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Posted: 8 years ago
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Zo🤗
As I've told you you're one of the people I can confide in. Who can make me smile in my worst days . Its a blessing to have you in my life .I love you ❤️
This is for you

(This is my favourite gif from the show ❤️)
Coming to the update
Title and Cover ❤️
Eric

He is so like Resh always a curious kid 😆❤️A perfect combination of humour and depth .
Dear diary as always is my favourite part❤️
She apologised and he forgave . Well both of them have a big heart . It takes guts to say sorry and its even more difficult to say it's okay , we're good .
I'm in love with your characters ❤️
How i wish they would have stayed like this in the show 😔
Beautiful update !!!!
Loved it !



Edited by sapphire3 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I think I need to deposit a lot of sorrys in ur account.
Coming to ur update.
It's as amazing as ever.
Inayat ❤️
It indeed is a blessing to always have someone by ur side. Who can understand ur words as well as ur silence. Someone u can look up to. Someone u can pour ur heart to. It is a blessing not everyone is bestowed with. And like u said, if u even have one such person who listen to u without judging u, one who can make u smile, encourage u, u should thank them, tell them u love them. So I m thanking You and Pri for being there for me. I love u guys. And I will make sure to tell this to everyone who matters to me. Quite fortunate I m in this case. I got a bunch 😳

Now actually coming to ur update. LOL

Eric always reminds me of Ron. He is so cute and an amazing friend. Tu v Rowling se kam thori hai.
Pushkar and Eric seem to be fighting for Who's the cutest award.
Shravan's diary note ❤️
I loved the fact that u didn't make him come back to India just like that. He got everything he deserved here.
ShraMan convo as usual is ❤️

Main v breaking news de hi deti hu 😆
I loved it and I love u 🤗
Thanks for this 🤗
Edited by Perpetuity - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Great update Zoya. Eric does not fail to amuse, as usual. He's a cutie, nevertheless. The smile is evident on Sumo and Shravan's faces. That is such a sight to imagine. Poor Pushkar left out of the loop, but manages to get his Sherlock brain on track. Waiting for the next part.
Nuts
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Posted: 8 years ago
Khush Mizaji ka banke sabab,,
Nijaat Mayoosi ke silsilon se dedi..!
Inaayat hai ye dosti unki,
Raahat dil-e-muztar ko dedi..!
#ShraMan !!

Shravan stood silently and Eric got the message. "Tell me when you want to, if you want to. And I'd love to speak with her someday.."
Eric is a Jaani... #Friendship goals !

Raghuvansh Tiwari wouldn't be worth his salt if he didn't see where it came from. "Shravan se dosti ho gayi?"
Nanu is a Jaanu... #GuardianshipGoals !

"Jhoot toh aap bolo mat mujhse... Sumo se baat hui na? You'll are back at being friends?"
Pushkie is Jaan... #FrnFamGoals!

Dear Dairy! ! It's always my favourite part!

Her liberation brought me peace too. I guess that's what happen when you care for each other.
but I guess I loved her more as a friend than any thing else and truthfully speaking that is enough...
So much of depth for that age... I wonder what the future holds !!

"I fell in love with her when we were together, then fell deeper in love with her in the years we were apart."
" Nicholas Sparks, Dear John

I loved the fact that he chose to stay in London...made her understand,,and she understood !!
Finding yourself is the biggest milestone in life! !

"To say I love you' one must know first how to say the I.'"
" Ayn Rand, The Fountainhead

"Himmat nahi hui.." Suman replied. Sums up everything!!
What if that last string breaks!! Holding on to hope !!

"Nahi.. yeh ke library mai tere paas hone ka ehsaas hota tha, padthi thi toh lagta tha tu wahin hai..."🤗
Sumo is a Jaaneman !!

Their conversation was so real..!
Brought back so many faded memories...some phone calls made,,some received..! At times when the known's become an unknown number !!

"Tell me Sumo, kuch toh hua hai?"😲

It was as though they had never fought.
Apologies aren't needed,,acknowledgement is !!

Another fabulous update!

P.S IF ditched me twice,,I hope m third time lucky!

Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow dear...it's an awesome update...🤗
ShraMan became friends again...
Their happiness are written completely on their faces...
So happy to see them happy...
Diary part was amazing...
U r rocking with ur magical writing...
Am so falling in love with ur writings...
Title 👏
This 🤗 is for u...
Lots of love.,..
LavSriya
Edited by amlavs - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Zoya!!!!I hope U remember me ??😊 So finally the wait has came to an end with the update of yours...Let me tell you at the first place YOU ARE A GENIUS. ...The way you are unfolding the story ...it's just amazing...
Shravan's conversation with Eric...superb...
His conversation with Pushker...was something so right and apt...
And now coming to the my most favourite part of the story was his conversation with his diary. ...loved it to the core!!❤️
Btw I even loved his conversation with sumo...
In the nutshell I am in love with the chapter...
Your ff is really making me fall for Shravan more and more and obviously my adoration for shraman is just reaching heights...Thank u so much...for this wonderful chapter...
Love
Shiny...
P.S. *sounding greedy* but waiting for the next update ...😳😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
this update itself is a bliss zoya
amazing 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wonderful and emotional update!
Great writing👏
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

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*And I bookmarked. 😃 So won't forget this time where I ressed. 😆

😆
You're going to have to res on the new update too 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res 😊
Finally am back!!
Feels tooo good 😃
Will unres soon...Well I'll try 😆
****
Unres 😃
Zealous Si Zoya... 🤗
Sowiii!!
Am later than late.
Kaan pakad ke sorry...*Best Puppy Face*


Oh Man I miss you!!

Finally Am able to unres...Uff!!
So without the usual chatter Patter...I'll go straight to the upii 😛
Inaayat...Blessing...Do I need to say I love it??
No na?!!...Smart Zoya.😉
How beautifully it fits here ❤️

Eric...What a lively character!!
A perfect friend of Shravan that he needed badly.
If there is a fun side of him, then there is that much needed understanding n serious side too.

Mr. Blinding grin...Oh how badly we want to see that smile of our Shravan.
N what an observation Mr. Observant Eric.!!😉

What are you on? Energy bar? Protein shake?...😆
I would say, its neither protein shake nor energy bar...Its Sumo Power.

Aww!!
Concerned Eric..😳
Life, I'm high on life Eric.....❤️
N am high on emotions.😊
Jealous Eric...😆
He is a cutie pie.😳

What? You are friends with a Sumo wrestler who's a girl? Where did you find her? And more importantly how are you'll friends? She could beat you to a pulp Shrav!...Oh My My!!
🤣 🤣

Eric...Soo many questions!!
Curious soul !!

[IPTell me when you want to, if you want to. And I'd love to speak with her someday..[/I]...Aww!!
Isnt he the bestest buddy here.
Seriously this guy is just love...For me, he is filling the empty slot of Pushkie Pie in Shravan's life in London somehow.

Sumo...Too much happiness.😃
Itni khushi ke chupaaye na chupe😳
But ofcourse she wont tell anybody about it!!
There wasnt anybody close enough to share her happiness n sorrows with them in Sumo's Life.

Nanu...The Angel of ShraMan.
Sumo's excitement...Made me smile wide.I so wanted to give her a tight hug there.
Here I can see that excited chota Shravan on the mention of Sumo or in her company.

You know Zoya, I always had this thing in my mind that somewhere Chota Shravan didnt got his share of justice. I wanted to see Sumo apologizing to Chota Shravan in a convo same as Bada Shravan-Choti Sumo had.Somewhere that innocent Shravan who was ditched by his loved ones didnt recieved their apologies.

What was life without Nanu and Shravan was a question she never wanted the answer to, but she knew, it wouldn't be life at all....So True!!
Sumo's whole world revolves around these two.

I loved Shravan-Pushkie convo and specially the way you wrote the starting. It seems real like how a normal convo begins.

Yaad aa rahi thi aapki...A very simple sentence but had much more to feel.When someone close to you say this to you, it feels that you are worthy enough for him/her.
This thing I so love about you Zoya (Ofcourse apart from mannnyyy more 😆).You write these simple things but effective ones.
N these makes your writing much more realistic ones. 😊

Shravan... the first thought or rather a certain someone came to his mind the instant Pushkar asked about happiness...This is pure Love ❤️ ❤️

Mai, ab khush?...#ShraManGoals
#PushkarBond007
😆

Drama Queen...Naam to suna hi hoga Zoya 😉😛

Ramayan khatam ho gayi, ab aap pooch rahe ho Ram kaun hai?...At some point of time, this was my ultimate dialogue.😆

Pushkie Pie aa gaya point pe...😆
Are Shravan ye bhi koi sochne ki baat hai?
Ofcourse its that obvious!!

Messenger...😆
Well he was to be true!!

I love you..❤️ ❤️
And I'm proud of you, more than I can tell you...Pushkie n Zoya you too...I love you both for saying this to him.❤️

Pushkar was really a gem.N Lalaji ❤️
The most loving n innocent duo in Malhotra clan apart from Shravan.

Shravan and his beloved diary...
How much I love this part always Zoya.❤️

That theory...Moments Of Impact❤️ ❤️
What to say here Zoya?!
I can only say, for me your every writeup is a Moment Of Impact!!

Nirmala leaving Shravan was definetly the moment in his life that had left the worst impact on him ever. I am not gonna say anything about her as I can write a whole paragraph on it.

In Sumo's case, it'll be a fading one...Partially coz of her heartfelt apology n second coz for Sumo, he was a different Shravan altogether no matter what.

Do you know the breath you take in immediately after you forgive someone is liberating?...Oh Hell it is!

A biggg relief.!!
Just forgive n forget. Holding grudges is neither healthy for you nor for that person.

Shravan's love is pure...You cant hate whom you loves n you cant love for whom you have hatred in your heart.

Her liberation brought me peace too...Mee tooo😃

About Shravan's decision of staying back...This is for the betterment of him.
He can understand himself, his worth , his capacities, capabilities and use them in right direction.

The way he thought of Sumo, Ramnath and Nanu. To make himself worth that they feel proud...It shows his Love n care for these three most important people of his life. ❤️ ❤️

I guess at this tender age, ShraMan can only see themselves as friends and their hidden love as theur friendship bond.N for now both are content with it n me too 😃

ShraMan taking each other's names simultaniously with that content smile on their faces, happy hearts...Just Loveddd it ❤️ ❤️

ShraMan's Convo...My heart cried with them, smiled with them and now is content with them.Bas!!
Am at peace.😃

He hated it when she cried but the last statement made her weep more....Shravan Shravan!!
How can you be YOU?!!!
Along with Sumo, my heart cried.

Seeing Sumo was never Shravan's thing.No matter what he cant see her tears. They melt him in an instant just like that.Such was their love.

Tera dil itna bada kyun hai?"A question no one had any answer to.

Ab itna toh haq banta hai na mera?"
"Haan poora haq banta hai tera..".
...Aww!!
Dil le liya Zoya.
Ye dekho...❤️ ❤️
Loveddd it to the core.!!

Suman had been bowling him googlies and he didn't know what to do with them...Kuch nahi Shravan, you are bowled out.

Himmat nahi hui.....Oh Sumo.
This Sumo is just pure love ...Or should I say, she is the REAL Sumo!!

Darr...The inner Sumo is speaking who is afraid of losing him.

Tu kehta bhi nahi, mera darr tha,...Aww!!😳
Kya likhti ho Zoya!! 👏
Who knows Shravan better than Sumo?

Mujhse dosti karegi, phirse?... ❤️
Ek nayi shuruwaat!!
Pakki Dosti, Sacchi Dosti!!

Nahi.. yeh ke library mai tere paas hone ka ehsaas hota tha, padthi thi toh lagta tha tu wahin hai..."...Sumo ❤️❤️
Mera dil...
Want to give you a beary hug ya Sumo. 🤗

Toh wapas aa ja na yaar.."...These types of lines gives real ShraMan feels. ❤️
Love them Zoya...❤️

ShraMan's understanding...Oh My My
Their timing...Love it ya ❤️
Sumo is hiding about her parents' debt...Right?

The ending was too good. ShraMan slept a peaceful sleep ❤️

Zoya Zoya Zoya Zoya... 🤗 🤗
You are a magician creating a magic with words n hypnotize me with your words.

See...I again wrote a mini OS 😆
Kya karu O Zoya,
Main hu aadat se majboor...
Huzoor huzoor, Main hu aadat se majboor
😆

Ho gayi meri bakwaas puri 😛
Thanks for the pm n cont soon 😊

But am not gonna unres soon 😛
Exams honge na.😕
Par ha...res karne time par aa jaaungi 😆


Loads n loads of Love n tight, bone Crushing 🤗 🤗
Nikka Sa Nik❤️

P.S Kripya ignore the typos😛
There can be mistakes n no proofread 😆
#DramaQueenNik
😛
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago

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