SurYa YuvAni KumSum FF - Ajeeb Dastan Hain Yeh - Page 6

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Part 5

Sujal turns the bottle. It takes a turn & points out towards Yuvraj.

Yuvraj: I love Suhani after my parents. She stood by me in the most difficult situations.

Sujal: Well, the rule is if the bottle points out to one person, then the opposite partner should also express their feelings.

Suhani: I love Yuvraj. He has always been a moral support to me.

The bottle again turns. This time, it comes to Suraj.

He said, "I loved Sandhya but she played with my emotions.

Sandhya: I am also not interested. There cannot be any relationship without trust.

She leaves the game & is on her way to the principal's cabin to ask for the college leaving certificate so she can study in some other city. Suhani follows her.

Yuvraj tries to stop Suhani but Sujal said, "If Suhani does not stop Sandhya, she might take a drastic step.

The game continues. The bottle comes points towards Sumeet.

He said, "There is no such thing between me and Sandhya. The girl I love is Kumkum. She is married but she lost her husband. I met her mother-in-law but she refused to get Kumkum remarried. I think I have come to the wrong person & the wrong place. I am leaving this city forever.

Sujal is the last person. He said, "I loved Kashish. Even she loved me but her father is a principal of the college where I worked earlier. He refused to give her to me as I am not equal to their status. Kashish has killed herself. So I left the college. Since then I decided to unite the lovers apart from delivering the lectures.


He said, "Sumeet, you need not leave this city. I will speak to Kumkum's mother-in-law.

Suhani is in search of Sandhya and finds her in the principal's cabin.

Principal: You are a good student. You have come to the fag-end of your degree. So, it won't be advisable for you to leave the college at this point.

Sandhya: I don't like the current atmosphere. So, I want to leave.

Principal: Wherever you go there will be hurdles. You have always faced every situation courageously. Think about it once again and get back to me. Whatever you decide that will be final. If you leave now then you can't get readmitted here for one year.

Sandhya: Fine, I will think about it.

She comes out and is in a dilemma. Suhani comes to her.

Sandhya: I want to leave this college. Please speak to Pankaj uncle to get me college admission in some other college.

Suhani is shocked: Why do you want to leave this college only because you are wronged? Yuvraj joins Suhani. He said, "I think it is better for all of us to join some other college.

Sandhya: What about your speech therapy?

Yuvraj: When you can leave this college in the middle then why can't I leave the city and take the therapy elsewhere?

Sandhya: I will be in the same city but not this college.

There is a conversation between Suraj and Sujal. Suraj said, "I never knew that Sumeet wanted Sandhya's help. I have misunderstood her.

Suraj sees Yuvraj's message and is shocked reading that. It was written, "Sandhya is leaving this college and joining elsewhere because of you. I hate you for that.

Sujal: What is the matter?

Suraj: Sandhya wants to leave the college.

Sujal: Then hurry up. Stop her from taking this step.

Suraj runs towards Sandhya to stop her as she is on her way to tell the principal about her decision.

Sujal & Sumeet go to Kumkum's mother-in-law who said, "I don't have anything against Sumeet but in our traditions, we don't get the widows remarried.

Sujal: If you had told this 10 years back, I would have agreed but now the times have changed. You have always considered Kumkum as your daughter. So, it is time for you to think as a mother what is good for your daughter. You have seen the world and you know how difficult it is for a woman to live alone. Sumeet is a great guy & he will keep your daughter happy.

Kumkum's MIL calls her. Kumkum comes to the room. She then asks Kumkum, "Tell me honestly whether you like Sumeet.

Kumkum is shocked but her MIL said, "Don't get scared. I am interested in your happiness and welfare. If you are willing to marry Sumeet, I have no objection.

Kumkum: Yes, I love Sumeet but I didn't want to hurt you.

MIL: I am hurt as you didn't speak out your heart. Rather, I blame myself for not understanding your feelings. I have no objection to this marriage.

Suraj blocks Sandhya's way. He said, "Are you leaving the college because of me? If yes, I am sorry. I have not understood you correctly. I never knew that he wanted your help. I love you more than I used to do before. Please don't go. My life will be empty without you. I take back my words.

Sandhya agrees but said, "I study here but our relationship can never be like before. What is the guarantee that you won't doubt me again?

Suraj: This is the first time. Please give me a chance.

He kneels before Sandhya. She holds his hand. Both hug each other.

Sumeet & Kumkum give their wedding invitation cards to everyone.

Prof Sinha comes to Sujal. He said, "I have done a great mistake by not agreeing to your marriage with Kashish.

Sujal: Kashish is already dead.

Yuvraj & Suhani bring Kashish. They said, "Kashish is not dead. She is alive.

Prof Sinha is happy hearing this. He hugged Kashish & said, "I am sorry my girl. I have not understood what is love all about. I am convinced that you cannot get a better partner than Sujal.

Sujal & Kashish also distribute their wedding invitation cards to the entire college.

Sumeet marries Kumkum

Sujal marries Kashish.

But everyone continues their studies & do well in their exams. Suraj, Sandhya, Yuvraj & Suhani apply for the police job and are preparing for the physical & written exam.

Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago
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Awesome lovely update dear
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thanks 4 da pm! amazing update, well written
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Nice update...Waiting for next update... & thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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yuvani expressing their love in public was sweet.sad that suraj misunderstood sandhya and she decided to leave the college.loved yuvani sujal and the principal discouraging sandhya.sumit too decided to leave because of his unfulfilled love.loved that from sumit suraj realizes the truth and apologizes to sandhya.shocking that sujal is a victim of love failure.because of kashish's dad kashish committing suicide was shocking. loved sujal convincing kumkum's mother in law for gettin her married to sumit.so sweet that her MIL is actually a loving lady to kumkum.the real surprising twist is that kashish is alive.thanks for this lovely twist.but how did kashish come back alive? how did yuvani find her? please tell.happy that sk and kumsum got married.perfect pics.I felt that ibwaa watching mohabbatein.the best chapter of this ff till date
Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago
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That's an interesting and lovely chapter
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wow wonderful update loved it thank you for pm.
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well written...
nice twist... 👍🏼
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Part 6

After the wedding, Sujal & Kashish spend their time in Sujal's room.

Sujal: Thank God, you are alive. I thought that you have left me forever.

Kashish: I had tried to kill myself but the attempt failed. An NGO lady, named Devyani saved me & I was admitted to the hospital. I was unconscious for 2 years.

Flashback

Kashish is not happy that she has survived. She was admitted to Breach Candy Hospital. She was in a critical condition & under life-system. The NGO lady named Devyani had saved me & admitted me there. No one knew where I was. My father got the news about my death. He broke down. When I didn't gain my consciousness, the doctors had decided to take out the life system by then I had gained my consciousness. After I got the discharge, I met Devyani. We had a conversation.

Kashish: Why did you save me? I loved someone but my dad didn't agree for our marriage.

Devyani: Your parents are your best well-wishers. But is the guy good?

Kashish: Yes, he is a great guy & my father didn't have anything against him. But because of the difference in status, he refused to accept him as a son-in-law.

Devyani: You shouldn't have taken such an extreme step. You do one thing. Go home and meet your father. Tell him about your feelings.

Kashish: I think it is too late as my guy would have moved on by now.

One of the nurses overhears the conversation. She said, "No one waits for anybody. You are really stupid to have taken this step instead of telling about your feelings to him. Does your lover even know that you were admitted here? He didn't come to see you even once.

Kashish runs towards Napean Sea to jump there. Devyani is full of concern & is screaming for help.

Yuvraj & Suhani get up from the seat & asked, "What is the matter, madam?

Devyani: That lady tried to kill herself before & is doing it again. Please stop her.

Yuvraj & Suhani hurriedly go there and stop her from jumping.

Yuvraj: Are you gone mad? Don't you know that life is precious?

Kashish: What is the point in living when there is no love in this world? Everyone thinks only about their benefits. I loved a guy but my father didn't agree for our marriage. I had tried to kill myself before & have landed in the hospital. I was in the coma. I wish I had died.

Suhani: That should not be the criteria to take your life. You could have convinced your father.

Kashish: I tried that but he didn't agree because he was not equal to our status. He is the principal & my guy was working under him as a lecturer.

Yuvraj is shocked as he heard about the similar incident from Sujal. He asked, "What is your & your boyfriend's name?

Kashish: My name is Kashish & the guy is Sujal.

Suhani: Well, we have got medicine for your pain. Your Sujal has not moved on. He is very lucky that you are alive. He always thinks about you. He loves you a lot. Come with us.

Yuvraj & Suhani take Kashish to their college. Kashish is surprised to see Principal Sinha in Sujal's college told Sujal, "I am sorry my boy. I didn't understand your feelings & had forcefully arranged Kashish's wedding with Piyush. She had killed herself.

Sujal: What is the use of being sorry now? I have lost Kashish

Sinha: I can't get back the past but can give my other daughter to you. Her name is Charu.

Sujal: I am happy as a single. I don't need anybody except Kashish.

Yuvraj, Suhani, & Kashish meet Sujal.

Y + S: Sujal, Kashish is alive.

Sinha & Kashish emotionally hug each other.

Sinha: I am glad that you are safe & alive. I was lifeless when I heard about your death. Sujal is a great guy but I did not agree for your wedding with Sujal & had forced someone else on you because of my false prestige. I have never thought in the wildest of my dreams that you would take such an extreme step. I apologize you, my girl.

Kashish: I am sorry, dad.

Sinha: I am sorry for not understanding your feelings. I never thought you would take such an extreme step for Sujal. For me, nothing is more important to me than your happiness.

Flashback ends

Sujal: Life does not stop there. You could have moved on.

Kashish: How could I move on? You are the first & the last person in my life. But why didn't you move in?

Sujal: I could not think of any woman other than you. Promise me that you will never do that again.

Kashish: I promise you that I won't do it again

Sujal & Kashish hug each other.

Kumsum

Sumit: I know that you love me but our marriage was little early as it takes time to come out of the tragic incident. Nothing like losing the loved ones. I married you because I love you.

Kumkum: I am quite happy that I am married to you. I love you a lot but cannot give my husband's place to you. Even if I do that, you won't have your identity. Your place as a husband is unique & no one can take it. I had loved my husband very blindly that I ignored pundit's foretelling and married him. After marriage, the pundit predicted that I am going to become a widow. I asked him is there any way to avoid it to which he said I need to lit the lamp before Shiva for 3 weeks. It also included restricted days. But I had to break the chain because of my MIL, thinking nothing will happen. But I lost him within 3 months.

She cries. Sumit wipes her tears & cups her. He said, "From now on, you won't shed tears. I will fill your life with happiness.

Both hug each other.

Yuvani

Suhani: We have done a lot of wonderful things like reuniting the lovers.

Yuvraj: Yes, that is true. We have to take revenge from Suraj's dad for killing my parents. When I wanted to report to the police, they had stuffed hot coal into my mouth.

Suhani: I am with you.

Yuvraj: We have to help di in her mission.

At the camp, all of them undergo physical training.

Everyone does the hard workouts. Suraj, Sandhya, Yuvraj, & Suhani sweat out everything as they want to clear the physical training.

At police training classes, they encounter Rudra & Bhavya as their colleagues.

Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago

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