Congratulations on new thread ,wow,19 :)...It's amazing to see with every increasing number of thread...The story and our Dr rji's Khushi is becoming more strong,mature and she even better controlled person
I am noticing from last few chaps ..From the moment she understood love,she has become very subtle,grown in maturity whether it's in responding equally back arnav's affection mentally or physically.. she is there..No more lost soul...I think this change all due to solid grounds of love. Deeps all thanks to u for showing the process of her growth.
"World is Wt we make"...How positive and optimistic
"World is Wt makes us"...How painful and pessimistic...These two sentences paved the story of life behind these two individuals.
"So wt?" It's a big question..Last time arnav didn't have idea but this time he thought like her, repercussions of last time,
I think it summerized all Wt and y ,he STOPPED, "He Value Her DIGNITY".
I loved in-between these emotions the way u beautifully wrote "her arms felt empty" helping him "simmer down"...:) Beautifully expressed.
Who knows that behind Kimi instead of my pervert guessing ,there is going to be a beautiful story...The most beautiful and meaningful story :)... Brilliant!!!
Must say most decently done shopping ever of lingeries...I loved the Manly avatar of arnav here :)..Need to tell my hubby that see ayse hoti hay shopping,ahem ahem...;)...Loved Khushi words in the end "going to empty ur pockets" hehe
I loved the way u have made them realized individually at their ends ..The guilt.
Cooling down, handling their angers.
I loved how she able enough now to introspect, her past present actions... Excellent wordings once again"unintentionally she had broken the trust,the crucial fabric of this relationship"...Wah wah wah
"do wtever u desire I ll stand by you through it all" ..Ah Wt else we women wants from life if we get one such shoulder of Understanding...
Finally "Arnav" happened :)... in Awesome way...The great entry of the name .
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