Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 33

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Originally posted by: Safire

Zoya, sorry.late aane keliye.I read it just now.

That's alright Saf! Aap aa gaye yehi bohot hai mere liye 😳

And you know what,I also was wiping my eyes which were getting cloudy as I was reading Sumo's letter.

Awww sorry to have made you cry...

I am not capable of writing anything like you.

Oh please don't be modest 🤗

So I express myself with just one word~~fantastic writing dear!!!

And that suffices... Thank you so much 😛

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Sorry for spamming Zoya.

But had to mention. Tabby tumhari comment ne dil jeet liya once again.

👏

It was fabulous!!

Originally posted by: sheeluneelu

Zoya 🤗

Suruchi my love 🤗

Loved it so much ya

I'm so glad you did

Shravan's one call n beech ki saari distance finish..

Ji bilkul...

awesome u always write with perfection

Aww thank you hon!

I think next update is going to b vry emotional

It might just be...

Honest confession, I haven't started working on it🥱

Soon hopefully...

Originally posted by: evaviego

Jumped with joy the moment i read the meaning of Mayassar. A long wait was coming to an end.

Haina!!!! 😳

Had read it that day itself, in fact, then and there, the very moment i saw it.

You did?

But was left weeping, so couldnt comment then.

Aww sowii...

And then the laziness bug bit me really hard and dint allow me to comment. My apologies 😳

Hahaha that's okay 😛

Read it with bated breaths. Heart pounding with eagerness.

Feel for Suman. That feeling of being a burden at such a young age. Unbearable. Unthinkable.

Those diary entries are real tear jerkers sometimes.

I know right... It will get lighter henceforth...

pyaar kia tha tum se kabhi, aj bhi tum ho shayad mere dil ke kisi hisse mai, nikal nahi sakta tumko mujh mai se, na hi mai nikalna chahta hoon, yeh bhi tum samjh lo... 😭

I dont have much words to say Zoya. Cried rivers I have reading this. So now you know the impact.

Now I do, yes... It makes me so happy that I can convey what I feel... 😃

Suman's letter. Worth the Booker prize. I tell you.

Yey!!!

Not only Shravan even i have read it multiple times. Lost the count.

You have? That's so cute!

if i start Quoting my fav part, i would end up quoting most of it. So refraining.

Hehe😆

Absolutely Beautifully.

Thank you!

Its such a big loss for those not reading it. They dont even know what they are missing.

Well, loss or not, you guys reading is a gain for me, it's a pleasure!

Splendid.👏

Originally posted by: Adeeba.Ayub

Sorry for being MIA.

Adeeba 🤗
I know no apologies would be enough to be honest.
You don't even need to apologise hon, it's okay..

I understand 😛
But
Not done dude.
Why do you want to make me cry?

Sadistic pleasure 😆

Kidding, I wanted the story to stand out...
How beautiful were the last two chapters.
Thank you!
Their restlessness for each other.

Eric is love though.

He is😳
Shravan boosting up his self esteem , still feeling empty amidst the happiness.

Koi khalish hai hawaon mai bin tere 💔
Sumo being vulnerable child , my heart goes out to her <3

Mine too!
Nanu - the BEST:)
Word!
They talk, they finally do.
*tears*
Hahaha yes!
You have evolved so much as a writer.

Coming from someone who's seen me grow, this is huge ❤️
And I am glad I read these wonderful pieces from you.
Pleasure is all mine!
Much love
HUG
Love and hugs back!
P.S- I've cleared my MBBS finals.

In that case I should call you doctor!
Yay !
Can't contain the happiness.

It's such good news!
So , yea ! Don't mind :D

Absolutely not!

Originally posted by: --Epithymia--

Awesome updates Di 👏

Read it all over again!

Eric is such a sweetheart here.

Never got much of him in the show.

Yaha kani puri ho rahi hai 😆.

A perfect friend.

Kabhi jaan bachaye toh kabhi mushkil mein daale.

Ramnath was never a viilian at heart!

He just made his own assumptions.

But loved his son the most.

His destination was always his son's happiness though the ways taken were wrong.

Nanu is such a bliss❤️

Actually have no words for him.

(Gosh! He is trying acting like cupid at times)

Did I missed someone?

Yes, Amanda!

If you might haven't clarified, I must have surely taken her to be evil 😛.

But she was really sweet!

Her antics were cute as her.

And now our leads!

They both are in equal pain, have equal longing.

The emotions are depicted so well Di!👏

From email to the dairy!

At the same time they both are changing themselves for good.

They are breaking from within but still have the brave face on!

They are going to talk!

(I can't control my happiness)

I love cliffhangers too!

But I dunno why I have a gut feeling that something will go wrong.*Shakes head in no to clear bad thoughts*

Will love you to prove me wrong!

Love,

Me (Your Cupcake) 🤗

PS: @Tabi Di- You write really awesome Shyaris! Hats-Off!

Thank you sooo much..!🤗

PPS: @Zoya Di- I found you on wattpad. (I am a born stalker. Can't help!) 😛

Originally posted by: --Epithymia--

Awesome updates Di 👏

Abhi 🤗 Thank you!

Read it all over again!

You did❤️

Eric is such a sweetheart here.

Never got much of him in the show.

Yaha kani puri ho rahi hai 😆.

Mujhe hamesha se lagta tha ke Eric must have been instrumental...

A perfect friend.

Kabhi jaan bachaye toh kabhi mushkil mein daale.

Haina!

Ramnath was never a viilian at heart!

He just made his own assumptions.

But loved his son the most.

Word!!!

His destination was always his son's happiness though the ways taken were wrong.

Intentions were pure but implementation was flawed...

Nanu is such a bliss❤️

Actually have no words for him.

(Gosh! He is trying acting like cupid at times)

He's a darling!

Did I missed someone?

Yes, Amanda!

If you might haven't clarified, I must have surely taken her to be evil 😛

But she was really sweet!

Her antics were cute as her.

She will be around on and off😃😃

And now our leads!

They both are in equal pain, have equal longing.

The emotions are depicted so well Di!👏

Thanks hon!

From email to the dairy!

At the same time they both are changing themselves for good.

They are breaking from within but still have the brave face on!

They are going to talk!

(I can't control my happiness)

Soon buddy! Very soon! I hope I can live up to it!!

I love cliffhangers too!

But I dunno why I have a gut feeling that something will go wrong.*Shakes head in no to clear bad thoughts*

Too much of Ekta Kapoor shows na? I don't intend for anything to go wrong... Depends on how I decide the story to go eventually.

Will love you to prove me wrong!

Sab theek hi hai abhi toh..

Love,

Me (Your Cupcake) 🤗

PS: @Tabi Di- You write really awesome Shyaris! Hats-Off!

Haina!

PPS: @Zoya Di- I found you on wattpad. (I am a born stalker. Can't help!) 😛

Hahahaha! That I had joined to simply ward off that plagiariser...

But kamal skills hai tere!

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Zoyi...🤗

Ranju 🤗

Where have you been yaar?

Amazing updates and every title is ❤️

Thank you so much 😳

awesome dear..👏

Shukriya!

like i always says you are a fabulous writer dear..👏

Aww yey ❤️

loved every bit of every update👏

I'm glad you did

eric is so good and amanda aww poor girl rejected but good friends now

Hainaa...

great shra has so many fans and confidence ... his diary part i always adore that..😳

Makes two 😎

poor sumo aww her life is quite sad and manju mami makes her more sad..😭

Manju Mammi in here was talking to Mamaji, Suman overheard, I ain't saying she isn't wrong, just not vile...

thnx to eric shra read sumo's mail and called her..😊

Cupid alert!

aww part was really sad ... i cried😭

Sowiii...

amazing work zo like always..muah...🤗

Thank you darling!!!😃

sorry for being this late ..most late lateef but still your stupid buddy..😆

Arey it's okay, aap aaye bahar aayi... 😉

lub you..🤗