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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold So good to see you Ranju!
Ab ki baar gayab na ho jana 🤗
Love you too!!!



aww thank you so much zoyi..😳

yhi hu kaha jaugi...😆

miss you too and love u❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

aww thank you so much zoyi..😳
Yo baby 😳
yhi hu kaha jaugi...😆
Yahin hai toh theek hai!
miss you too and love u❤️
Me more!

@Bold 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03

Res 😳
Will try to unres soon 😕 😉
****
Unres
Zealous si Zoya... 🤗

Nikka sa Nik 🤗
Sowii...again am late 😕
Arey its okay ya...
I read it now n couldn't stop myself from commenting... So here I am 😊
Glad...
Coming to upii 😃

First of all a biggg 🤗 for this one ya.
Hugs back hon!
Mayassar... Another new word in my dictionary..Thanks ya Zoya 😃
You're welcome!
You are super awesome ya..❤️
Aww shukriya...
Ramnath Malhotra n his love for Shravan...❤️
I have always admired his love for his son...He was much better parent than Nirmala. His love was pure...Atleast he cared for his son n was there for him.
Word! At least he was there...
For the development of confidence it was necessary to send Shravan away
True ya!!
Sometimes a child must learn to run before he can walk...Soo loved it ❤️ 👏
Thank you!
Suman...!!
A broken soul inside n a bossy n bully one outside!
A deep character but twisted by CVs.
CVs ki jitni kam baat ki jaye utna better hai😆
Its really very painful when you lost your parents n have to live like a liability...A debt adding to it making it no less than a hell.
Word bro!
I So Loved how you have written Sumo's convo about herself with many...It feltRishta❤️ ❤️real 👏
Shukriya!
Nanu is such a darling ...An angel for ShraMan ❤️
Always was and always will be...
Eric...and a smile on my face 😃 😆
Hahaha haina...
What a lively character ya 😳
Love Shravan-Eric Bond ❤️
Me too!!!
Shravan n his Diary
Oh how much I love it always you write..❤️
I'm glad you do 😳
Shravan gained so much confidence...Much needed self confidence!!
Haina...
Amanda...Baby He is only Sumo"s...Better be a friend only 😛
Yes you do have value and potential Shravan...much more than you or anyone can think.
Agreed!

Itna kuch hai, sab theek hai, mai khush hoon, par phir kami si kyun hai? Yeh khali khali si feeling jaati kyun nahi? Aj bhi, ab bhi, jab bhi khush hota hoon, Sumo ki yaad aati hai.... ShraMan feels ❤️ ❤️
Feels aa hi gayi 😳
Mails...I was like..Check it Shravan...!!!
He smiled seeing her happy face in pic...Aww!
Pyaar toh hai hi...
Here he was opening the mail n I was biting my nails !
While reading Sumo's whole letter...I was crying!!!
It did left that much needed impact Zoya...!!
I'm happy I could put it across...
Par Shravan Family ke saath hote hue bhi jab akelapan ho, toh woh zyada bura hota hai...True that...Poor girl 😭
I'm proud of you Lamboo,...That what Shravan wanted to hear...Meet too 😊
Acknowledgement is all he ever wanted.. To know his value in her life...
That empty feeling dissipated... it had to!!
Sumo had that much power n hold over Shravan's entire being always as we all saw in show but you had shown the power n hold of Shravan over Sumo... 👏
Thanks hon! Thanks so much...

tu ne bola tha tu kabhi akele nahi chodega, Maa Papa toh chale gaye, unko mai wapas nahi la sakti. Par tujhe? Tujhe kasam hai, mujhe akela mat chodd. Please. Mai... I can't... I can't live without you. Please Maaf kar de na yaar....This gives the true ShraMan feels Zoya...The words n feelings feel sooo real n touching..❤️
It seems so real...❤️
It does? This makes me so happy!
Like Shravan, I too read it many times...Loved it ❤️
Shravan called Her not wanting to waste any moment... ⭐️
It's been long enough...
Ego..!!
A very heavy word...It had always separated ShraMan in show!
But here no more ego...Thanks buddy😊
Ego has some crazy capacity for damnation...
Sumo ke dil ne Shravan ko pukaara...N Shravan felt it...Dil ka Rishta❤️ ❤️
N like Shravan I too chanted in my mind... pick the damn phone girl!!
She received it...Shock !!...Happy one 😛
Yey!
Oh my my...!!
They both wept as though in each other's embrace... 😭
I can imagine ShraMan crying holding phones close to their ears...!!
Your words had that Impact Zoya...Hats Off Girl 👏
Thanks hon!
I don't know how many times am gonna say this , but your words do something to me Zoya..!!
Touch me deeply every damn time!
And your honesty makes it's way to mine... Thank you!
How can someone write this well?
Pata nahi...
Talented Soul you are...Gid Gifted Writer man!!!!
Shukriya 😳
Thanks for being there, writing n posting them here n giving us all pleasure to read these marvelous pieces...Thanks a lot! 🤗
The pleasure is all mine 😛
Okeii...I guess I have written enough 😆
Well That's how much I loved it 😉
Hahahaha
Thanks for the pm buddy n do cont soon 😊
You're welcome! Will try...
Loads n Loads of Love n Bone Crushing 🤗
Right back at you 🤗
Nikka sa Nik ❤️

P.S Will try to unres on other post too 😕
Life is hell busy these days.
Take your time hon!
No issues...

@Bold Thank you so so much Nik!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago


😳 I have never waited these much for an update!

Sooo




Update!!!!!!!! Need an update!!!😆



Edited by Itssanjh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Firstly beautiful title..Mayassar
Awesome update
Ramnath and shravan's convo ❤️
Finally shravan opened his mail box thanks to Eric..But for this Sumo had to wait for almost a month😔 and that email
Not only Shravan even I got teary eyed after reading Sumo's email.. Beautifully written
Excited for the next part
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res

*And I bookmarked. 😃 So won't forget this time where I ressed. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Itssanjh



😳 I have never waited these much for an update!
Hahaha you're too cute!


Sooo




Update!!!!!!!! Need an update!!!😆

I know, and I'm sorry to keep you waiting...
I've been writing the next chapter for three weeks, just can't find enough time, hopefully soon now...

Sanjh 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Firstly beautiful title..Mayassar
Thank you!
Awesome update
Shukriya!
Ramnath and shravan's convo ❤️
Haina...
Finally shravan opened his mail box thanks to Eric..But for this Sumo had to wait for almost a month😔 and that email
Yes...
Not only Shravan even I got teary eyed after reading Sumo's email.. Beautifully written
Thank you so much...
Excited for the next part
Me too!
Thanks for the pm
You're welcome!

@Bold Thanks so much!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold Thank you so much cupcake!
😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
This part is now on Wattpad and the link for it can be found on the main page of this thread.

Cheers!
Edited by orion23 - 6 years ago

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