principal: Is it true that you and Suraj framed Suhani for cheating in the exam?
Suraj: No way. You know that I am a very good student.
Principal: I know you are and I have never expected this from you. And Bakshi, you should be ashamed of yourself. How could you stoop so low for your promotion? I definitely had you in my mind to promote you. If you wanted money, I would have helped you. But how could you take it from the student? Bakshi, I dismiss you. Suraj, I need to speak to your mom or dad. Else, you will be out of the school. Suhani, you will have a supplement exam tomorrow as it is a holiday for the students in your batch.
Suraj: I am sorry sir, I won't do it again. If you call my parents, they will thrash me.
Principal: This will give you some sense in future.
Suhani + Sandhya: Please forgive Suraj. He does not know its implications.
Principal: He tried you spoil your life and you wish to give him a chance.
Sandhya: Yes, I want to show that we are not like them. Please forgive Bakshi. He was in need of money.
Principal: If you guys insist, I will give them a chance. Suraj, Bakshi, learn from these girls. How much big-hearted they are! If you guys do it next time, I will take a strict action against you.
Suraj+Bakshi: Sorry Sir.
Principal: Say sorry to these girls too.
Suraj + Bakshi: I am sorry.
Sandhya + Suhani: It is ok.

The next day, Suhani gives the supplement exam and does better than the previous one.
Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago

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