AM I WRONG? (imaginary two-fold story) last part updated @pg1

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Namastey! ...


I am a woman, an Indian-middle class woman! Carrying purely middle-class values having only one dream and is to live with family! Having few questions...those are haunting me from the last few days! Being a Punjabi I never learnt to bow down! But who is stronger than GOD? Fate was unavoidable! But I have decided to fight against! And my fight wasn't new!

When I was young...my family tied my knot with a young man...a business man of clothes, the second child of the family! I entered into my in-laws house, everybody there was as good as I thought! They welcomed me and within few months I have become the strongest person of this family! Not that I was rude or heartless but I carry some morals and values, which is inseparable from my personality! Not to tolerate any injustice, bad-manners and any kind of violence! My protestant character sometimes had been appreciated and sometimes they used to say I am too much! But I do...what I feel it is right for my FAMILY! Take a stand is not sin.

My bhabi...the eldest daughter in law of the family, is the loveable personality and a happy go lucky woman who loves to cook...she's not only a good cook; but also an innovative cook, we're vegetarians ...and she is like the magician...whole day she use to prepare various kinds of dishes! We appreciated, we enjoyed and she used to become happy. Though I sometimes feel that she deserves much more than that! Another bhabi...the youngest daughter in law of the family ...when she came as a bride...our family becomes fulfil by blessings and happiness! But it won't stay longer.

My badi bhabi Meera ...once had to go to the market with her husband! When she left...she called me and gave her little daughter to me : "kanta! Until we're back! Take care of her like mother! We're going to fulfil my little princess's demand!" I smiled and nodded! I will be her mother until you come back! ...little Mahek began to play! It was long time passed since they went! Suddenly my father in law shouted...I rushed out! Asking my husband and devar what happened but everybody were weeping, my husband was acted like mad! I heard that both jeth-bhabi faced an accident and they died! ... I couldn't believe! It was just few hours ago they left...what happened?... Nothing was working in my mind but just a promise: I will be her mother until you come back!" I will be...bhabi!

Time and tide...waits for none! After the accident I had to take wheel in my hand! At least one member have to be strict in the family, otherwise there will be no value in the family! Our little princes Mahek has grown up! I ...from the age of sixteen started earning! How? She followed her mother's foot-steps! Like her mother...she also believes that GOOD FOOD CAN MAKE YOU HAPPY EVEN IF YOU'RE IN THE WORST SITUATION! I never stop her! Let her be...if she finds happiness! Then there is our happiness! Our Mahek! Plumpy, innocent and simple...now my final duty begins!

Who will marry a fat girl? I widened my eyes to sheetal, the big mouth lady and unfortunately our neighbour ...look at my daughter! Any boy will choose her instead of mahek! She taunted in front of all...oh! sheetal you may forget that Mahek is the one who prepared food when your daughter ...someone held my hand tightly...it was Mahek! I looked at her, fear, shame; a mix complex was in her eyes! I cannot tolerate a single word against her! Not from anyone...neither from my family...nor from my neighbour! I recalled chef Rajiv's proposal...and announced...she's gonna participate in the ISC! She will be famous...through her mother's recipe! My bhabi will be proud to see this! Mahek looked at me...she was nervous!

Now I regret! Why did I take that decision...else we don't have to face this days!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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last part


My daughter standing in front of the camera...just like a statue...my whole family members are sitting, covering their face! And he...sitting there at judge's chair; looking straight at my daughter ...with a strange devilish smile on his face! It's Akilick's ankle round! He declared! Everyone has to face their weakest side! He looked at me! Then as if...he's only saying this to my daughter...who is weeping silently! You can call one of your family members! She helplessly looked at us! I knew it! No one will be agreeing to touch the chicken! After all we are pure vegetarians! But what about my daughter? She's looking at me! Yes! Yes! Mahek! I am there for you! If you can! Then I also can...I stood up and he chuckled...I was waiting for you! He hissed! ...chachi he overhears us last night! Mahek whispered! May be...but is this the way to take revenge! What will be his next step??????

Of course! Spoiling our dewali! He threw my family into utter darkness! We all were crying, my father in law blamed my daughter and I roared ...IT'S NOT HER FAULT!...no! she is not responsible for anything! Never! She cannot be! She's pure! Do you all hear? She's pure!

WHO TRIED TO DEFAME HER? We're all shocked to see the news...my Mahek? Dancing with that spoilt brat! NO! NO!...I rushed out and tore all the posters! LIE! I shouted! All you are just jealous of my Mahek! Do you hear me? She won't disobey me! And...she didn't! She quits the competition and returned with us! God was with us! That brat knelt down in front of my daughter! He compensated, but didn't leave my daughter! I was watching him! Keenly! His face turned pale when he heard her engagement news!...I FORGAVE HIM... I am not callous! Yes! Sometimes I have to be...strict! But he entered into our family! Without our permission! My eagle eye were at him...his move towards my daughter! Why did he taking so much interest! Suddenly he did something unexpected! He exposed Permer family! He saved...OUR MAHEK! Why? What does he want?

He wants our Mahek! He wants to marry her? I couldn't believe! What was that? The lad who troubled our daughter; humiliated our family; he wants marry? But if he is fake then he would be so concerned about Mahek? NO! He isn't lying! He is not fake! Slowly I forget ...poor lad! Never get his family! His past made him rude! He's eager to marry our mahek instead of all accident! If he's this much loves her lady ove...my Mahek will get heaven like family!

...Finally the day arrived! MY MAHEK! MY DAUGHTER IN BRIDAL ATTAIRE! BHABHI! ARE YOU WATCHING! LOOK! I KEPT MY PROMISE! SHE'S GONNA GET HER PRINCE CHARMING BHABHI! LOOK AT HER! SHE'S WAITING AFTER VARMALA! AFTER HE WILL RETURN ...THE MARRIAGE WILL COMPLETED! AND...I WILL BE FREE! FOREVER!...SHE'S WAITING! JUST FEW MINUTES MORE AND...WAIT WILL OVER! HE WILL COME! MY SON...MY SON WILL COME TO HOLD HER HAND!

SON? Who's son? He's standing in front of us! With that old strange chuckle! What's he saying to his lady love...to his half wedded wife? To ... our daughter? What... all he did was...DRAMA? Just for his profit! Just to take bhabi's recipe? He played with MY DAUGHTER? I was not looking at him...all my senses were at my daughter who looking at him! Silently! I was feeling suffocated in that AC room, he was giving another compensation; this time with double money!


"Compensation? I refuse to take! But I will take you!" She declared! Where from she got this much strength? I will make him realise...that he also loves me!...I looked at her! With all expectations she's looking at me! I recalled; I promised...I will be with her till they come back! I will be...I have to be! Go ahead! I said! I am with you!


Neighbours pointed at her...questioned about her character...but she stayed strong! Cause...I am with her! Her half-husband left no stone unturned to throw her out! But we taught him lesson! But how long will she keep her fights continue! One day she has to stop!


Yes! She stopped! She broke! Totally! Her utopia broke like a glass! She returned home with empty hands and teary eyes! She left her dream, her courage, her trial, and all remains of her half-weddings. She hid her face in my lap, don't cry beti! I was I am and forever I will be there...for you! In every situation! I promised naa! But...now...you are bigger...than my promise! We broke we stumble and...we tried to stand up!

But again! That devil! He neither took her, nor left her! Is my daughter a doll? That you can do whatever you want to do? She died mentally because of you! Now she's at the verge of death just...because of you! The pain you gave ...I cannot erase ...but I can erase YOU from her future...and...I will...I will do anything TO PROTECT...TO CHANGE...TO MAKE HER LIFE BEAUTIFUL ...you don't know! This time...YOU ARE MESSING WITH A MOTHER! ...AND A MOTHER WILL FIGHT TILL HER END! Once I believed on you! This time I won't! You are the main evil of my daughter! I will keep my daughter from all evil! ...after all I promised them!...

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Edited by sunet27taherian - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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What a heart warming story and perspective!! Take a bow
You rock, Sunet. i got a lump in my throat.. traversing through the mind of the lady, who is being vilified now.. her struggles, her promise, her love!

Beautiful part 1 - pls upload next soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was really beautiful sunet...
After all you are an expert and professional in this field...
Its good that you came up with Kanta Chachi's POV... Wen sum of forum members are irritated with her actions towards mehrya ...
Can't blame her ...at the very end...
She is a mother ...
And mother knows better...
Waiting for second part



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautifully written sunet...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow sunet..
Beautifully penned dear .. 😊
Loved it.. ❤️
Waiting fr 2nd part..continue soon.. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such a beautiful story in kanta's pov. Very nicely written dear and for a second I felt, kC is absolutely right. Though I know she's right but still I cannot stand to her antics but reading this, I felt emotional and that their world was beautiful without SK.
But as for your last line, Mehrya fan in me would say.. "ISC me na jaati to SK kese milta"😉😆


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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Sunetra, Thanks for it. Though I don't support her last resort, but I totally understand her POV and don't blame her. Ultimately it's her fierce protective instinct as a mother. Though it's purely patriotic in nature, but I find this is so apt for any Mother:

Daan haate tor kharga jwale
Baan haathh korey shankaharan
Dui nayane sneher haashi
Lalatnetra agunbaran

English translation:

Your right hand holds the blazing sword
Left hand takes away fear
Smile of affection in your eyes
The third eye glaring
Edited by chandrima02 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb post. I never understood why kanta is criticized so much. It's not that she hasn't accepted shaurya. There was time when she approved of their relationship n even was going to marry mehek to love of her life.But what she got, her daughter was left in pain n the process didn't stop their shaurya time n again has given pain, humiliation to mehek, her only daughter of whom she is firecely protective of. He even went out to destroy their family business n lead them to the verge of having hand to mouth problem. Is it wrong to disapprove such a guy for your daughter?? Is it wrong to protect your daughter from getting hurt again?? Just because mehrya scenes are passionate, can every fault or say crime of shaurya be ignored?? FOR me its a big No. I am afraid kanta may go berserk to protect mehek but her feelings can't ever be doubted ever.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very well written Sunet from KC POV 👍🏼
She has her own reasons to protect her from this bad world ...

Waiting for the nxt part

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