SurYa YuvAni KumSum FF - Ajeeb Dastan Hain Yeh - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice Intro...thanks for writing on my concept...
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Awesome update, loved it.
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well written update
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Part 3

All of them get into the bus. They reach home. At the college, Suraj, Sandhya, Yuvraj, and Suhani form a group and work on a project in Tours and Travels. All of them exchange their ideas about the project as to how should the website execute. All the students have to complete their project within a week and submit them.

Suraj, Sandhya, Yuvraj and Suhani complete the project successfully. The entire team is in Blue House which tops all other houses. All 4 of them give a Fi to each other. That day happens to be Sandhya's birthday. All the students give her different gifts and greeting cards to each other. Sandhya opens Suraj's message and reads, "Wish you many happy returns of the day. I need to tell you something special. Please meet me at Hanging Gardens."

Sandhya meets Suraj at Hanging Gardens.
She asked, "What is it you want to tell?"
Suraj gives her the red rose and said, "I love you Sandhya."
Sandhya blushes: I love you too. But don't give me a rose though it is a symbol of friendship and love as it gets faded within 2 days.
Suraj thinks for a while and said, "Yes, you have a point. I have brought a special gift for you."
He takes out the ring and slips it into her right ring finger. Sandhya looks at the ring and said, "Wow, it is beautiful."
Suraj: Yes, it goes well with your finger. The thing is the ring need your finger. But your finger does not need the ring.
Sandhya: But this ring is quite expensive.
Suraj: I know but nothing more important to me than you. Will you marry me?
Sandhya: Yes, but I don't think this is the right time as I aspire to become an IPS officer.
Suraj: Even I have the same dream. We can fulfill them together. Do you want to ask anything else?
Sandhya: No.
Suraj: But I want to ask. I want to ask you that how come you have chosen to make your career as an IPS officer?
Sandhya: I have got good investigation skills but apart from that it is a long story. Do you know how did my brother lose his voice?
Suraj is shocked: I didn't know that he was able to speak before.
Sandhya: He lost his voice after our parents were murdered. Some boys had come to molest me to take revenge from my parents. My father was an inspector. He had arrested Salim's father but he had escaped from jail. He was into a lot of illegal activities like black marketing, prostitution, drugs & many more. My dad shot him at the encounter for which he & his friends wanted to take revenge from my parents by giving the pain to me. I was hardly 7 years old back then & I never knew what it was. Salim & his relatives formed a gang and attacked my family. His uncle had killed our parents while Salim had molested me. Yuvraj was just 5 years old. He had gone to the police to seek justice. Little did he know that one of Salim's relatives was a commissioner. He had stuffed the hot coal into his mouth behind his back & he had lost his voice. I could not save him as I was in a trauma after getting molested. Since then, it is Suhani's parents who are looking after us. It was Pankaj uncle who gave me the courage & the inspiration to be like my dad. He never differentiated me from Suhani.
Suraj was touched: I'm sorry to hear about this. Now I love & respect you more than before. I think Salim is the guy who tried to push you from the cliff right?
Sandhya: Yes & he is the same person whom you tried to help but he tried to push you too.
Suraj: From now on, don't think that you are alone. I'm not only with you in this mission but also for the entire life.
Suraj & Sandhya join hands together.

Yuvraj & Suhani meets at the park. Yuvraj makes some signs indicating, "ILU Suhani."
Suhani figures out the indication & said, "I love you too."
She then asks Yuvraj, "What would you want to become in life?"
Yuvraj types the message from his phone to Suhani saying, "I want to become an IPS officer but I don't have voice."
Suhani reads it. She types the message, "Were you dumb from birth or you lost your voice?"
Yuvraj types: I lost my voice. Somebody stuffed the coal into my mouth when I went to the police after my parents were murdered.
Pankaj comes to the park. He said, "It is very much unfortunate that Sandhya & Yuvraj had lost their parents."
Suhani: Can Yuvraj get his voice back?
Pankaj: I took him to many doctors but they gave up. I am still trying to find a good doctor wherein he can get back his voice.
Suhani: I have been surfing for the clinics. This is the list. Sanjeevani clinic is a well-known clinic. It is an ayurvedic clinic. Shall we check there?
Pankaj: Fine, we will go there.
Pankaj fixes up an appointment with the doctor who heals deaf & dumb patients. Pankaj, Yuvraj, & Suhani go to the doctor who tests Yuvraj. An hour later, Dr. Homi comes out & said, "Nothing to worry. Yuvraj will definitely get back his voice. But I need to perform the surgery as the vocal cord is burnt. But it takes about 3 lakhs INR."
Pankaj: I had invested on his health insurance. I am ready to spend any amount but Yuvraj should be fine.

Yuvraj gets admitted to the hospital. Surgery takes place the next day. Sandhya, Suhani, Pankaj, & Lata are very much apprehensive about the outcome. Suraj also comes to the hospital to give moral support to Sandhya.



Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago
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Lovely update dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
good that the whole gang succeeded in their project. but the picture of sandya you put is south actress sandhya's.plz remove it.surya confession was beautiful. loved sandya's reason of not wanting rose. loved suraj saying that its the ring which wants her finger.sandya was molested by salim and the incident of yuvraj losing voice was painful.loved suraj saying that he will always be there for her.admire pankaj for inspiring sandhya to be an IAS officer.yuvani confession was beautiful. it's so sweet that suhani decided to fulfil yuvraj's dream.finally yuvraj's surgery is done.waiting for the result.please show kumsum scenes
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Amazing update loved it thank you for pm.
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Awesome and just Fantastic Chapter
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lovely update
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Part 4
The entire family prays for Yuvraj to recover and get back his speech. Suraj and Sandhya are at the temple near the hospital and are praying for him. An hour later, the doctor comes out.
Pankaj: How is Yuvraj?
Doctor: Good news. Yuvraj is out of danger and is perfectly alright. The operation is successful.
Suraj and Sandhya come to the hospital
Pankaj: Can Yuvraj speak and can we meet him?
Doctor: Yes, you can. As for his speech, he will be needing a therapy.
Everyone goes to his ward.
Sometime later, the nurse comes and said, "It is now the time for speech therapy."
Yuvraj's therapy begins.
Doctor: Try saying one word.
Yuvraj initially struggles. He then says very slowly, Su Su Su.
Doctor: Come on you can. Keep trying.
Yuvraj: Suhani.
All are happy that Yuvraj is able to speak.
Yuvraj tries to say, "I..."
Doctor: It is enough for today. You can come for the therapy tomorrow.
He then gives the prescription to the family.

The next day, everyone goes to the college. The new students join the college.
Suraj sees Sandhya with the newcomer.
Sandhya: Sumeet, What a pleasant surprise?
Sumeet: I had to come because the person whom I love is here.
Suraj overhears the conversation and feels cheated. He leaves the place without listening to the full conversation.
Sandhya: Who is that person?
Sumeet: It is Kumkum. I love her but she does not love anyone other than her husband.
Sandhya: Of course any woman would love her husband.
Sumeet: But he is dead. He died in a car accident. I had proposed her but she rejected me. She said that her in-laws are old-fashioned and will never agree.
Sandhya: That is very sad. It means that she loves you but is afraid of her mother-in-law. I will help you.
Sumeet: I know that you will always help me as a good friend.
Sandhya: You go and speak to her once. Let's see what will happen.
Sumeet goes to Kumkum's house to convince her.
Yuvraj is rehearsing after every session to get back his speech where Suhani is helping him.
Sandhya goes to Suraj who is quite upset.
Sandhya: What is the matter?
Suraj: It is better if you ask that boyfriend of yours?
Sandhya: He is my school friend. I have never look at him in that way. I have loved only one person and that is you.
Suraj: It is all lies. If that is the case, you should have left that place but you hugged him instead. You have played with my emotions, love, and feelings. I hate you. I have made a big mistake supporting you.
He leaves. Sandhya cries.
Meanwhile, in the college, a new lecturer joins the college who is very friendly.
The lecturer's name is Sujal. He is a lecturer in physics and is taking lectures in Suraj, Yuvraj, and Sumeet's class. Suraj hates Sumeet he feels that the latter had taken away his love.
Both Suraj and Yuvraj began to fight regarding Sumeet and Sandhya.
Yuvraj: Sumeet is only our friend and we only want to help him out.
Suraj: Why didn't she tell me about her so-called friend?
Yuvraj: That is what she wanted to tell but you never listened to her.
Suraj: If she was so good why did she hug him? She is a characterless girl and must have framed Salim on molestation case.
Yuvraj gives him a hard punch. Both began to have a physical brawl.
Sujal witnesses this and said, "Stop it."
Yuvraj: Tell him first. He has badmouthed my sister.
Sujal: You cannot badmouth someone without knowing a complete truth.
There is a tension between the Suraj and Sandhya because of Sumeet misunderstanding.
Sujal then makes a plan to unite them. He gives a project to 6 of them to work on it.
Suraj, Sandhya, Yuvraj, Suhani, Sumeet, and Kumkum are in a team to work on the project. After the successful completion of the project, Sujal said, "I see you guys are good students and worked on the project as a team and good friends but I see there is a lot of tension between all of you. I find only Yuvraj and Suhani sensible."
Suraj: When you have put us together we had to work on it. Nothing between us.
Sujal: Fine, let's play a game. Are you ready?
Everyone agrees to play.
Sujal: There is a rule, I will turn the bottle around all of you. To whoever it stops, they have to share about their personal life and whom they love.
All: Agreed.
The game begins.

Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago

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