SS: Behne Do Last part updated 27/03/2017

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Mishti

@mishtimohabbat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ChandlerBing
Mishti Ji
Aap likhe aur hum na padhe vida kabhi nahi hoga.

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Oh my gosh!! Shikha you are here too!!!

So happyyy😃😃

Now I really need to step up and well 😆write better!!

Looking forward to your stories more I swear!

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Mishti

@mishtimohabbat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
congrats on the story! beautiful updates

Thank you very much! I am happy that you liked the short story so far!

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

hi thanks 4 updating! Part 3 - terrific updates! superbly written! Maan n Geet's feelings well written! he is ecstatic seeing her! update asap ⭐️👏😊

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hira2010

@hira2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Great congrats for writing a story
Wish you best of luck
and thanks for sharing your writing with us

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893213

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

your writing is poetry

my heart stopped when she did not come

but he found her

❤️ it so much

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Loved your writing. Have listened to their individual thoughts on post Behene do sequence. Waiting to see how they will react on facing each other.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

the rain, her sitting below that tree holding the fallen flowers that had given up against the storm, just like her..so poetic and picturesque..

and then him giving up to the urge to feel the emotions..

the rain is the essential element for the lyrics, and so was it aptly expressed and used in the updates..

it is a beautiful start..

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Mishti

@mishtimohabbat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks 4 updating! Part 3 - terrific updates! superbly written! Maan n Geet's feelings well written! he is ecstatic seeing her! update asap ⭐️👏😊

Thank you for liking it so much!

Its a very short story just based around the Behne De sequence as its climax so the next part will be the last.

I am writing another Story and will post that out soon.

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