Unspoken Promises - A RumYa SS

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Unspoken Promises



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Posted: 8 years ago
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|- Prologue- |



"Rudra, tum thik ho na, kahi dard to nahi ho raha?"

Rudra sighed, closing his eyelids, hearing the same line in every one hour from his wife, Soumya. Since the time of that blast happened in Rudra's car, Soumya was running around him, taking care of his every small need. Thankfully he escaped from the car in the crook of time; he wasn't hurt much except few scratches on his hand and a little wound on his head. But Soumya's concern was on some altogether different level.

Rudra's mind being with plenty of thoughts and emotions, just nodded a bit, without saying anything. Ayan and Soumya's smiling faces, they way they talked being carefree with each other kept flashing before his eyes over and over. He sat straight on the bed, getting up in a moment.

"Tumhe ye sab karne ki jaroorat nahi hai, Soumya." His cold tone draped in words as if they meant nothing to each other, hit her heart like a sharpened knife.

"Kya bol rahe ho Rudra?"

"Wahi jo tumne suna. I'll make sure ke hamara divorce jald se jald ho jaaye, taki tum aur Ayan... Tum aur Ayan..." he terribly failed to even imagine that, leave aside saying but quickly added, holding his emotions in his control, "Taki tum aur Ayan ek sath apni nayi zindagi ki shuruwat kar sako."


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Since I am not sure if I will be able to complete this in three shots, I am currently keeping this as SS. I will change the title, when I finish.


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Edited by LoveToWrite - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Intriguing is an understatement!!
Loved it!!
Thnx fr the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is so different, so beautifulšŸ‘
I am already so curious to know, who is Ayan, RumYa married? Why did Rudra say that?
So many questions...

But this is just beautiful.
I repeat you are a great writer, a beautiful writer.

Continue asap.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome introduction
I think another masterpiece on the way
I am so excited to read it
i really had a fascination towards rumya
I really don't know why CV's in the show is not progressing their story...
any way I will be eagerly waiting to read this story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh... Angsty RumYa ā¤ļø I love this already.. I like the touches you've given to them. So many layers of confusions, misunderstandings, plot developments already
I also loved the underlying touches of care, concern and emotions.

Can't wait to read further, I really can't. :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tremors

Intriguing is an understatement!!

Loved it!!
Thnx fr the pm



Thank you Akritiā¤ļø
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rohini..

This is so different, so beautifulšŸ‘

I am already so curious to know, who is Ayan, RumYa married? Why did Rudra say that?
So many questions...

But this is just beautiful.
I repeat you are a great writer, a beautiful writer.

Continue asap.



Thank you very much Rohiniā¤ļø
Let me write further updates and your every doubt will get cleared.

Thanks dearie. You are really sweet.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was so beautiful...
Thank god i came today thinking it to be monday.. checking for Hotstar spoiler...šŸ˜†
And i got this...😳
Prologue seems interesting ... god i am so waiting for the update..
Please update soon...
Bomb blast... oh god.. i really want to see what happened... and Jealous Rudra..😳
Ps . Request can you please add me to your pm list.. and send me a pm whenever you write on Rumya...
😳
Edited by wayback - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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do contnue soon...wl luv to read the story😊

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