SS: Behne Do Last part updated 27/03/2017

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I thought this day would never come, when I would have this courage and most of all support and time to begin this journey of fulfilling a small wish of writing stories I have imagined and wanted to tell.

I have always enjoyed being an addictive reader. I loved my crime and thriller novels. Never even considered turning a page of romance!

But there came an age where I was given to read a classic love story 'Pride and Prejudice'. Alas! Soon or later, rest just followed! Although I loved these old love tales but I had never read a story online or even heard of any forums...until I came across India forums!!

I was blown away by the imagination of people re-thinking the same characters and plotting so many new situations, new love stories and never felt emotions!

I have begun my journey with a short story called Behne Do. An inspiration from a small scene ingrained in my memory.

I will continue to publish new stories that I also have in mind with a mix of old and new characters that you may love and hate!

Please join me in helping me to become a writer whom you enjoy reading and reminiscent the joys and griefs known as life.

I will update this page with links to my stories and links to each part that I add on. I have created a blog to keep all my writing in one place.

Blog Link: Heart and Rib

http://heartandrib.blogspot.com/

Short Story:

Behne De

Part I

Part II

Part III

Last Part

Sorry for the delay, Had a really bad cold and temperature last night, I couldn't log in to upload the last part.

Thank you for all your kind words and such warm support. I will be starting a new story next week. Will keep you all posted.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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So good to see you here
Welcome 😃 Mishti love 🤗

Please put up with my pathetic commenting skills

Alas my eyes are of a director not a writer

Beautiful start and resolve for the young maiden one assumes is Geet

An instant failure too

Love can't be held back

so behne de
Edited by dqno1 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh my!

He is a passionate soul isn't he?

You took me back to that moment again

The eternal scene

The fight of self vs want

loved it so much

Thanks for bringing this here

Short but sweet and effective writing style denotes a command of expression which you have

Awesome 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dqno1

So good to see you here
Welcome 😃 Mishti love 🤗

Please put up with my pathetic commenting skills

Alas my eyes are of a director not a writer

Beautiful start and resolve for the young maiden one assumes is Geet

An instant failure too

Love can't be held back

so behne de



What! your comments and pathetic! nowhere even close...
Thank you for the warm welcome.. I knew if not anyone else you would be one of the first to read or respond to my story 😳
Actually I had written this quite a few months ago, when there was this behne de season competition ongoing on IF, I had missed out in submitting and didn't really know if I should.. so I thought to now test the waters of my writing skills with this piece first 😆

Thank you for being part of my journey as always ❤️.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you Ms Dreamer :) hoping to see you later on in this story as well😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Found ya!!!
Saw your comment on Avi's thread and went on a Mishtir-rious hunt.
Let me happily jiggle a little.

I mean you did it woman.
Wow!!!
Let me give you a big fat breath squeezing hug.

Booyah!!! This is going to be sooo exciting😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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If one has smelt the heady essence of a Southern Magnolia, one never forgets it. If one has held the flower in hand and caressed its velvety petals one never forgets that touch.
She was his Magnolia for sure and he a stormy cloud that burst upon her, immersing her with his essence and soaking her completely.

When I first saw the Behne De scene I had but one intense desire.
For Maan to kiss the girl before him

This song from Little Mermaid kept playing in my mind

Sha-la-la-la-la-la
Don't be scared
You got the mood prepared
Kiss the girl😆

And today I think I had my wish fulfilled and ever so passionately😳

Beautiful start Mishti.👏



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mishti Ji
Aap likhe aur hum na padhe vida kabhi nahi hoga.

Res
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats on the story! beautiful updates
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Susegad

If one has smelt the heady essence of a Southern Magnolia, one never forgets it. If one has held the flower in hand and caressed its velvety petals one never forgets that touch.

She was his Magnolia for sure and he a stormy cloud that burst upon her, immersing her with his essence and soaking her completely.

When I first saw the Behne De scene I had but one intense desire.
For Maan to kiss the girl before him

This song from Little Mermaid kept playing in my mind

Sha-la-la-la-la-la
Don't be scared
You got the mood prepared
Kiss the girl😆

And today I think I had my wish fulfilled and ever so passionately😳

Beautiful start Mishti.👏



Oh wow! what a befitting description of what they mean to each other and more so how well it fits in with the original scene and what I laid out in the next part👏...

she was dressed in that white anarkali just like the flower and he in black like those dark stormy clouds!!!

Me tooo!!! I always thought if Indian dramas would show such scenes it would have been most perfect at this moment esp with the aftermath reaction from Geet avoiding him in the episodes would make sense!
but suffice to say... I guess that's what appealing about the asian dramas they convey much more with scenes of emotions than physical actions of kissing!

although I am glad to have fulfilled your wish of 'the kiss'😳

Your welcome and quest to find my little post was soo heart warming! I got so happy to just read that!!
Now I realise why you guys used to get happy when we readers would appreciate you by commenting hehee

Thank you..!! I do hope I can make this journey all that much more worth it!!

😳😳

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