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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: snehapriya
Loved your writing. Have listened to their individual thoughts on post Behene do sequence. Waiting to see how they will react on facing each other.

Yes, I wanted to show how their feelings mirror each others but they express it in such different ways.. their narrative for me is what heart and rib really means.. one fierce and the other a gentle protective cover 😳

I will update the next part tonight.. just a few things left to add.. it will be the last part 😃

Then I can start my new story

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

ahh last part 😔 will b waiting 4 ur new story. thanks

Edited by khwaishfan - 8 years ago

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Sindhu

@sree10

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Where were you all these days or should i say years.? Beautiful. Loved it. Do you pm?

Waiting to read more from you.

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893213

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

din dhal jaaye
haiye raat na jaaye

tu toh na aaye
teri yaad sataye...

one of my fav songs.. nahi suna ho toh pls youtube 😃

after you update

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Sometimes the chaos in our mind is so loud that it drowns out the clear voice of our heart.

But every once in a while in spite of the chaos, the voice deep within will not be silenced and we are helpless but to follow it's dictates.

The tongue knows not what it will say, but the eyes speak fearlessly and without any barriers.

What will happens when their eyes meet?

How will it all culminate?

How will the heart and the rib nestle perfectly.

Anticipating most eagerly for the meet 😳

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priyasree

@priyasree

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Beautiful n lovely story 😊

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893213

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

so lovely

.. like a dream come true❤️

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Last Part - magical dreamy update! beautifully written. they met n time stands still! loved it 😊

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

lovely ending and portrayal of feelings.

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Your writing is poetry in motion Mishti Ji. I have felt it back then when you have written that beautiful letter in continuum that day and I felt it today.

So used to the usual run of mill stories both in reading and writing, when I came across your story, I have put it on hold because I wanted to read it at a stretch. I wasn't wrong.

The chapters flowed beautifully, contrasting the emotions they felt, the reality of situation they are in. Both of their feelings however inching towards letting it go.

How beautiful...

For me it is not divided into chapters. For me these were little glimpses which all fell together to form a beautiful scene. Oh Mishti Ji please write more.

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